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強(qiáng)化寫作筆記整第一 描述圖AHowvivid,intuitiveandthought-provokingthepictureisindescribingoneserioussocialproblem/acommonsocialphenomenon!Whatavivid,intuitiveandthought-provokingpictureitisindescribingoneserioussocialproblem/acommonsocialphenomenon!BCurrently,inpublic’seyesappearsapicture,whichhighlightsoneofthemostCurrently,inpublic’seyesappearsapicture,highlightingoneofthemostconcernedCBeingoneofthemostoutstandingpainters,VanGoghoncesaid:“Todrawistoreflecttherealworld.”andthepictureaboveperfectlyexpresseshiswords.Mr.ZhangDaqian,oneofthegreatestChinesepainters,saidinhisbiography:“Apictureisaworld,anydotorlineisallfromourlife.”andthepictureaboveperfectlyexpresseshisRegardedasoneoftheleadingphotographers,Mr.Rankinonceremarked:“Aphotographisamirrorofoursociety”andthephotoaboveperfectlyexpresseshiswords.二、第二句(五大分句1,23,4分句一As+1＋and2＋shown替換詞＋inthepictureItis+1＋and2＋shown替換詞＋inthepictureaboveWhatis+1＋and2＋shown替換詞+inthepictureis副詞 分句二分句三結(jié)構(gòu):,（feeling+adj.+and+adj.to分句四結(jié)構(gòu)分句五結(jié)構(gòu)with+n.(靜態(tài))+介詞短語(位置,with+n.(動(dòng)態(tài))+ng/done…(動(dòng)作,throughwhichthemeaningisshownintheChinesecharacters+位置themeaningofwhichisdemonstratedintheChinesecharacters+,themeaningofwhichcanbeinferredfromtheChinesecharacters+thatwherethereis詞,thereisabrightfutureforus.Undoubtedly,whatthedrawerintendstorevealisnotmerelythepictureItisdoubtthatthedrawerdoesnotintendtorevealmerelythepictureItisoutofquestionthattheinnerintentiongoesfarthepicture多圖作Howvivid,intuitiveandthought-provokingthepicturesareinWhatvivid,intuitiveandthought-provokingpicturestheyareinCurrently,inpublic’seyesappearapairofpictures,whichhighlightC…andthepicturesaboveperfectlyexpresshisAs+1＋and2＋shown替換詞＋inthefirst/upper/leftpicture分句二圖畫Howeverwhatwecanseeinthesecondpictureisthat+1with/without+Contrarytotheformeroneevidentchangesemergewhenitcomestothesecondpicturethat+1+with/without+2.Presentinganotheroppositescene,thesecondpictureshowsanotherentirelydifferentsituationthat+1+with/without+2.Likewise,whatwecanseeinthesecondpictureisthat…conduct(s)thesimilarUndoubtedly,whatthedrawerintendstorevealisnotmerelythepictures第二 分析現(xiàn)結(jié)構(gòu):引出句+主旨Theintention/purposeofthedrawing(s)istorevealthat詞isquitevitaltous/ourSimplebutprofoundasthedrawingis,theinnersensehidesbehinditthat詞isquitevitaltous/oursociety.Howeverdiversetheouterformisthepictureservesasamirrorwhichreflectsacommonsocialphenomenoninourcontemporarysocietythat詞playsasignificantroleforus.結(jié)構(gòu)Ontheonehand,萬能理由1Ontheotherhand,萬能理由類01.類萬能理由1：經(jīng)濟(jì)Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomyandfiercesocialcompetitions,詞（文化交流/）hascountedformuchforthegrowthofanation(文化類)/anindividual（類Withtheboomandburstofeconomyandfiercesocialcompetitionsfollowing,hasfar-reachinginfluenceontheprogressandgrowthofanation/anWitheconomydevelopment,globalizationandmodernizationgettingmoreandmoreuniversal,whichalsobroughtaboutfiercesocialcompetitions,詞,asadrivingforceorimpetusfortheprogressandgrowthofanation/anindividual,isquiteimportant.萬能理由2：社會(huì)Ourmodernsocietyhasencounteredhugechanges,inwhich現(xiàn)象(文化交流/問題emergedandbroughtgood/badGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourmodernsociety,while/whereassomerelevantaspectsfollowthisstep,suchas+現(xiàn)象,whichworkssomewhatpositively/negatively.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourmodernsociety,afterwhichcamesomerelevantaspects,suchas+現(xiàn)象,generatingpositive/negativeconsequence.萬能理由3：傳統(tǒng)Theadvantageofschooleducationisbookknowledgeandexam,whichignoresoverallaspects,suchaslackof詞(/正面現(xiàn)象).Theadvantageofschooleducationisbookknowledgeandexam,byreasonofwhichseveralproblemsfallbehind,thuslackof詞haseserious/severe.Theadvantageoftraditionaleducationistovalueinlectandbasicskills,andherecomesthe ingthattoomuchemphasisontheseignoresoverallaspectsleadingtolackof詞.Countlessasthereasonsare,thosementionedabovearethemostWerethesefactorsnottakenintoaccount,theissuewouldnot intoNomatterhowcomplextheysesmayappear,whatwetakeintoaccountherecanexplainwhethertheissueisimportant.第三 個(gè)人評(píng)ABasedontheysisabove,someeffectiveandefficientmeasuresshouldbeBTakingtheysisaboveintoaccount,itishightimethatwetooksomeeffectiveandefficientmeasures.CBetheissueobviousor mon,realizedorunknown,simpleordeep,necessarymeasuresshouldbetaken.類類個(gè)人萬能措施AOurernmentshouldmakeuprelatedlawsandregulationstoput詞(文化交流/正面現(xiàn)象)intopractice.Bernmentsordepartmentsconcernedhavethedutytoenactandcarryoutlawsandregulationsinordertopromote詞.Cernmentsordepartmentsconcernedhavethedutytoenactandcarryoutlawsandregulationslest詞facecertainobstacles.萬能措施2：個(gè)AItisimportantthatsocialmembersrealizetheweight/seriousnessofthisissue,andactBAllwalksoflifemustfacetheissuesoconsciouslythatduethoughtsaswellasactionsshouldbeputintopractice.CSoconsciouslymustallwalksoflifefacetheissuethatduethoughtsaswellasactionsshouldbeputintopracti