Module 8作文課件 外研版英語(yǔ)八年級(jí)上冊(cè)

M8accident課前引入Lead-inAnalysisofTeachingSubjectModule8Accident句子翻譯:Iwasplayingcomputergameswhenmyfathergothome.課前引入Lead-inReadingthepassageandanswerthequestionItwasrainingheavilyasNancywaswalkingupthehilltowardsthestationatsixo'clockonaSaturdaymorning.Atthisearlyhourtherewasn'tmuchtrafficorpeople.Justasshewascrossingtheroadnearthetopofthehill,acarcameroundthecorner.Itwastravellingveryfast.Suddenlyithitalamppost(路燈桿)andturnedover.Sherantothecartohelpthedriveratonce.Hewasbadlyhurtandtherewasalotofbloodonhisface.課前引入Lead-inAnalysisofTeachingSubjectManypeoplecametoseewhathadhappened,buttherewasnothingtheycoulddo.Ayoungwomanhurriedtothestationtoaskforanambulance.Apolicemanarrivedafewminuteslater.Hecarefullyinvestigated(調(diào)查)theaccident.Afterawhiletheambulancearrivedandtookthedrivertothehospital.課前引入Lead-inReadingthepassageandanswerthequestion(

)1.Thedriverwasdrivingfastwhenthecar________．A．stoppedB．hitalamppostandturnedoverC．camearoundthecornerD．reachedthetop(

)2.Ayoungwomanhurriedtothestationand________．A．phonedforanambulanceB．phonedforthepoliceC．phonedforpeopletocomeforhelpD．gotonthetrain課前引入Lead-inAnalysisofTeachingSubject(

)3.Manypeoplecame________．A．buttheycoulddonothingB．a(chǎn)ndtheyhelpedthedriveroutofthecarC．a(chǎn)ndtheysentthedrivertothehospitalatonceD．tolookafterthedriver寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)PredictionofWriting請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“AnAccident”為題寫(xiě)一篇文章，描述一起事故。70詞左右。

昨天下午，當(dāng)你正走在路上時(shí)，看見(jiàn)一位老人被一輛從拐角處駛出的摩托車(chē)撞倒。事故原因是摩托車(chē)司機(jī)開(kāi)車(chē)速度過(guò)快，來(lái)不及剎車(chē)。有人打電話報(bào)警并叫了救護(hù)車(chē)，最后警察和摩托車(chē)司機(jī)一起把老人送到了醫(yī)院。參考詞匯：摩托車(chē)motorbike；撞倒knockover；救護(hù)車(chē)ambulanceItwasgoingfast,anditdidn’tstop,...alwaystoldmetobecareful,butIdidn’tlistento...Aftertheaccident,...careful.寫(xiě)作預(yù)測(cè)PredictionofWriting思維圖體裁記敘文話題描述一起事故時(shí)態(tài)一般過(guò)去時(shí)和過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)人稱第一、三人稱段落布局開(kāi)頭：交代事故發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及人物。主體：描述事故發(fā)生的原因和經(jīng)過(guò)。結(jié)尾：可抒發(fā)一下自己的感想。YesterdayafternoonwhenIwas..,Isawanaccident.開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題詳細(xì)描述抒發(fā)感想Whentheoldmanwas...Themotorbikewassofast...Someonecalled...Thepoliceandthedriver...AndIalsohopealldriverscandrivemorecarefully.模模塊專題聚焦寫(xiě)作思路：切忌逐字翻譯避免中式英語(yǔ)選擇熟悉句型

（1）開(kāi)頭開(kāi)頭：交代事故發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及人物。如何表達(dá)“昨天下午，當(dāng)你正走在路上時(shí)，事故發(fā)生”e.g.轉(zhuǎn)化為“當(dāng)我沿著街走時(shí)，我看到一起事故?！眳⒖荚~匯：摩托車(chē)motorbike；撞倒knockover；救護(hù)車(chē)ambulanceIsawanaccident.Iwaswalkingalongthestreet.用when將以上兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并成一個(gè)復(fù)合句：WhenIwaswalkingalongthestreet,Isawanaccident.

（2）敘述事件過(guò)程：拆分句：看見(jiàn)一位老人被一輛從拐角處駛出的摩托車(chē)撞倒。(1)當(dāng)一位老人在穿馬路的時(shí)候，一輛摩托車(chē)突然出現(xiàn)在拐角處(2)摩托車(chē)開(kāi)得太快了，沒(méi)有辦法、及時(shí)停下來(lái)。(3)老人被它撞倒了。拆分方法：要點(diǎn)：

(1)當(dāng)一位老人在穿馬路的時(shí)候，一輛摩托車(chē)突然出現(xiàn)在拐角處

如何拓展？盡量具體e.g.Whenanoldmanontheothersidewascrossingtheroad,amotorbikesuddenly

appeared

roundthecorner.

要點(diǎn)：(2)摩托車(chē)開(kāi)得太快了，沒(méi)有辦法、及時(shí)停下來(lái)。如...

e.g.Themotorbikewassofastthatitcouldn’tstopintime.（3）總結(jié)全文，點(diǎn)明主旨，表達(dá)祝愿Ihopetheoldmanwillbebettersoon.AndIalsohopealldriverscandrivemorecarefully.（均可）范文AnAccidentYesterdayafternoonwhenIwaswalkingalongtheroad,Isawanaccident.Whenanoldmanontheothersidewascrossingtheroad,amotorbikesuddenlyappearedroundthecorner.Themotorbikewassofastthatitcouldn’tstopintime.Theoldmanwasknockedoverbyit.Someonecalled110and120.Soon,thepoliceandtheambulancearrived.Thepoliceandthedrivertooktheoldmantothehospitalatlast.Ihopetheoldmanwillbebettersoon.AndIalsohopealldriverscandrivemorecarefully.牛刀小試

上周五，在我放學(xué)回家的路上，我看到一群人橫穿馬路。一個(gè)志愿者上前勸阻，但沒(méi)有人聽(tīng)。相反，他們跑著闖紅燈。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示描述故事發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)并談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示詞：jaywalk亂穿馬路；runtheredlight闖紅燈注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。LastFridayafternoon,whenIwasonmywayhomefromschool,Isawagroupofpeoplejaywalkingatthecrossing.Avolunteertriedtostopthem，butnobodylistenedtohim.Instead,theyrantheredlightquickly.Justthen,abuscame.Oneofthemwasnearlyhitbytherunningbus.Inmyopinion,jaywalkingisbadbehavior.Itputsnotonlyourselvesbut