英語(yǔ)作文基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練 詳細(xì)版課件

1、英語(yǔ)作文基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練高三英語(yǔ)寫作專題高考大綱對(duì)寫作的要求 要求考生根據(jù)題示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)。考生應(yīng)能： （1）準(zhǔn)確使用語(yǔ)法和詞匯； （2）使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分為5檔（略）1，要點(diǎn)要全。 2，一定的詞匯，句型（數(shù)量）3，準(zhǔn)確 4，上下文的連貫。5，拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)，書寫較差，影響交際先降個(gè)檔次。Writing steps:1.審題：體裁，人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，劃出要點(diǎn)。2.譯要點(diǎn)：長(zhǎng)句變短句，按英文的表達(dá)斷句,并添加所缺部分按英文句子語(yǔ)法順序翻譯，破解難句，適當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句，正確使用英文主動(dòng)句子與被動(dòng)句子。3.連要點(diǎn)：使用連詞，表順序和邏輯的短語(yǔ)連句成篇。4.檢查修改：（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，

2、大小寫，單詞拼寫，語(yǔ)句是否通順，是否遺漏要點(diǎn)。）5.抄寫：字跡工整的抄寫在試卷上。英漢互譯1咱倆誰(shuí)跟誰(shuí)阿 we two who and who？2 how are you ? how old are you?怎么是你，怎么老是你？3你有種，我要給你點(diǎn)顏色瞧瞧，兄弟們，一起上！ you have seed I will give you some color to see see,brothers！together up ！4 You Give Me Stop!你給我站住！5one car come one car go ,two car pengpeng,people die車禍現(xiàn)場(chǎng)描述6he

3、art flower angry open心花怒放7I call Li old big. toyear 25.我叫李老大，今年25。9.If you want money,I have no; if you want life,I have one!要錢沒有，要命一條 我是個(gè)中學(xué)生, 對(duì)電腦特別感興趣, 一放學(xué)回家就開電腦，有時(shí)玩游戲，有時(shí)上網(wǎng)和朋友聊天，有時(shí)給朋友發(fā)電子郵件。盡管我喜歡玩電腦，但我父母阻止我這樣做，他們認(rèn)為我在電腦上花太多時(shí)間。于是我在晚上做完作業(yè)后才玩一會(huì)兒電腦。1.我是個(gè)中學(xué)生。 2.我對(duì)電腦特別感興趣。3.我一放學(xué)回家我就開電腦。4.我有時(shí)玩游戲, 有時(shí)上網(wǎng)和朋友聊天,

4、 有時(shí)給朋友發(fā)電子郵件。5.盡管我喜歡電腦，但我父母阻止我這樣做。6.他們認(rèn)為我在電腦上花太多時(shí)間。7.于是我在晚上做完作業(yè)后才玩一會(huì)兒電腦。One possible version: Im a middle school student, and I am interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails

5、to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.練習(xí)一、（一）簡(jiǎn)單句翻譯1我們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)怎樣用電腦。 Were learning how to use the computer.2他和他的朋友經(jīng)常查字典。 He and his friend alway

6、s look up in the dictionary. 3 請(qǐng)給我一杯水, 好嗎？ Please give me a cup of water, will you? 4 老師讓我回答了這個(gè)問(wèn)題。 The teacher asked me to answer the question. 5 我們的國(guó)家變得越來(lái)越強(qiáng)大。 Our country is getting stronger and stronger. 6 你的到來(lái)使我很高興。 Your arrival makes me very happy. 7 村莊里有許多綠樹和湖泊。 There are many green trees and l

7、akes in the village. 8 我們不應(yīng)該歧視弱者。We should not look down upon the weak.(二) 并列句翻譯1. 我喜歡讀書，他喜歡玩玩具。（while） I like reading while he likes playing with toys. 2. 孩子們非常高興，或者至少看起來(lái)很高興。（or） The children are very happy or at least they look happy. 3. 中國(guó)是發(fā)展中國(guó)家，而美國(guó)是發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家。（but/ while） China is a developing country

8、, while the United States is a developed one. 4. 這里常下雨，有時(shí)有暴風(fēng)雨。(and）It often rains here, and storms sometimes. 5他不但受到我們的鼓勵(lì)而且受到老師的表?yè)P(yáng)。（not only but also） He was not only encouraged by us but also praised by the teacher. 6我們周圍的東西不是固體、液體就是氣體。(eitheror)Everything around us is either solid, liquid or gas.

9、7一個(gè)人既應(yīng)該有勇氣也應(yīng)有毅力。 （both and) A man should have both courage and perseverance. 8. 新中國(guó)的婦女在政治生活和家庭生活方面享有和男子同等權(quán)利。(as well as） In new China women enjoy equal rights with men in political life as well as in family life.9. 我喝咖啡要加奶加糖。When I drink coffee, I prefer to add sugar as well as milk.(三) 復(fù)合句翻譯1我相信你一定

10、能成功。 Im sure youll succeed.2北京再也不是20年前的樣子了。 Beijing is no longer what was 20 years ago. 3 這個(gè)城市是我出生的地方。 This is the city where I was born. / The city is the one which I was born in. 4 他和以前不一樣了。 He is not what he used to be. 5為了明天趕上早班車，我要早起。 I have to get up earlier so that I can catch up the early bu

11、s. 6. 雖然他年輕，但是經(jīng)驗(yàn)很豐富。 Although he is young, he is very experienced. / He is young but he is very experienced. 7 如果有困難，請(qǐng)來(lái)找我。 Please turn to me if you are in trouble. 8. 老師所講的都記在筆記本上了。 What the teacher said was all taken down on the notebook. 9眾所周知，中國(guó)是人口大國(guó)。 It is well-known that China is a country with

12、 a large population.10據(jù)報(bào)道，他是來(lái)自新西蘭的一位學(xué)者。 It is reported that he is a scholar from New Zealand.11他與我們到別時(shí)留下了他的姓名和地址。 He left his name and address when he said good-bye to me.12李秘書被解雇是因?yàn)樗苜V。 Secretary Li was dismissed because he took bribe.13盜賊沒等警察抓捕，就逃逸了。 The robbers had escaped before the police arriv

13、ed.14他讀過(guò)信后就把信毀掉。He destroyed the letter after he read it.15自開店以來(lái)，我們贏獲大利。We have made large profits since we opened this shop.16如果我知道它在哪，它就不會(huì)丟了，是不是？If I knew where it was, it wont be lost, would it?17一直向前走直到一所新的藍(lán)色大樓。Go straight on until you come to a new blue building.18他不照別人告訴他的去做。He wont do as hes

14、told.19按照她的要求，她被埋葬在花園里。She was buried at the garden, as she had requested.20我們一到達(dá)那里就給你打電話。Well ring you as soon as we get there.練習(xí)四、漢譯英練習(xí)（一）1。月亮晚間照耀。 The moon shines by night.2。幾乎每天都會(huì)發(fā)生車禍。 Cars accidents occur nearly every day.3。 昨日上午他在家里。 He stayed at home yesterday morning.4. 他們第一次見面是在這個(gè)郵局。They me

15、t the first time at the post office.It was at the post office that they met the first time.5. 這個(gè)會(huì)議是在兩個(gè)小時(shí)之前就開始了嗎？Did the meeting begin two hours ago?6. Linda failed in the examination again this time. 琳達(dá)這次考試不及格。7. The music club meets once a month.這個(gè)音樂俱樂部每月活動(dòng)一次。8. Mr Li and his wife both teach in the

16、 primary school.李先生和夫人都在這所小學(xué)教書。9. Mary lives with her parents.瑪麗和父母住在一起。10. My son drives very well.我兒子駕車技術(shù)很好。（二）主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)這本書有許多圖片。 This book contains many pictures.2. 我替老人提包。 I carried the bag for the old man.3. 我們廠制作木桌。 We made wooden tables in our factory.4. 上月我賣了我們的汽車。 I sold our car last month.5

17、. 他帶給我一個(gè)文件。He brought me a file.6. 他們接受了邀請(qǐng)。They accepted the invitation.7.我自己能照料這個(gè)商店。I can manage the shopping myself.8.我的父親給了我一些忠告。My father gave me some advice.（三）主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+to do+1。布朗一家計(jì)劃搬家。The Browns planned to move house.2。他們繼續(xù)支持我們。They continued to support us.3。他幫助這位老太太過(guò)馬路。He helped the old woman t

18、o cross the road.4。 你應(yīng)該拒絕做這件事。You should refuse to do it.5。 我有個(gè)約會(huì)去見一個(gè)朋友。I have an appointment to see a friend.6.Tell him not to be late again. 告訴他不要再遲到了。7. He decides to go abroad. 他決定出國(guó)。8. She stopped to have a look. 她停下來(lái)看看。9. I have made up my mind to write a book. 我下決心要寫一本書。10. Perhaps you will h

19、ave a little trouble to deal with the problem.處理這個(gè)問(wèn)題你也許會(huì)遇到一點(diǎn)麻煩。11. You should offer to go and help her. 你該主動(dòng)去幫她。12. I suggest David drive more carefully. 我建議大衛(wèi)開車小心些。13. Id prefer to go camping. 我愿意去野營(yíng)。14. Peter asked me not to dine out with them tonight. 皮特讓我今晚不要和他們出去吃飯。15. They made an attempt to c

20、limb the mountain.他們企圖登山。16. He has not the courage to try again.他沒有勇氣再試一把。17. I have no time to spare.我抽不出時(shí)間來(lái)。18. I have given him permission to use my car.我已經(jīng)答應(yīng)他用我的車子。19. She has not enough money to pay the bills. 她沒有足夠的錢付帳。20. Peter has made a promise to write a book for children.皮特承諾要給孩子們寫本書。（四）

21、注意副詞位置1. 方式，(如：badly（嚴(yán)重地，非常），slowiy（慢慢地），politely（有禮貌地），proudly（驕傲地），carelessly（粗心地），properly（適當(dāng)?shù)?，完全地），successfully（成功地），happily（高興地），angrily（生氣地，憤怒地）等。)地點(diǎn)，時(shí)間副詞在句后。They went boating in Zhongshan park yesterday.My son is study English carefully.2.頻度副詞(always,seldom,often,never,usually,rarely) 行前助后.He

22、 is always telling lies , so I will never believe him.4. 程度副詞修飾動(dòng)詞也是 行前助后；修飾形容詞和副詞一般在前，enough 除外。She quite likes maths.She likes maths very much.He is very yong, so he is not old enough to go to school.連貫與句式的運(yùn)用連貫(coherence) 指文章語(yǔ)意的通順和語(yǔ)言形式的緊密銜接并符合一定的邏輯關(guān)系。 要使文章前后銜接緊密，可采用以下方法： 提示1：恰當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞 如when，so，if，bec

23、ause，so that等。 提示2：巧妙使用意思有聯(lián)系的詞或短語(yǔ) 如First, Second, Third, Soon, Whats more, As a result等。 提示3：適當(dāng)使用過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)句 The reasons are as follows. Every coin has two sides. On the other hand, On the contrary, 連接詞、句型的選擇1、 遞進(jìn)關(guān)系 （肯定） （否定）2、 時(shí)間 一就 不久 然后 同時(shí)Besides / Whats more / Also /In addition/FurthermoreWhats worse

24、/ Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worseThe moment / On doing / as soon as / immediately / directlyIt was not long before / After a while / SoonAfter that / Then / So / NextAt the same time / Meanwhile3、 轉(zhuǎn)折4、 順序5、 條件 6、強(qiáng)調(diào)however , / but / on the contrary / On the other hand / yet First / Se

25、cond / Third / Last / Next/ThenIf / As long as / So long as /on condition thatIt was that / who / So she did . /I do hope / She did help me. /It really worked.7、 其它不得不做某事 have to do sth./have no choice but to do sth. /have nothing to do but do sth.有必要做某事 There is no need (for sb.) to do sth. /It is

26、necessary (for sb.)to do 最好做某事 Youd better do sth. Its better to do sth.做某事沒困難 have no difficulty in doing sth. / have no trouble in doing sth.感謝某人 thank sb. / be thankful to sb./ express ones thanks to sb. / be grateful to sb. / Thanks to 求助某人 turn to sb. for help / ask sb. for help / with the help

27、 of / with ones help驚奇 To ones surprise / In surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外結(jié)果）原因如下（很多）The reasons are as follows. There are many reasons for it.浪費(fèi)金錢（時(shí)間）Its a waste of money / time 結(jié)果 As a result / Therefore / Thus / So總結(jié) In a word / In short / Above all / After all表達(dá)觀點(diǎn) In my opinion / I thi

28、nk / I believe / Im sure / I guessTask 1 請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝芯渥又校ㄩg）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語(yǔ)。Xiao Ming was walking in the street he heard someone cry for help.He advised that I hire a car I could travel around in the west .It was not long the police came . he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the gir

29、l. Do you agree with my arrangement ? ,do write to me soon.We can go downtown and do some shopping. , we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends . , I saved $80.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. , it may make us fat.Whats more/Besides/ Also/Further

30、more/In addition whenso that/ in order thatbeforeAs soon as /Immediately/Directly/The momentIf notAs a result/ ThereforeWhats worse/Even worse/To make matters worse句式的運(yùn)用：利用不同的句型來(lái)表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，能增加文章的文采。基本句型：1、 感嘆句 e.g. 1) How happy I was when I received your letter. 2） What a kind boy he is! 3）How disappoi

31、nted he was !2、 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. 3、 倒裝句 e.g. 1) Only in this way can you solve this problem. 2) There comes the police car. 3) Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.句式的運(yùn)用：利用不同的句型來(lái)表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，能增加文章的文采?；揪湫停?、 省略句 e.g. They read while walk

32、ing or riding on a bus.5、 with短語(yǔ) e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、 定語(yǔ)從句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information.7、 各種名詞性從句 e.g. Thats what I should do.8、 各種狀語(yǔ)從句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we kne

33、w it.Practice 一句多譯 這本書花了我300元。 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book.The book cost me 300 yuan. Practice 一句多譯昨天下午他才來(lái)。He came here yesterday afternoon. He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. It was yes

34、terday afternoon that he arrived here. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. Task 2 按要求改寫下列句子,使其更具文采。1.Tom saved the drowning girl.(強(qiáng)調(diào))2.I hope I can pay a visit to you next year.（強(qiáng)調(diào)）3.Tom was puzzled.（感嘆）4.It is great fun to climb th

35、e hill.（感嘆）5.Tom and Mary like singing songs.（肯定倒裝）6.John likes to study and play.（否定倒裝）7.Soon the firefighters came.（表時(shí)間句型）It was Tom that/who saved the drowning girl.I do hope I can pay a visit to you next year.How puzzled Tom was!What great fun it is to climb the hill!Tom likes singing songs, so

36、does Mary.Not only does John like to study, but (also) he likes to play.It was not long before the firefighters came.Task 3 Writing Practice 請(qǐng)你給中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)寫一篇稿件，談?wù)勣r(nóng)村兒童失學(xué)的主要原因及你的看法。原因：1、 家庭貧窮，供不起兒童上學(xué)，他們不得不在家賺錢養(yǎng)家。2、部分家長(zhǎng)認(rèn)為女孩上學(xué)無(wú)用，不愿讓她們上學(xué)。 3、 部分兒童對(duì)功課不感興趣，不愿上學(xué)?？捶ǎ?、 每個(gè)兒童包括女孩都應(yīng)有受教育的機(jī)會(huì)。2、全社會(huì)都應(yīng)重視兒童教育，他們對(duì)國(guó)家的未來(lái)將起到重要的作用。要求：1、不要逐字逐句翻譯。 2、語(yǔ)句要連貫通順。 3、字?jǐn)?shù)100個(gè)左右。 Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. Most families are poor and cant afford their education. They have to stay at home and make