高考復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫 課件

1、讀后續(xù)寫評析Youd think that after hearing Mom and Dad talk about The Trip for a year, Id be eager to go. But I dont even want to think about it. “Arent you excited?” asks Dad looking up from his laptop. “This is the trip of lifetime. Ill bet none of your friends will be driving across the United States th

2、is summer.”Exactly, I think. Nobody I know is going to pile into an old van, and drive from California to New York and back in 58 days. Fifty-eight days! Thats practically my whole summer! But I know its useless to protest（抗議）. When Dad was offered a summer off for the first time in his career, he s

3、aid that hed always dreamed of driving across the country. So now were going. This is Dads chance. I pick up my cat. Max, and bury my face in his fur. He paws at my ears playfully. Good-bye, summer vacation. Good-bye, diving at the lake. Good-bye to hanging out and doing absolutely nothing. Good-bye

4、, Max. Im going to miss this ball of fur. I put him down and laugh as he bats a button across the floor like a soccer player. He is interested in all small objects. The closer The Trip gets, the harder it is to ignore. Thick envelopes arrive from places like Indiana, Tennessee, and Arkansas. Night a

5、fter night, Mom and Dad huddle around the computer, plotting every inch of our 8,000-mile journey. Three days after school gets out, The Trip is finally here. Everything is packed and ready to go. Mom says that we are supposed to leave at 9 a.m. But when Dad notices a wet spot under the van, I reali

6、ze we wont be going anywhere for a while. Dad crawls under the van. Car parts spring up around the van like mushrooms.Minutes turn into hours. By the time Dad gives Mom the news, its late afternoon. “I fixed the leak,” says Dad. “But now I cant find one of the fan bolts（螺栓）.” Mom organizes a search,

7、 but in vain.Paragraph 1: Dad called the stores but none carried the bolt that fits this old van. Paragraph 2: Then it hit me.“Max!” I shouted,“Find Max!” Youd think that after hearing Mom and Dad talk about The Trip for a year, Id be eager to go. But I dont even want to think about it. “Arent you e

8、xcited?” asks Dad looking up from his laptop. “This is the trip of lifetime. Ill bet none of your friends will be driving across the United States this summer.”Exactly, I think. Nobody I know is going to pile into an old van, and drive from California to New York and back in 58 days. Fifty-eight day

9、s! Thats practically my whole summer! But I know its useless to protest（抗議）. When Dad was offered a summer off for the first time in his career, he said that hed always dreamed of driving across the country. So now were going. This is Dads chance. I pick up my cat. Max, and bury my face in his fur.

10、He paws at my ears playfully. Good-bye, summer vacation. Good-bye, diving at the lake. Good-bye to hanging out and doing absolutely nothing. Good-bye, Max. Im going to miss this ball of fur. I put him down and laugh as he bats a button across the floor like a soccer player. He is interested in all s

11、mall objects. The closer The Trip gets, the harder it is to ignore. Thick envelopes arrive from places like Indiana, Tennessee, and Arkansas. Night after night, Mom and Dad huddle around the computer, plotting every inch of our 8,000-mile journey. Three days after school gets out, The Trip is finall

12、y here. Everything is packed and ready to go. Mom says that we are supposed to leave at 9 a.m. But when Dad notices a wet spot under the van, I realize we wont be going anywhere for a while. Dad crawls under the van. Car parts spring up around the van like mushrooms.Minutes turn into hours. By the t

13、ime Dad gives Mom the news, its late afternoon. “I fixed the leak,” says Dad. “But now I cant find one of the fan bolts（螺栓）.” Mom organizes a search, but in vain.Paragraph 1: Dad called the stores but none carried the bolt that fits this old van. Paragraph 2: Then it hit me.“Max!” I shouted,“Find Ma

14、x!” Theme The Whole Trip The cat The preparations for the TripHis unwillingness to go on the Trip &?reluctanceThe authors _emotions about a trip organized by his father.Main Idea:Main plots:Analyze the passageIDad_ to drive across the USA this summer_ to protest The Trip_of driving across the countr

15、yThis was Dads chance.dreamed of diving at the lakedreamed of hanging out and doing nothingSomething unexpected happened： one of the fan bolts was missingeageruselessdreamedunwilling to take the tripThis was MY chancePara. 6-8Para.1-5?This was MY chance to _.unwillingexcited?Paragraph 1: Dad called

16、the stores but none carried the bolt that fitted this old van. _feelings at firstreflectionfeelings in the endIt is through_ and _ that I changed my mind to help my father.concerned/determined?Reasons?Hint：Good-bye, summer vacation. Good-bye, diving at the lake. Good-bye to hanging out and doing abs

17、olutely nothing. Good-bye, Max.Hint：Night after night, Mom and Dad huddle around the computer, plotting every inch of our 8,000-mile journey.observationto enjoy my own summer vacationobservationreflectionTangled emotions:Paragraph 2: Then it hit me. “Max!” I shouted, “Find Max!” _ Did we find bolts

18、finally?How did I help my father find bolts?Structure of the passageThis was OUR chance to _.Direction &GuideVisions of _marched before my eyes. 但是那時我看到了我父親，他倚靠在引擎上，低著頭手上沾滿了褐色的油漬（grease）（獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）。excitedWhat causes the change?But then I caught sight of Dad, who was leaning over the engine, his head l

19、owered and hands black with grease. The sight of it reminded me of all the expectations and excitement earlier he had for the Trip. But now, the Trip The Trip of a Lifetimewas vanishing before his eyes. 這一幕使我想到了父親之前對這次旅行的期待和興奮。但是現(xiàn)在這旅行一生之旅正在他眼前消失。observationreflectionI couldnt bear to see Dad so disa

20、ppointed. “I will have to find that bolt for Dad” I murmuered to myself determinedly.concerned determinedreflectionParagraph 1: Dad called the stores but none carried the bolt that fitted this old van. _Paragraph 2: Then it hit me.“Max!” I shouted, “Find Max!” _ 我不想看到父親如此失望，“我必須為他找到螺栓”我堅定地對自己說。refle

21、ctiondiving at the lake and hanging outSummaryThe change of peoples feelingsobservationreflectionenvironmentthings people / animalsappearance and actionI noticed the _ in his eyes and the _ in his tone.I looked back and saw my Dad, who was _, head/hands/. _There he was, doing sth. held me entirely i

22、n their power.sth. kept me spellboundthe sudden awareness of some factspast experiences and memoriessbs love and devotionI suddenly realized that. / I became aware ofThe sight of it reminded me ofIt hit / struck/ occurred to / dawned on me thatVisions of sth. marched before my eyesdisappointmentfrus

23、trationleaning over the enginelowered/ black with greasePara1: Dad called the stores but none carried the bolt that fitted this old van. Maybe we were not going on The Trip after all. Visions of diving at the lake and hanging out with friends happily marched before my eyes. My soul silently rejoiced

24、. But then I caught sight of Dad, who was leaning over the engine, his head lowered and hands black with grease. The sight of it reminded me of all the expectations and excitement earlier he had for the Trip. But now, the Trip The Trip of a Lifetimewas vanishing before his eyes. I couldnt bear to se

25、e Dad so disappointed. “I will have to find that bolt for Dad.” I murmured to myself determinedly.Most of the food raised by the lake was for the family and had to be carried to Butanza. It was a long a trip about fourteen hours. Deo made it for the first time when he was about ten. They would set o

26、ut before dawn, and he soon learned to feel relieved when they left in moonlight and he could make out stones and roots on the paths. Inevitably, when there was no moon, he stubbed his toes. He knew by then that crying aloud was not acceptable. Hed suffer great pain and try hard not to cry. It was a

27、 long a trip about fourteen hours.It was a trip that for a bird would have measured about twenty-five kilometers. But on foot the trip was nearly twice that long and full of steep climbs and descents. It took about fourteen hours. Most of the food raised by the lake was for the family and had to be

28、carried to Butanza. It was a long a trip that took about fourteen hours. Deo made it for the first time when he was about ten. They would set out before dawn, and he soon learned to feel relieved when they left in moonlight and he could make out stones and roots on the paths. Inevitably, when there

29、was no moon, he stubbed his toes. He knew by then that crying aloud was not acceptable. Hed suffer great pain and try hard not to cry.Hed suffer great pain and try hard not to cry.Hed fall to the ground curling up over his wounded toes, struggling not to cry, and then would get up and go on, hurryin

30、g after the others, sniffling until the pain subsided.Most of the food raised by the lake was for the family and had to be carried to Butanza, a trip that for a bird would have measured about twenty-five kilometers. But on foot the trip was nearly twice that long and full of steep climbs and descent

31、s. It took about fourteen hours. Deo made it for the first time when he was about ten and many years of going barefoot lay before him. They would set out before dawn, and he soon learned to feel relieved when they left in moonlight and he could make out stones and roots on the paths. Inevitably, whe

32、n there was no moon, he stubbed his toes. He knew by then that crying aloud was not acceptable. Hed fall to the ground curling up over his wounded toes, struggling not to cry, and then would get up and go on, hurrying after the others, sniffling until the pain subsided.Paragraph 2: Then it hits me.“Max!” I shout,“Find Max!” How did they search for Max?Where was he and what was he doing? And was the bolt found?How did the author feel after finding the bolt?下水作文： Dad called the stores but none carried the bolt that fit this old van. The bo