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雅思寫作Task-1新浪微博:@杜仕明-學為貴2023/1/14G
類–書信寫作A
類–圖表作文150詞+大約20分鐘+占到總分值1/32023/1/14對于參加GeneralTraining(移民類)雅思考試的考生來說,Task1的寫作任務是完成一封書信。題目中給出一個背景話題,然后要求考生完成題目中給出的三個要求。書信寫作的高分關鍵在于:1.編故事的能力要出色,能寫出一個連貫合理的故事;2.文字表達不需要過于學術,但是要偏向地道表達;3.注意書信寫作的時態(tài),有可能在一篇文章里使用超過5種時態(tài)。2023/1/14
書信內容介紹書信寫作的內容包括很寬的范圍:1.
道歉;2.
感謝;3.
投訴;4.
建議;5.
申請;6.
邀請;7.
介紹;8.尋求幫助2023/1/14下面這封郵件來自于鐵路公司官方。雖然和考試的內容不是完全一樣,但是結構和用語都很恰當。2023/1/142023/1/14
書信格式介紹1).最好是左邊對齊,每段之間空一整行;2).稱呼—Dear名字/頭銜/SirorMadam;3).結尾部分一定需要比較禮貌的收尾:kindregards-sincerely/faithfully-lotsoflove2023/1/14
書信內容風格1).第一段通常簡單開頭—Iamwritingthisletterto介紹寫信的目的;2).正文的分段沒有固定要求—一般來說題目會給出一件事的大概介紹,然后要求完成三個具體的任務。3).結尾部分一般需要表示感謝或者提出要求Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould…….Myrequestisthat……Iwillbelookingforwardtoyourreply.2023/1/142023/1/14DearJason,
Iamwritingthislettertoapologizeforwhathavehappenedthesedays.Iamreallysorryaboutthenoisefrommydog.
Lastweek,mysistersentherdog,Frank,tousaskingmetobeapuppy-sitterfortwoweekswhileshewasinChinaforhoneymoon.IwastoldthatFrankhadbeendoingwellandbarelymadetroubleformysister.Unfortunately,itisclearthatthedogdoesnotlikehistemporaryhomepossiblybecauseitisthefirsttimethathelivesinaplacethatisunfamiliartohim.
Iknowthatyoumusthavebeenannoyedbythebarkingofthedogalldaylong,soIamgoingtofixit.SendingFranktothepethouseinthecommunitymaybeagoodsolution.There,hecandowhateverhewantswhileleavingothersinpeace.
Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.
Sincerelyyours
JeremyLin2023/1/142023/1/14DearDave,
Iamwritingtoletyouknowthatatlastwehavemovedtoabiggerhouse!Wejustcouldn'tgoonlivinginthetwo-bedroombungalownowthatthetwinsaregrowingupandthenewbabyhasarrived.Sowestartedlooking—andonethingledtoanotherandfinallyhereweareinournewhome.
Iamsureyouwilllikeit.Wehavethreebedroomsnow,andaverymodernbathroomandkitchen.Thekidsarehappybecausethereismuchmorespacewiththebiglivingroomandthegardenoutside.ButMichelisthehappiestofallbecausehedoesn'tneedtodomuchdecorating.
Whydon'tyoucomeroundthisweekendandseewhatyouthinkofournewplace?Wewouldalllovetoseeyouandiftheweatherisgoodwecanhaveabarbecueinthegarden.
Ournewaddressandphonenumberarebelow,sogiveusacallandletusknowwhentoexpectyou.
Lotsoflove
Francoise2023/1/14圖表作文得高分來自于兩個能力精準的句子表達和詞匯選擇(理解和模仿翻譯練習的句子)宏觀看圖表的能力,而不是數(shù)據(jù)流水賬的描述(無論任何圖表,在overall段落寫出2-3個宏觀特征,有了這個段落保你7分)2023/1/14Task1--圖表作文的句子也滿足4+3基本原則1.主謂賓2.主系表3.Therebe名詞4.Itis……(圖表作文里很少用到)2023/1/14用介詞短語來擴展句子
(介詞短語)主句(介詞短語)ThereisasubstantialdifferencebetweentheUKandtheUS
intermsof
theirconsumptionofbeef.
Asforthesmokingrateoffemales,therewasasubstantialgrowthduringthe20-yearperiod,risingfrom8%in1990to20%in2010.Despitesomeinitialfluctuation,from1995therewasasteadyincrease.TheUSwillcontinuetorelyonfossilfuels,withsustainableandnuclearenergysourcesremainingrelativelyinsignificant.ThepopulationofSingaporeisabout4million,withChineseaccountingfor3quarters.2023/1/14用讓步狀語從句來增加對比能力(狀語從句)主句(狀語從句)Althoughtheproportionofpeoplebuyingclassicalmusicwas17%,itwasjusthalfofthefiguresfortheothertwotypesofmusic.Nationalandinternationalfixedlinecallsgrewsteadilyfrom37to62,thoughthegrowthslowedoverthelasttwoyears.
2023/1/14
修飾名詞的能力能避免重復基礎句型里的名詞被充分修飾
1.Therewasasignificantincreaseintheamountofmoneyspentonbooksandfurniture.2.Thepercentageofmaleswhobuypopandrockmusicishigherthanthatoffemales.3.Thosefamiliesconsistingofoneparentorasingleadultweremostlikelytoliveinpoverty.4.ThechartshowsthetimespentbyUKresidentsondifferenttypesoftelephonecallsbetween1995and2002.
2023/1/14在句尾用分詞短語來進行跟進一步的內容描述主句,doing.....(分詞用來詳細說明)變化:Theproportionofpopulationagedover60sawanupwardtrend,risingfrom11%in1990to30%in2005.對比:Chinesetouristsspentthelargestamountofmoneyonshopping,accountingfor74%oftheirtotalspending.
2023/1/14對于參加A類考試的同學,你們被要求在Task1完成對一個圖表的描述。Linegraph線圖Barchart柱狀圖Piechart餅圖Table表格圖Diagram地圖或者流程2023/1/14
重要的事情說三遍請不要按照圖形分類,因為圖表之間是interchangeable的?。。?.100%完全對比圖(沒有時間變化)2.20%對比+80%變化圖(有時間變化)2023/1/14
簡單對比圖—只出現(xiàn)在混合圖表里,機會很小
不靠分析,靠句型,寫流水賬。(這部分可以先跳過,往后看復雜的對比圖表,從33頁開始)2023/1/142023/1/14Coke的全球銷量達到了17.1billion,其中北美洲有最大的比率,是30.4%,而非洲和中東地區(qū)只有7%。在其他三個地區(qū)中,拉丁美洲有相對較高的銷售比率,達到25.7%,然后是歐洲20.5%和亞洲16.4%。2023/1/14ThetotalsalesofCokewas17.1billionbottlesin2000,withNorthAmericahavingthelargestproportionat34%,comparedtoonly7%inAfricaandMiddleEast.Intheotherthreeregions,LatinAmericahadarelativelyhigherpercentage(25.7%),followedbyEurope(20.5%)andAsia(16.4%).2023/1/142023/1/14很明顯,中國游客的錢主要花在了購物上,占到71.2%,而食物的花費才只有1.2%?;ㄔ趭蕵泛陀^光方面的錢很相近,分別占到12.9%和11.6%。其他方面的花費占到3.1%。2023/1/14ItisobviousthatChinesetouristsspentmostoftheirmoneyonshoppingaccountingforasmuchas71.2%,comparedtoonly1.2%onfood.Theamountspentonentertainmentandsightseeingvariedslightly,with12.9%and11.6%respectively.Theremaining3.1%wasspentonotheritems.2023/1/14簡單對比圖一般出現(xiàn)在混合圖表中。混合圖表里的兩個圖一般都是分開描述,如果有一些內在的聯(lián)系,只需要在結尾段點出來就好了。2023/1/142023/1/14復雜對比圖—這才是考試的重點在這種圖表里,你沒有機會使用任何一個變化相關的詞匯和句子。不論對比圖表里出現(xiàn)了多少個數(shù)據(jù),你的任務總是從中提煉出2-3個宏觀特征。這些特征包括:哪一組最高,哪一組最低,兩組之間是相似還是相差的關系,最大差值/最小差值(特殊圖表的情況下)。2023/1/14Thetablebelowgivesinformationonconsumerspendingondifferentitemsinfivedifferentcountriesin2002.2023/1/14ThetableillustratestheproportionofnationalexpenditureinIreland,Italy,Spain,SwedenandTurkeyonthreetypesofconsumeritemsin2002.Overall,thecategoryofconsumergoodsthatallcountriesspentmostonwasfood,drinksandtobacco,whichwasthreetimeshigherthanontheothertypesofgoods.Thelowestspendingcouldbeseeninthecategoryofleisureandeducationinallfivecountries.Intermsoffood,drinksandtobacco,Turkeyspentthemostat32.14%.TheexpenditureofIrelandwasalsohigh(28.91%)comparedtoSwedenwhichspenttheleast(15.77%).SpainandItalyspent18.80%and16.36%respectively.Ontheotherhand,thelowestexpenditurewasonleisureandeducationwhichaccountedforunder5%inallcountries.Turkeyspentmostontheseitemsatjust4.35%oftheirnationalexpenditurewhichisarounddoublethatofSpain(1.98%).Clothingandfootwearwasthethirdcategoryofconsumergoodsandoutlaysforthoseitemswerebetween9%inItalyand5.40%inSweden.Thenationalspendinginthisareafortheremainingcountriesaveragedaround6.5%.2023/1/14ThechartbelowshowstheamountspentonsixconsumergoodsinfourEuropeancountries.2023/1/142023/1/142023/1/14Thebarchartillustrateshowmanychildren,dividedbygender,playedsixkindsofsports(tennis,badminton,cycling,swimming,footballandhockey)inatowninEnglandin2012.Overall,thenumberof
boysplayingsportexceededthatofgirlsinthegivenperiodandthesportwiththemostsignificantdifferencebetweenthegenderswasfootball.Footballwasalsothemostpopularsportforboyswhilethemajorityofgirlspreferredswimming.Furthermore,bothmalesandfemalesleastpreferredplayinghockey.Therewerefoursportsinwhichboysparticipatedmorethangirls.While60boysplayedfootball,thenumberofgirlsplayingthatsportwasconsiderablylower(around20).
Withregardstotennis,thefigureforboyswhoplayedthatsportwas50asopposedtojustunder40forgirls.Similarly,moreboyscycledthangirls(approximately35and20respectively).Thedifference,intermsofhockey,wasminimalwithonlyabout5moreboysplayingthatsportthangirls.Ontheotherhand,moregirlstookpartinthetworemainingsportswhichbothshowedadifferenceofabout10betweenthegenders.Asmanyas50girlspreferredswimmingincomparisonto40girlsforbadminton.2023/1/14新浪微博:@杜仕明-學為貴ThegraphsbelowshowthetypesofmusicalbumspurchasedbypeopleinBritainaccordingtos3xandage.2023/1/14Thesechartsmakecomparisonsamongthreekindsofmusicabouttheirpopularitybetweenmalesandfemalesandamongfourdifferentagegroups.
Overall,itisclearthatmalesaremorewillingtobuymusicalbumsthanfemales.Moderntypesofmusicaremorepopularamongpeopleunder45,whileclassicalmusicismainlypurchasedbythoseover45.
Intermsofthepercentageofmaleandfemalebuyers,wecanseethattheproportionoftheformerishigherthanthatofthelatterinallkindsofmusic.Tobemorespecific,thefiguresforbuyersofpopandrockmusicaresimilarwith28%ofmalesand18%offemales.Classicalmusicispurchasedbyonly9%ofmenand7%ofwomen.
Whenitcomestothemusicpreferenceofdifferentagegroups,itcanbenoticedthatpopandrockmusichaveextremelysimilarpatternsofpurchasingandaremuchmorepopularamongyoungerbuyers.Specifically,theproportionofmusicbuyersaged25-34isthehighest(32%),followedbythatofpeoplebetween16and24(30%)andthatofbuyersaged35-44(26%).Bycontrast,classicalmusicisgenerallytheleastpopularchoice,mainlypurchasedbypeopleover45withapproximately20%.Thepercentages
ofpeopleaged16-24and35-44areminimal,atabout1%and3%respectively.2023/1/14Thechartbelowshowsthedifferentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationinAustraliaandtheproportionofmenandwomenwhoheldthemin1999.2023/1/142023/1/14新浪微博:@杜仕明-學為貴2023/1/14ThetablebelowtheproportionofdifferentcategoriesoffamilieslivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.2023/1/14ThechartbelowshowstheamountofmoneyperweekspentonfastfoodsinBritain.Thegraphshowsthetrendsinconsumptionoffastfoods.2023/1/14
變化趨勢圖變化圖表相對簡單,整個過程的核心一定是變化的內容。每個元素單獨描述或者按相似/相反的方法分組。變化趨勢圖一定要按照時間描述,不要跳躍或者從后往前寫變化圖表的overall段落里一般20%的對比特征和80%的變化特征。上升組–下降組–起伏波動組–很少變化組–最大/最小組2023/1/142023/1/14
變化趨勢圖ThegraphillustratesthechangesintheproportionsofradiolistenersandTVviewersthroughouttheaveragedayfromOctobertoDecember1992intheUK.Overall,morepeopletendedtolistentoradiointhemorning,whilethepopularityofwatchingTVwassignificantlygreaterintheafternoonandevening.Peopletendedtodoneitherinthenightandearlymorning.Lookingfirstattheradioaudience,itwasconsiderablyhigherbeforenoon.Specifically,7%oftheBritishwerelisteningtoradioat6a.m.Thisradioaudienceincreaseddramaticallyinthenext3hoursandpeakedatnearly30%ataround9a.m.Afterthat,therewasasteadydecreaseuntil2a.m.ofthenextdaywhenitreachedaminimallevelwhichremainedconstantforthenextfourhours.AsforTVviewers,afterstartingataroundzeroviewersat6am,thepercentageofTVviewersintheUKwaslessthan7%untilnoon.Afterthat,TVviewingbegantogainpopularityanditwasat1p.m.thatthepercentageofTVaudiencesovertookthatofradiolisteners.Thegreatestgrowthcanbeseenbetween3p.m.and8p.m.,duringwhichtimetheaudiencemorethantripled.Afterpeakingatroughly50%,itwitnessedarapiddeclineuntil2a.m.ofthenextday.Overthelastfourhours,veryfewpeoplewatchedTV.
2023/1/14Thechartshowsthetotalnumberofminutes(inbillions)oftelephonecallsintheUK,dividedintothreecategories,from1995-20022023/1/142023/1/14ThegraphbelowshowstheconsumptionoffishanddifferentkindsofmeatinaEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.2023/1/14Thegraphshowshowmuchfishandmeat(chicken,beef,andlamb)wereconsumedbytheaveragepersoninaparticularEuropeancountryfrom1979to2004ingramsperweek(gpw).Overall,consumptionofalltypesofmeatdeclinedwiththeexceptionofchicken,whichshowedasteadyincreaseinpopularity.Chickenreplacedbeefasthemostpopularmeat,whilefishremainedtheleastconsumedthroughouttheperiod.Atthestartoftheperiod,beefwasthemostpopularmeat,withover200gpwbeingconsumedbytheaverageperson.Atthesametime,consumptionofchickenandlambstoodatabout150gpw,whilethatoffishwasmuchlower,at60gpw.Thereafter,individualchickenconsumptionrosesteadily,finishingtheperiodat250gpw,whileincontrast,personaldemandforbeefandlambsawconsistentdeclines,despitebeefpeakingataround240gpwin1984.Bytheendoftheperiod,theirrespectivelevelsofconsumptionhadfallentoaround100and60gpw.Withregardtofish,itwastheleastpopularatalltimes,fallingfrom60gpweatenbyatypicalpersoninthiscountryin1979,to40gpwin2004.2023/1/14ThethreepiechartsbelowshowthechangesinannualspendingbyaparticularUKschoolin1981,1991,and2001.2023/1/14ThechartsshowhowmuchaUKschoolspentondifferentrunningcostsinthreeseparateyears:1981,1991and2001.Inallthreeyears,thegreatestexpenditurewasonstaffsalaries.Butwhileotherworkers'salariessawafallfrom28%in1981toonly15%ofspendingin2001,teachers'payremainedthebiggestcost,reaching50%oftotalspendingin1991andendingat45%in2001.2023/1/14Expenditureonresourcessuchasbookshadincreasedto20%by1991beforedecreasingtoonly9%bytheendoftheperiod.Incontrast,thecostoffurnitureandequipmentsawanoppositetrend.Thiscostdecreasedtoonly5%oftotalexpenditurein1991butrosedramaticallyin2001whenitrepresented23%oftheschoolbudget.Similarly,thecostofinsurancesawarisingtrend,growingfromonly2%to8%by2001.Overall,teachers'salariesconstitutedthelargestcosttotheschool,andwhilespendingincreaseddramaticallyforequipmentandinsurance,therewerecorrespondingdropsinexpenditureonthingssuchasbooksandonotherworkers'salaries.2023/1/14Thegraphbelowgivesinformationfroma2008reportaboutconsumptionofenergyintheUSAsince1980withprojectionsuntil2030.2023/1/142023/1/142023/1/14ThebarchartillustrateshowmanyhoursadolescentsinChesterspentonsevenactivitieseachweekbetween2002and2007.
Overall,themostpopularactivityovertheperiodgivenwaswatchingTV,whereasbowlingwastheleastfavourite.Goingtopubsanddiscos,watchingTVandshoppingallshowedanincreaseinthenumberofhoursteenagersspentontheseactivities.Theotherpursuitsshowedadecreaseinhours,exceptwatchingDVD’swhichfluctuated.
2023/1/14Teenagersspent25hoursonwatchingtelevisionin2002whichincreasedtoalmost40hoursinthefinalyear.Bothgoingtopubsanddiscos,andshoppingmorethandoubledinhoursfromover5toover15andfromover5toexactly15respectively.
Whileteenagersoccupied10hoursdoinghomeworkin2002,thisfiguredroppedtojustover5in2007.Playingsportfellmoredramaticallyfrom10hourstoaround3hours.Bowlingwasunder5hoursthroughouttheentireperioddecliningbyabout4hoursintotal.ThenumberofhoursteenagersdedicatedtowatchingDVD’swasonly10hoursinfirstandfinalyears,butreachedapeakofover15hoursin2004and2005.2023/1/14ThechartsbelowgiveinformationontheagesofthepopulationsofYemenandItalyIn2000andprojectionsfor2050.2023/1/146分的范文2023/1/14
混合圖表題
2023/1/141.兩個圖表分開寫;2.同樣需要overall;Thegraphsbelowgiveinformationaboutcomputerownershipasapercentageofthepopulationbetween2002and2010,andbylevelofeducationfortheyears2002and2010.2023/1/14Thebarchartsshowdataaboutcomputerownership,withafurtherclassificationbylevelofeducation,from2002to2010.
Asteadybutsignificantrisecanbeseeninthepercentageofthepopulationthatownedacomputerovertheperiod.Justoverhalfthepopulationownedcomputersin2002,whereasby2010threeoutoffourpeoplehadahomecomputer.
Ananalysisofthedatabylevelofeducationshowsthathigherlevelsofeducationcorrespondtohigherlevelsofcomputerownershipinbothofthoseyears.In2002,onlyaround15%ofthosewhodidnotfinishhighschoolhadacomputerbutthisfigurehadtrebledby2010.Therewerealsoconsiderableincreases,ofapproximately30percentagepoints,forthosewithahighschooldiplomaoranunfinishedcollegeeducation(reaching65%and85%respectivelyin2010).However,graduatesandpostgraduatesprovedtohavethegreatestlevelof
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