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1、English Composition Writing -How to write cartoon composition?Senior Three古丈一中：譚艷群Senior three高考書面表達(dá)專題寫作指導(dǎo)漫畫類作文Picture Writing(看 圖 作 文) A Story Describing (故事敘述類)A Table Analyzing(圖表分析類)A Cartoon conception (漫畫立意類)Different forms of pictures2008年北京卷2008年天津卷2010年北京卷Number of People (in thousands)a: N

2、umber of TV watchers b: Number of film goersAPercentage of Average Family Expense in 2000 BPercentage of Average Family Expense in2005Housing 25%other57%Housing32%other46% Fooddrink18%Fooddrink22%20052006200720082009grain43%42%41%41%40%milk13%14%14.5%14.5%15%meat25%25%26%26.5%27.5%Fruit&vegetable19%

3、19%18.5%18%17.5%Total100%100%100%100%100%2010年廣東卷2010年北京卷Picture Writing(看 圖 作 文) A Story Describing (故事敘述類)A Table Analyzing(圖表分析類)A Cartoon conception (漫畫立意類)How to organize a composition based on cartoons?What abilities should we have?1. 看圖3. 謀篇2.解意1.看圖：Topics of cartoonsenvironmental or natural

4、problemssocial phenomenonattitudes towards life2.解意(theme)-to the point 注意: 文字說明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切記要認(rèn)真閱讀！找準(zhǔn)角度, 辨明褒貶 (angle) 明晰主旨, 聯(lián)系生活 (theme) 角度comparison 主旨educationinequalityExample 1The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. 角度criticize主旨The students as we

5、ll as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.Example 2總 (導(dǎo)入)分（正文）分析圖片的深層含義，點(diǎn)明主題，與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活展開聯(lián)系發(fā)表看法及感受描述圖片內(nèi)容總（結(jié)尾）3.謀篇 -organization假設(shè)你參加所在年級(jí)的英文寫作比賽，請(qǐng)按如下要求完成一篇短文：1.簡(jiǎn)要描述下圖內(nèi)容，并點(diǎn)明主題； 2.聯(lián)系實(shí)際，表達(dá)該圖帶給你的啟示。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)； 2.不能使用真實(shí)姓名 和學(xué)校名稱。2011湖

6、南高考作文1.看圖2.解意3.謀篇What do you see in the picture?Whats the theme of the picture?Para IPara 2Para 3Describe the picture briefly. Point out the theme of the picture and relate the picture to the real life reasonably. Present your opinion clearly.寫 作 指 導(dǎo)Divide the composition into three parts:滿 分 作 文 As

7、 is shown in the picture, countless drips of water form sea；thousands of trees makes a forest，as well，a variety of people make up the society. The picture conveys the meaning that accumulation is of great importance, in order to achieve a goal. During the course of learning English, there is no doub

8、t accumulation plays an important part. If we dont accumulate rich vocabulary and grammatical knowledge, we cant do well in listening, speaking, reading and writing, that is to say, we cant learn English well. Only by concentrating on learning English every day can we make great progress. In my opin

9、ion, we must pay attention to accumulation to achieve a goal. Well goes an old saying, “Drop by drop the oceans are filled; stone by stone the walls are built.” 點(diǎn)評(píng)：1.結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、邏輯明確的“三段式”寫法永遠(yuǎn)是高考英語寫作的“不二法寶”。2.平時(shí)基礎(chǔ)詞匯和表達(dá)的積累為高分作文保駕護(hù)航。Some useful sentence structures:Para 1 Describe the picture 2.As we can see

10、in the picture, 1.As is vividly shown in the picture, 3.From this picture, we can see 文章內(nèi)容4. Lets look at the picture above/first.Some useful sentence structures: Para 2 point out the theme1.This sight reminds me of something in my daily life 2.Such a picture reminds us of 3.This cartoon conveys the

11、 meaning of文章內(nèi)容4.Nowadays,it is a common phenomenon thatSome useful sentence structures:Para 3 Present your opinions2.Lets call on everybody to1.As far as Im concerned, we should3.Only in this way can we文章內(nèi)容4.I consider it necessary5.It is better/advisable toLets practice!根據(jù)下圖英文提示，寫一篇英語短文。提示：In an E

12、nglish speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judge how you.注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)； 2.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。課 堂 作 文Practice1. What do you see in the picture?(描寫圖畫內(nèi)容) 2. What do you think of in real life after seeing the picture?（點(diǎn)明主題，聯(lián)系實(shí)際） 3. Whats your opinion on thi

13、s picture? （陳述個(gè)人看法） 滿 分 作 文 As we can see in the picture ,a boy is standing high on top of many books looking for into the distance. Such a picture reminds me of a Chinese poem “to enjoy a grander sight ,climb to a greater height”. It also proves that books can help us a lot .Reading books can help to broaden our horizons , and to improve our understanding of the world in which we live . The more books we read , the more knowledge we will gain ; the more learned we will be and the broader horizons we will have. Pick up books and read ! A more exciting world i