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01002003004005001233042413644037429--4445--6465+Age--GroupWomenMenHeartAttacksperyear,USA下面是關(guān)于美國心臟病發(fā)病率和年齡性別關(guān)系的柱型圖表，據(jù)圖內(nèi)容寫100自左右的短文。

圖表table(graph/picture/pie/chart/diagram)table/form“一覽表”如：menwomen234783graph/picture/chart/diagrambarchartpiechartflowchartcurvediagramform

圖表作文的要求:一.該圖表的內(nèi)容（總體）——是關(guān)于什么的？二.該圖表的具體內(nèi)容——數(shù)據(jù)要準(zhǔn)確三.該圖表反應(yīng)的規(guī)律——結(jié)論(thousand)

01002003004005001233042413644037429--4445--6465+Age--GroupWomenMenHeartAttacksperyear,USA1.這是關(guān)于美國心臟病發(fā)病率和年齡性別關(guān)系的抽樣柱型圖表，該調(diào)查抽樣500000人。一審要點(diǎn)2435.男性易得心臟病，65歲以上女性患者增加。

二.譯要點(diǎn)1.這是關(guān)于美國心臟病發(fā)病率和年齡性別關(guān)系的抽樣柱型圖表，該調(diào)查抽樣500000人。Thegraphofasurveyin500000peopleshowshowageandgenderinfluencethefrequencyofheartattacksintheUSA.2.在29—44年齡組.女性心臟病患者不到6%(30000),可以忽略不計(jì),男性有123000人得心病。Thenumberofwomenwhosufferheartattacksinthisgroupisnegligible(maybeoverlooked).Lessthan6%ofallheart

attacksoccurinthe29-44agegroup---only30000peryear,comparedto123000men.3.在45—64年齡組.女性心臟病患者迅速增加，每年男的有424000人而女的有136000人。However,therate/proportion(比率)ofmenandwomensufferingfromheartattacksrisesdramaticallybetween45and64,with424000menand136000womenayear.4.在64歲以上的年齡組.女性心臟病患者迅速增加(374000人)，而男的患者上升慢(440000人)。Forthoseovertheageof65,thenumberofmenwithheartattacksincreasesslightly(440000inall)whilethereisahugeincreaseinthenumberofwomenvictimsofheartattacks(already374000).5.男性在各年齡段都易得心臟病，65歲以上女性患者增加。Inconclusion,menaremorelikelytobethevictimsofheartattacksatallages,butwomenareincreasinglylikelyovertheageof65.

三.連篇

Thegraphofasurveyin500000peopleshowshowageandgenderinfluencethefrequencyofheartattacksintheUSA.

Thenumberofwomenwhosufferheartattacksinthisgroupisnegligible(maybeoverlooked).

Lessthan6%ofallheartattacksoccurinthe29-44agegroup---only30000peryear,comparedto123000men.However,therate/proportion(比率)ofmenandwomensufferingfromheartattacksrisesdramaticallybetween45and64,with424000menand136000womenayear.

Forthoseovertheageof65,thenumberofmenwithheartattacksincreasesslightly(440000inall)whilethereisahugeincreaseinthenumberofwomenvictimsofheartattacks(already374000).

Inconclusion,menaremorelikelytobethevictimsofheartattacksatallages,butwomenareincreasinglylikelyovertheageof65.

1.數(shù)字number/figure/amount2.比率rate3.百分比percentage4.?threein/outoffour或threefourths5.30%thirtypercent；30%或thirtyin/outofonehundred

心臟病患者1.those/thepeoplewhosufferfromheartattacks2.those/thepeoplewhoareinfectedwithheartattacks3.those/thepeoplesufferingfromheartattacks4.those/thepeopleinfectedwithheartattacks5.those/thepeoplewith

heartattacks6.thevictimsofheartattacks

體會(huì)：1.對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)的處理2.表達(dá)的多樣化1.Lessthan6%ofallheartattacksoccurinthe29-44agegroup---only30000peryear,comparedto123000men.2.Therate

ofmenandwomensufferingfromheartattacksrisesdramaticallybetween45and64,with424000menand136000womenayear.3.Thenumberofmenwithheartattacksincreases

slightly(440000inall)

whilethereisahugeincreaseinthenumberofwomenvictimsofheartattacks(already374000).模板（一）

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下表是中國某大城市的住房擁有情況的調(diào)查，請(qǐng)描述變化、說明原因和個(gè)人看法。199420002009公有75%60%私有40%80%原因1.生活水平提高2.現(xiàn)在人與其父母的觀念不同，想擁有私房、享受生活。個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：該變化對(duì)社會(huì)發(fā)展影響大，有益于社會(huì)和個(gè)人。

Asisshowninthechart,theownershipofhousesinabigcity

inChinahaschangedinthepastfifteenyears.In1994,75%ofthehouses

werestate-owned.In2000,therateofstate-ownedhousestoprivate

oneswas3to2,whilesofar80%ofthehouseshavebeenprivate.

Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingforthechanges.Ontheonehand,since1994,thepeople'slivingstandardshave

beenimproving.Mostofthemcanaffordtobuythehouses.Ontheotherhand,thechangesareduetothefactthatmostpeopledonot

savealotofmoneyinthebankfortheirchildrenastheirideasofparentsdidinthepast.Theywanttohavetheirownhomeandenjoylife.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthepointofviewthatsuch

changeshavehadagreateffectonthedevelopmentofsociety.It

doesgoodtoboththecitizensandthegovernment.

Asisshowninthechart,theownershipofhousesinabigcity

inChinahaschangedinthepastfifteenyears.In1994,75%ofthehouses

werestate-owned.In2000,therateofstate-ownedhousestoprivate

oneswas3to2,whilesofar80%ofthehouseshavebeenprivate.

Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingforthechanges.Ontheonehand,since1994,thepeople'slivingstanda