人教課標(biāo)版必修3英語Unit2-寫作課-(共15張)課件

1、M3U2 Writing PracticeBilian High School Zhu zhanghaoM3U2 Writing PracticeBilian HiIts common for us to eat out nowadays, then what aspects(方面)will you consider when choosing a restaurant?A balanced diet ,good service delicious/ tasty foodreasonable pricespleasant environment Its common for us to eat

2、 out Come and eat here! Come and eat here! Come and eat in Wang Pengs restaurant!Come and eat in Yong Huis restaurant!Your choice?Come and eat in Wang Pengs reMenuRice,Raw vegetables, Fruit,waterMenu Barbecued mutton kebabs Roast pork,Stir-fried vegetables,Fried-rice,Cola,Ice cream+=New menuRaw vege

3、tables with the hamburgersBoiled potatoesIce cream with fresh fruitMenuMenu Barbecued mutton kebaAs a result, their balanced diets became a great successThey provide a balanced menu with food full of energy and fibre which is of great benefit to your health.Penghuis RestaurantLi chang: “Nothing is b

4、etter than their menu.”O(jiān)ffering balanced diets, the restaurant enjoyed great success.As a result, their balanced di Li Chang, a regular customer in their restaurant, witnessed the change and development of it. One of his friends Jack asked him about famous restaurant in his area. Li wrote a letter t

5、o recommend( 推薦) Penghuis Restaurant.Writing: A letter of RecommendationDear Jack,_ Yours Li ChangPara1. knowing that you Id like to recommendPara2. reasons Para3. ending Li Chang, a regular cuThe restaurant I recommend is Penghuis restaurant because they provide a balanced menu with food full of en

6、ergy and fibre.Penghuis restaurant , in my opinion, is a good choice because they combine their ideas and offer balanced diets.As for well known restaurant, I recommend their restaurantPara1Id like to recommend Penghuis restaurant, which is very popular in our community.The restaurant I recommend is

7、 他們提供平衡膳食，這對我們健康有益。They provide balanced diets and they do good to our health.They provide balanced diets which bring us lots of benefits.They provide balanced diets which are beneficial to our health.They provide balanced diets which are of great benefit to our health.他們提供平衡膳食，這對我們健康有益。They provide

8、沒有什么比提供平衡膳食更重要的1. It is the most popular restaurant in our area/ community._than theirs in our area._(因他們的平衡膳食而著名), it is the most popular restaurant in our area/ community.No other restaurant is more popular Well known for their balanced dietsNothing is more important than having a balanced diet.Pa

9、ra2 State your reasons沒有什么比提供平衡膳食更重要的1. It is the mo2. With extra discount and affordable price, surely you will understand why they are so popular.With _, surely you can_.3. a balanced diet, good service, nice environment (not only, but also) Whats more, they will offer discount from time to time.W

10、ith so many tasty dishes, surely you can choose whatever you likeWith good service and pleasant environment surely the restaurant can/will impress you a lot.2. With extra discount and aff表遞進(jìn)：.Whats more, .MoreoverFurthermoreBesidesIn additionMost importantlyTip: Whats more, besides, furthermoreThey

11、will help you present your ideas more clearly.表遞進(jìn)：.Whats more, .MoreoverFDear Jack, Im glad to know you and your family are coming to my place for a visit. As for famous restaurant here, I believe Penghuis is an ideal choice. _ Looking forward to your arrival soon! Best wishes, Li ChangYou try: writ

12、e the second partReasonsDear Jack,You try: write the sDear Jack, Im glad to know you and your family are coming to my place for a visit. As for famous restaurant here, I believe Penghuis is an ideal choice. With all kinds of delicious dishes, it is a typical restaurant where you can have a balanced

13、diet. You can not only receive excellent service but also enjoy the story of owners and how they changed their menus. Whats more, its clean environment will impress you a lot and the warm and friendly atmosphere will make you feel at home. Looking forward to your arrival soon! Best wishes, Li Changs

14、ampleDear Jack,sampleHomework:Polish your writing.Homework:1.學(xué)習(xí)語文是一種享受，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)語文學(xué)習(xí)是在與另一個人對話，也是在與自己對話。每當(dāng)你讀一篇文章時，仿佛作者就在你身邊，他的經(jīng)歷、他的情感都進(jìn)入了你心中。2.不論讀名家名篇，還是自己創(chuàng)作，你會更清楚地認(rèn)識到自己，每次學(xué)習(xí)語文，其實(shí)都是對自己的一次審視，你不僅僅懂的更多，而且文學(xué)素養(yǎng)也隨之提高。這便是語文，需要你與之心靈相通。3.動物也有著自己的語言。它們不光有聲音語言，還有許多無聲的語言，例如美妙的舞姿、絢麗的色彩和芬芳的氣味，研究這些千奇百怪的語言對人類有特殊的意義。4.議論文

15、寫作中大部分同學(xué)會陷入泛泛而談，沒有議論的內(nèi)容，就算有論據(jù)可用，也只是蜻蜓點(diǎn)水，草草收兵。不少作文且不說能運(yùn)用幾種修辭組織語言，更不說能使句子富有意蘊(yùn)，單是連最基本的語言通順也很難做到。5.記敘文的寫作反映的問題則更大，且不說選材的平淡，就語言的敘述而言，無法體現(xiàn)出一個學(xué)生高中三年這一思想蛻變的進(jìn)步，反而還停留在初中的水平，令人汗顏。6.大部分的記敘文平鋪直敘，語言啰嗦乏味，缺少靈動性的語句，不會運(yùn)用各種表達(dá)方式，邏輯錯亂，這樣的文章基本都被判為四類下。7.由果溯因法。事物都是互相聯(lián)系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果關(guān)系的聯(lián)系形式存在的。寫材料作文，審題時如果能由材料中列舉的現(xiàn)象或結(jié)果推究出造成所列現(xiàn)象或結(jié)果的本質(zhì)原因，往往能找到最佳的立