高三英語寫作課件

1、英語書面表達English Composition Writing寫作內(nèi)容1. 以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2. 以約120詞就“制定規(guī)劃與達成目標”這一主題進行議論，內(nèi)容包括：(1) 海貍修水壩的故事給你的啟示是什么？ (2) 請結(jié)合你的生活經(jīng)歷闡述“制定規(guī)劃與達成目標”之間的關(guān)系。寫作要求1. 作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。評分標準 概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫 Beavers are very diligent dam-builders who can build extreme

2、ly good dams. However, they sometimes dont know where to build the dams or which dams should be fixed only because they have no consciousness to make a plan. The beavers story illustrates the importance of planning. Without a plan the best intentions and efforts will not produce results. We shouldnt

3、 work blindly but have a clear idea of our purpose, the actions needed to achieve it, and how these should be ordered. As a junior student, I achieved considerable success in learning English through the combination of hard work and planning. I prepared good materials with the help of my teacher, ma

4、de plans for my daily study and self-monitored the whole process of my learning. I made rapid progress and became very confident. I think I couldnt have done it without a good plan. Diligence is a key to success, but in my opinion, good plan is also essential. Through planning, we can develop clear

5、goals, find more efficient and effective methods and thus have more opportunities to reach our goals than through hardworking alone. Appreciate and learn the three well organized compositions from studentsThe EssayWhat makes a good essay?DiscussionContentEverything needed included which is related t

6、o your view.(內(nèi)容要完整)Structure*Good beginning and ending (好的開頭結(jié)尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (結(jié)構(gòu)合理,行文流暢)* Proper linking words between sentences1. Based on this passage, _, making a plan before doing something is essential. 2. _, well complete our goal with a reasonable plan.3. _ its impor

7、tant to have a plan.as far as I am concernedOn the contrary as far as I am concerned on the contrary as a consequence使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 Use proper linking wordsAs a consequence4. As an old saying goes, “no pains, no gains”, _, I think, only by taking pains to complete our goals with a plan, can we attain succ

8、ess. 5._, I have realized the vital importance of a strong plan. however Since thenhoweverSince thenLanguage * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (沒有語法錯誤) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (詞語的準確運用和句式的富于變化)Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式 t

9、his passage, as far as I am concerned, Something is essential.2. Without a detailed plan, I couldnt even allocate my time sensible, making me idle away the entire vocation 1. Based onmaking a plan before doingAdopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式For my part, I think that a detailed plan is t

10、o a person what a lighthouse is to a ship. In a word, being a student, we should learn a rule, that is, a plan of vital importance for us to achieve success. Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式5. Although beavers are always the symbol of working hard, their unplanned working are always useless, leading to the waste of both their time and superb ability. 6. Therefore, the confinement to success lies not only in ones capacity for substantial actions, but also in ones advanced planning assessPlease learn to Your composition項目 自評他評1.書寫工整嗎？有沒有亂涂亂劃?2.句子開頭注意大小寫了嗎?3.有沒有注意標點符號?4將文章