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精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔傾情為你奉上精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔傾情為你奉上專心專注專業(yè)專心專注專業(yè)精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔傾情為你奉上專心專注專業(yè)無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀范例：Amorerealisticandrationalcriteriontovalueteachers’work(andthereforedecidetheirsalary)shouldincludefactorssuchascomprehensivedevelopmentsofstudents,teachers’owncapacitytocultivateandeducate,andparents’feedback.Yetmydisagreementdoesnotsuggestthatstudents’performanceshouldbeabandonedbutratherincludedalongwithotherindispensablefactorsinevaluatingteachers’work,sinceschoolreportisstillamongmostparents’topconcernsandstudentshavetouseitasanchorwhenapplyingforfurtherstudies.Also,itisreasonablethatteacherswhocanenhancestudents’performanceshouldbepaidbetter,asthemeasurewouldmoderatelymotivateteacherstoworkhard.優(yōu)秀范例：Therearetwohalvestoachievinganewreality:Youmusthavetimetodream,andyoumusttakeaction.Giveyourselftimeforcreativevisualizationdaily.Noteideasthatcome,andkeeparecordofthese.MakearulethatyouspendXamountoftimedailytakingactiononyourdreams.Artistsproduceartwork.Authorswrite.Ifyouarenottakingaction,youwillnotachieveyourdream。無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀范例：Rampupyournetworking.JoinLinkedInandPlaxo,andaskforrecommendationsfromcurrentandpastcoworkers.UseTwittertoupdatetheworldonyourcurrentprojectsaswellasnetworkwithotherlike-mindedindividuals.Lookforlocalnetworkinggroups,andstartattendingthem。無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀范例：Nevertheless,itwouldnotworkeitherifeverybodyjustkeeptothemselveswithoutcommunicating.Itisalsoessentialforroommatestosharetheirexperienceswithoneanotherandthusgetcloseintheirrelationship.Inthiscase,agoodsenseofhumorcanbeasuchavaluablequalityasasinglejokemaybreakthesilenceandopenupaniceconversation.無(wú)老師中文釋義：但是，如果每個(gè)人都與外界封閉的話，其實(shí)幽默也是沒用的。室友之間就該分享他們的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，這樣才能拉近彼此之間的關(guān)系。在這種情況下，幽默感，就是一個(gè)很重要的品質(zhì)，比如一個(gè)笑話就有可能打破長(zhǎng)久以來的沉默，讓大家立即活躍起來。無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀作文范例：Furthermore,moderntechnologygivesstudentsanillusionthatinformationandrealknowledgeiseasytolearn–justbyclickingmouseorwatchingvideos.Butinfactthisformsonlythefirststeptowardsusefulinformationandeffectivelearning,aslearningofanykindrequiresfullconcentrationandinteractivethinking,whicharealmostabsentintheprocessofpopulare-learningexperience.無(wú)老師中文翻譯：不僅如此，現(xiàn)代科技會(huì)給學(xué)生一個(gè)感覺，也就是信息和真正的知識(shí)是很簡(jiǎn)單易學(xué)的，只要通過點(diǎn)擊鼠標(biāo)，或者看錄像就可以了。但是，實(shí)際上這只是獲得有用知識(shí)和高效學(xué)習(xí)的第一步，因?yàn)閷W(xué)習(xí)任何一門知識(shí)，都需要全神貫注和深入淺出的思考，而這些又恰恰是大眾網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)過程中最欠缺的。無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀范例：Second,technologyhasequippedchildrenwithprofessionalapparatuswhichcouldfinallyrealizetheirimagination.Thistakesfromparticularlyascomputersoftwaresandapplications,suchasPhotoshopforcreatinggraphicdesign,Overtureforeasilycomposingapieceofmusic,3DMaxforbuildingupavirtualworld,etc..Allthesoftwareswereneverashandyastheyareatpresent,andthisworldabsolutelyprovidesourchildrenaneffectivetoolforrealizingtheircreativity.無(wú)老師翻譯：第二點(diǎn)，科技已經(jīng)用很多專業(yè)化的儀器來驅(qū)動(dòng)孩子的想象力，而這些專業(yè)的工具可以最終實(shí)現(xiàn)這些孩子們的想象力。所有的這一切都是源于計(jì)算機(jī)軟件和應(yīng)用的使用，比如說Photoshop就可以用來進(jìn)行圖像上的創(chuàng)作，Overture可以用來很容易的在電腦上剪輯歌曲，3DMax則可以創(chuàng)造一個(gè)虛擬世界。所有的這些電腦軟件從沒有像今天這么易用和便捷，這個(gè)世界絕對(duì)是為我們的孩子提供了一個(gè)強(qiáng)大的可以實(shí)現(xiàn)他們創(chuàng)造力的工具。優(yōu)秀范例：Third,technologyitselfisamarketplacewherecreativeideasareeconomicallyencouraged.SteveJobsearnedmillionsofdollarsayearforhisunparallelcreation,andMarkZuckberggainedhisreputationforthegeniussocialnetwork.Therefore,technologyhasprovidedchildrentheinternalmotivetodeveloptheircreativity.Inanutshell,Istillregardchildrenasbecomingincreasinglycreativeintechnologydevelopment,althoughitmightbringminorsideeffect.Aslongaswekeepabalancedmoodonchildrenenjoyingthefruitoftechnology,theyaresuretocontributemoretoinnovationthaninthepast.無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀翻譯：第三點(diǎn)，技術(shù)本身也是一個(gè)能對(duì)創(chuàng)意本身起到了很大的經(jīng)濟(jì)上促進(jìn)作用的一塊市場(chǎng)。SteveJobs因?yàn)樗麩o(wú)可匹敵的創(chuàng)意一年賺了數(shù)百萬(wàn)美元。MarkZuckberg則是因?yàn)樗奶觳诺纳缃痪W(wǎng)絡(luò)的創(chuàng)意為自己贏得了巨大的聲望。因此，技術(shù)本身也是為孩子們提供了一個(gè)發(fā)展自己創(chuàng)造力的內(nèi)在動(dòng)機(jī)。總而言之，我堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為孩子是會(huì)隨著技術(shù)的發(fā)展變得越來越有創(chuàng)造力，雖然有可能帶來一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)負(fù)面效果。只要我們對(duì)于孩子們享受技術(shù)發(fā)展的果實(shí)抱有一個(gè)平衡的心態(tài)，技術(shù)的發(fā)展也一定為孩子們的創(chuàng)新做出更多的貢獻(xiàn)。優(yōu)秀范例：Firstly,peopleneedsturdybodiesbydoingexercising,includingswimmingintheswimmingpoolorplayingfootballontheplaygrounds.Tobehealthy,peoplethencanpursuittheenjoymentfromthementaltoappreciateart.Secondly,notallpeopleenjoyartinfact,butallpeopleneedtodoexercises.Thepeoplewhoarenotfavorableoftheartbarelyentertheartmuseumsormusicperformancecenter.Butifgovernmentbuildsrecreationalfacilities,itbenefitsallcitizensforprovidingplacestoexercise.無(wú)老師中文翻譯：首先，人們通過在游泳池游泳，或者在場(chǎng)地里踢足球這樣的鍛煉形式來獲得強(qiáng)健的體魄。為了（心理）健康，人們還可以通過欣賞藝術(shù)品來獲得精神上的愉悅。第二點(diǎn)，實(shí)際上并不是所有人都喜歡欣賞藝術(shù)，但是幾乎所有人都需要鍛煉身體。對(duì)于那些根本不喜歡藝術(shù)的人，他們幾乎不回去藝術(shù)館或者音樂廳。但是如果政府建一些娛樂設(shè)施，這將會(huì)為所有人民提供一個(gè)鍛煉身體的地方。無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀范例：However,successdependsonmanyconditions,suchastime,hardworkandluck.Thelistgoesonandon.AsoneofthebooksbyBryanTracysays,thesuccessconsistsof21secrets.Nomatterwhateraoneisin,onehastotriesone’sbesttoworkatrighttimeatrightplacewithalittleluckinordertosucceed.Ifonelivestodaybutdoestakeaction,onewillendupnowherecertainly.無(wú)老師中文翻譯：但是，成功取決于很多因素，比如是否有時(shí)間，是否愿意努力工作，運(yùn)氣是否足夠好。這個(gè)單子，其實(shí)還可以很長(zhǎng)很長(zhǎng)。就像BryanTracy一本書里所說的，成功其實(shí)是包含了21個(gè)組成部分的。不管在哪一個(gè)時(shí)代，每一個(gè)人要想成功，都必須是在一個(gè)正確的時(shí)間，正確的地點(diǎn)，外加一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)運(yùn)氣，同時(shí)再加上百倍的努力才能成功。因此一個(gè)人住在今天這個(gè)不利的時(shí)代，哪怕付出全部努力，那么他將注定一事無(wú)成。無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀范例：Firstly,artmuseumsandmusicperformancecenterisnomoreimportantthanrecreationalfacilities.Admittedly,artmuseumsandmusicperformanceisofgreatimportance.Confucius,greatestChinesephilosopher,commented,“Arthelpsapersongetsabetterlife.”Togotoartmuseumstoappreciatethoseartworksandtogothemusicperformancecentertolistentosymphonyhelppeoplegetimprovementinmentallife.Butitdoesnotmeanthat

recreationalfacilitiestakethesecondplace.無(wú)老師中文翻譯：第一點(diǎn)，藝術(shù)館和音樂廳遠(yuǎn)比不上娛樂設(shè)施重要。我們必須承認(rèn)，藝術(shù)館和音樂廳也是有其自身的價(jià)值的?？鬃?，一個(gè)偉大的中國(guó)的哲學(xué)家，就曾經(jīng)說過：“藝術(shù)會(huì)賦予人更愉悅的生活”。去藝術(shù)館欣賞藝術(shù)品，和去音樂廳聆聽交響樂可以幫助我們改善自己的精神世界。但這并不意味著娛樂設(shè)施就沒有藝術(shù)館和音樂廳重要。無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀范例：Withtheimprovementoflivingstandardofmodernpeople,leisureactivitiesbecomemoreandmoreimportantforthem,suchasgotothemuseum,concert,orgotoswimwithfriendsandsoon.Thereisnodoubtthatgovernmentshouldgivesubsidiestosupportthosepublicactivities,butsomepeoplearguethatit’smoreimportantforthegovernmenttospendmoneytobuildartmuseumsandmusicperformancecenterthantobuildrecreationalfacilities.Idisagreewiththisopinion.中文翻譯：隨著現(xiàn)代人生活標(biāo)準(zhǔn)越來越高，休閑活動(dòng)對(duì)我們來說變得越來越重要了，比如說，逛博物館，欣賞音樂會(huì)，亦或者和朋友去游泳。政府應(yīng)該對(duì)于公眾活動(dòng)有補(bǔ)貼，但是另一些人則認(rèn)為政府應(yīng)該將錢投入到藝術(shù)館和音樂廳，而不是投到娛樂設(shè)施上。我不同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀范例：Getalifeoutsideofwork.Thisisvitaltobidingyourtimeinajobyouhate.Whenyouhaveanactivesociallifeoutsideoftheoffice,itbecomessomucheasiertotoleratemundaneorstressfulwork.Abalancedlifehelpstokeepthingsinperspective。無(wú)老師中文釋義：爭(zhēng)取獲得工作以外的生活這是在你痛恨的工作中等待良機(jī)的關(guān)鍵。當(dāng)你在辦公室以外獲得了積極的社會(huì)生活，忍受平淡或充滿壓力的工作就變得非常容易了。和諧的生活有助于保持對(duì)事物的洞察力。無(wú)老師優(yōu)秀范例：Expandyourskillset.Ifyou’reintherightcareer,criticallyexaminewhereyoumaybelackinginexperienceorqualifications.Ifyou’reweakatgivingpresentations,nowisthetimetojoinToastmasters.Thiswillimproveyourpublicspeakingabilityandeventuallyaddsolidachievementstoyourresume.Upgradeyourcredentials.Isthereacertificationofsomesortthatyoucanachieve?PerhapsitistimetoconsiderfinishingyourMBA。無(wú)老師中文釋義：擴(kuò)展你的技能，如果你有份合適的職業(yè)，那么，就精確地審視你可能缺乏的經(jīng)驗(yàn)或資格。如果你不善表達(dá)，那么，現(xiàn)在就該加入Toastmasters。這將有助于提高你在公共場(chǎng)合講話的能力，也將為你的簡(jiǎn)歷添上實(shí)在的業(yè)績(jī)。升級(jí)你的文憑。看看你能獲得哪種證明。也許是考慮完成你的MBA的時(shí)候了。開頭原文：Whatwe’vebeendebatinghereinWashingtonoverthelastfewweekswillaffectthelivesofthestudentshereandfamiliesallacrossAmericainpotentiallyprofoundways.Thisdebateoverbudgetsanddeficitsisaboutmorethanjustnumbersonapage;it’saboutmorethanjustcuttingandspending.It’saboutthekindoffuturethatwewant.It’saboutthekindofcountrythatwebelievein.Andthat’swhatIwanttospendsometimetalkingabouttoday.模板：Whatwe’vebeendebatinghereinXXXXXoverthelastXXXXXXXXXwillaffecttheXXXXXXXXXhereandXXXXXXXXXallacrossXXXXXXXXinXXXXXXXXXXX.ThisdebateoverXXXXXXXXXXisaboutmorethanjustnumbersonapage;it’saboutmorethanjustXXXXXXXXXXXXXX.It’saboutthekindoffuturethatwewant.It’saboutthekindofcountrythatwebelievein.Andthat’swhatIwanttospendsometimetalkingabouttoday.論證原文：Butthere’salwaysbeenanotherthreadrunningthroughourhistory-–abeliefthatwe’reallconnected,andthattherearesomethingswecanonlydotogether,asanation.Webelieve,inthewordsofourfirstRepublicanPresident,AbrahamLincoln,thatthroughgovernment,weshoulddotogetherwhatwecannotdoaswellforourselves.模板：Butthere’salwaysbeenanotherthreadrunningthroughourhistory-–abeliefthatXXXXXXXXXXX正面觀點(diǎn),andthattherearesomethingswecanonlydotogether,asXXXXXXXX.Webelieve,inthewordsofXXXXXXXXXX,（thatthroughXXXXXXXXX詞句可以忽略不用）,weshoulddotogetherwhatwecannotdoaswellforourselves.原文：Now,formuchofthelastcentury,ournationfoundawaytoaffordtheseinvestmentsandprioritieswiththetaxespaidbyitscitizens.模板：Now,formuchoftheXXXXXXXX一段具體時(shí)間,XXXXXXXfoundawaytoaffordtheseinvestmentsandprioritieswiththeXXXXXXXXXpaidbyXXXXXXXXX.原文：Butasfarbackasthe1980s,Americastartedamassingdebtatmorealarminglevels,andourleadersbegantorealizethatalargerchallengewasonthehorizon.模板：ButasfarbackastheXXXXXX,XXXXXXXXXXXXstartedXXXXXXXXatmorealarminglevels（此處寫得妙）,andXXXXXXXXbegantorealizethatalargerchallengewasonthehorizon.（寫得好有畫面感啊）原文：Tomeetthischallenge,ourleaderscametogetherthreetimesduringthe1990storeduceournation’sdeficit—threetimes.模板：TomeetthisXXXXXXX,somebodydosomethingthreetimesduringtheXXXXXXXtodosomething—threetimes.原文：Butwehavetodoitwithoutputtingatriskcurrentretirees,orthemostvulnerable,orpeoplewithdisabilities;withoutslashingbenefitsforfuturegenerations;andwithoutsubjectingAmericans’guaranteedretirementincometothewhimsofthestockmarket.

模板：ButwehavetodoitwithoutputtingatriskcurrentXXXXXX,orthemostvulnerable,orpeoplewithdisabilities;withoutslashingbenefitsforfuturegenerations;andwithoutsubjectingXXXXXXXX（某國(guó)家）guaranteedretirementincometothewhimsofthestockmarket.原文：Togiveyouanideaofhowmuchdamagethiscausedtoournation’scheckbook,considerthis:Inthelastdecade,ifwehadsimplyfoundawaytopayforthetaxcutsandtheprescriptiondrugbenefit,ourdeficitwouldcurrentlybeatlowhistoricallevelsinthecomingyears.模板：TogiveyouanideaofhowmuchXXXXXXXXthiscausedtoXXXXXXXXX,considerthis:Inthelastdecade,ifwehadsimplyfoundawaytoXXXXXXXXXX,ourXXXXXXXXXXwouldcurrentlybeatXXXXXXXXXXXXhistoricallevelsinthecomingyears.絕棒的舉例句！原文：Evenafteroureconomyrecovers,ourgovernmentwillstillbeontracktospendmoremoneythanittakesinthroughoutthisdecadeandbeyond.模板：EvenafterourXXXXXXXX,XXXXXXXXXwillstillbeontracktospendmoremoneythanittakesinthroughoutthisdecadeandbeyond.用于討論XXXXXXXX的恢復(fù)原文：Aboveall,itwillrequireustochooseavisionoftheAmericawewanttoseefiveyears,10years,20yearsdowntheroad.模板：Aboveall,XXXXXXXXXXXXXXwillrequireustochooseavisionoftheXXXXXXXXwewanttoseefiveyears,10years,20yearsdowntheroad.超好的最后一段的總結(jié)句。IfthereisanyoneouttherewhostilldoubtsthatAmericaisaplacewhereallthingsarepossible,whostillwondersifthedreamofourFoundersisaliveinourtime,whostillquestionsthepowerofourdemocracy,tonightisyouranswer.IfthereisanyoneouttherewhostilldoubtsthatXXXXX(論點(diǎn)一)isaXXXXXwhereallthingsarepossible,whostillwondersifthedreamofourXXXXX（論點(diǎn)二）isXXXXXinourtime,whostillquestionsthepowerofourXXXXX（論點(diǎn)三）,thisessayismyanswer.用于最后一段結(jié)尾，進(jìn)行總結(jié)

It’stheanswerspokenbyyoungandold,richandpoor,DemocratandRepublican,black,white,Hispanic,Asian,NativeAmerican,gay,straight,disabledandnotdisabled—(cheers)—Americanswhosentamessagetotheworldthatwehaveneverbeenjustacollectionofindividualsoracollectionofredstatesandbluestates;weareandalwayswillbetheUnitedStatesofAmerica.(Cheers,applause.)It’stheanswerspokenbyyoungandold,richandpoor,DemocratandRepublican,black,white,Hispanic,Asian,NativeAmerican,gay,straight,disabledandnotdisabled,thepeoplewhosentamessagetothequestionnaireconductedbytheXXXXXteamofStanforduniversity;alloftheseconcludedthesameresultthatXXXXX（觀點(diǎn)）.用于舉例It’stheanswerthat—thatledthosewho’vebeentoldforsolongbysomanytobecynicalandfearfulanddoubtfulaboutwhatwecanachievetoputtheirhandsonthearcofhistoryandbenditoncemoretowardthehopeofabetterday.It’sbeenalongtimecoming,buttonight,becauseofwhatwedidonthisday,inthiselection,atthisdefiningmoment,changehascometoAmerica.(Cheers,applause.)It’stheanswerthat—thatledthosewho’vebeentoldforsolongbysomanytobecynicalandfearfulanddoubtfulaboutXXXXX（正面觀點(diǎn)）toputtheirhandsonthearcofhistoryandbenditoncemoretowardthehopeofabetterday.It’sbeenalongtimecoming,atthisdefiningmoment,changehascometoourcultural.最后一段，正面觀點(diǎn)（段落開始結(jié)尾均可）Iwanttothankmypartnerinthisjourney,amanwhocampaignedfromhisheartandspokeforthemenandwomenhegrewupwithonthestreetsofScranton,androdewithonthetrainhometoDelaware,thevicepresident-electoftheUnitedStates,JoeBiden.(Cheers,applause.)PeoplewanttothankXXXXX（某人)intheirXXXXX（做了什么）,aman/womanwhocampaignedfromhisheartandspokeforthemenandwomenhegrewupwithonthestreets,androdewithonthetrainhometotinyvillagetoXXXXX（做了什么辛苦工作）.具體例子

Andtomycampaignmanager,DavidPlouffe—(cheers,applause)—theunsungheroofthiscampaignwhobuiltthebest—(cheers)—thebestpoliticalcampaignIthinkinthehistoryoftheUnitedStatesofAmerica—(cheers,applause)—tomychiefstrategist,DavidAxelrod—(cheers,applause)—whohasbeenapartnerwithmeeverystepoftheway,tothebestcampaignteameverassembledinthehistoryofpolitics—(cheers)—youmadethishappen,andIamforevergratefulforwhatyou’vesacrificedtogetitdone.(Cheers,applause.)AndtomyXXXXX,XXXXX（某人）whohasbeenapartnerwithmeeverystepofXXXXX某個(gè)過程,tothebestXXXXX（職位，比如說領(lǐng)隊(duì)?。〆verassembledinthehistoryofXXXXX（某事）whomadethishappen,andXXXXX（某人）willbeforevergratefulforwhatXXXXXhavesacrificedtogetitdone.描述某特定人或者人群的具體例子

Iwasneverthelikeliestcandidateforthisoffice.Wedidn’tstartwithmuchmoneyormanyendorsements.OurcampaignwasnothatchedinthehallsofWashington;itbeganinthebackyardsofDesMoinesandthelivingroomsofConcordandthefrontporchesofCharleston.Itwasbuiltbyworkingmenandwomenwhodugintowhatlittlesavingstheyhadtogive$5and$10and$20tothecause.(Cheers,applause.)Itgrewstrengthfromtheyoungpeoplewhorejectedthemythoftheirgeneration’sapathy—(cheers)—wholefttheirhomesandtheirfamiliesforjobsthatofferedlittlepayandlesssleep.Itdrewstrengthfromthenot-so-youngpeoplewhobravedthebittercoldandscorchingheattoknockonthedoorsofperfectstrangers,andfromthemillionsofAmericanswhovolunteeredandorganized,andprovedthatmorethantwocenturieslateragovernmentofthepeople,bythepeopleandforthepeoplehasnotperishedfromtheEarth.Thisisyourvictory.(Cheers,applause.)XXXXX（某事）wasbuiltbyworkingmenandwomenwhodugintowhatlittlesavingstheyhadtogive$5and$10and$20tothecause.具體例子XXXXX（某事）grewstrengthfromtheyoungpeoplewhorejectedthemythoftheirgeneration’sapathywholefttheirhomesandtheirfamiliesforjobsthatofferedlittlepayandlesssleep.具體例子XXXXX（某事）drewstrengthfromthenot-so-youngpeoplewhobravedthebittercoldandscorchingheattoknockonthedoorsofperfectstrangers,andfromthemillionsofXXXXX（某人）whovolunteeredandorganized,andprovedthatmorethantwocenturieslateragovernmentofthepeople,bythepeopleandforthepeoplehasnotperishedfromtheEarth.具體例子以上的三個(gè)例子，一定要單獨(dú)使用，千