【省級公開課】高考短文改錯公開課課件

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短文改錯生活中，人人都會犯錯，有錯就知改。寫作中，人人也會犯錯，有錯也要改。PlayagameFindthewrongwordsandcorrectthem.BestrictatsbBeresponsiblewithsb/sthBeinbusinessHavesthoncommonHaveaneffectinsbLosetheheartMakeagreatprogressThewarwasbrokeoutTheaccidentwashappenedInthehurrySharesthforsbApairofshoeAlotofequipmentsGeneralspeakingAssoonaspossiblywithforoninontheawaswasawithShoesequipmentGenerallypossibleWhatisproofreading?知短文改錯則百戰(zhàn)不殆1.correctsomegrammarmistakes2.connectionbetweensentences3.themainideaofthewholepassage設(shè)錯方式？改錯格式？多詞缺詞錯詞

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。改錯步驟1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentence

andfindthegrammarmistakes.（分句閱讀，逐行找錯）3.Readthepassageagain,checkyouranswers.（檢查核對，敲定終稿）6

Ioftendreamofateacher.Idreamofstandingonthe______platformintheclassroomandgivelessonstolovelyboys.______andgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,butwatchthem.______growingup.IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstaying.______withthem.Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher.You.______havetolearninordertoteach.Withoutenoughknowledges.______youcanneverlearnwell.Whatismore,youhavetobe.______friendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim..______Onlyinthiswaycanyouareagoodteacherandwin______respectfromthem.ThoughIamastudentnow,Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue. ______∧beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthembeHomework--Checkyouranswers

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歸納總結(jié)冠詞錯誤主要錯在泛指與特指；a.an.the混用漏用和多用

小試牛刀1.(全國)MyfatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday.2.(全國)Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.3.(全國)Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost.五、形容副詞pleasedtasty4.BeingamemberoftheStudents’Unionmakesmecapableoforganizingvariousactivities.However,IamconvincedthatIcankeeptheclassorganizedandlively.Therefore5.Wegaveourthankstoourteacherswhohadbeeneducatinguspatient.patientlywonderful

歸納總結(jié)錯誤主要錯在詞性錯用，副詞混用；原級、比較級最高級的混用

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