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MBA作文講座最終版.幅：150/T00字達(dá)不到字?jǐn)?shù)要求的，要酌情扣1-5.布局：3?5段式只寫一段為0?4分，只寫兩段0?9分.評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（5個模塊評分，平均半分鐘一份卷）※結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容、語言：3段，長短句結(jié)合，一定難度的詞匯與短語，少詞匯語法錯誤※卷面書寫工整：心情一好分?jǐn)?shù)就不可能低※篇幅一定要不長不短2分一條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或者大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。（即表達(dá)得一塌糊涂）5分一基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清晰，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯誤。（即表達(dá)得糊里糊涂）8分一基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清晰，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。（即表達(dá)得勉勉強強）11分一切題。表達(dá)思想清晰，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。（即表達(dá)得清清晰楚）14分一切題。表達(dá)思想清晰，文字通順，連貫性較view,■However,othersthink?Theyarguethat?3.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideof...OnMarriageofCollegeStudentsThereisaheateddebateoverwhethercollegestudentsshouldgetmarriedornot.Itiscommonlyacceptedthattheyareentitledtogetmarried.Incoatraskasmallminorityofpeopleareagainstit.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuguestthatcollegestudentsarebothphysicallyandmentallymatureenoughtogetmarriedandthattheyknowwhattheyaredoing.Intheirview〉ifcollegestudentsgetmarried,theywillbemoredisciplined,moremotivatedandmoreresponsible.However,othersthinktoday'scollegestudentsaremostlyfromonechild9sfamily.Asamatteroffact,theyareusuallyspoiltandnotpsychologicallypreparedforundertakingtheresponsibilityofafamily.Theyarguethatmarriagewilldistractthemfromstudyandplungethemintofinancialdilemma.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideoftheformer.IfIamluckyenoughtomeetmyMr.Right,Imaymarryhim.Thenwemayloveeachother,supporteachotherandencourageeachother.Oh,whatarosypictureitis!非對立觀點題：只闡述好處或者者壞處BenefitsofSportsandGamesWiththequickerpaceofourlifeandgreaterstressfromourwork,anincreasingnumberofmodernpeopleattachmuchimportancetosportsandgames>/Anincreasingnumberofmodernpeople,withthequickerpaceofourlifeand"eaterstressfromourwork9attachmuchimportancetosportsandgames.Whyaretheybecomingsopopular?First,sportsandgamesdoalotofgoodtoourhealth.Theycanmakeusstrongpreventusfromeettingtooandkeepushealthy.Theycanbeofgreatvaluetopeoplewhoworkwiththeirbrainsmostoftheday,forsportsandgamesgivepeoplevaluablepracticeinbuildingupastrongconstitution.What'smore,theymakeourlifericherandmorecolorful."AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”，justasthesayinggoes.Sopeopleofallagesenjoywatchingandtakingpartinvariouskindsofsports.Sportsandgamesarealsoveryusefulincharactertraining.Theydemandnotonlyphysicalskillandstrengthbutalsocoura*enthusiasm,disciplineandteamwork.Forboysandgirls,whatislearnedintheplaygroundoftenhasadeepeffect/impacton/influenceontheircharacter.Ifeachofthemlearnstoworkforhisteamandnotforhimselfonthefootballfield,hewilllaterfinditnaturaltoworkforthegoodofhiscountryinsteadofonlyforhisownbenefit.Withallthesebenefits,itisnowonderthatsportsandgamesseemtohavebecomeanessentialpartofourdailylife.2004年10月MBA考題ShouldCollegeStudentsLiveoutsidetheCampus?Thereisaheateddebateoverwhethercollegestudentsareentitledtorentaflatandliveoutsidethecampus.Itiscommonlyacceptedthattheyhaveeveryreasontomaketheirownchoiceaboutit.Incontrast,othersmaintainthattheyshouldliveinthedormitoryprovidedbytheircolleges.Thosewhoholdthe行rstopinionsuggestthatcollegestudentsareoldenoughtomaketheirwisechoiceandtakecareofthemselves.Intheireiew,collegestudents9livingoutsidethecampusbythemselveshasalotofadvantagessuchasfreedom,morespace,betterprivacy,greaterflexibilityinthetimetable,convenienceandexcellentlivingfacilities.However,othersthinkitdoesharmforcollegestudentstoliveoutsidethecampus.Ontheonehan]theyarguethatthesocietyiscomplicatedandthatthereexistsdangereverywhere.Ifsomethingterriblehappens,whowillberesponsible?Ontheotherhand,collegestudentswillbehardtodisciplineandmanage.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideoftheformer.WereIacollegestudent,Iwouldchoosetolivebymyself,forIvalueindependence,freedomandprivacymorethananythingelse.2009真題大作文Itiswell-knownthattextmessagehasbothadvantagesanddisadvantageseventhoughitplaysanincreasingcriticalroleinourdailylife.Somepeoplebelievethatitisablessingfortextmessageenrichesourlifeinalargedegree.Butotherstakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlyadvocatethatitisahellbecausesometimesitbringslotsoftroublesandevendestroysourlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththeformerideaevenifithassomedisadvantages.Thereareadozenofreasonstosupportmybelief.Inthefirstplace,wecansendshortmessagestowishgoodlucktoourrelativesandfriends,whichbringusagreatdealofconvenience.What'smore,shortmessagecanhelpitsuserstoconnecttheoutsideworldeasily.Forinstance,somepeoplesubscribeweatherforecastornews,withwhichpeople'slifewillbegreatlycolorfuLLastbutnottheleast,textmessagecansavealargeamountofmoneyandtime,comparingwithphonecalls.Onthecontrary,theshortmessagewithtoomuchadsdisturbsourpeacefullife.However,thedisadvantagesoftextmessagecanbeignored.Insummary,thetextmessageownsprosandcons,butwecanuseitfreelyandavoiditsnegativeeffects.私人書信模版1DearJohn/SirsorMadams,IamdelightedtohearthatyouwillcometoGuangzhouforavisitsooa.Ican'twaittoseeyou.HereI'dliketogiveyouseveraltips./I'mherewritingforyoutothank/apologize/conqulate/complainaboutfor????First/atfirst/atthebeginning/tobeginwith/inthefirstplace,Guangzhouisabigmetropolitancitywithalotofvehiclesandahugecrowdofpeopleandthetrafficisheavy,forwhichIhopeyouwillbeprepared.Second/inthesecondplace/what^smore/themoreimportantisthefactthat,peoplehereareaddictedtofoodsofdifferentflavors,esp.seafoodsandlivinganimals,eveninsects.Idoubtyou5lllikethem.Besides,theweatherhereischangeable,soyou'dbetterbringmoreclothesandmedicine.Withpeoplefromdifferentregionsandcountries,diverseculturesandexoticcustoms,youwilldefinitelyenjoyyourself.ThenImayserveasyourguide>Ifyouhaveanydoubts,don'thesitatetoinformmeplease.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou/earlyreply?SincerelyYougSiqnature:LiMing2009書信作文DearSirorMadam,IamherewritingtoyoutoexpressmythanksforyourwarmreceptionwhileIwasinAmericaasamemberofaSino-Americanculturalexchangeprogram.IhopeyouwillcometovisitChinainduecourse.Ifyouhaveanydoubts^don'thesitatetoinformmeplease.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou/earlyreply?SincerelyYours,Signature:LiMing圖表作文模塊Asisshowninthetable(orinthegraph/diagram),...dropped(ordecreased)by.../greatlyincreasedfrom...in1994to...in1996.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsfor...Ontheonehand,...Lefshaveanexampletoillustratethegreatincreasein...Ontheotherhand,...isduetothefactthat...Inaddition,...isresponsiblefor...Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow...AsfarasIamconcerned,...Nouns:arise/increase/fall/drop/decline//reachapeak/thelowestpointAdjectives:sharp/dramatic/considerable/slight/gradual//remainsteady/stayconstant2010真題大作文Asisshownfromthegivencolumn/pie/table/curvechartasabove,itisofdirectlinktomobilephonesubscriptionintheyearsstemming/rangingfrom2000to2008,whichiscomposedoftwosortsofcountries.Thefirstkindofnationthatcatchesourutmostattention,tostartwith,comestothedevelopednations.Thenumberofmobilephonesubscriptionintheyear2008wasequaltothatin2007,thatis,1billion,followedbytheyear2006(0.9billion),whilethatintheyear2000wasthesmallest,say,about0.6billion.Followingthat,we'llcontinuetothenextunit,inotherwords,thedevelopingcountries,whichobserved/saw/witnessedafasterrisingrateofsubscriptioninthesameperiod.Thefigure/dataoftheyear2008wasthebiggest,takingtheleadingposition(4billion),nexttowhichwastheyear2007,putitinanotherway,nearly3.3billion,withtheyear2000beingtheleastinnumberby0.4billion.Theabove-illustratedaspects,sofarinaword,indicatethatthegrowingproportionofmobilephonesubscriptioninthedevelopingcountrieswasmuchseniortothatofthedevelopedones.ItPaystoBeHonestRecently,weoftenhearcomplaintsaboutdishonesty.Whatamazesusmostisstudents1dishonestyinexams.Itistruethatcheatinganddishonestpracticesareineverywalkofourlives.Thereaeemanyreasonsexplainingthesedishonestbehaviors.Themainreasonisthatmostpeopleneglectthemoralvaluesinpursuitoftheirmaterialbenefits.Whatismor&welackeffectivelawsandregulationsofsupervision.Thirdly,mostdishonestpeoplecanescapethepunishment.Asaresult,theproblemofdishonestybecomesmoreandmoreserious.Considerineallthese.Istillwanttoarguethatitpaystobehonestinthelongrun.Foronethin工honestyisatraditionalvirtueofourChinese>Foranother^evendishonestpeoplelikemakingfriendswithhonestpeople.好，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。（即表達(dá)得遽遽冗冗）比如:1）有人認(rèn)為機會是極少的2）有人認(rèn)為機會人人都有3）我的看法Sample1Astotheopportunity,thereistwodifferentopinions:first,someonethinkopportunityislittleintheirlife.Secondly,someoneconsiderthatopportunityisexistingeverywhereeverybodyhassomekindsofchance.AccordingtomylifeexperimentandknowledgeIagreewiththesecondidea.Thereischanceforeveryoneinsomeunexpectedcase.Butifyouhasnopreparingforit,theopportunitywilllose.Thosewhohavemanypreparationandmuchknowledge,andsomegoodvirtue,Inconclusionfpeopleseldomdenythatitpaystobehonest.ItPaystoBeHonestAsisknow。toalLweoftenhearcomplaintsaboutdishonesty.Peopleseemtogetaccustomedtomanydishonestbehaviors>Infact,therearedishonestpracticesineverywalkofourlives.Thereasonsofsocialdishonestylieinseveralaspects>Firstly,mostpeopleneglectmoralvaluesinpursuitoftheirmaterialbenefits.Secondly,unfaircompetitionsworsenthesituation.Thirdly,welackpowerfulandeffectivelawstocopewiththisproblem.Finally,manydishonestpeoplemayescapepunishmenteasily.Asamatteroftobehonestwillbegoodforbothhonestpeopleandothers.Ontheonehandbehavingyourselfinanhonestwaycanwinrespectsfromothers.Ontheotherhaulbeinghonestisanessentialsteptowardsourspiritualcivilization.Thereforeitpaystobehonestinthelongrun.HowtoSolvetheEnergyProblema.有人認(rèn)為解決能源危機的方式是厲行節(jié)約b.有人則認(rèn)為開發(fā)新的能源是最好的辦法c.我的看法SomepeoDleholdthatthesolutiontoenergycrisisistosaveenergywhileothersclaimthatthebestapproachistodevelopnewsourcesofenergy.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ipreferthelatter.Itisobviousthatevenifwecansavemuchenerqv,wecanonlydelaytheenerqvcrisis,butcannotsolvetheDroblemconwIeteMOntheotherhand,therearestilllimitlesssourcesofenergywaitingfortoexplore:suchasthesun,theseaandtheair,Forexample,wecanmakeuseofthesuntoproducesolarenergy.Sointhelongrun,wemustdevelopnewsourcesofenergyinsteadofmerelyconservingtheknown,limitedsupplies.標(biāo)題：HowtoAchieveSuccess提綱：1）有人說成功要緊靠運氣；2）有人則認(rèn)為成功要緊靠勤奮，與運氣毫無關(guān)系；3）我的觀點Somepeoplesavthekeytosuccessisgoodluck,whileothersclaimitishardwork.AsfarasIamconcerned,therearemanyfactorscontributingtosuccessandthethreefundamentalonesarediligence,devotionandperseverance.Diligenceisthefirstkeyfactortosuccess.Diligencehelpsusremoveignorance,overcomedifficulties,andenlightenourminds.Itmakesafoolwise,andapoormanrich.Devotionisanotherfactortosuccess.Whateverwedo,wemustloveitanddoitwhole-heartedly.Onlywhenwesetourmindsonthejob,canwedoitwell.Furthermore,perseverance,orastrongwill,isthelastkeytosuccess.Withoutastrongwill,wearelikelytogiveupwhenwemeetsomedifficulties,letaloneperformwonderfuldeeds.Toconclude,allgreatmenachievesuccessthroughdiligence,devotionandperseverance.Justasthefamoussayinggoes,"Nopains,nogains11;"Wherethereisawill,thereisaway."標(biāo)題：CityLifeandSuburbanLife提綱：工）最近幾年越來越多的人遷往近郊居住2）城市生活與近郊生活各有特點3）比較起來，我喜歡的是Nowadaysbusiness,governmentandrecreationtendtobeconcentratedinthecentersofthecities.Althoughmostpeoplearereluctanttomovetotheoutskirtsofthecities,Ifeellikelivinginthesuburbs.Itistruethatthecitycanprovidemuchconvenienceandentertainment,theveryreasonwhypeoplecan'tbeartopartwithcitylife.Butthecostfortheprivilegeoflivinginthecityisalsohigh.What'smore,thereismoregasandnoisepollutioninthecity,whichisfullofpetrolfumesandtoxicgases,tornbytheroarofbusesandtaxies,andthrongedceaselesslybygreatcrowds.Incontrast,livingnearthecountrysideonecanenjoythecleanatmosphere,theclosenesstonatureandthequiet,peacefulsurroundings--theessentialsofahealthylife.Thenewsuburbanlifeisfastbecomingapredominantpatternoflivinginmostcities;andwiththeimprovementoftrafficandtheperfectionofservices,itwillprovetoholdgreatsuperiorityovercitylife..面試在求職過程中的作用.取得面試成功的因素：儀表、舉止談吐、能力、專業(yè)知識、自信、實事求是……HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?Nowadays,ajobinterviewisveryimportanttoboththeinterviewerandinterviewee.Toaninterviewer,hecantellsomethingaboutthejobtotheintervieweesuchassalary,workingconditionsandalsothedevelopmentprospectsofthecompany.Toaninterviewee,hecanmakeuseofthechancetoknowtheworkheisgoingtotakeup.Afterafullandfrankexchangeofinformation,anintervieweriseasytomakeajudgmentwhetherthejobisreallysuitablefortheinterviewee.Buthowcananintervieweesucceedinthejobinterview?Firstly,theintervieweehastopayattentiontohisappearance,forthefirstimpressionisalwayswhatwestartwith.Secondly,goodmannersareequallyimportant.Theintervieweehastobeneithertooproudnortootimid.Besides,heoughttobehonestabouthispersonalbackground.Finally,greatimportanceshouldbeattachedtohisabilityandskillsforthejobandhisacademicknowledge,whichhemustdemonstratetrulyandconfidently.Inaword,ajobinterviewisagoodchancefortheintervieweetoimpresstheinterviewerwithhismanners,knowledgeandskillsandobtainthejobopportunity..上大學(xué)的費用(tuitionandfees)能夠通過多種途徑解決;.哪種途徑適合于我(說明理由)。HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducationNowadays,tuitionandfeesforcollegearemuchhigherthaneverbefore.Howtofinanceourcollegeeducationhasbecomeabigconcern.Wecandealwithitinvariousways.Wecangetallofthemoneyfromourparentsorwecancompletelydependonourselves,doingapart-timejobonsummerorwintervacation.Inaddition,wecanapplytosomebankforstudents5loan.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iprefertocombinethefirsttwo.ItmeansmyparentssupportmetosomeextentandmeanwhileIdoapart-timejob-teachingchildrenEnglish.有人認(rèn)為讀書要有選擇；.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書；.我的看法。ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively?Somepeoplethinkreadingshouldbeselective.First,theythinkthatone'slifeissolimitedthatreadingextensivelyisoutofthequestion,sooneshouldonlyfocusonthebookscloselyconnectedwithhismajor.Second,surroundedbytheworldofknowledge,theybelievereadingwithoutselectingissimplyawasteoftime,energyandmoney.Finally,thosewhoarecriticalclaimthatnotallbooksareworthreading.However,therearemanypeoplewhopreferreadingextensively.Firstofall,theyfirmlybelievethatthemorebooksonereads,themoreknowledgeoneacquires.Anotherreasonforthosewholikereadingextensivelyisthattheworldischangingsorapidlythatonlybyreadingextensivelycanonekeepabreastofwhatisgoingoninotherpartsoftheworld.Inmyopinion,peopleshouldreadbothselectivelyandextensively>Ontheonehand,weshouldreadselectivelyforspecialknowledge,whichneedsourconcentrationandcarefulstudy.Ontheotherhand,weshouldreadextensivelyfortheinformationorentertainment,whichleadstoacolorfullife.Therefore,Readingshouldbe,accordingtomyownunderstanding,bothselectiveandextensive..有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會帶來好運;.我認(rèn)為數(shù)字與運氣無關(guān)，…SampleCompositionDoaLuckyNumberswReallyBringGoodLuck?Nowadaysmanypeoplearecrazyaboutsome“LuckyNumbersw,suchasthenumberscontaining8sand6swhichsoundslikeChinese“Fa"andaLiuLiuDaShun99Theywouldliketopaytwiceormanytimesmoreoftheusualpricefora“Lucky“telephonenumber,oracarplatenumber.Theydosoonlybecausetheybelievethatthe“LuckyNumberscanbringthemgoodluckandgreatfortune.Idon'tbelievethoseaLuckyNumbers"canbringgoodluckorbigfortunetoanyperson.Thosepeople'sblindbeliefin“LuckyNumbers“isabsurdandsuperstitious.

WehaveneverheardthatBillGates,therichestpersonintheworldnow,everdroveacarwithanumberof888or666.Myneighborhasgotasocalled"Lucky”telephonenumberformanyyears,buthestillremainsaspoorasheusedtobenow.TherearesomanyexamplesshowingthataLuckyNumberswhasnothingtodowithone'sluckorfortune.Numbersareonlysymbolsindicatingthenamesofcertainthings.假冒偽劣商品的危害;2.2.2.如何杜絕假冒偽劣商品。2.如何杜絕假冒偽劣商品。SampleCompositionMyViewonFakeCommoditiesFakecommoditiesaredisastrousforasociety.ThedisasterstheyhavebroughtaresomanythatIcanonlynameafewhere.First,thenormaleconomicorderisgreatlydestroyed.Commoditiesoffamousbrandsandhighqualitypileupinstoresunsoldwhilepoorgoodsareeverywhereinmarkets.Second,faircompetitionbetweenbusinessmenfallsvictimtofakecommodities.GoodmayIquiptheopportunityfirmly.Forexample,twomenareappealingforajobinacompany,andthereisonlyonevacantjobfortheonlyoneofthetwomen.How,thetwomanhasanopportunitytogetthejobbutthebosscertainlywouldacceptthegoodone.SoIthinktheopportunityisexistingtoeveryone,butmoreopportunityisbelongstowhohasknowledge,experience,encourageandconfident.該篇文章條理不清，思想紊亂，語言支離破碎，幾乎沒有正確的句子，得2分。Sample2Peoplehavedifferentviewsonopportunity.Somethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesforthemintheworld,whileothersholdthateverybodywillhavesomekindofchancesinhisorherlife.AsfarasIcommoditiescannotbeatpooronesbecauseofthelatterslowcostandlowprices.Tomakethingsworse,fakecommoditiesbringgreatlosstopeople.Forexample,weoftenhearthatfarmerstoilandsweatforayearwithoutharvestinganythingowingtofalseseedsorpoorfertilizer.Somepeopleevendiethankstothefakewine,orpoisonousfood.Theworstofall,thesocietyisseverelypollutedbythemaddesireformoney.Wemustputanendtofakecommoditiesbyallmeans.Firstofall,weshouldstrengthenourlaws.Lawsmustpunishanyonewhoproducesorsellsfakecommodities,besidescompensatingforallthelossescausedbythemaswell.Anotherthingweshoulddoistolaunchalongandwideant-fakecommoditycampaign.Everyoneshouldkeepaneyeonfakecommoditiesandrefusetobuyorusefakecommodities.Oncebeingcheated,thebuyershouldhavethecouragetoexposeandattackthelawbreaker.Inthisway,therewillbenomarketforfakecommodities.寫作金句：.該問題與價值觀/環(huán)境污染有關(guān)，值得我們深思。Theissue/problemhassomethingtodowith/concerns/isrelatedto/dealswithpersonalvalues/environmentalpollution,whichdeserves/requires/needs/isworth/wants/waitsfor/awaitsourfurther/deeper/closer/strongeranalysis/discussion/insight/thought/illustration/considerationasnext/follows/below.簡寫版：Theissuedealswithourenvironmentalpollution,whichdeservesourcloserconsiderationasnext.環(huán)境問題對各行各業(yè)的人們產(chǎn)生了深遠(yuǎn)的影響，因此值得我們深思。Theinfluence/impact/effectexerted/imposed/posedbytheenvironmentalproblemstoallthepeopleisprofound/deep/serious,whichdeservesourfurtherdiscussion..其次，我們看這個想象的負(fù)面性/措施After/Foilowingthat,wewillmoveontothesideeffects/negativeimpactuponourlife/measurestobetakeiie.自從改革開放以來，中國發(fā)生了很大的變化。初級版：Sincereformandopeningtotheoutsideworld,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinChina.升級版：Chinahasundergone/experiencedconsiderable/dramatic/drastic/remarkable/strikingprogress/improvement/advanceintheyearsincereformandopeningtotheoutsideworld.頂級版：Strikingadvance/progress,intheyearsince1978whenthepolicyofreformandopeningtotheoutsideworldistaken/carriedon,hashappened/occurredtoChina..我首先想到的是。。。Whatoccurstome,inthebeginning,comesto...我認(rèn)為采取一些有效措施是很必要的Itisofsignificance/significant/essentialforthesolid/firmmeasurestobecarriedoutwithnoreluctance,Ibelieve.圖表類作文金句.如圖所示，我們明白它是由。。。部分構(gòu)成。Theprovidedchartasaboveinformsusthekeydataregarding（主題詞）intheyearrangingfrom…to…whichiscomposedofsections/parts/units/items..首先,我們看圖，它是關(guān)于。。。Thefirstchart/unit/item/sectionthatshouldbeattentioned/illustrated/described/focusedon/comesto/existsin/starts/beginswith（小標(biāo)題與單元名稱），when/whichSVO.e.g.Whencomesuptoourminds,tostartwith,isofdirectiontotheyear2008,when….其次，我們再看。。。After/Foilowingthat,wewillmoveon/transfer/continueto（小標(biāo)題；時間，地點，名稱），which...Then/Furthermore/Whafsmore/Inaddition,whatcan'tbeignored/neglected/avoided/forgottenis/consistsin/goesto/dealswith/hassomethingtodowith（名稱，數(shù)據(jù)），which...簡寫版：Whafsmore,whatcan'tbeignoredconsistsin...,whichSV.小結(jié)綜上所述，上述描述說明（歌功頌德，抨擊時弊）Tosumup/summarize/beshort/bebriefInsummary/short/brief/aword.Theabove-mentioned/illustrated/presenteddetails/perspectives/descriptionindicate/show/imply/suggestthat...頂級版：Tosumup,theabove-illustrateddescriptionindicatethatStrikingprogress,intheyearsince1978whenthepolicyofreformandopeningtotheoutsideworldiscarriedon,hasoccurredtoChina.數(shù)據(jù)比較：大于：besenior/prior/proceedingto???by+數(shù)據(jù)＜］、于：bejunior/second/nextto...Theyearof2000is數(shù)據(jù)，followingb（小于數(shù)據(jù)）Theyearof2000is數(shù)據(jù),followedby（大于數(shù)據(jù)）A的GDP大于B的GDP20萬元。e.g.A'sGDPisseniortothatofBby$200thousand.A'sGDPisfollowedbythatofBby$200thousand.占有：takeup/occupy/cover/include/constitute/becomposedo^consistof/comprise/gain+%oe.g.TheprofitofABCcompanyintheyear1999occupied36%ofitswholevolume..動態(tài)變化：1）上升：V+adv.Rise/ascend/increase/grow+迅速地dramatically/sharply/considerably/remarkably/strikingly+緩慢地g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