英語(yǔ)中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)及答案

1、英語(yǔ)中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)及答案一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1.書(shū)面表達(dá)地球是我們的家園，我們作為地球的主人，就應(yīng)該好好保護(hù)地球。現(xiàn)在正在倡導(dǎo)低碳”生活，只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境，不浪費(fèi)地球的能源，就能夠讓我們的周?chē)兊酶G，生 活變得更美好。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？談?wù)勀愕南敕ā?nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下幾 點(diǎn)：.節(jié)約用水、用電；2.節(jié)約紙張，循環(huán)使用舊課本，保護(hù)森林；3.節(jié)約糧食，在更多的土地上種樹(shù)；4.不亂丟雜物，保護(hù)環(huán)境；要求：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；80詞左右提示詞：the greenhouse gases lifestyle彳氐碳生活方式 How does our eart

2、h turn better?The earth is our home.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better. 【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a m

3、iddle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less

4、trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】 【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如

5、how to do , live in , around us such as as a middle school student ， and so on， close down the water ， turn off the lights， cut down ， make a contribution to our earth ， pollute our environment ， better and better 等。而固定結(jié)構(gòu) But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle? 和 I think as a middle schoo

6、l student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表 達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適 當(dāng)引用，使文

7、章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。.書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇介紹我的朋友張陽(yáng)的短文?；厩闆r張陽(yáng)，陽(yáng)光中學(xué)九年級(jí)二班學(xué)生興趣愛(ài)好.喜歡閱讀。每周花七個(gè)多小時(shí)閱讀各種類(lèi)型的書(shū)，因?yàn)?喜歡觀鳥(niǎo)。每年統(tǒng)計(jì)兩次鳥(niǎo)兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥(niǎo)兒在數(shù)量方面 的變化。優(yōu)秀事跡上個(gè)月把零花錢(qián)捐給了希望工程木米夢(mèng)想.希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師.每個(gè)人

8、為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。如：.（舉1例）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likesreading. He spends more than seven hours a week

9、reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway conne

10、cting my hometown toShanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn tthrow rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如like reading , more than , all kinds of, spend time doing , enjoy doing , the number of , twice a year, be the chief eng

11、ineer of 等。而 He spends more than seven hours a week reading allkinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的綜合運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣 化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不

12、能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。.書(shū)面表達(dá)初中即將畢業(yè)，同學(xué)們都感到壓力很大。就此問(wèn)題，老師要求你在英語(yǔ)課上做一個(gè)以“LessPressure Makes Life Better為題的報(bào)告，談?wù)勀愕淖龇?，與同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求寫(xiě)一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：.普遍存在的壓力：同學(xué)關(guān)系；考試.我過(guò)去的壓力：父母的期望；學(xué)習(xí).我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；.詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, eve

13、ryone!Pressure is a serious problem in today s world. Most students in our class are under too muchpressure.【答案】Hello, my classmates!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while othe

14、rs may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I f

15、eel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對(duì)現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes LifeBetter為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。審題可知，文章中應(yīng)主要 包括以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過(guò)去曾面對(duì)的 壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng) 由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)

16、揮想象力來(lái)補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和 體會(huì)出發(fā)，選取生活中常見(jiàn)的場(chǎng)景進(jìn)行介紹。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意 根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，并變化謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu) 為主，這樣的句式表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和 復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成 分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對(duì)同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn) 象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目 中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，

17、文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話(huà)題也很明確。其次短 文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式 準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓 語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如 Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much. 、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class 、 In this

18、way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies 等等。4.近來(lái)，美國(guó)總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說(shuō)一口流利的中文而成為網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國(guó)朋友Sam看過(guò)相關(guān)報(bào)道之后也很想學(xué)好中文，但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封郵件給他，提一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)的建議。要點(diǎn)提示：.課堂上認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，做好筆記；.不要害怕犯錯(cuò)誤，與同學(xué)們用中文交流；.課下經(jīng)常閱讀中文雜志、報(bào)紙等，在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語(yǔ)言類(lèi)節(jié)目；.經(jīng)常用中文給外國(guó)筆友寫(xiě)電子郵件等。注意：.詞數(shù) 80-100;.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

19、.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,Im happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions.In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.YoursDaming 【答案】Dear Sam,Im happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.

20、Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And dont be afraid of making mistakes. Third, youd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chines

21、e programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.Yours, Daming 【解析】 【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以大明的身份給Sam寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他如何學(xué)好漢語(yǔ)，題目中從四個(gè)方面提出了

22、建議。通過(guò)審題可知，這是要求寫(xiě)一封建議信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)方面：首先 應(yīng)和Sam先做一個(gè)交流，然后引出寫(xiě)信的目的；接下來(lái)給出具體的建議，依據(jù)題目中給出 的這四條，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，還應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)；最后寫(xiě)一 個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，如希望建議對(duì)你有幫助等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用恰 當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q(chēng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能按照漢語(yǔ)的思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě) 漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，寫(xiě)完整的句子。如可以較常見(jiàn)的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或 主系表結(jié)構(gòu)為主，簡(jiǎn)單句的句型可以使文章敘述清楚、簡(jiǎn)潔。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插 使用并列句或復(fù)合句以及其他一些復(fù)雜句式。語(yǔ)句之

23、間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思 連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫(xiě)了一封信，對(duì)他的漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個(gè)部 分：第一段是與 Sam之間的問(wèn)候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)這一話(huà)題，并介紹寫(xiě)信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了 First, Second, Third, lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話(huà)對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn) 確，用詞得體。文章中的語(yǔ)句以簡(jiǎn)單

24、句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章 的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語(yǔ)和句型，如 First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, its a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation 、 In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you

25、will learn it well. 等等。.環(huán)保話(huà)題是人們最關(guān)心的話(huà)題之一，請(qǐng)以 Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家 鄉(xiāng)的變化寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。注意事項(xiàng)：.短文應(yīng)包括表格中的所有提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名，詞數(shù)不少于80。狀況水污染，大氣污染.應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類(lèi)活動(dòng)，治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）.感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好.Change for a better China【答案】 We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environm

26、ent well.But some people don t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories ols put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot o

27、f black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in ord

28、er to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話(huà)題是人們最關(guān)心的話(huà)題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫(xiě) 作內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容 上應(yīng)注意描

29、述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí) 慣。【點(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然，順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there aremore cars on the road these days. ； We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.給文中增色不少。6.書(shū)面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)舉辦 家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表

30、提示，以“The Changes in MyHometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇 100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。過(guò)去生活條件差，道路狹窄，房屋破舊。污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。.（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境：政府米取措施來(lái)改善污染，城市變得越來(lái)越整潔。生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人搬進(jìn)了新公寓。越來(lái)越多的人有自己的汽車(chē)；生活舒適。交通：新的飛機(jī)場(chǎng)已投入使用多年。be in use （投入使用）；旅游：每年啟成千上力來(lái)自各地的游客。將來(lái)布望 （兩點(diǎn)）要求：1.短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。C

31、hanges my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, 【答案】 My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now

32、the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are t

33、housands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以 The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)發(fā) 生的變化。題目中用表格的形式，給我們對(duì)比的家鄉(xiāng)的過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ) 將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，并對(duì)將來(lái)提出兩點(diǎn)希望。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都 有了，需要注意的是在描寫(xiě)過(guò)去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對(duì)將來(lái)的希望也需 要學(xué)生自己

34、發(fā)揮。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開(kāi)想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分 能夠很好的結(jié)合起來(lái)，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。表達(dá)時(shí)，需要注意英語(yǔ) 表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語(yǔ)句，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰 當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型來(lái)表達(dá)。注意句式的多變，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句 穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來(lái)的變化。文章 是按照時(shí)間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去的面貌，這一部分使用了過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都變 成了過(guò)去式，形式準(zhǔn)確。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要

35、以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。最后對(duì) 家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)表達(dá)了自己的愿望。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。 文章中語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文里還使用 了些較好的短語(yǔ)和句型， 如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets werevery narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people

36、have their own cars and live a comfortable life 、 There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year. 等等。7.書(shū)面表達(dá)(本題15分)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫(xiě)作，請(qǐng)將作文寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好，社會(huì)需要正能量( positive energy)。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助， 也要學(xué)會(huì)幫助他人。請(qǐng)你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：.你對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；.說(shuō)說(shuō)你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；.呼吁大家

37、互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會(huì)充滿(mǎn)正能量。作文要求：.不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。.語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù) 80個(gè)左右。作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫(xiě)在試卷上，也不計(jì)入總詞 數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop.【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her

38、because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give

39、others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes,“her hand, the flavor in mine. (113w)”【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話(huà)題作文，描述對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以 及鼓勵(lì)大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿(mǎn)正能量。

40、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上 下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如 be for, adj enough to do, theother day, try one s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one s opinion, be supto, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下

41、文意思 連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符 合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給 出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹?心突出、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短

42、文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還 要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合要求等。8.隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。 網(wǎng)購(gòu)”已成為一種時(shí)尚，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫(xiě)一篇網(wǎng) 上購(gòu)物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage)1.不需要出門(mén)；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁擠、勞累2.價(jià)格通常比較便宜3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage)1.只看到圖片， 看/、到商品本身2.容易購(gòu)買(mǎi)大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購(gòu) shopping online;商品goods;導(dǎo)致 cause

43、注意：1.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)；.詞數(shù)：100詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【答案】 With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the

44、group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a m ouse, you can buy what you re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose price

45、s are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it s very easy foto buy goods that aren t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That s a waste of money.Al

46、l in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如 convenient , disadvantage, ingood quality , figure out , have the chance to do , be attacked by , of course , take care of等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文

47、意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符 合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給 出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹?心突出、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各

48、種錯(cuò)誤外，還 要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合要求等。9 .假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書(shū)。提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動(dòng)物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因?yàn)? 1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園;2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們（不少于三條）。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；2） 80詞左右。倡議書(shū)的結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動(dòng)物 mammal;象牙ivoryDear classmatesI believe everyones contribution（貢獻(xiàn)）can make a

49、 big difference.Yours, Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes

50、. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some

51、 activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.I believe everyones contribution（貢獻(xiàn)）can make a big difference.Yours, Lihua 【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書(shū) 倡議大家保護(hù)大象。文章共分為三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所 處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說(shuō)明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。時(shí)態(tài) 主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let s/We debe的表示建議的句子。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，為使句子具有連貫性， 可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largestmammals 及 First, we shoul