天津市2020屆高三英語書面表達復習(共61張)課件

1、高考英語寫作指導高三英語書面表達備考指導 高考英語寫作指導高三英語書面表達目錄* 英語學科的核心素養(yǎng)* 天津卷書面表達的特點* 學生寫作常見問題及應對措施* 優(yōu)秀作文的共性* 如何科學備考目錄* 英語學科的核心素養(yǎng)語言能力指在社會情境（真實生活）中通過聽說讀寫來理解、表意和交際的能力。文化意識指在全球化背景下表現(xiàn)出的人文修養(yǎng)和行為取向，包括對中外文化的理解和認同。思維品質反映出在思維的邏輯性、批判性和創(chuàng)造性等方面表現(xiàn)出來的水平。英語學科核心素養(yǎng)語言能力指在社會情境（真實生活）中通過聽說讀寫來理解、表意和語言學習的任務How to use the language effectively，com

2、municatively and emotionally (有效運用語言來進行交際和表達情感)語言學習的任務天津英語書面表達的特點* 寫作話題和呈現(xiàn)形式的多元化* 側重考查學生的交際意識和邏輯 思維能力天津英語書面表達的特點* 寫作話題和呈現(xiàn)形式的多元化天津市2020屆高三英語書面表達復習(共61張PPT)天津市2020屆高三英語書面表達復習(共61張PPT)天津市2020屆高三英語書面表達復習(共61張PPT)天津市2020屆高三英語書面表達復習(共61張PPT)* 要點不全（不準） 邏輯混亂* 應對措施： 仔細審題，確定內容要點 寫前功夫要到位（Planning before writin

3、g） 合理分段，有效使用連接成分（承接詞）， 注重語句間的內在邏輯關系學生寫作常見問題及應對措施* 要點不全（不準）學生寫作常見問題及應對措施*機械堆砌，言之無物 隨意套用“寫作模板”，打破了文章應有的自然 流暢，使其機械生硬；重形式輕內容，表面形式 復雜，實則空洞無物，并未有效呈現(xiàn)內容要點。* 應對措施： 寫作首先要考慮完成交際任務，達意最重要 注意簡繁有度，長短句結合 恰當運用復合句，來搭建因果，轉折等邏輯結構 學生寫作常見問題及應對措施*機械堆砌，言之無物學生寫作常見問題及應對措施*過度發(fā)揮，舍本求末 比如2018網(wǎng)絡回帖中，要求說明來華留學的好 處（如：加深對中國的了解，對個人發(fā)展的益

4、 處等 學生把兩個要點并為一句Studying in China can deepen your understanding of China and benefit your personal development. 最后字數(shù)不夠，只能在“愿意提供幫助”這一點上過度發(fā)揮，Ill show you around the city and enjoy typical Chinese food令人哭笑不得。學生寫作常見問題及應對措施*過度發(fā)揮，舍本求末學生寫作常見問題及應對措施* 應對措施： 對于半開放的寫作要點呈現(xiàn)方式，我們應focus on the points, 培養(yǎng)“化點為句或句群”的意

5、識。剛才的尷尬可以這樣化解： Studying in China，you can have a better understanding of it by communicating with the local people. Additionally, your Chinese will be improved, which will be beneficial to your personal development. Im really willing to help.學生寫作常見問題及應對措施* 應對措施：學生寫作常見問題及應對措施* 中式思維，語病太多 單詞拼寫，名詞復數(shù)，動詞形式

6、時語態(tài)，從句 習慣將中式思維創(chuàng)造的語言轉變?yōu)橛⒄Z，也就是大家常說的Chinglish。 There are many students want to study abroad. Many students want to study abroad. There are many students who want to study abroad. 學生寫作常見問題及應對措施* 中式思維，語病太多學生寫作常見問題及應對措施應對措施：* 避重就輕，回避沒有把握的詞匯，減少失誤* 簡和繁之間找到一個平衡點，力求自然達意 簡潔流暢* 養(yǎng)成打草稿并檢查的習慣* 重視語塊（chunks）和仿寫 (str

7、ucture imitation)，才能培養(yǎng)良好語感， 做到語言地道。學生寫作常見問題及應對措施應對措施：學生寫作常見問題及應對措施* 交際意識薄弱 現(xiàn)在的書面表達優(yōu)秀的評判標準已經(jīng)落在對文章內容整體把握準確與否，表達是否地道，交際是否得體上了。很顯然，我們高三學生在這方面還有欠缺。* 應對措施： 考生在寫作中必須在腦海里樹立交際意識，一定要融入情景設置所要求的交際身份中去，從如何實現(xiàn)交際目的的角度出發(fā)，考慮怎樣去寫，把握好交際距離，實現(xiàn)交際的得體性。學生寫作常見問題及應對措施* 交際意識薄弱學生寫作常見問題及應對措施What makes a good essay?A Good Essay c

8、ontent structure languageAll points included Well organized Few grammatical & to the point Proper links mistakes Neat handwriting Logical Standard language Varied patterns 優(yōu)秀習作的共性特征What makes a good essay?優(yōu)秀習作的共天津卷英語書面表達評分細則1.本題總分25分，按五個檔次給分。2.評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最后綜合給分。3.詞

9、數(shù)少于100的，從總分中減去2分。4.評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的數(shù)量和準確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。天津卷英語1.本題總分25分，按五個檔次給分。天津卷英語書面表達評分細則5拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。每錯誤書寫3個單詞從總分中減去1分，原則上不超過3分，重復的不計。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。標點符號錯誤，將視其對交際的影響程度酌情減分。6如書寫較差，以至影響辨認，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。天津卷英語5拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。每錯誤書一類文評分標準一類文評分標準* 交際的得體性-簡明扼要，力求精彩 （首末段）* 詞匯短語的高級性*

10、句型的多樣性-定從，名從，狀從. Variety is the spice of writing.* 結構的邏輯性- 外在：合理分段；有效連接 內在：語句（因果，目的， 轉折） 語段（總-分）一類文的共性特征* 交際的得體性-簡明扼要，力求精彩一類文的共性特征典型案例你的朋友Chris得知中國詩詞大會在CCTV舉辦了，他對中國文化很感興趣，寫信向你求助，以期了解中國文化。請你給他寫一封回信，內容包括：* 告知詩詞大會反響* 提出建議（如何了解中國文化：讀相關書籍；利 用媒體資源等）* 表達祝愿（祝愿他對中國文化有更好的了解） 典型案例你的朋友Chris得知中國詩詞大會在CCTV舉辦了，Samp

11、le writing (交際得體)Dear Chris, Im very delighted to have heard from you, asking about the Chinese Poetry Competition and approaches to better understanding Chinese culture. Now Im writing to tell you some details. With a great desire to learn and steady efforts,I firmly believe that you can have a rew

12、ardinglearning experience. Best wishes for your learningChinese culture! Sample writing (交際得體)Dear ChriSample writing (高級詞匯) The Chinese Poetry Competition broadcast on CCTV really enjoyed great popularity among the audience, which inspired peoples enthusiasm for learning Chinese poetry and culture.

13、 Since you are so keen on Chinese culture, Id like to give you the following suggestions. Sample writing (高級詞匯) The C配套練習 (高級詞匯)enjoy great popularity among the audiencebe popular with inspire peoples enthusiasm for Chinese poetryinspire peoples love ofbe keen on Chineselike / love / be fond of / be

14、 crazy about配套練習 (高級詞匯)enjoy great popular配套練習 (高級詞匯) Reading Chinese books on history, culture and literature definitely contributes to a better understanding of Chinese culture. Meanwhile, its also of great significance to acquire information from the Internet, through which you can get exposed to

15、 an amazing world.acquire informationget informationget exposed to an amazing worldget close to / expose yourself to配套練習 (高級詞匯) Reading Chinese配套練習 (句式 & 邏輯) Reading Chinese books on history, culture and literature definitely contributes to a better understanding of Chinese culture. Meanwhile, its a

16、lso of great significance to acquire information from the Internet, through which you can get exposed to an amazing world.MeanwhileBesides / In addition / Additionally / Whats morethrough whichwhere / on which配套練習 (句式 & 邏輯) Reading Chin* 積累跟校園生活和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文），關注身邊發(fā)生的事* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的

17、交際性。* 選擇有效表達句型在文中恰當?shù)氖褂?，以簡潔流暢邏輯性強為首要目標，在此基礎上力求高級或多樣，切忌弄巧成拙。*勤練筆，每周至少一篇；多修改，不斷磨出好文，力爭達到你希望的標準。同種體裁或話題的文章，可以重復練一篇，力求鞏固。如何科學備考* 積累跟校園生活和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文* 積累跟校園生活和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文），關注身邊發(fā)生的事 校園生活： take part in after-school / club activities do some voluntary work participate in a meaningful volunt

18、ary activity enrich their own life increase their sense of social responsibility 如何科學備考* 積累跟校園生活和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文* 積累跟校園生活和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文），關注身邊發(fā)生的事 校園生活 bring sunshine to ones life learn valuable life skills have difficulty in getting along with people face the challenges bravely broaden o

19、ur horizons and improve ourselves如何科學備考* 積累跟校園生活和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文* 積累跟校園生活和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文），關注身邊發(fā)生的事 文化交流 be enthusiastic about Chinese be keen on Chinese inspire my great passion for learning Chinese be beneficial to my personal development improve ones spoken / oral Chinese如何科學備考* 積累跟校園生活

20、和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文* 積累跟校園生活和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文），關注身邊發(fā)生的事 文化交流 communicate with Chinese students exchange ideas with.on. have a better understanding of. pay a visit to places of interest (tourist attractions) show sb around the city如何科學備考* 積累跟校園生活和文化交流相關的詞匯和語塊（詞匯手冊+范文* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。

21、 書信（回信），電子郵件開頭： Im delighted to have received your letter. Im pleased to know / to have learnt that youre coming to China on a visit. Im writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. Im writing to tell you some detailed information about it. 如何科學備考* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。如何* 熟悉各類

22、文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。 書信（回信），電子郵件開頭： Im writing to invite you to join us in the World Adolescent Robotics Competition. （邀請信） Im writing to apply for the position as an English teacher in your school.（申請信） 如何科學備考* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。如何* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。 書信（回信），電子郵件結尾：Im looking forw

23、ard to your reply. (期待) Id appreciate it if you could reply to me .（感激） I would be thankful if you could reply to me at your convenience. The training plan has been emailed to you. Would you please give some advice on it? (征求意見)如何科學備考* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。如何* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。 書信（回信），

24、電子郵件結尾： On behalf of all the teachers and students in our school, Id like to express my best wishes to you. May our friendship last forever! （May you have a nice journey back home!） (祝愿與期待)如何科學備考* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。如何* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。 演講稿 / 致辭Ladies and gentlemen, I feel greatly h

25、onored to have a chance here to make / deliver a speech on the subject Reading classics. Its my great honor / privilege to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the Great Britain. . 如何科學備考* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。如何* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。 演講稿 / 致辭Good morning, everyone! F

26、irst of all, please allow me, on behalf of all present here, to express our warm welcome to our distinguished friends from Canada. Just as the saying goes, “Individuals together can make quite a difference”. Im quite convinced that the world will be a more harmonious one (it will be a great success)

27、 through the efforts of all of us.如何科學備考* 熟悉各類文體的寫作特點及常用句式，重視寫作的交際性。如何* 選擇有效表達句型在文中恰當?shù)氖褂?，以簡潔流暢邏輯性強為首要目標，在此基礎上力求高級或多樣，切忌弄巧成拙。 如何變簡單句為含定語從句的復合句？ 如何使用其它復合句為文章增色？如何科學備考* 選擇有效表達句型在文中恰當?shù)氖褂?，以簡潔流暢邏輯性強為首如何變簡單句為含定語從句的復合句？The Chinese Poetry Competition on CCTV was really popular with the audience. It inspired

28、peoples love oflearning Chinese poetry and culture. (簡)The Chinese Poetry Competition on CCTV was reallypopular with the audience, which inspired peopleslove of learning Chinese poetry and culture. （復） 如何科學備考如何變簡單句為含定語從句的復合句？如何科學備考如何變簡單句為含定語從句的復合句？Its important to get information from the Internet.

29、Through it you can get exposed to Chinese culture. (簡)Its of great importance / significance to getinformation from the Internet, through whichyou can get exposed to Chinese culture.（復） 如何科學備考如何變簡單句為含定語從句的復合句？如何科學備考如何使用其它復合句為文章增色？What impressed me most was our communicationsabout sports, music and s

30、chool life. (名從)Im firmly convinced that this experience will make abig difference to our life.The reason why I want to learn Chinese is that it willhave a profound effect on my personal development.Its widely accepted / acknowledged that China isplaying an increasingly important part in the world.如

31、何科學備考如何使用其它復合句為文章增色？如何科學備考如何使用其它復合句為文章增色？(配套練習)_ did it help you catch a glimpse of Chineseculture _ I polished my spoken Englishthrough it.（倒裝)Looking back upon the past two weeks, we studiedand lived together, _ promoted ourfriendship.（非謂, 定從）One of the highlights was the sports meeting _we compet

32、ed with each other in the basketball match.如何科學備考Not onlybut alsowhichwhere如何使用其它復合句為文章增色？(配套練習)如何科學備考Not*勤練筆，每周至少一篇；多修改，不斷磨出好文，力爭達到你希望的標準。同種體裁或話題的文章，可以重復練一篇，力求鞏固。如何科學備考*勤練筆，每周至少一篇；多修改，不斷磨出好文，力爭達到你希 假設你是晨光中學的學生會主席李津。一批來自英國的高中生與你校學生開展了為期兩周的交流活動?，F(xiàn)在，他們即將回國，你將在歡送會上致辭。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。（1） 回顧雙方的交流活動 （如學習、生活、

33、體育、文藝等方面）；（2） 談談收獲或感情；（3） 表達祝愿與期望。 注意： 可適當加入細節(jié)，使內容充實、行文連貫；如何科學備考（典型案例1） 假設你是晨光中學的學生會主席李津。一批來自英國的高中生與（交際；內容） Dear friends, How time flies! During the last two weeks, the British students and we have spent a memorable time in the exchange program. Its my honor to share my feelings at this farewell par

34、ty. Looking back at the exchange activities, we really had a lot of fun. Not only did we exchange ideas with each other about learning strategies and school life, but also we played Chinese martial arts (Kongfu) together. 如何科學備考（典型案例1）（交際；內容）如何科學備考（典型案例1）（語言；邏輯） What made us even closer was when we

35、prepared for the talent show. In the process, we improved our spoken English and got to know about a different culture. Meanwhile, we broadened our horizons and developed a close friendship. I genuinely wish you a safe and sound journey back home and expect our friendship to be everlasting. Thank yo

36、u! （124w）如何科學備考（典型案例1）（語言；邏輯）如何科學備考（典型案例1） 假設你是李津，與你以前的外籍教師Mrs. Green一直保持聯(lián)系，近日她來信詢問你的近況，請根據(jù)以下提示給她回復一封郵件。（1）簡要介紹自己的學習和生活；（2）告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運 會的志愿者，并介紹為此所做的準備（如 深入了解天津等） （3）希望她有機會重訪天津。 注意：可適當加入細節(jié)，使內容充實、行文連貫 參考詞匯：第十三屆全運會 the 13th National Games如何科學備考（配套練習） 假設你是李津，與你以前的外籍教師Mrs. Green一直 交際性：回信（郵件） 希望

37、她有機會重訪天津。 Dear Mrs. Green, Im so glad to hear from you. Im writing to tell you something about my life and study in recent days. I wonder if you will have another chance to pay a visit to Tianjin. Looking forward to meeting soon! 如何科學備考（配套練習） 交際性：回信（郵件）如何科學備考（配套練習） 內容&語言&邏輯 Im very busy with my less

38、ons now, for the Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner. Not only have I made rapid progress in my study, but I have been getting along quite well with all my classmates. 如何科學備考（配套練習） 內容&語言&邏輯 如何科學備考（配套練習） 內容&語言&邏輯 In addition, I am very eager to share with yo

39、u the exciting news that Ive been chosen as one of the volunteers for the 13th National Games, _. In order to be a qualified volunteer, _ _. 如何科學備考（配套練習）which will be held in Tianjin in late AugustI have to improve myself by reading some books about Tianjin to know more about it 內容&語言&邏輯 如何科學備考（配套練習

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