北師大版高一英語必修一unit3-Writing-Tomb-sweeping-Day課件

1、By Guo QingFrom No22.Senior High SchoolWritingTomb-sweeping Day1By Guo QingWritingTomb-sweepiThe Spring FestivalThe Lanterns FestivalThe Mid-autumn FestivalThe Dragon Boat Festival2The Spring FestivalThe LanternTomb-sweeping Day 3Tomb-sweeping Day 3 Response-testing gamethe Cold Food Festival/the Ha

2、nshi Festival.JieZitui and his mother were burnt to death by fire.It originated from4 Response-testing gamethe Cburn incenseclear away weeds around the tombs5burn incenseclear away weeds 5visit the graves of ones ancestors/dead family memberspay respect to the dead6visit the graves of ones anceadd f

3、resh soil to the tombset out offerings of food and drinks 7add fresh soil set out offerinplant willow treesfly kites8plant willow treesfly kites8Improve your writingGrade your writingCriteriaHow to grade and improve your writing?9Improve your writingGrade yourList 5 criteria we used to grade a writi

4、ngRevision10List 5 criteria we used to gra timehistorycustoms&activitiesfoodlayoutcontent+5+5 11 timehistorycustomsfoodla The simple presentThe simple pasttensevoicePassive voice+5_ 12 The simple presentThe simpclauseslinking words+3_13clauseslinking words+3_Few grammatical and spelling mistakes+314

5、Few grammatical and +314Criteria 135 1.Arrange the layout of Tomb-sweeping Day well (文章布局合理)2. Contain enough information and use the expressions we learnt about Tomb-sweeping Day correctly (文章內(nèi)容豐滿, 能正確運(yùn)用前面所學(xué)的詞匯、句型)3. Use the tense and voice correctly in writing (正確使用時態(tài)和語態(tài))4. Use some linking words

6、and clauses to make the writing smooth (使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞和從句使文章簡潔流暢) 5. Few grammatical and spelling mistakes(極少的語法和拼寫錯誤)Handwriting (additional 1-3)（附加分:書寫工整）Total score15Criteria 1352. Contain enough Criteria 135 1.Arrange the layout of Tomb-sweeping Day well (文章布局合理)2. Contain enough information and use th

7、e expressions we learnt about Tomb-sweeping Day correctly (文章內(nèi)容豐滿, 能正確運(yùn)用前面所學(xué)的詞匯、句型)3. Use the tense and voice correctly in writing (正確使用時態(tài)和語態(tài))4. Use some linking words and clauses to make the writing smooth (使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞和從句使文章簡潔流暢) 5. Few grammatical and spelling mistakes(極少的語法和拼寫錯誤)Handwriting (additional 1-3)（附加分:書寫工整）Total score22316Criteria 1352. Contain enough 171718181919202021212222Gra