商務(wù)英語翻譯5凝練翻譯法

TheWorldTradeOrganizationupheldtodayitsrulingagainstthesteeltariffsimposedbyPresidentBushlastyear,givingthegreenlighttoEuropetoimposemorethan$2billionofsanctionsagainsttheUnitedStates.EmboldenedbyaWorldTradeOrganization

ruling,Japan,SouthKoreaandtheEuropeanUnion

onTuesdaydemandedtheUnitedStatesimmediatelydropitsdutiesonimportedsteelorfacethepossibilityofbillionsofdollarsinretaliation.第四章

凝練翻譯法教學(xué)要點與要求1.什么是凝練翻譯法2.凝練翻譯法的適用范圍英漢翻譯中的凝練翻譯法Theretailersperformmanyfunctions.First,

hemayprovideaconvenientlocation.Also,he

oftenguaranteesandservicesthemerchandisehesells.Third,theretaileraidsinpromotingtheproduct,oftenthroughdisplaysandadvertising.Fourth,theretailersmayfinancethecustomerbyextendingcredit.Further,theretailerperformsstoragefunctioninhisoutlet,byhavinggoodsavailable.零售商還發(fā)揮學(xué)多功能。其一，（）可提供便利的場地；其二，（）對他所經(jīng)銷的商品提供擔(dān)保和服務(wù)；其三，（）幫助促銷產(chǎn)品，經(jīng)常進(jìn)行商品展示活動和發(fā)布廣告；其四，（）為顧客提供信貸。另外，由于供貨及時，零售商還可發(fā)揮其商店的倉儲功能。

在英譯漢時，應(yīng)該避免在句子里過多使用代詞和連接詞。Helikestopointoutotherpeople’sshortcomings,buthemeanswell.

他喜歡指出別人的缺點，但用意是好的。Thislittleboyalwayswasheshishandsbeforemealsandthendriesthemwithnapkins.

這個小男孩飯前都洗手，然后用餐巾紙擦干。Thesunisbright,andtheskyisclear.

陽光燦爛，（和）晴空萬里。(1)CuttingpronounsCuttingthepronounassubject根據(jù)漢語習(xí)慣，后句主語若與前句相同，不必重復(fù)出現(xiàn)。e.g.Butit’sthewayIam,andtryasImight,Ihaven’tbeenabletochangeit.。2.泛指人稱代詞作主語時，即便是第一個主語，也往往省略掉。e.g.Youcannevertell. e.g.Weeattolive,butnotlivetoeat. e.g.Anyonewhodoesnotrecognizethisfactisnotamaterialist.

(1)CuttingpronounsButit’sthewayIam,andtryasImight,Ihaven’tbeenabletochangeit.—不過我就是這個脾氣，雖然竭力想改，終究還是改不了。e.g.Youcannevertell. —很難說。e.g.Weeattolive,butnotlivetoeat. —吃飯是為了活著，可活著不是為了吃飯。

e.g.Anyonewhodoesnotrecognizethisfactisnotamaterialist.—不承認(rèn)這個事實，就不是唯物主義者。Cuttingthepronounasobjecte.g.Beforehandinginyourtranslation,youhavetoreaditoverandoveragainandseeifthereisanythinginit

tobecorrectedorimproved.

Cuttingthepronounasobjecte.g.Beforehandinginyourtranslation,youhavetoreaditoverandoveragainandseeifthereisanythinginit

tobecorrectedorimproved.—交出翻譯之前必須多讀幾遍，看看里面有沒有要修改的地方。Cuttingthepossessivepronoune.g.Fortwoweeks,hehadbeenstudyingthehouse,lookingatitsrooms,itselectricwiring,itspathanditsgarden.e.g.Thetraincame.Hepinchedhislittlesisterlovingly,andputhisgreatarmsabouthismother’sneckandthenwasaway.

Cuttingthepossessivepronoune.g.Fortwoweeks,hehadbeenstudyingthehouse,lookingatitsrooms,its

electricwiring,itspathanditsgarden.—連著兩星期他都在觀察房子的情況，檢查各個房間，查看線路、通道和花園的布局。e.g.Thetraincame.Hepinchedhislittlesisterlovingly,andputhis

greatarmsabouthismother’sneckandthenwasaway.—火車來了。他疼愛地捏了捏小妹妹，粗壯的胳膊摟了一下母親的脖子，然后就走了。(2)CuttingconjunctionsCuttingthecoordinatingconjunctione.g.HeconsideredtheNationalSecurityCounciltoolargeandbulkyandthustooleaky,toomanypeoplewhotalkedtoomuch.e.g.Yourparentsoryourwifeoryoursonoryourbestfriendsmightbeexpectingyoubackhomesafeandsound.

(2)CuttingconjunctionsCuttingthecoordinatingconjunctione.g.HeconsideredtheNationalSecurityCounciltoolargeandbulkyandthustooleaky,toomanypeoplewhotalkedtoomuch.—他認(rèn)為國家安全委員會機構(gòu)過于龐大臃腫，人多嘴雜，容易泄密。e.g.Yourparentsoryourwifeoryoursonoryourbestfriendsmightbeexpectingyoubackhomesafeandsound.—也許你的父母，妻兒，或者你最好的朋友都在盼望你平安回家呢。Cuttingthesubordinateconjunction省略表示原因的連接詞e.g.Weknewthatsummerwascoming,aswecouldseeaswallow.

e.g.Becausethedeparturewasnoteasy,we’dbettermakeitbrief.

Cuttingthesubordinateconjunction省略表示原因的連接詞e.g.Weknewthatsummerwascoming,aswecouldseeaswallow.—我們看見一只燕子，知道夏天就要來臨了。e.g.Becausethedeparturewasnoteasy,we’dbettermakeitbrief.—離別不是件容易的事（離別真叫人難受），我們還是簡短些吧。省略表示條件的連接詞e.g.Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind?e.g.IwouldnothavesaiditifIhadknownit.

省略表示條件的連接詞e.g.Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind?—冬天來了，春天還會遠(yuǎn)嗎？（雪萊《西風(fēng)頌》）e.g.IwouldnothavesaiditifIhadknownit.—早知如此我就不說了。表示條件句中的連接詞if，

在日?？谡Z體或文言文中，往往省略不譯Ifyoudon’tgotomorrow,they’llgetangry.（如果）你明天不去，他們會生氣的。省略表示時間的連接詞e.g.Whenatlasthestooduponthebluff,heturnedtohislittlesisterandlookeduponhersorrowfully.e.g.Atlonglast,onJune6,1944,aftertheEuropeanwarwasbasicallydecidedandHitlerwasdefeated,theallieslaunchedtheirlong-delayedwesternfront.

省略表示時間的連接詞e.g.Whenatlasthestooduponthebluff,heturnedtohislittlesisterandlookeduponhersorrowfully.—最后他站到了懸崖上，轉(zhuǎn)過身來，悲哀地看著他的小妹妹。e.g.Atlonglast,onJune6,1944,aftertheEuropeanwarwasbasicallydecidedandHitlerwasdefeated,theallieslaunchedtheirlong-delayedwesternfront.—1944年6月