中考英語作文指導(dǎo)經(jīng)典教學(xué)一等獎優(yōu)秀課件

1、河北省中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（13-15分）信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤。第二檔（10-12分）信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量語言錯誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。第三檔（7-9分）能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，語言錯誤較多，但句子基本可讀。 第四檔（4-6分）只能傳達(dá)少量信息，表達(dá)不流暢，語言錯誤多，只有少量句子可讀。 第五檔（1-3分）只能傳達(dá)個別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個別句子可讀河北省中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1.審題不清，要點不全2.單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點符號、字體等低級錯誤多 3.句子結(jié)構(gòu)、用詞不地道，不準(zhǔn)確4.缺乏好的句式，詞匯不豐富5.卷面臟亂，字體不規(guī)范，書寫太擁擠，勾畫 過多6.開頭

2、羅嗦，不能直入主題。層次不分明，主 體部分內(nèi)容欠充實，不生動，結(jié)尾草率書面表達(dá)中學(xué)生常有的問題1.審題不清，要點不全書面表達(dá)中學(xué)生常有的問題一、掌握正確的寫作技巧非常重要一、掌握正確的寫作技巧非常重要 據(jù)報道韓國將用電子課本取代學(xué)校的紙質(zhì)課本。某英文報“學(xué)生習(xí)作”專欄正就“Paper Books or E-books?”這一話題征文。請你根據(jù)下面提供的信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報投稿，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?E-booksEasy to takeProtect environmentLook up easily Paper books1.Take notes2.Practice handwriting

3、3.Bad for eyes注意：1.短文應(yīng)包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫；2.詞數(shù)不少于80。題目和開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Its reported that all schools in Korea will use e-books instead of paper books at school. Example 1 據(jù)報道韓國將用電子課本取代學(xué)校的紙質(zhì)課本。某英文報“學(xué)生習(xí)Before writing一、審. 認(rèn)真審題，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心1. Use right subjects (明確主語尤其是人稱)2.Use proper tense（使用正

4、確的時態(tài)）3.How many parts（分成幾部分）they(books)we一般現(xiàn)在時三個部分Before writing一、審. 1. Use righ時態(tài)，人稱時態(tài)，人稱 二、列. 用簡單的句子或短語列出提綱Part One.電子圖書的優(yōu)點。1.攜帶輕便, 2.利于環(huán)保, 3.容易查詢 Part Two. 紙質(zhì)課本的優(yōu)點。1.方便做筆記, 2.有利于書寫, 3.不會傷眼睛。Part Three. 自身觀點。 時態(tài)，人稱時態(tài)，人稱時態(tài)，人稱時態(tài)，人稱時態(tài)，人稱 二、列. 三、 加.加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔，漂亮。開門見山式回憶式開頭

5、疑問式開頭倒敘式開頭 三、 加.加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或 三、 加.加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔，漂亮。自然結(jié)尾，點明主題首尾呼應(yīng)，升華主題反問結(jié)尾，引起深思表達(dá)祝愿，闡述愿望 三、 加.加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)或三、 加.加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。Its reported that all schools in Korea will use E-books instead of paper books at school. Many people think this is good news because e-bo

6、oks have many advantages.-But e-books makers should do a lot of things to improve them so that they wont do harm to our eyes.三、 加.加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。Its reported四、 連.恰當(dāng)運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個部分銜接自然。But e-books makers should do a lot of things to improve them so that they wont do harm to our eyesight.過渡詞和句四、 連.恰當(dāng)運

7、用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個部1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示選擇: or, eitheror;3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示條件: if , unless關(guān)聯(lián)詞1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): 關(guān)聯(lián)詞6.表示對比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解釋: for example,

8、 for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示順序: firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示強調(diào): also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示結(jié)論: in a word, generally speaking, 6.表示對比: 五、 美1.Use the familiar words and struct

9、ures （使用熟悉的詞句）2.Use beautiful words and structures(選好的詞句，美化文章)在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。3. Write neatly and correctly.書寫規(guī)范, 卷面整潔。五、 美1.Use the familiar words a We can use e-books to finish our homework quickly. So I think if we use e-books, we can save a lot of time to rest. Whats more, we can find out anyt

10、hing we need in them quickly.Enjoy some wonderful sentences! We can use e-books to finisFirst, paper books are more convenient. And we can write notes in them.We should use e-books because we live in modern cities and we should share the result of the development of the technology. Enjoy some wonder

11、ful sentences!First, paper books are more co 檢查并修改錯誤看詞數(shù)是否達(dá)到要求。看有無遺漏要點看文體格式是否正確規(guī)范檢查時態(tài)是否正確，主謂語人稱是否一致，代詞使用是否正確，單詞拼寫，標(biāo)點符號是否正確句子形式是否符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣 Remember: Please scratch if you get enough time. 打草稿六、查 檢查并修改錯誤 打草稿六、In Korea, e-books will instead of paper books. Use the e-books dont have pollution.If we use e

12、-books, we neednt to take a big heavy bag to school.If you want, you should bought it. take the place ofIn Korea, people will use e-books instead of paper books in South Karea.E-books dont cause pollution.dont need to take /neednt take Can you correct them?want it buyIn Korea, e-books will instead查美

13、連加列審作文用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句美化文章審清題意加上首尾列出要點檢查錯誤 Writing skillssix steps查美連加列審作文用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句美化文章審清題意加上首尾列出要點檢 Paper Books or E-books? Its reported that all schools in Korea will use e-books. Many people think this is good news because e-books have many advantages. First of all, they are good for the environment, since they

14、 can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are very convenient. To get a paper book, We have to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer. With e-books, our teachers neednt write on the blackboard and we neednt clean the blackboard

15、 every day. Paper Boo However, paper books also have some advantages. With paper books, we can make notes easily. It is good for us to practice handwriting. It wont do so much harm to our eyes as e-books do. I prefer e-books. It can make us enjoy life better. But e-books makers should do a lot of th

16、ings to improve them so that they wont do harm to our eyes. However, paper books also 二、重視模仿 善于積累二、重視模仿 善于積累brainstormphysical problemsWhat words or phrases can you think of when you see the word “physical problems”?Example 2教材文本有利于學(xué)生寫作brainstormWhat words or phrasehave a stomachachehave a feverhave

17、 a cold have a cough have a sore back have a sore throathave a headachehave a toothacheillnessphysical problems 身體健康問題have a stomachachehave a fever1. It is very important to keep healthy.2. How can we keep healthy？3. We cant go to sleep too late. 4. We cant get up too late.5. We should eat the food

18、 healthily.6. We should do more exercise.關(guān)于健康問題常用句1. It is very important to keewriting春天來了，容易患感冒，為了保持健康，某英語網(wǎng)站正在征集有關(guān)保持健康建議的稿件，請結(jié)合以下圖表寫一篇應(yīng)征短文。How to keep healthyeatothersdrinkmore vegetables and fruitdo more exerciseless junk foodrun and do morning exercisePlay basketball and footballmore waterwritin

19、g春天來了，容易患感冒，為了保持健康，某英語網(wǎng)站 How to keep healthy Spring is coming. Its easy for us to get a cold during this time. Here is some advice about how to keep healthy. First, we should drink more water. Wed better drink hot tea with honey. Second, we must eat more vegetables and fruit. Were supposed to eat le

20、ss junk food. Third, we should do more exercise, such as running, doing morning exercises and so on. Whats more, we all should have enough sleep. Staying up late is bad for our health. Besides, wed better go to bed early and get up early. Health is so important for everyone. I hope everyone will hav

21、e a healthy lifestyle and stay healthy. We should/shouldntWe are supposed toWed betterWed better notIts good toWhy not doDoing sth. is H 提建議had better (not) do.最好(不)做.how about / what about doing 怎么樣?I think you should do.我認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該I suggest / advice that you should do.我建議你做If I were you, I would do.我要是

22、你的話，我會做Its best to do.最好做Why not do / Why dont you do? 為什么不典型句型和美句積累 典型句型和 水環(huán)境1. Its our duty to save water.2. As we know ,water is very important to man.3. we cant live without water.4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.5. But some people dont care about it.典型句型和美句積累 水

23、環(huán)境典型句型和美典型句型和美句積累 中考滿分作文必背7類句型 1). Its adj for sb to do 做對某人來說2). so that 如此 以至于 too to do 太 而不能 such that 如此 以至于3). notuntil 直到才4). That is why + 句子 那是的原因5). That is because + 句子 那是因為6). It is said that + 句子 據(jù)說 It is reported that + 句子 據(jù)報道7）as we all know, +句子 據(jù)我們所知典型句型和美句積累 中考滿分作文必背7類句型語言學(xué)習(xí)1. My f

24、avorite subject is English。2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world.典型句型和美句積累語言學(xué)習(xí)1. My favorite subject is My HobbyI am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am always busy with my study

25、,I would like to spend time on my hobbies， such as playing the piano， surfing the Internet. 興趣愛好典型句型和美句積累 My Hobby興1. His name is Jack.2. He was born in London in 1982.3. He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52kilos.寫人記事典型句型和美句積累1. His name is Jack.寫人記事典型句型和美旅游和介紹地方1. Last Sunday（Saturday，） ，it was sun

26、ny（rainy， windy， foggy，）2. I got up very early （late）。 After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike， bus,.典型句型和美句積累旅游和介紹地方1. Last Sunday（Saturday新生事物評價1.Computer is becoming more and more important2.we should make good use of it.3.It maybe get in the way of（妨礙） our study.4.We can do lots of thi

27、ngs with it.典型句型和美句積累新生事物評價1.Computer is becoming m夢想與未來Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students ideal jobs. Heres a report about my group members ideas.Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate wants to be a ga

28、rdener, she lives plants, and she wants to make the cities better. Mike would like to be a writer. Hed like to share his wonderful stories with others. Tom would like to be a cook. Hed like to cook delicious food for others. I would like to be a policeman. I want to protect the people safe.Hopefully

29、 everyone can realize their dreams in the future.典型句型和美句積累夢想與未來Recently we did a survey中考作文結(jié)尾得出結(jié)論的五種萬能句1、Taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally come to the conclusion that把所有這些因素加以考慮，我們自然會得出結(jié)論2、Taking into account all these factors， we may reasonably come to the conclusion that 考慮

30、所有這些因素，我們可能會得出合理的結(jié)論3、Therefore， wed better come to the conclusion that 因此，我們最好得出這樣的結(jié)論4、There is no doubt that has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫無疑問，有優(yōu)點也有缺點。5、All in all， we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.總之，我們沒有

31、是無法生活的。但同時，我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現(xiàn)的新問題。典型句型和美句積累中考作文結(jié)尾得出結(jié)論的五種萬能句1、Taking all中考英語作文必備的10個諺語1.Every coin has two sides. 每個硬幣都有兩面，比喻事物的兩面性。2.The winter is coming and the spring is not far. 冬天已經(jīng)臨近了,春天還會遠(yuǎn)嗎?3. Failure is the mother of success. 失敗是成功之母。4. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。5. Actions speak louder th

32、an words. 事實勝于雄辯。6. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一塹，長一智。7. A good beginning is half done. 良好的開端是成功的一半。8. Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事，今日9 .Time and tide wait for no man. 時不我待。10.How time flies.時光如梭。典型句型和美句積累中考英語作文必備的10個諺語1.Every coin has2016熱點話題1.全民讀書活動；2. 樂于助

33、人、德育的話題；3. 學(xué)生們喜歡的明星以及電視節(jié)目等；4. “低頭族”；5. 家庭、人口問題：中國實行二孩政策，6.安全自救問題（校園安全等）；7.環(huán)保問題；8.家鄉(xiāng)的變化；2016熱點話題1.全民讀書活動；Practice makes perfect!T2016年中考取得好成績！hank you !Practice makes perfect!T2016年中Example 3 水是萬物之源，沒有水， 人類、動植物都不能存活。因此，人人都有保護和節(jié)約用水的職責(zé)。某英文報開展了以“水”為主題的征文活動，請你根據(jù)下面圖表信息寫一篇短文參加征文。短文內(nèi)容包括水的重要性、水的用途、水的現(xiàn)狀及我們應(yīng)該如

34、何保護和節(jié)約用水。提示：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚， 行文連貫； 2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名； 3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出，不計詞數(shù)。Example 3 水是萬物之源，沒有水， 人類、動植Water importance usage(用途)Situation（現(xiàn)狀）Water protectionWhat can we use it for?Less and less, pollutedHow can we save water?How can we stop water pollution?. Water is very important for humans,

35、animals and plants. Water importance Situation（現(xiàn)狀）Importance:Do you think water is important for us?If there was no water, What would happen? Usage:What can we use water for ? Before writingUsage:Before writing Situation（現(xiàn)狀）Less and less clean water.Water pollution Less and less clean water.Water pr

36、otectionHow can we save water?How can we stop water pollution?.Turn off the taps.Reuse and recycle.Call on people to save waterWe should/shouldntWe are supposed toWed betterWed better notIts good toWhy not doDoing sth. isWater protectionHow can we sav Water is very important for humans, animals and

37、plants. Humans and animals drink water every day. Plants need water to grow. No living things can live without water. But there is less and less clean water on the earth.Some people waste water in their daily lives. They even throw rubbish everywhere. It pollutes water seriously. Some factories pour

38、 waste water into rivers or lakes. More and more water is polluted. So we should do something to protect water. We must save erery drop of water. We are supposed to turn off the taps after we use them. Wed better reuse and recycle the water we used. Whats more, we can call on more people to save wat

39、er. Lets takeactions now. Water is very important fo1. 關(guān)于人們有不同的觀點。一些人認(rèn)為There are different opinions among people as to _ 。Some people suggest that_。2. 俗話說（常言道），它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場合仍然適用。There is an old saying_。 Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.3.現(xiàn)在，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，；其次，。更為糟糕的是。Today， _， which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First， _ Second，_。 What makes things worse is that_。4.現(xiàn)在，很普遍，許多人喜歡，因為，另外（而且）。Nowadays，it is common to _。 Many people like _because _。 Besides，_。5.任何事物都是有兩面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Every