2010-2015全國(guó)二卷英語(yǔ)作文范文

2010書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分30分）假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Peter層表示希望來(lái)中國(guó)教書(shū)。你?，F(xiàn)在需招聘外教，請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封信，告知招聘信息。內(nèi)容主要包括：教授課程：英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)、英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作、今日美國(guó)、今日英語(yǔ)等授課對(duì)象：高中生（至少三年英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)）工作量：—每周12學(xué)時(shí)，任選三門(mén)課—擔(dān)任學(xué)生英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部或英語(yǔ)校報(bào)顧問(wèn)（advisor）1.字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，請(qǐng)將完整的回信書(shū)寫(xiě)在答題卡上。DearPeter：IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.Best,LiHua2010范文DearPeter.IrememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedinteachinginChina.Ourschoolnowislookingforanative-speakertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Ifyoucome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:Speaking,Writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,andteach12hoursaweek.ThestudentswhoaregoingtotakethesecourseshaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.Besidesteaching,youwillalsoworkasanadvisortoourstudents'Englishcluborourschool'sEnglishnewspaper.Pleaseletmeknowifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherquestions.I'dbemorethanhappytohelp.Bestwishes,LiHua2011書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分30分）假定你是李華，你所喜愛(ài)的G/obQ/M/〃o凋報(bào)創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫(xiě)封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：說(shuō)明你是該報(bào)的忠實(shí)讀者贊賞該報(bào)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：1）兼顧國(guó)內(nèi)外新聞2）介紹名人成功故事提出建議：刊登指導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的文章詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearEditor-in-Chief,Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofG/oba/Mirror!Sincerelyyours,LiHua2011范文【解析】本文為書(shū)信形式的應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾都已經(jīng)給出。題目中對(duì)文章結(jié)構(gòu)和部分內(nèi)容做出了提示，降低了寫(xiě)作難度，考生可在此基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)。根據(jù)題目，文章的內(nèi)容分為3部分，一是“介紹自己為該報(bào)的忠實(shí)讀者”，二是該報(bào)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，三是給報(bào)刊提出建議。其中第二、三點(diǎn)為重點(diǎn)。考生添加的報(bào)刊優(yōu)點(diǎn)和建議應(yīng)當(dāng)合情合理，同時(shí)原因、建議不只一個(gè)，因此一定要注意寫(xiě)作的邏輯性，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)，如besides，what'smore，finally等。為了提高文章的表達(dá)檔次，可以注意使用較復(fù)雜的句式（如定語(yǔ)從句、原因狀語(yǔ)從句、目的狀語(yǔ)從句）?！痉段?】DearEditor-in-Chief,Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofG/oba/Mirror!Iamaregularreaderofyournewspaper.Ilikeitverymuchmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.First,itcoversbothnationalandinternationalnewssothat,bysimplyturningthepages,Icanlearnallimportantthingsthathavehappenedduringtheweek.Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople,whichhelpmeunderstandhowapersoncanworkhardtomaketheworldabetterplace.Asastudent,IsuggestthatG/oba/MirrorcarryarticlestoguideusinourEnglishlearning,andIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【范文2】DearEditor-in-Chief,Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofGlobalMirror!I'maregularreaderofyourWeeklyanditisduetoitstwoadvantagesthatIshowstrongloveforthenewspaper.②Ononehand,itisanewspaperwherereaderscangetthelatestcivilandforeignnewsintime.③Ontheotherhand②，therearemanystoriesabouthowfamouspeoplesucceeded,fromwhichwecanbenefitalot④However,Istillhaveasuggestiontomake.IfonlytheWeeklycontainedsomearticlesguidingusthroughlearningEnglish⑤，itwillbemorethananewspaperforamiddleschoolstudent.⑥Sincerelyyours,LiHua【范文評(píng)析】本篇習(xí)作語(yǔ)言地道，覆蓋了所有要點(diǎn)，雖只有94個(gè)詞，但在此中，眾多的高級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)卻被作者運(yùn)用得恰到好處，如定語(yǔ)從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)、賓語(yǔ)從句、虛擬語(yǔ)氣等。難能可貴的是，作者對(duì)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)拿捏得很準(zhǔn)，最后在提建議時(shí)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使得建議的意義更大?！驹~句積累】使用強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)，使得句型富有變化。用ononehand,ontheotherhand來(lái)代替庸俗的first(ly),second(ly),非常好！另外，還能增加字?jǐn)?shù)。在該句中使用where定語(yǔ)從句,顯示該考生的語(yǔ)法很強(qiáng)。介詞后的賓語(yǔ)從句，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的應(yīng)用，令閱卷老師折服了。作者的巨型布局藝術(shù),其語(yǔ)法的嫻熟,并能得心應(yīng)手地收發(fā)自如,讓閱卷老師贊賞。此處使用ifonly,謂語(yǔ)要用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，妙！妙！另外，guidesb.throughdoingsth.體現(xiàn)該考生較強(qiáng)的詞匯運(yùn)用能力。morethan是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)。該句使短文的意義得到升華?！痉段?】DearEditor-in-Chief，Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofGlobalMirror!IhavebeenafaithfulreadersinceGlobalMirrorstarted.①I(mǎi)tistheuniqueadvantagesofthenewspaperthatalwaysattractmyaffection.②Foronething③，thenewspapercoversnewsbothathomeandabroad,whichopensawindowforustolearnwhatishappeningintheworld.④Foranother③，storiesaboutsomefamouspeopleareintroducedtoreaders,whichtellofhowtheysucceededinwhattheydid.Thenewspaperisindeedmybestfriend,butIthinkyou'dbetterhavesomearticlesthatcanguideustolearnEnglish.⑤Ifso,itwillhavealargeraudieneeofreaders.Sincerelyyours，LiHua【范文評(píng)析】本篇習(xí)作一氣呵成，滴水不漏。運(yùn)用了一些高級(jí)句式結(jié)構(gòu)如強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等。時(shí)態(tài)把握準(zhǔn)確到位，如since引導(dǎo)的現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，tolearn后的現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)等，使文章增色不少?？偟膩?lái)說(shuō)是一篇好文章?！驹~句積累】一開(kāi)始就用since，時(shí)態(tài)正確，先聲奪人。使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，征服閱卷老師。用foronething和foranother代替平庸first和second,顯示作者的詞匯能力。非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用，tolearn后的現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)，無(wú)不讓人嘆服。巧妙地使用but，委婉，又達(dá)到提建議的目的?！驹掝}】興趣與愛(ài)好【體裁】應(yīng)用文：書(shū)信【題型】提綱式2012書(shū)面表達(dá)（30分）假定你是李華。你班同學(xué)決定為小明舉辦生日聚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)信邀請(qǐng)外教Susan參加，要點(diǎn)包括：時(shí)間：周五晚8點(diǎn)至9點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)：學(xué)生俱樂(lè)部?jī)?nèi)容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等要求：備小禮物注意：1詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫3答案必須寫(xiě)在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。Hi,Susan,We'rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming'sbirthday.2012范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