上海中考英語作文

1、上海中考英語作文學習資料一.評分標準上海中考英語作文總分為20分， 其中內(nèi)容分8分、語言分8分、組 織結(jié)構(gòu)分4分。以下為上海中考英語作文官方評 分標準：.內(nèi)容分8分。內(nèi)容切題，意思連 貫，表達清豌整.語言分8分。學生需用語規(guī) 范，表達準確，無或少見語法錯誤，詞匯拼寫正確，句 型使用恰當。首先是字數(shù)， 少于60字的作文要酌情扣 分。.組織結(jié)構(gòu)分4分，也就是我 們常說的文采分。根據(jù)學生 使用復(fù)雜句型/單詞和諺語/ 俗語的情況來加分。.注意點：每少5個詞扣0.5分，拼寫錯誤每處扣0.5分，標點，大小寫錯誤每2處扣0.5分3內(nèi)容和語言表達總 分達15分及以上，得23分內(nèi) 容和語言總分1314分，如確有

2、好 句型或表達用語，可酌情給1-2分 通篇句型，句式單一，詞匯貧乏者, 即使無雌錯誤，也不給分開頭句 +給的幾個參考點+結(jié)尾句+亮點。 先劃檔次：人檔1815分B檔 14.512 分C 檔 11.58 分D檔3.50分然后再仔細批閱看有語語法錯誤，最 后給出總分。.學生常出現(xiàn)的問題：1.1內(nèi)容空洞，沒有清晰的思路，表 達能力不強，總是用一些不合適的 句子內(nèi)容來表達，所以可能讓老師 覺得理由或是內(nèi)容太假，當然也就 得不了高分。.議論過多，描寫不足。大多數(shù)情 況下，我們把議論當成的作文的重 點，所以常常會跑題。應(yīng)當多描述 提示的內(nèi)容或加以想像，不能只翻 譯了事。.總是使用同一個主語寫句子，重復(fù)太多

3、。盡量使用不同的主語來表 達，比如：I must learn English well.就可以換成近is important for me to learn English well.結(jié)構(gòu)散漫，想卯兒寫哪兒，亂七，八糟。應(yīng)該使用總分或總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)。.都是簡單句，缺少復(fù)合句。多用 狀語從句，賓語從句，定語從句及 一些重要的句型，也人教版新目標 初二下英語同步輔導(dǎo)（一）初中二 年級下un-初中二年級下Un-可以用用被動語態(tài)。.連詞的使用較少,句子之間的連 接很生硬?？梢约尤胍恍罕热鐃o my surprise （讓我驚訝的是）, what s more （而且，還有）等, 讓上文與下文銜接更緊密

4、。意思也 能更流暢地表達。四.中考寫作高頻使用詞組、句法1.作文開頭的有用句As we all know, As it is known to all, Itrs known to all that Its common knowledgethat It,s commonly accepted thatThere is no denying thatHow time flies! In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water.2、中間分層部分的有用結(jié)構(gòu)： 分正反兩

5、面論述:On one hand, On the other hand 分兩點：For one thing, For another, 分 三點：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least3、結(jié)尾部分All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell,概 括的說，簡單的說Last but not least組織語言發(fā)表觀點的In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I

6、 am concerned, Believe it or not,表示遞進的 In additionFurthermoreMore importantly What, s more Moreover其他與“我”有關(guān)的寫 作材料 1、重點句型 Its+a. for sb.to do sth. So +a./ad. That such a +a.+n. that too to do Not .untilThatrs why+句子 那是。的原Itrs said that + 句子Theres no doubt that+ 句子 毫無疑問 It goes without saying that+句子

7、毫無疑 向 Theres no need to do 沒必要做 Theres no point in doing做某事毫無意義 2、提建議 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why dont+句子 I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你 的話，我會做 Its best to do 3、表示喜歡，感興趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fondof/be keen on sth. Pr

8、efer to do A rather than do B Be interestedindoing=show/take great interest in 4、努力做 Try to do/strive to do Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try ones best/do ones best to do Do what/everything sb can to do 5、打算做/計劃 做 Intend to do/plan to do Be going to do Decide to doDetermine to do=be det

9、ermine to do Make up one,s mind to do 6、表示想/希 望 Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing 7、 其他有用的短語 From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrichmyknowledge/learn by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face diffi

10、culties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, Peoples view on.“vary fromperson to person4、增添亮點使用復(fù)合句和諺語 諺語舉例 I fir

11、mly believe that“ A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of f. As a famous saying goes, A man becomes learned by asking questions.” It,s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossibleto a willing heart.”五.2002-2013上海中考英語作文題目集

12、錦 2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心愛之物2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese做一個可愛的上海人 2004 Leave School 畢業(yè)時分2005 Growing pains and gains成長的煩惱2006 I have a dream我有一個夢 2007 A Story about My Parent(s)一個關(guān)于我父/母的故事 2008 Love Around Me 愛在我身邊2009 I want to do something for my school我想為我的學校 做點什么2010 Im proud of myself

13、 我為我自己感到自豪2011 My Favourite Thing (s)我的心愛之物2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result.寫給一個考試焦慮考生的一封信，并給予建議。2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself.似“如何保 護自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60 個詞的短文）六.近5年上海中考英語真題范文分享2009命題作文Write at least 60 words

14、about the topic “I want to do something for my school”.（以 “我想為學校做件事”為題寫一篇 不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不 （注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、 校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評 分。）Use the following points as areference.（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考） l What do you want to do for your school?Why do you want to do it?How are you going to do it? 例文1:I want to make school cle

15、an. You may think it is very simple. But I dont think so. Our teacher said, School is your home, you should keep itclean. But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on t

16、he ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?2 One possible versi

17、onI want to do something for my school Im leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make myschool much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will

18、do as me. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.2010命題作文上海中考英語作文題:Im proud of myself1、What kind of person are you?2、What makes you proud of yourself(Giveanexample/examples)3、Why are you proud of yourself?要求：至少60字范文：1I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. But as we

19、 all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up. But my parents encouraged me: impossible is nothing, you could challenge yourself! so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to th

20、e finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didnt get the good mark, I knew, I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!I am proud of myselfThe wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years. By looking backwards, Im so proud of myself because Ive grown i

21、nto a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb ahigh mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “Accumulated water becomes

22、 a river.” enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top.When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud Im of being a strong-minded person.I am proud of myselfI used to be a girl with few words. Last month I failed in

23、 the exam. I felt so depressed that I couldnt help crying. However, my mother told me,“The life is a tough road full of ups and downs. Everyone has to experience the low times.” Her encouraging words lifted me up. I made up my mind to prepare for the next exam. I always listened to the teacher caref

24、ully and did my homework attentively. To my surprise, I achieved the best grade in the exam. At that time, I actually felt proud ofmyself. Im proud because I achieved success as well as courage. Now Im more active than before, and I always believe as long as you keep your heart facing the sun, the w

25、orld will always bring you new hopes.2011話題補全式作文Writing （作文）共18分Write at least 60 words about the topic “I m a member of（以“我是的一員”為題寫一篇 不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不 占格?” 提示：你可以作為任意興趣小組或 者社團的一員，或者作為家庭，班 級，社區(qū)額的一員，寫出你的經(jīng)歷，Use the following points as a referenceAre you glad to be a member of?What do you do in it?How

26、do you feel as such a member?例文：1Im a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone! Im very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. Im an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I singand dance with my classmates on weekend

27、s. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.2In this world, every family has a mother, a father, a daughter or a son. For plenty of people, families are very important .when you are very said, you can found one or twopersons to make you feel happiness,

28、this is you family.I am very gold to become my family member, because I have a pretty go0d parent and a fairly younger brother. When I come back, I always feel freedom and relaxed. My mother is a kind cook; she has lots of experience in cooking, so my brother and I are healthy.As a daughter, I shoul

29、dnt make my parents worry .As a sister ,l should look after my brother .l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family2012書信類作文Writing （作文）:（共 20 分）Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根據(jù)所給情景寫一封不少于60詞的信）Suppose you a

30、re Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice設(shè)你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因為過于在意考試結(jié) 果而感到焦慮。請給他寫一封信， 談?wù)勀愕目捶?，并給她一些建議。） 例文：1Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried. Actually, it is no use b

31、eing upset despite the importance of the result. There are some effective ways to calm down. Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful. Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activitieslike sports. Finally, talk to your parents and

32、 friends, who are always ready to comfort you. As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.2.Dear Betty, How time flies! The exam is finally near at hand. Important as it is to you,you really shouldnt care too much about the result and get you

33、rself overly upset. Remember all the hard work you have put in! As long as you go with a calm mind and a positive attitude, Im sure there will be nothing difficult for you and the exam will be smooth sailing. I suggest you talk more to parents and teachers about your anxiety and take better care of

34、your health such as getting enough sleep and doing more exercise. Above all, no matter what the result, all you need to do is to act more and think less because action is worrys worst enemy. Keep faith and calm down, and you are sure to come out with flying colors. All the best of luck.Yours, Joe201

35、3自由命題類作文Writing（作文）供20分）99 . Write at least 60 words about the topic -“How to protect myself ”.（以“如何保 護自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。） 提示：自我保護是青少年需要掌握 的重要技能。請談?wù)勀阍谏钪性?樣進行自我保護舊結(jié)合生活中的某一個情景或具體事例，如：面對災(zāi)難如何自救，如何預(yù)防受騙 或侵 害，如何避免生活中的 意外，等等）。Phrases for reference（以 下短語僅供參考）：Askfor helpcalmdownin dangerprevent f

36、rom（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體人名、 校名等個人信息，否則不予評分） 范文1As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is know to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself. As

37、well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. IN conclusion, withpositive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.2 ： How to protect myself Everyone in my family was awaked by the unusual shaking. The first word that came to my mind was e

38、arthquake. When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors. Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect myself in an earthquake. I should get outside instead of hi

39、ding inside the building. I couldnt take the lift but walk downstairs. No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help. And I shouldalways be aware of the unexpected drop overhead. Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself from being hurt, and survived the earthquake. I believe

40、that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.3 : A terrible fire in Jilin took many people, s lives recently and brought endless pains to a large number of families. So if I were caused in a fire, I would try my best to protect myself. First, I would stay calm. A cool head can preve

41、nt me from taking rash actions and help to pick out a right solution the first time. Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation then. Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes andmade my way to the secure channel instead of jumping out of the windows. With above ti

42、ps, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.七.熱點話題背誦篇目關(guān)于上海的變化 1.Great changes in ShanghaiWith the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in Shanghai. Many years ago,there used to be narrow bridges, roads and houses in Shanghai .But now, we can find big bridg

43、es, wide roads as well as high buildings everywhere. People live in Shanghai used to live in small houses in narrow streets, but now most of them are living in big and comfortable apartments. Whats more, we can see grass, lakes and parkshere and there. To our great joy , the 2010 World Expo will be

44、held in Shanghai as well. As a shanghainese, I am pound of all these changes .We are sure Shanghai will have a bright future.關(guān)于學校生活 2. Our school life Our school life is very colorful.They are many hobby groups in our school, such as singing group, dancing group, sciencegroup and so on. We can learn

45、 a lot by joining these groups. For example, we hold a Singing Festival in May. We can enjoy ourselves by singing. Itrs so interesting that everyone likes it very much. We also have a sports meeting in October. It always makes us excited. Sometimes we even have friendly matches with other schools. W

46、hat anenjoyable school life we have! 關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購物 3.Shoppign on the internetNowadays , shopping on the internet has become a new way of shopping. Indeed , it offers people a lot of advantages. So I prefer to do some shopping on the internet. For one thing, it is convenient because the online shops are ope

47、n 24 hours a day and wedon, t have to queue. For the other thing, it is often cheaper to buy goods on the Internet and it is also easy to find out what we want. Additionally, we can save a lot of time. Isn,t it great to do shopping on the Internet?關(guān)于學習 4.My way of Learning EnglishAs we all know, Eng

48、lish is one of the most important language in the world. So it s important for us to learn it .Then how can we it well ? In my opinion, the best way to learn English is to do more listening, speaking, reading and writing. What s more, we should practice these skills every day. Of course, interest is

49、 the best teacher. The more we learn, the more interesting and helpful well find English.As the saying goes,” Practice makes perfect. 關(guān)于節(jié)日 5.The Spring Festival As we all know, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. On the New Years Eve, families always get together and have a

50、big dinner. Many people like to set off firecracker. People also eat dumping- a kind of traditional Chinese food.Especially, children like the festival very much because they can nit only have delicious food, wear new clothes but also receive red packets from their parents or their elders. It is sai

51、d that the money in the red packets will bring children good luck. Chinese people have a good time during the festival.關(guān)于保護環(huán)境6.Environmentaround usThe environment is very important to us. We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on. There used to be many trees around us, the air was fresh and t

52、he river was clean. But now, people cut down too many trees and the environment around us becomes worse and worse. So as students, we should try to protect our environment. First of all, we should plant as many trees as possible. Second, we should ride bikes or walk to school instead of taking buses

53、 or cars. Third, we shouldntt use plastic bags. In a word, if everyone knows the importance of environment protection, we ll have a green world.關(guān)于電腦7.My view oncomputerWith the development of science and technology, computers are playing more and more important roles in our daily life. They can do m

54、ost of the things people can do. By using computers, we can gain huge amount of knowledge and information, especially, computers have made the communication withour friends and relatives more convenient and easier. But some students are so keen on playing games online that they even don t want to go

55、 to school. I dont think it is right.In my opinion, we shouldmake good use ot computers.關(guān)于出8. Is it helping to關(guān)于出8. Is it helping tostudy abroad In recent years, more and more students in China go abroad for their further studies. Most Chinese people think it is helpful to story abroad. But I dont t

56、hink so. For one TOEFL or GRE, and this will surely waste us plenty of money and time. In addition, if we study home, we can stay with our family and friends, and we can study in a more friendly environment In a word, I prefer to study home.關(guān)注時事H1N1 流感 范文01.根據(jù)中文大意和英文 提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏 輯、少于60詞的短文.所給英文

57、提示詞語供選用.請不要寫出你的校 名和姓名.世界上已有許多國家發(fā) 現(xiàn)了新型H1N1流感病毒（H1N1flu virus）病例.據(jù)了解，人感染該病毒后會出現(xiàn)咳嗽、發(fā)燒、疲勞等癥 狀.為了加強同學們的預(yù)防意識,（21 世紀中學生英語報 正在舉辦征文 活動，請你給該報投稿，描述感染 該病毒的癥狀并談一談為了預(yù)防該 病毒我們該怎么做，最后表達我們 能戰(zhàn)勝病毒的信心.提示詞：cough, have a fever, feel tired, prevent, wash, exercise, sleep, believe Nowadays, many countries in the world have

58、found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus. It s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired. To prevent the virus, we can do many things.Firstly, we d better not go to places where there are many people. Secondly, we need to wash our hands often with soap and water, espe

59、cially after we cough or sneeze. Its also a good habit for us to exercise regularly. It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness. And having a good sleep is important, too. People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily. And then, eat more fruit and vegetab

60、le to keep ourselves fit and strong. Last but not least, open the window and keep the air in the room fresh. If we all do these things, we will prevent the virus. So there is no need to be worried. I believe we will win through in the end. 范文 02.上海世博會對中國的影響上海世博會對中國的影響Aswe all know that 2010 WorldExp