浙江新高考作文續(xù)寫公開課培訓(xùn)講學(xué)

Tocontinueastory續(xù)寫之如何(rúhé)構(gòu)思第一頁，共14頁。WhatisaSTORY

/WhydowemakeSTORIES?Astoryistoentertian,toamuse,toeducate,toenlighten.Basically,astoryistodeliverapieceofmindtous.So,howtodeliveritwell?第二頁，共14頁。Whatmakesastory?Simplyput:WhoWhereWhatWhenHowWhyLiterarilyput:Characters(Main&Minor)

Plot(Beginning,RisingAction,Climax,FallingAction&Resolution)第三頁，共14頁。Think

Foragoodstory,whichismoreimportant,

thecharacter,ortheplot?第四頁，共14頁。1.CaoRuiiseasy-goingandheisneverseengettingangry,but__________________________________________.2.ShenMengyanisalady-likegirlwhenshe_________________________________,butwhen_______________shewill________________.3.LiJinyingisverygentletoherdeskmateandshe______________________________________________.hewasalittleannoyedwhenhisfoodwastakenbyChengSihan

isintheclassroominthedormbetotallyacrazyonealwaysspeakssoftlytohimCharacterizationPractice(Writing)第五頁，共14頁。4.WangChenhaoisaquietboy,he________________.5.ZhaoHanbinconsidershimselfTHEmosthandsomeintheworld,andhe___________________________________________.6.AfterdiscoveringZhangKaihengisafterthesamegirlhelikes,thefearlessZhaoYonghao_____________________________________.cansitsilentlyforadaywithoutawordtohisdeskmate.looksdownuponalltheotherboysintheclasswhohethinksugly.felthemustdosomething第六頁，共14頁。

Makeitaone-sentencestory!

1.FramtonwantedtoclamhisnervesinMrsSamptons'house,onlyto_____________________________________.2.Matildaputonthenecklaceandlookedfowardtothecomingoftheparty.Herdreamwas______________________________.3.AlthoughLauriewantedtowinverymuch,whenshefoundJinny'stape,______________________________.bemadelosehisnervesbyalittlemischievousgirltobecomethequeenofthepartyoftheupperclassdidn'tletthedesiretowingetthebetterofherandreturnedittoJinny第七頁，共14頁。4.Larryangrilyopenedthecardoor,tryingtorushawayfromhisterribleboss,buttofind_______________________5.Timwasagoodstudentintheteachers'eyes,yethe__________________.6.Itwasverylate,andHelenwasveryanxiousforherhusbandtoreturn,whenthedoorbellrang,she__________________.aChristmasgiftfromtheboss

neverlikesanyteacher'sclass第八頁，共14頁。Let'sreadandpayattentiontotheredpart.

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

第九頁，共14頁。Whatwouldshedoorexperience

next?criedforhelp?regrettedwhatshehaddone?triedtogobackonherown?waitedforherhusband?cameacrosssomebadorgoodguy?...第十頁，共14頁。Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.BegantoregretThingsgotworsemissherhusbandandfamily第十一頁，共14頁。Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.

Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.1.It'sluckyshehadsometingtodrinkandeat,butwouldtheluckcontinue?2.Whyweretheberriesmostdelicioustoher?第十二頁，共14頁。Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.

Helicopterstandsfor?第十三頁，共14頁。But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

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was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.

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