高中英語-祝賀信-(公開課)課件

DearHenry,

IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.

Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.

IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.

Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua

大聲朗讀DearHenry,大聲朗讀1DearHenry,

IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.

Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.

IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua祝賀信“三步走”：觀察思考：文章的體裁？寫作目的？結(jié)構(gòu)（幾個(gè)層次？）時(shí)態(tài)？過渡詞？1.寫信的目的和表達(dá)聽到喜訊的心情；2.對(duì)喜訊進(jìn)行積極評(píng)價(jià)（包括肯定被祝賀人過去的努力和優(yōu)點(diǎn)）；3.表達(dá)衷心的祝福及未來的祝福。

（注意：語氣要真誠、自然、親切動(dòng)人）DearHenry,祝賀信“三步走”：觀察思考：1.寫信的2

作文訓(xùn)練之祝賀信

作文訓(xùn)練之祝賀信3常用語塊恭喜/祝賀……_________________________2.實(shí)現(xiàn)/成真_________________________3.很高興聽到……_________________________4.我想表達(dá)我對(duì)……的祝賀Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationson…congratulationson…cometrueHowhappyIamtohear…5.我知道這肯定是因?yàn)椤?.我希望Iknowthisissurelyowingto…Ihope(that)…Iwish…..常用語塊Iwouldliketoexpressmy4套用句式我很高興聽到你夢(mèng)想成真。2.我想表達(dá)我對(duì)你被北京大學(xué)錄取的祝賀。HowhappyIamtohearthatyourdreamhascometrue.IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationsonyouradmissionintothePekingUniversity.3.我希望你在大學(xué)中取得更大的成功，將來為家鄉(xiāng)服務(wù)。Iwishyougreatersuccessintheuniversityandservethehometowninthefuture.套用句式HowhappyIamtoheartha5假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(PekingUniversity)，他來自貧困地區(qū)，是村里的第一位大學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封祝賀信要點(diǎn)如下：1.考上理想大學(xué)，父母驕傲。2.努力學(xué)習(xí)將來為家鄉(xiāng)服務(wù)。3.對(duì)未來祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。根據(jù)題目要求審題：文章的體裁？祝賀信2.寫作目的？

祝賀王強(qiáng)考上北京大學(xué)3.結(jié)構(gòu)（幾個(gè)層次？）3個(gè)4.時(shí)態(tài)？

一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)5.過渡詞？？

實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(P6假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(PekingUniversity)，他來自貧困地區(qū)，是村里的第一位大學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封祝賀信要點(diǎn)如下：1.考上理想大學(xué)，父母驕傲。2.努力學(xué)習(xí)將來為家鄉(xiāng)服務(wù)。3.對(duì)未來祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：根據(jù)題目要求審題并列出提綱：1.寫信的目的和表達(dá)聽到喜訊的心情2.對(duì)喜訊進(jìn)行積極評(píng)價(jià)（包括被祝賀人過去的努力和優(yōu)點(diǎn)）；3.表達(dá)衷心的祝福及未來的祝福。

（注意：語氣要真誠、自然、親切動(dòng)人）祝賀信“三步走”：寫作：15分鐘完成假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(Pekin7互評(píng)作文（2分鐘）任務(wù)：1.看看別人如何表達(dá)你的疑難點(diǎn)；2.看看同學(xué)的作文里有哪些模板中的核心句型。評(píng)判依據(jù)：1.字?jǐn)?shù):100詞左右。2.卷面是否整潔？3.內(nèi)容是否齊全？4.句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整？5.用了哪些核心句型？評(píng)分檔次：第一檔：21-25(優(yōu)秀）內(nèi)容齊全，錯(cuò)誤很少；第二檔:16-20（良好）內(nèi)容齊全，錯(cuò)誤較少；第三檔:11-15（及格）內(nèi)容基本齊全，錯(cuò)誤較多；第四檔:6-10（較差）內(nèi)容不齊全，錯(cuò)誤很多；第五檔:1-5（差）只寫了一兩個(gè)相關(guān)詞句?；ピu(píng)作文（2分鐘）任務(wù)：1.看看別人如何表達(dá)你的疑難點(diǎn)；評(píng)8DearWangQiang,Congratulations!

IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationsonyouradmissiontoPekingUniversity,youridealone!Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowhappyIamtohearyoursuccess.Thisisanewstartforyouandit’sgoodforyoutostudywithsomanyexcellentstudentsandlearnfromtopprofessors.

AsforasI’mconcerned,youareintelligent.Besides,youhaveworkedveryhardinthepastyears,soI’mreallyhappytoknowthatyoubecomethefirstcollegestudentofyourvillagefromthepoorareas.Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.

Iwishyougreatersuccessintheuniversityandservethehometowninthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua

DearWangQiang,9Homework：熟讀范文和關(guān)于祝賀信的核心短語、句型。Homework：熟讀范文和關(guān)于祝賀信的核心短語、句型。10ThankyouThankyou11課堂練習(xí)假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(PekingUniversity)，他來自貧困地區(qū)，是村里的第一位大學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封祝賀信，要點(diǎn)如下：1.考上理想大學(xué)，父母驕傲。2.努力學(xué)習(xí)將來為家鄉(xiāng)服務(wù)。3.對(duì)未來祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。課堂練習(xí)12DearWangQiang,Congratulations!IhavelearnedwithdelightthatyouareadmittedtoPekingUniversity,youridealone!Iknowyouhaveworkedveryhardinthepastyears,soI’mtrulyhappytoknowthatyoubecomethefirstcollegestudentofyourvillagefromthepoorareas.Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.DearWangQiang,13IjustwantyoutoknowhowpleasedIamtowitnessyoursuccess.Thisisanewstartforyouandit’sgoodforyoutostudywithsomanyexcellentstudentsandlearnfromtopprofessors.Iwishyougreatersuccessinuniversityandserveforthehometowninthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaIjustwantyoutoknowhowpl14課外作業(yè)假定你是李華，得知你的外國筆友Peter獲得了“漢語橋”世界大學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。你為他感到驕傲，并給他寫一封祝賀信，要點(diǎn)如下：1.天天練習(xí)講漢語，從不會(huì)到流利，終于成功。2.繼續(xù)努力，有機(jī)會(huì)來中國留學(xué)。3.希望見面和交流。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。參考詞匯：“漢語橋”世界大學(xué)生中文演講比賽“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest課外作業(yè)15DearPeter,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourreceivingthefirstprizeof“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest.IknowthatyouwerenotgoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpracticedspeakingChineseeveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.Finally,yousucceeded!Inmymind,thismatchisverydifficultforaforeignstudent.DearPeter,16SoI’msosurprisedthatyoubecomechampionofthiscompetition.IfyougoonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.Atlast,Ihopetoseeyouandcommunicatewitheachother.

Sincerecongratulationstoyouagain!Yours,LiHuaSoI’msosurprisedthatyoub17DearHenry,

IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.

Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.

IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.

Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua

大聲朗讀DearHenry,大聲朗讀18經(jīng)常不斷地學(xué)習(xí),你就什么都知道。你知道得越多,你就越有力量StudyConstantly,AndYouWillKnowEverything.TheMoreYouKnow,TheMorePowerfulYouWillBe寫在最后經(jīng)常不斷地學(xué)習(xí),你就什么都知道。你知道得越多,你就越有力量寫19ThankYou在別人的演說中思考，在自己的故事里成長ThinkingInOtherPeople‘SSpeeches，GrowingUpInYourOwnStory講師：XXXXXXXX年XX月XX日ThankYou20DearHenry,

IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.

Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.

IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.

Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua

大聲朗讀DearHenry,大聲朗讀21DearHenry,

IamwritingtooffermysincerestcongratulationsonyouradmissionintotheBiologyDepartmentofPekingUniversityasagraduate.Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowluckyIamtobeabletoshareyourprideandhowpleasedIamatyouradmission.

Inmyview,youworkhardandbesidesthat,youareaveryintelligentperson.Thisadmissionisarewardwhichyourichlydeserve.Iamsureyouwillmakegreaterprogressinyourstudyandobtainabrightfutureinyourlife.

IwishyougreatersuccessinyourschoolcareerandIamlookingforwardtogoodnewsfromyousoon.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua祝賀信“三步走”：觀察思考：文章的體裁？寫作目的？結(jié)構(gòu)（幾個(gè)層次？）時(shí)態(tài)？過渡詞？1.寫信的目的和表達(dá)聽到喜訊的心情；2.對(duì)喜訊進(jìn)行積極評(píng)價(jià)（包括肯定被祝賀人過去的努力和優(yōu)點(diǎn)）；3.表達(dá)衷心的祝福及未來的祝福。

（注意：語氣要真誠、自然、親切動(dòng)人）DearHenry,祝賀信“三步走”：觀察思考：1.寫信的22

作文訓(xùn)練之祝賀信

作文訓(xùn)練之祝賀信23常用語塊恭喜/祝賀……_________________________2.實(shí)現(xiàn)/成真_________________________3.很高興聽到……_________________________4.我想表達(dá)我對(duì)……的祝賀Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationson…congratulationson…cometrueHowhappyIamtohear…5.我知道這肯定是因?yàn)椤?.我希望Iknowthisissurelyowingto…Ihope(that)…Iwish…..常用語塊Iwouldliketoexpressmy24套用句式我很高興聽到你夢(mèng)想成真。2.我想表達(dá)我對(duì)你被北京大學(xué)錄取的祝賀。HowhappyIamtohearthatyourdreamhascometrue.IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationsonyouradmissionintothePekingUniversity.3.我希望你在大學(xué)中取得更大的成功，將來為家鄉(xiāng)服務(wù)。Iwishyougreatersuccessintheuniversityandservethehometowninthefuture.套用句式HowhappyIamtoheartha25假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(PekingUniversity)，他來自貧困地區(qū)，是村里的第一位大學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封祝賀信要點(diǎn)如下：1.考上理想大學(xué)，父母驕傲。2.努力學(xué)習(xí)將來為家鄉(xiāng)服務(wù)。3.對(duì)未來祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。根據(jù)題目要求審題：文章的體裁？祝賀信2.寫作目的？

祝賀王強(qiáng)考上北京大學(xué)3.結(jié)構(gòu)（幾個(gè)層次？）3個(gè)4.時(shí)態(tài)？

一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)5.過渡詞？？

實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(P26假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(PekingUniversity)，他來自貧困地區(qū)，是村里的第一位大學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封祝賀信要點(diǎn)如下：1.考上理想大學(xué)，父母驕傲。2.努力學(xué)習(xí)將來為家鄉(xiāng)服務(wù)。3.對(duì)未來祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：根據(jù)題目要求審題并列出提綱：1.寫信的目的和表達(dá)聽到喜訊的心情2.對(duì)喜訊進(jìn)行積極評(píng)價(jià)（包括被祝賀人過去的努力和優(yōu)點(diǎn)）；3.表達(dá)衷心的祝福及未來的祝福。

（注意：語氣要真誠、自然、親切動(dòng)人）祝賀信“三步走”：寫作：15分鐘完成假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(Pekin27互評(píng)作文（2分鐘）任務(wù)：1.看看別人如何表達(dá)你的疑難點(diǎn)；2.看看同學(xué)的作文里有哪些模板中的核心句型。評(píng)判依據(jù)：1.字?jǐn)?shù):100詞左右。2.卷面是否整潔？3.內(nèi)容是否齊全？4.句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整？5.用了哪些核心句型？評(píng)分檔次：第一檔：21-25(優(yōu)秀）內(nèi)容齊全，錯(cuò)誤很少；第二檔:16-20（良好）內(nèi)容齊全，錯(cuò)誤較少；第三檔:11-15（及格）內(nèi)容基本齊全，錯(cuò)誤較多；第四檔:6-10（較差）內(nèi)容不齊全，錯(cuò)誤很多；第五檔:1-5（差）只寫了一兩個(gè)相關(guān)詞句?；ピu(píng)作文（2分鐘）任務(wù)：1.看看別人如何表達(dá)你的疑難點(diǎn)；評(píng)28DearWangQiang,Congratulations!

IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationsonyouradmissiontoPekingUniversity,youridealone!Asyourclosefriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowhappyIamtohearyoursuccess.Thisisanewstartforyouandit’sgoodforyoutostudywithsomanyexcellentstudentsandlearnfromtopprofessors.

AsforasI’mconcerned,youareintelligent.Besides,youhaveworkedveryhardinthepastyears,soI’mreallyhappytoknowthatyoubecomethefirstcollegestudentofyourvillagefromthepoorareas.Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.

Iwishyougreatersuccessintheuniversityandservethehometowninthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua

DearWangQiang,29Homework：熟讀范文和關(guān)于祝賀信的核心短語、句型。Homework：熟讀范文和關(guān)于祝賀信的核心短語、句型。30ThankyouThankyou31課堂練習(xí)假定你是李華，得知你的好友王強(qiáng)今年考上了北京大學(xué)(PekingUniversity)，他來自貧困地區(qū)，是村里的第一位大學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封祝賀信，要點(diǎn)如下：1.考上理想大學(xué)，父母驕傲。2.努力學(xué)習(xí)將來為家鄉(xiāng)服務(wù)。3.對(duì)未來祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。課堂練習(xí)32DearWangQiang,Congratulations!IhavelearnedwithdelightthatyouareadmittedtoPekingUniversity,youridealone!Iknowyouhaveworkedveryhardinthepastyears,soI’mtrulyhappytoknowthatyoubecomethefirstcollegestudentofyourvillagefromthepoorareas.Iamsureyourparentsaregreatlyproudofyou.DearWangQiang,33IjustwantyoutoknowhowpleasedIamtowitnessyoursuccess.Thisisanewstartforyouandit’sgoodforyoutostudywithsomanyexcellentstudentsandlearnfromtopprofessors.Iwishyougreatersuccessinuniversityandserveforthehometowninthefuture.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaIjustwantyoutoknowhowpl34課外作業(yè)假定你是李華，得知你的外國筆友Peter獲得了“漢語橋”世界大學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。你為他感到驕傲，并給他寫一封祝賀信，要點(diǎn)如下：1.天天練習(xí)講漢語，從不會(huì)到流利，終于成功。2.繼續(xù)努力，有機(jī)會(huì)來中國留學(xué)。3.希望見面和交流。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。參考詞匯：“漢語橋”世界大學(xué)生中文演講比賽“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest課外作業(yè)35DearPeter,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourreceivingthefirstprizeof“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest.IknowthatyouwerenotgoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpracticedspeakingChineseeveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.Finally,yousucceeded!Inmymind,thismatchisverydifficultforaforeignstudent.DearPeter,36SoI’msosurprisedthatyoubecomechampionofthiscompetition.IfyougoonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheop