不要讓自己的托福寫作過于刻板

1、不要讓自己的托福寫作過于刻板對(duì)于整篇文章并不是在苛求每一處的漏洞和缺點(diǎn)，評(píng)審官的整個(gè)評(píng)審過程是針對(duì)于全文的優(yōu)點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn)而展開的。那么，我們究竟該怎樣發(fā)揮自己托福寫作能力呢?下面是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編給大家?guī)淼牟灰屪约旱耐懈懽鬟^于刻板，供大家參考!不要讓自己的托福寫作過于刻板托福獨(dú)立寫作對(duì)于學(xué)生有著這樣的要求， 30 分鐘內(nèi)完成一篇字?jǐn)?shù)在300 字左右的議論文。但是，對(duì)于閱卷者來說，所真正遵循的原則卻是：“ Readers should focus onwhat the examinee does well 。 ”對(duì)于初入托福寫作練習(xí)的同學(xué)來說，大部分同學(xué)都是會(huì)比較在意自己的文章的字?jǐn)?shù)發(fā)揮?？偸菚?huì)認(rèn)為，

2、字?jǐn)?shù)多了少了都會(huì)影響到最后的評(píng)分。其實(shí)，若想得到高分，考生最好能將文章寫到 300 字以上，雖然有些文章字?jǐn)?shù)不足但仍可得到滿分，但是畢竟這種情況比較罕見。但是，從這個(gè)文章的布局和描述的角度考慮，也是只有300350 字左右，才能充分而清晰的讓自己把內(nèi)容表達(dá)明確。從考慮字?jǐn)?shù)的問題一路延續(xù)，很多學(xué)生又會(huì)考慮到托福寫作的模板化、模式化。文章的發(fā)展指的是運(yùn)用例子，細(xì)節(jié)和理由來支持你在文章中所闡述的觀點(diǎn)。閱卷者不希望看到考生為了湊字?jǐn)?shù)而過多使用一些 “模式化 ”的單詞或句子來發(fā)展文章，也不愿意看到考生過多抄襲或者沿用題目中的句子。如果考生的文章是組織有序的，那么閱卷者從頭看到尾也不會(huì)感到糊涂。但是在此提

3、醒考生，文章結(jié)構(gòu)的有序，并不是單純地使用了諸如 first ， second 之類的連詞就可以達(dá)成。托福寫作 15 個(gè)熱門話題構(gòu)思 1-8 ：1 、 同意上大學(xué)好(1) 為未來工作進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)備(2)交更多的朋友，學(xué)習(xí)他們的思維方式(3)系統(tǒng)的學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)I think going to the college is the better policy.First ， preparing for you future career by learning the basic knowledge will increase your competitive power. The college is th

4、e best place where can supply you with the background knowledge of your future career.Secondyou can make more friends and learn the way of their thinking. You will be influenced by intellectual companions. You can also build up your social network in your college and make your friends be your resour

5、ces.Last ， you can benefit from going to the college by learning the knowledge in a systematic way which is more efficient.2、同意父母是最好的老師(1) 父母從小就和我們?cè)谝黄穑o我們很多的知識(shí)(2)父母和我們最為親密，在任何時(shí)候，都會(huì)毫無保留地給我們知識(shí)(3)父母最了解我們，所以他們給我們的建議和意見都是最有針對(duì)性的I totally agree with that parents are the best teacher.First ， they raised us

6、up thus spending the most time with us. During the process ， they teach us every tiny things in daily life.Second ， they are most intimate to us and generous to give us the knowledge and lessons whenever ， whatever ， wherever we need.Last ， they are the people who know us best ， the suggestions and

7、advices they give can result in the solutions we need based on the specific situation of our own.3、食品容易保存將改變?nèi)藗兊纳盍?xí)慣(1)食品容易準(zhǔn)備，節(jié)省了大量的時(shí)間，使人們可以做其他事情(2)食品容易準(zhǔn)備，為人們提供了更多的花樣。(3)食品容易準(zhǔn)備，為人們的健康帶來了很多好處Easy to prepare food saves us amounts of time ， (so we can do other things like studying ， working or taking ca

8、re of children. ) It releases people from the timeconsuming cook process.Second ， the semi-prepared food also offers us with more choices. For instance if I can only cook Chinese food ， the microwave spaghetti sold in the supermarket offer me a new flavor.Last ， many people cook in an unhealthy way.

9、 We can benefit from the fastpreparing food cos they have been throng rigid quality and healthy tests before launching.4、首先進(jìn)行比較，然后說書是最重要的來源(1)讀書能夠節(jié)省很多時(shí)間(2)書是有系統(tǒng)性的，能夠讓人以很科學(xué)的方式迅速獲得知識(shí)(3)讀書相對(duì)比較便宜和容易，而在尋找經(jīng)驗(yàn)則比較昂貴和困難Book is more important source.Reading saves you a lot of time while learning certain knowle

10、dge. However ， learning by experience can be time-consuming. For instance ， I want to handle the Microsoft excel. Learning by the teaching material is efficient.Second ， books are arranged in a systematic way which allows you to gain the knowledge scientifically and fast.Last ， reading is relatively

11、 easy and cheap but experiencing can be tough and expensive sometime. Like you want to know America ， reading a book is much more economical than going there instead5、先說明優(yōu)勢(shì)和劣勢(shì)，讓后說同意建一個(gè)工廠(1) 工廠能夠吸收附近很多人進(jìn)行就業(yè)，對(duì)地方的經(jīng)濟(jì)有很大的貢獻(xiàn)(2)建立工廠能夠促使附近其他的商業(yè)發(fā)展，例如小商店，藥店等等，這可以大大方便附近的居民(3)建造工廠，贏利后，就可以向當(dāng)?shù)卣暙I(xiàn)稅收，政府可以利用這些錢改善社區(qū)

12、的服務(wù)6、一個(gè)重要的改變就是改變環(huán)境，讓它變的更好(1) 環(huán)境好能改善人的身體健康，很多人因?yàn)榄h(huán)境而生病(2)環(huán)境好了，吸引更多的游客來旅游(3)環(huán)境好能夠促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，吸引更多的商人來投資7、電影和電視影響人的行為(1) 電影和電視能夠讓人們迅速了解整個(gè)國家和世界，豐富人的知識(shí)，讓人們更加樂觀(2)電影和電視讓人變的懶惰，不愿意和人接觸(3) 電影和電視讓人變的 violent8、電影和電視沒有破壞朋友和家人的交流(1) 電影和電視的很多內(nèi)容正是朋友和家人聊天的重要內(nèi)容。沒有電影和電視，似 乎聊天就缺了很多內(nèi)容。(2)我們?cè)诤芏鄷r(shí)候是和朋友和家人一起欣賞電影和電視的，這促進(jìn)了交流(3)電影和

13、電視現(xiàn)在的設(shè)計(jì)很多是讓家人朋友一起參與，這實(shí)際上也促進(jìn)了交流托福寫作經(jīng)典范文 A Rare Fossil Record經(jīng)典的高分作文在托福備考中都被視為是一件必不可少的備考資料，雖然很多托福過來人都是不主張大家去生搬硬套的背誦一些托福文章。但是，學(xué)會(huì)累積材料對(duì)于 托福作文還是會(huì)有著很大的幫助。下面小編就會(huì)陸續(xù)大家?guī)硪恍┙?jīng)典滿分作文案例， 希望大家能從其中收集到更多好詞、好句。The preservation of embryos and juveniles is a rate occurrence in the fossil record. The tiny, delicate skelet

14、ons are usually scattered by scavengers or destroyed by weathering before they can be fossilized. Ichthyosaurs had a higher chance of being preserved than did terrestrial creatures because, as marine animals, they tended to live in environments less subject to erosion. Still, their fossilization req

15、uired a suite of factors: a slow rate of decay of soft tissues, little scavenging by other animals, a lack of swift currents and waves to jumble and carry away small bones, and fairly rapid burial. Given these factors, some areas have become a treasury of well-preserved ichthyosaur fossils.The depos

16、its at Holzmaden, Germany, present an interesting case for analysis. The ichthyosaur remains are found in black, bituminous marine shales deposited about 190 million years ago. Over the years, thousands of specimens of marine reptiles, fish and invertebrates have been recovered from these rocks. The

17、 quality of preservation is outstanding, but what is even more impressive is the number of ichthyosaur fossils containing preserved embryos. Ichthyosaurs with embryos have been reported from 6 different levels of the shale in a small area around Holzmaden, suggesting that a specific site was used by

18、 large numbers of ichthyosaurs repeatedly over time. The embryos are quite advanced in their physical development; their paddles, for example, are already well formed. One specimen is even preserved in the birth canal. In addition, the shale contains the remains of many newborns that are between 20 and 30 inches long.Why are there so many pregnant females and young at Holzmaden when they are so rare elsewhere? The quality of preservation is almost unmatched and