通用版高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫專題(十二)

1、知識(shí)決定格局，格局影響命運(yùn) 高考英語后續(xù)寫題（十） 一典技指It a beautiful cool was blowing rose highin I had home from work about earlier. As I did long day, I to did some work my flower light thegrill to dinner for my and myself. I just walked few steps when Isuddenly horrible blow to side of It had hit mewith baseball 棒棒. I t

2、hat one in yard me, so no could hitme. I reached up and, to my and horror, that I had with an I the tightly it gone through neck ran inside, screaming myhusbands name. was back talking to our on to Ed grabbed me by stop running andtold lie down Then he I there and prayed. I if was way I could The ne

3、xt hour or so was mix of had from a hunter with a compound bow, for hunting, in his Luckily, he was using apractice which is smooth and rounded; a broadhead arrow for would have killed He lived the street to arrow bounced and turnedback to the south. It over two, possibly three, through the bushes a

4、nd an oak tree, large into my neck as I to A compound bow can up or 300 per second.注意： 所寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右； 應(yīng) 個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)詞語； 續(xù)部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 續(xù)完成, 請(qǐng)下劃線標(biāo)出你所用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 1: Soon, I sent 知識(shí)決定格局，格局影響命運(yùn) 2: a visit to me day.二、寫作思路 確主題：考查遇險(xiǎn)如何解決問題的能力，第一段可以提及 f ，二可以強(qiáng) 調(diào)安全教育，同時(shí)，強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)會(huì)寬容他人的過失。 時(shí)變化：第一段應(yīng)該是故事當(dāng)天送到醫(yī)院，第

5、二段是是第二天應(yīng)該是作者住院的 病房內(nèi)。 續(xù)難點(diǎn)：情節(jié)比較簡單，但很難確定主題。如果是強(qiáng)調(diào)急救，應(yīng)該屬于人與自然-自然災(zāi)害與防范，安全常識(shí)與自我保護(hù)方面的內(nèi)容。如果是強(qiáng)調(diào)寬容，應(yīng)該是人與社會(huì)-良好的人際關(guān)系與社會(huì)交往。如果強(qiáng)調(diào)生命的意義與價(jià)值，應(yīng)該屬于人與自我。因此很難收尾。根據(jù)原文第三段，這支箭能如此離奇地射中 “”，那這支箭為什么不能射中我的女兒 (Keila) 的, 最年輕人成了我女兒的男友呢？來個(gè) 不很好嗎？下 水時(shí)有過這樣的思考，但還是放棄了。三、寫作提綱 1: Soon, I sent again to boil up me. At this neck seemed to in w

6、orse, I hardly I close tears at thought that I was going to die. How I wished horrible nightmare could soon! doing a CT my neck, performed an operation moment I woke up, kill me, that if had not been my husbands quick action and knowledge of first aid, I would not have survived. this, I smiled husba

7、nd then sighed with relief. 2: a visit to me day. In of the hospital stood the bowed head in prayed forgiveness. I up slowly, with what was a open the door.知識(shí)決定格局，格局影響命運(yùn) the man was, look face, but managed contain anger.5. “It was accident, but you mustnt practise shooting in the street, my husband

8、said sternly, patting on the shoulder.6. Soon the young eyes with relief and he promised hewouldnt do that With a more us both, us and left.四：參考文章 I was again to boil up me. At point, my neck seemed to in pain, worse, I hardly I close tears at thought that I was going to die. How I horrible nightmar

9、e could endsoon! after CT scan my neck, the performed anoperation moment I woke up, me the arrow that might kill me,saying that if it had for husbands quick action and knowledge of first aid, would not have I smiled at my and then sighed with relief. visit to me next day. In hospital the bowed head

10、in shame for I sat up with what was a open the door. When realized the young man an crossed face, but managed to hisanger. “It was accident, but you mustnt practise shooting in the street, my husband sternly, patting him the shoulder. Soon the young mans eyes gleamed with relief and joy, andhe promi

11、sed that wouldnt do that again. With words, he to us both, thanked us again 二課練讀后續(xù)寫 閱下面短文，根據(jù)給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 quietly in the empty had since accident. As for turn to was Today was important inher comeback (出 If I win thought, I can skate in the next had her that was one beat.知識(shí)決定格局，格局影響命運(yùn) thought

12、 that car her was injured. six her Hello, Laurie, one of burst knee? Is it going slow you I guess find tonight, girl named in everything. only real beat, the hurried Hearing that, her jump. If I dont try I wont she Does I Suddenly right sent and down said it that for a while. a chance tonight? she s

13、aid After the pain she moved slowly warm up. she said I must win!At that young woman in skate equipment put of her Her bag fell floor. Im Jinny felt as she looked Jinny. this my competitor, Laurie. Because of her, I tonight.Im Laurie Collins, Laurie fell out of your Jinny. Jinny gather her belonging

14、s, Jinny, called, your tape of missing. You are one! Laurie, Jinny.Oh, my I thought I had handed it in hours box with my hurrying out.注意：）所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左；）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好； 1:Music so important to the said preparationalone in dressing room. 2:知識(shí)決定格局，格局影響命運(yùn)Minutes later, to the centre of stadium

15、 her name called. 參考范文“Music is so important to the skating,” Laurie said thoughtfully, doing some prep alone in dressing room. saw under a over it “Jinny green box” she exclaimed. it must have rolled out her Laurie stood motionlessly,if Jinny doesnt her music. will Is my only real competitor. Laurie shiveredslightly as she thought about this. she wondered, “Do! really want to win so much?” Laurie for second. to give Jinny Jinny was grateful Laurie, and finished skating 2:Minutes Laurie stadium when her name called. as she skate time with music. Then did her difficult