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第第8頁共7頁讀后續(xù)寫、考綱解讀提供一段350詞以內(nèi)的語言材料,要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、 所給段落開頭語和所標示關(guān)鍵詞進行續(xù)寫(150詞左右),將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。二、原題分析①原文材料350詞以內(nèi),所續(xù)寫文章 150詞左右。②原文多是情節(jié)豐富的記敘文,偶有少量的議論文。③原文給出10處左右的標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語,所續(xù)寫短文應(yīng)使用 5W±o④續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段開頭語已經(jīng)給出。??⑤續(xù)寫部分分為兩大類別:1)半開放性質(zhì)。必須依據(jù)文章的 語境邏輯推理續(xù)寫。2)完全開放性質(zhì)??梢砸罁?jù)文章的思路,自己發(fā)揮。三、注意事項①詞數(shù)要求。②與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度。③內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所標出關(guān)鍵詞語的應(yīng)用。④應(yīng)用語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準確性。⑤上下文的連貫性。四、評分原則①本題總分為25分,按5個檔次給分。②評分時,先根據(jù)所續(xù)寫短文的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。③詞數(shù)少于130的,從總分中減去2分。④評分時,應(yīng)主要從以下四個方面考慮:(1)與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度;(2)內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所標出關(guān)鍵詞語的應(yīng)用情況;(3)應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準確性;(4)上下文的連貫性。⑤拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個重要方面,評分時,應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。⑥如書寫較差以致影響交際,可將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。續(xù)寫導練(一)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。WhenIwaselevenyearsold,Ihadabigaccident.IgetscaredevennowwhenIthinkaboutthattime.Iwentskatingnearmyhouse.Thereweremanypeople,andIsawsomeofthemfallingontheice.Itwasmyfirsttimetogoiceskating,soIwasnervous.Iwaswonderinghowtoskate.Iwentwithafriendwhowasveryskillful.Hespentsometimeteachingmehowtoskate,butIdidn 'tlmuch.Heleftmeandskatedallaround.Assoonasheleft,Ifelldown.Ienviedtheotherpeoplebecausethey
couldskatewell.IwasboredbecauseIkeptfallingsoItookoffmyskatesandjustwalkedaroundontheiceinmyshoes.Itwascoldandmyhandswerefrozen.Suddenly,Isteppedonsomethingthatwasnothard.Whatwasit?Itwasaweakplaceintheice.WhenIsteppedthere,Isankundertheice.IthoughtthatIwasgoingtodie,butIdidmybesttograbsomethingtogetoutfromundertheice.Itriedtograbtheedgeoftheice,butitwasverydifficultforaneleven-year-old.Itseemedlikeaverylongtime,likeayear.Then,fortunately,someonehelpedme.Hegrabbedmyarmsandpulledmeup.So,IlivedandI 'mstillalivetoday.Ithankedhim.Atthattime,myfriendcameback.Iwasannoyedathimbecausehewassupposedtotakecareofme,buthedidn't.alslembarrassed.WhenItookataxihome,thetaxidriverwassurprisedandaskedwhathadhappened.Ididn'twanttosayanythingbecauseIwastiredscared.Evennow,wheneverthinkaboutthattime,Ifeeluncomfortable.Idon 'twangaongevenannwa一、/注息:.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150左右;.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:ItwaslongbeforeIwentskatingonceagain,_ _Paragraph2:However,eversincethenIhaven'tfoundanytimetoHowever,eversincethenIhaven'tfoundanytimeto__skating續(xù)寫導練(二)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。MrBrownlivedinahouselessthantwomilesawayfromhisoffice.Hewasthereforeabletodrivehomeeverydayforlunch.Everytimehedroveinthemiddleoftheday,hefoundcarswereparkedintheroadoutsidehishouse,andtherewasnoroomforhisowncar.Hehadtodrivetwoblocksfartherbeforehecouldfindaplacetopark.Thenhehadtowalkhome.Thismadehimveryangry.HehadputupaboardwhichreadNoParking!”inthegardenfacingtheroad,butnobodyseemedtopayattentiontoit.Peopleonlyobeyedapolicenotice,butnotaprivateone.Therewerenoparkedcarswheretherewasablueboardwithwhitelettersonit:PoliceNotice—NoParking!MrsBrownsuggestedthatheshouldstealapolicenotice.Buthedarednot,beingafraidofgoingtoprison.Shethensuggestedthathemakeonejustlikeapolicenotice.Hesaidhewasnotapolicemanandcouldn'tusethewordpolice”.Hedecidedthathemustfindawayoutandstartedthinkinghard.Forseveraldays,thesmellofpaintfilledthehouse.Onenightheshowedhislifeanewnoticeboard.Itwaspaintedinwhitelettersonablueboard:PoliteNotice—NoParking!“Oh,MrsBrownsaid,butyoutoldmeyouweren'tgoingtousethewordpolice'.That'sexactlylikeapolicenotice.”isit?”heasked.Lookagain.”Shebegantolaugh,Youarereallyratherclever.”一、/注息:.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:WhydidMrsBrownsayherhusbandwasreallyratherclever?================^_Paragraph2:IfthepolicediscoveredthattheBrownswereusingapolicenotice,續(xù)寫導練(三)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Mymotherusedtoaskmewhatthemostimportantpartofthebodyis.ThroughtheyearsIwouldtakeaguessatwhatIthoughtwasthecorrectanswer.WhenIwasyounger,Ithoughtsoundwasveryimportanttousashumans,soIsaid,Myears,Mommy.”Shesaid,"No.Manypeoplearedeaf.Bhueyaredoingwellintheirlife.YoukeepthinkingaboutitandIwillaskyouagainsoon.”Severalyearspassedbeforesheaskedmeagain.Sincemakingmyfirstattempt,Ihadcontemplated(深思)thecorrectanswer.SothistimeItoldher,“Mommy,sightisveryimportanttoeverybody,soitmustbeoureyes.Shelookedatmeandtoldme, leYiruinigefast,buttheanswerisnotcorrectbecausetherearemanypeoplewhoareblind.”O(jiān)vertheyearsmymotheraskedmeacouplemoretimesandalwaysheranswerwas:"Nobutyouaregettingsmartereveryyear,mychild. ”Thenlastyear,mygrandpadied.Everybodywashurt.Everybodywascrying.MyMomlookedatmewhenitwasourturntosayourfinalgoodbyetograndpa.Sheaskedme,“Doyouknowthemostimpbrtaytpartyet,mydear?"Iwassurprisedwhensheaskedmethisonthisoccasion.Ialwaysthoughtthiswasagamebetweenherandme.Shesawtheconfusiononmyfaceandtoldme,“Thisquestionisveryimportant.Howyouansweritshowswhetheryouhavelearnedaboutlife.Foreverybodypartyougavemeinthepast,IhavetoldyouwerewrongandIhavegivenyouareasonwhy.Buttodayisthedayyouwillknowtheanswer.”Ilookpuzzled.Allyourpreviousanswers-ears,eyes,hands,heart...Theyareallveryimportanttoyourself.ButthistimeIneedyoutothinkofsomethingthatisimportanttoothers.”一、/注息:.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150左右;.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:“Mydear,themostimportantbodypart,“shesaid,_____________________________________________Paragraph2:Mom,Iunderstand.Andyoucancryonmyshouldertoo.”續(xù)寫導練(四)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。An80-year-oldmanwassittingonthesofainhishousealongwithhis45-year-oldhighlyeducatedson.Suddenlyacrow(烏鴉)perched(棲息)ontheirwindow.Thefatheraskedhisson,Whatisthis?”Thesonreplied,Itisacrow.”Afterafewminutes,thefatheraskedhissonforthesecondtime , “Whatisthis?Thesonsaid, “Father,Ihavejustnowtoldyou,it'sacrowAfteralittlewhile,theoldfatheragainaskedhissonforthethirdtime, “Whatisthis?"Atthistimesomeexpressionofirritation(惱怒)wasfeltintheson'stonewhenhesaidtohisfatherwitharebuff(生硬回絕)."It'sacrow,acrowlittlewhilelater,thefatheragainaskedhissonthefourthtime,Whatisthis?”Thistime,thesonshoutedathisfather,Whydoyoukeepaskingmethesamequestionagainandagain,althoughIhavetoldyousomanytimes'ITISACROW.Areyounotabletounderstandthis?"Alittlelaterthefatherwenttohisroomandcamebackwithanoldtattered(發(fā)皺的)diary,whichhehadmaintainedsincehissonwasborn.Onopeningapage,heaskedhissontoreadthatpage.Whenthesonreadit,thefollowingwordswerewritteninthediary:“Todaymylittlesonagedthreewassittingwithmeonthesofa,whenacrowwassittingonthewindow.Mysonaskedme23timeswhatitwas,andIrepliedtohimall23timesthatitwasacrow.Ihuggedhimlovinglyeachtimeheaskedmethesamequestion.IdidnotatallfeelirritatedbutIratherfeltaffectionformyinnocentson.一、/注息:.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150左右;.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Afterreadingthediary, Paragraph2:Feelingashamed,thesongotdownonhiskneesbeforehisfather.續(xù)寫導練(五)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Iwastouchedthroughexperiences,memories,books,stories,animals,angels,andmostofallotherpeople.Peoplehavemovedmeandmolded(對 影響重大)mewithmomentsofloveandexamplesofkindness.OnetimeonthedaybeforeChristmasmanyyearsagowhenIwasaminimumwagemill(工廠)worker,Ifoundmyselfwithverylittlemoneyandverylittletimetobuymysmallchildrenafewsimpletoys.IknewthattheywouldhavetobecheaponesandIhopedmychildrenwouldlikethem.Ihated_ooi_havingenoughtogivethemmore.Ihatedbeingpoor.AndIhatedfeelingbadatChristmasratherthanhappy.Ipulledintoastoreparkinglotandcountedmymoneyagain.Itwasn'tmuchbutmaybeIcouldgetsomethingsmallwithit.AsIwasgettingoutofthecarInoticedtheSalvationArmy(救世軍)bellringerattheentrance.IfeltbadagainbecauseIdidn'tfeelIcouldspareanythingtogivehim.Istartedwalkingtowardstheentrancewhentw
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