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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)Doyouliketravellinginthewild?Whatifyougetlostinthewild?Howtosaveyourself?WhatdidtheyseeintheUnclePaul'sfarm?
UnclePaul'sfarm?
SomestepstoanalyzebeforeContinuation:
2.Readforplot1.Readforinformation
3.Interpretationofgiveninformationandpredictthedevelopment4.Arrangetheplotsindetail.1.Readforinformation
WhoWhatWhenWhereWhyWhowasabout?Whathappened?Whydidithappen?Whendidithappen?Wheredidithappen?HowHowdidithappen?I,dadandUnclePaultookahorseinthewildandthengotlostOnesummerbecauseIwantedtotakeahorsebymyself,butwegotlostbychance.?InUnclePaul'sfarmhouse
mainideaGivethemainideainastatingway:Sbdosth.forsomepurposeinsomewayinsomesituationatsometimeinsp.withsomefeeling.
Onesummer,thewritertookahorserideinthewildwithhisfatheratUnclePaul'sfarm.Bychance,hecameacrosslittlerabbitandgotlost.2.Readforplot(Background)onesummerdayspentthenight(thefirstday)inthelateafternoon(thesecondday)veryearlyinthemorningafterthebreakfastintheafternoonafterawhile?Inwhatorderisthematerialdeveloped?timesequencebehaviorsfeelingspara.1para.2
para.3
para.4Para.5-6takemeonatripreached,pickedusupanddroveus
delighted1)tookahorseride,putonhats,gotonandheadedslowlytowardsthemountain.2)criedbackimpressedcoolcookedus,listeningtothefrogs,havebreakfast,helpAnutTina,peacefulandquietmagicdreamlikejoyful?3)jumpedout4)gotlostDrawthestructureoftheplotdevelopments.BeginningClimaxEndingimpressedjoyfulreturned?feelings?takemeonatripreachdelightedlisteningtothefrogshelpAnutTinatookahorserideheadedslowlytowardsthemoutainArabbitjumpedoutgotlostcoolpeacefulhadnoideawherewegofeelings?3.Interpretationofgiveninformationandpredictthedevelopment情節(jié)拓展四原則2.Conflict-SolutionPrinciple3.Actions-ReactionsPrinciple4.Negative-PositivePrinciple1.Up-down-upArabbitjumpedoutWegotlostanditwasgettingdark.Conflict1
solution1Conflict2
solution2Ending續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)拓展圖Clues:rabbit,horse,me,MydadClues:Mydad,meriver,UnclePaulClues?Clues?
Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Paragraph2:
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.__________________________________________________________________________________________
分析兩個(gè)段首句之間的邏輯關(guān)系,預(yù)測(cè)續(xù)寫(xiě)方向及故事結(jié)局---Prediction
Werodeourhorsesalongtheriver.Shortlyafterwards,theUnclePaul'sfarmcameintooursight.Wegotothefarmsafely.Whatathrillingbutunforgettableexperienceitwas!Paragraph2?Paragraph1?Myhorsewassacred.…Wehadlosttherighttrack.Agoodending!1.Itturnsoutthere'salwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm.2.OurbeinglostaddedaspecialtastetomyadventurousvacationwhichIwouldrememberallmylife.3.Reflectingonthismemory,Iregardedthisexperienceasmyspecialadventurewithmydad.4.Arrangetheplotsindetail.1tips22.次要人物的出現(xiàn)及反應(yīng),(動(dòng)作+情感/心理活動(dòng))1.回答開(kāi)頭提示語(yǔ)內(nèi)容。銜接提示語(yǔ),可以描寫(xiě)主要人物(情感+動(dòng)作)33.出現(xiàn)問(wèn)題與矛盾沖突44.為了解決問(wèn)題,說(shuō)/做了什么+心理活動(dòng)55.問(wèn)題解決,(做了什么)6.銜接Para2開(kāi)頭提示語(yǔ),作為第一段最后一句6
Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wehadlosttherighttrack.1.Seeingtherunningrabbit,whatwasthehorse's/writer'sreaction?5.Whatdidthewriter'sfatherandwriterdotosolvetheproblem?2.Whatwasthewriter's/horse'srabbit'sreactionatthattime?3.Whathappenedsurprisingly?4.Asforthehorse'sreaction,Whatwasthewriter'sreaction?6.Whatathrillingbutunforgettableexperienceitwas!Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark1tips2
次要人物的反應(yīng),可以是動(dòng)作+情感/心理活動(dòng)3456Paragraph22主要(次要)人物說(shuō)了什么,做了什么)1回答para.2開(kāi)頭提示語(yǔ)內(nèi)容,可以是動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)以推動(dòng)情節(jié)3主要(次要)人物的反應(yīng),心理、情感或動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)4主要人物在什么情況下做了什么,推動(dòng)情節(jié)5問(wèn)題解決,(做了什么)6呼應(yīng)原文開(kāi)頭,或是主要人物的感悟,或是點(diǎn)題的語(yǔ)句5.Werodeourhorsesalongtheriver.Shortlyafterwards,theUnclePaul'sfarmcameintooursight.Wegotothefarmsafely.2.Whatdidtheyhearandseeandwhatdifficultiesdidtheymeet?1.Whengotlost,whatwastheirfeelings?4.Howdidtheyplantodealwiththedifficulty?3.Howdidtheyfeel?小試牛刀—句式翻譯與句型轉(zhuǎn)換1.受到驚嚇,馬突然跑了起來(lái),跑得如此快,以至于我什么也看不見(jiàn)只能聽(tīng)見(jiàn)風(fēng)在耳邊呼嘯。__________________________,thehorsesbegantorace.Itranso______thatIcouldhardlyseeanythingbutthewind__________________.Frightenedbytherabbitfastwhistlinginmyears2.突然,我們聽(tīng)見(jiàn)遠(yuǎn)處有潺潺的水聲。爸爸說(shuō)或許我們可以沿著河流找到回農(nóng)場(chǎng)的路。Allofasudden,weheardthefaintsoundofwater_______________.It____________tomyfatherthatmaybewecouldfindourwaytothefarmby___________________________.trumblinginthedistanceoccuredwalkingalongtheriver小試牛刀—句式翻譯與句型轉(zhuǎn)換3.我盡力的拉回韁繩,轉(zhuǎn)移馬兒的注意力并盡力阻止馬兒但是一切都是徒勞的。I_____________thereins,distractedthehorseand__________________tostopthehorsebut_____________.pulledbacktriedeverymeansinvain4.想到河水可能能夠引導(dǎo)我們回去,我們瞬間情緒高漲開(kāi)始沿著河邊快步小跑。___________________________________________,(運(yùn)用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))ourspiritssoaredandwebegantotrotbrisklyalongtheriver.Realizingtherivermaybeaguideback小試牛刀—句式翻譯與句型轉(zhuǎn)換5.最后,我們安然無(wú)恙地到達(dá)了叔叔的農(nóng)場(chǎng)。Finallywearrivedthefarmhouse,safeandsound.6.然后我們沿著岸邊走最后農(nóng)場(chǎng)的房子出現(xiàn)在我們眼前,我們臉上露出了甜美的微笑。Thenwefollowedtheriverbankandfinallythefarmhousecameintooursight.Atthatmoment,allofusburstintoasweetsmile.7.無(wú)論發(fā)生什么事情,你都要保持冷靜,然后你就可以戰(zhàn)勝一切困難。
Nomatterwhathappened,youshouldkeepcalmandthenyoucanovercomeeveryth
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