高中英語Book-2-Unit-2-單元話題寫作話題寫作課件

1、單元話題寫作The Olympic Games單元話題寫作The Olympic GamesYou have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success. 你必須相信自己，這是成功的關鍵。 Charles Chaplin You have to believe in yourselLearning Aims:1.To Learn what is a good writing and to learn the techniques of writing. 2.To write a composition about the 2016 O

2、lympic Games.Learning Aims:Enjoying and analyzing（分析感知優(yōu)秀作文）高中英語Book-2-Unit-2-單元話題寫作話題寫作 Here are my suggestions on how to improve our ability to communicate in English. First, youd better make full use of various opportunities to practise speaking English. For example, you can join the English club

3、or English corners where you will meet a lot of people who would like to communicate with each other in English. In this way your ability of listening and speaking can also be improved.Passage 1 Here are my suggestions o Second, try to do more reading and know more about English cultures. It is wort

4、hwhile to travel to foreign countries so that you will have a better understanding of cultural differences. Last but not least, learn to use proper body language. Sometimes spoken language is not enough for you to express yourself, so gestures and posture can make you understood better and avoid mak

5、ing mistakes in communication . I hope my advice can be of great benefit to you . First , SecondLast but not least Second, try to do more Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in peoples life in recent years. In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing le

6、tters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. Whats more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes,

7、 peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents. In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.Whats moreIn a wordIn addi

8、tion/MoreoverPassage 2 Great changes have tDISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ DISCUSSION: A good compositionContent structurelanguage覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點層次分明，語法結構合理。語言地道、規(guī)范、得體A good Content structurelanguaDISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(內(nèi)容要

9、完整) （內(nèi)容要點一個也不能丟，如果人家給的是文字提示，可以用筆在試題處標出1,2,3,4，如果人家給的是圖，那要先看懂圖的意思，六個圖都要看看再動筆，不要看了一個馬上就寫。）DISCUSSION: DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的開頭結尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (結構合理,行文流暢) Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (沒有語法錯誤

10、)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (詞語的準確運用和句式的富于變化)DISCUSSION: Avoid Chinglish!1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. 2) There has a highway connected with Beijing.3) Though shes almost 40，but she still plans to compete.4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will

11、cost us much money to buy one. Languageheavy.leftistakeAvoid Chinglish!Languageheavy.高中英語Book-2-Unit-2-單元話題寫作話題寫作閱卷教師喜歡什么樣的作文?字體工整，卷面干凈；緊扣主題，條理清晰；語言地道，過渡自然；長度適中，一氣呵成。閱卷教師喜歡什么樣的作文?字體工整，卷面干凈；閱卷教師討厭什么樣的作文?涂涂抹抹，斑斑點點； 層次不清，段落不分；語句不通，雜亂無章；書寫潦草，卷面不潔；閱卷教師討厭什么樣的作文?涂涂抹抹，斑斑點點； 高考英語評分原則：1. 本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。2. 評

12、分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3.詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。4. 評分時應注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點，應用詞匯和語法結構的豐富性和準確性及上下文的連貫性。高考英語評分原則：高考英語評分原則：5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時，應視其對交際影響的程度予以考慮。英，美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。6. 如書寫較差以至影響交際，將其分數(shù)降低一個檔次。7. 語言首先要求準確通順。8. 鼓勵寫出新穎詞匯，順暢連接和復雜結構。高考英語評分原則：assessPlease learn to your compo

13、sition now.assessPlease learn to 書面表達評價表 項目 自評 他評1.書寫工整嗎？有沒有亂涂亂劃?2.句子開頭注意大小寫了嗎?3.有沒有注意標點符號?4將文章分段了嗎?分成了幾段?5有單詞拼寫錯誤嗎?幾個?6.有時態(tài)錯誤嗎?誤用了哪種時態(tài)?7.注意主謂一致了嗎?8.有沒有語態(tài)的錯誤?9.有沒有使用關聯(lián)詞?使用得當嗎?10.有沒有詞性的錯誤?哪一種?11.簡單句表達正確嗎?12.是否注意使用了復雜的句子結構?13.表達方式是否多樣化?注意長短句搭配了嗎?14.有沒有用好詞好句?用了哪些? 書面表達評價作文范文： The first modern Olympic G

14、ames were held in Athens in 1896. With its development, there are over250 sports nowadays and any country can take apartif their athletes reached the agreed standard. Themotto of the Olympic Games is “Swifter, Higher andStronger.” Its well known that the 31st Olympic Games will beheld in Rio de Jane

15、iro, Brazil in 2016. Of course, theChinese athletes are admitted as the competitors tocompete for the honor of our country. In thecompetition, women will also play an important partin the Olympic Games. We hope that Brazil will succeed in holding theevents.作文范文：Suggestions for you:1.Try your best to learn English and get yourselves interested in it.2.Do more reading .3.Form the habit of memorizing words every day.4.Practise writing regul