專題03建議信-2023年高考復(fù)習(xí)英語寫作思維導(dǎo)圖

/12/12/專題03應(yīng)用文建議信2023年高考復(fù)習(xí)英語寫作思維導(dǎo)圖【題型解讀】建議信是生活中常見的一種文體,是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可能是寫給個(gè)人，也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu),信的內(nèi)容要包括寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。邀請信結(jié)構(gòu)布局思維導(dǎo)圖二、范文模板Dearclassmates,HaveyourealizedMother'sDayis________________________________________即將到來?Andwhatideashaveyou_________________________________________tocelebrateit?Inmyview,howmuchyou’llspendforyourmother_____________________________并不重要;theessentialissueisifitcan__________________________________表達(dá)我們衷心的愛和感激toourmothers.Soabunchofflowers,apostcardorahugisallacceptable_______________________________作為回報(bào)theirdevotiontous.Butdoingwhattheydoforuseveryday,Ithink,ismoresignificantinhonorofthem.___________________________________________只有這樣willwebeoverwhelminglyawareof__________________________________母親給了我們多少.I’vemadeaplantocookamealformymotherthatday,eventhoughIneverdiditbefore.Mydearfriends,_________________________________________你做好決定了嗎?Yours,LiHua三、優(yōu)秀范文1、假如你是一家報(bào)社的編輯布萊克先生，收到了高一學(xué)生李華的來信。近來他在英語的閱讀上有些困難，做閱讀理解題時(shí)常出錯(cuò)，因此他很著急，不知該如何做，請求你給想想辦法，盡快調(diào)整好，適應(yīng)高一的學(xué)習(xí)生活。DearLiHua,I’mgladtohearfromyou.I’mhonoredtobebelieved.Iknowyouhavetroubleindoingexercisesinreadingandyouareworried.Hereissomeadvice,whichmaybeofhelptoyou.Firstly,youshouldknoweveryonecanmeetwiththesamedifficulty.Youshouldhaveconfidence,whichisthekeytosuccess.Secondly,you’dbetternotbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Thirdly,youshouldgoonreadingthepassage--onepassageaday.Afterashortperiodoftime,youwillfindyoumakefewermistakes.Insistingonreadingtotheendistovictory.Lastly,youshouldmakeaproperplanforyoursubjects,whichwillbehelpfulforyourfuturestudy.AsfarasI’mconcerned,ifyoudolikethis,Ibelieveyouwillmakegreatprogress.Bestwishes!Yours.MrBlack【分析】這是一封建議信格式的應(yīng)用文。根據(jù)信中要求回復(fù)給出學(xué)習(xí)上的建議?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法???總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.?了解到閱讀學(xué)習(xí)上有困難，你很著急。提出給建議，也許可以幫到你。Iknowyouhavetroubleindoingexercisesinreadingandyouareworried.Hereissomeadvice,whichmaybeofhelptoyou.2.建議如下：?1）你應(yīng)該知道每個(gè)人都會遇到你相同的困難。Firstly,youshouldknoweveryonecanmeetwiththesamedifficulty.你應(yīng)該有信心，這是成功的關(guān)鍵。Youshouldhaveconfidence,whichisthekeytosuccess.2）你應(yīng)該不要害怕犯錯(cuò)誤。Secondly,you’dbetternotbeafraidofmakingmistakes.3）你應(yīng)該繼續(xù)進(jìn)行閱讀訓(xùn)練，每天一篇文章，Thirdly,youshouldgoonreadingthepassage--onepassageaday.短時(shí)間后你會發(fā)現(xiàn)你犯的錯(cuò)誤減少了。Afterashortperiodoftime,youwillfindyoumakefewermistakes.堅(jiān)持閱讀直到你成功為止。Insistingonreadingtotheendistovictory.4）你應(yīng)該制定合適的閱讀計(jì)劃，這樣會有助于你將來的學(xué)習(xí)。Lastly,youshouldmakeaproperplanforyoursubjects,whichwillbehelpfulforyourfuturestudy.3.表示愿望：據(jù)我所知，如果你照我說的去做，我相信你會取得巨大的進(jìn)步。AsfarasI’mconcerned,ifyoudolikethis,Ibelieveyouwillmakegreatprogress.4.表示祝愿：Bestwishes!第二步：列提綱?（重點(diǎn)詞組及句型）havetroubleindoingexercises；inreading；andyouareworried；beofhelptoyou；meetwiththesamedifficulty；haveconfidence；thekeytosuccess；you’dbetternot；beafraidof；makingmistakes；goonreadingthepassage；afterashortperiodoftime；makefewermistakes；insistingonreadingtotheend；istovictory；makeaproperplan；foryoursubjects,；behelpfulfor；yourfuturestudy.第三步：連詞成句Iknowyouhavetroubleindoingexercisesinreadingandyouareworried.Hereissomeadvice,whichmaybeofhelptoyou.Firstly,youshouldknoweveryonecanmeetwiththesamedifficulty.Youshouldhaveconfidence,whichisthekeytosuccess.Secondly,you’dbetternotbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Thirdly,youshouldgoonreadingthepassage--onepassageadayAfterashortperiodoftime,youwillfindyoumakefewermistakes.Insistingonreadingtotheendistovictory.Lastly,youshouldmakeaproperplanforyoursubjects,whichwillbehelpfulforyourfuturestudy.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult,notbecause…butbecause…連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級的句式和詞匯：非限制性定語從句：Hereissomeadvice,whichmaybeofhelptoyou；Youshouldhaveconfidence,whichisthekeytosuccess；Lastly,youshouldmakeaproperplanforyoursubjects,whichwillbehelpfulforyourfuturestudy.?高級詞匯：haveconfidence；thekeytosuccess；you’dbetternot；beafraidof；makingmistakes；goonreadingthepassage；afterashortperiodoftime；makefewermistakes；insistingonreadingtotheend；istovictory；makeaproperplan；高級句式和詞匯的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個(gè)短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達(dá)能力。2、假如你是李華，你校學(xué)生會即將組織一次徒步活動，已在校園網(wǎng)發(fā)布方案，征求師生的修改意見。你需要寫一封郵件，包含以下兩點(diǎn):1.提出你覺得需要改進(jìn)的地方；2.需要改進(jìn)的原因。徒步活動主題:發(fā)現(xiàn)重慶時(shí)間:5月1日下午2點(diǎn)路線:從人民大禮堂(theGreatHallofthePeople)到解放碑、(LiberationMonument),全程徒步DearSir/Madam,holiday.HowevertedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.last.Inactivity.Onlysuccess.WhatSquare.Bydinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Inthemeantime,wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.What’smore,Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.succeed.Il,ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求李華寫一封郵件，對徒步活動方案提出修改意見?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：建議信人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來時(shí)；一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)要點(diǎn)：1.聽說學(xué)校徒步方案，指出有待改進(jìn)。2.需改進(jìn)的地方和具體原因。第二部??列要點(diǎn)寫提綱Para.1beexcitedtohearthat…;isgoingtobeheld;furtherimprovement;postonthecampuswebsitePara.2planindetails;haveaclearerpictureofsth;securityprecautions;medicalsupport;proposeanintroductionofsth;gainadeeperinsightintosthPara.3inamoresupportiveway;besuretosucceed;第三步連詞成句1.I’mreallyexcitedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.2.Theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite.3.Thehikeneedstobeplannedinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.4.Weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.5.Wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.6.Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.7.Whenweappreciatetheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.8.Ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.9.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.第四步潤色提高1.添加關(guān)聯(lián)表達(dá)However;Firstofall;Inthemeantime;What’smore;Allinall2.句式升級However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.第四步漂亮?xí)鴮憽军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，分段合理。本文句式運(yùn)用靈活，運(yùn)用了種句式。比如使用了定語從句However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.使用了only的倒裝句作小結(jié)：Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.使用介詞短語，讓文章更加連貫簡潔：Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.四、題型練習(xí)[A] 假如你是李華，現(xiàn)在倫敦某中學(xué)做交換生，該校要開設(shè)一個(gè)中國書房，現(xiàn)向中國留學(xué)生征集建議。請你給負(fù)責(zé)人Smith寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1．書房采用中國傳統(tǒng)風(fēng)格設(shè)計(jì)；2．提供蘊(yùn)含中國文化的書籍；3．定期舉辦讀書交流會或中國傳統(tǒng)文化講座等。注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。??DearSmith,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSmith,I’mmorethanpleasedtoknowthatweareplanningtoopenaChinesestudyinourschool.AsanexchangestudentfromChina,I’mhappytogivemysuggestions.Firstly,thestudycanbedesignedintraditionalChinesestyle,providingreaderswithastrongChineseculturalatmosphere.Secondly,itmaybehelpfultooffersomeexcellentbooksthatreflectChineseculturetohelpreadersraisetheirreadinginterestandbroadentheirculturalhorizons.Inaddition,holdingregularreadingexchangemeetingsorlecturesontraditionalChineseculturewillalsomakethestudymoreappealing.Hopemyideaswillbehelpful!Yourssincerely,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。考生作為在倫敦某中學(xué)的交換生，學(xué)校即將開設(shè)一個(gè)中國書房，現(xiàn)要求考生給學(xué)校負(fù)責(zé)人Smith寫一封建議信，提出相應(yīng)的意見。第一步：詞匯積累非常：morethan→extremely/very開心的：happy→delighted建議：suggestion→recommendation吸引人的：appealing→attractive第二步：句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstly,thestudycanbedesignedintraditionalChinesestyle,providingreaderswithastrongChineseculturalatmosphere.拓展句：Firstly,thestudycanbedesignedintraditionalChinesestyle,whichwillprovidereaderswithastrongChineseculturalatmosphere.第三步：高分句型【高分句型1】Firstly,thestudycanbedesignedintraditionalChinesestyle,providingreaderswithastrongChineseculturalatmosphere.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語）【高分句型2】Inaddition,holdingregularreadingexchangemeetingsorlecturesontraditionalChineseculturewillalsomakethestudymoreappealing.（運(yùn)用了動名詞作主語）[B] Ms.Li光中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李津。為了改進(jìn)教學(xué)并有效提升每個(gè)學(xué)生的英語水平，你的英語老師Ms.Li希望了解你的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議。請按以下要點(diǎn)用英語給她寫一封信。①對英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識；②自己目前的英語水平；③自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問題；④對英語教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。Ms.LiMs.Li,I’mveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!Yours,LiJin【答案】DearMs.LiLearningthatyouseektoenhanceyourteachingmethodsoastoimproveourEnglish,Iammorethangratefulandpleasedtoofferyousomeinformation.Firstandforemost,I’dliketotalkaboutmyviewonEnglishlearning.AsIseeit,thecoreofEnglishlearningisbasedonextensivereadingandspeaking,bywhichwecanbefamiliarwithscoresofEnglishgrammarrulesandexpressions.IamnowquitefluentinoralEnglish.However,tomydiscouragement,IamterribleinworkingoutquestionsaboutEnglishpassages.Therefore,IhopethatyoucangiveaclearanalysisofthestructuresofsomeEnglisharticles.Inthisway,wewillmasterhowtofigureoutthemainideaofanarticle.Inaddition,itwouldbebetterifyoucaninstructustocompleteEnglishcomprehensionquestions.Thanksagainforyourdevotedteaching.????Yours,LiJinMs.Li是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生應(yīng)英語老師Ms.Li的要求，談?wù)勛约簩τ⒄Z學(xué)習(xí)的看法，說明自己目前英語水平及不足之處，并最后提出英語教學(xué)方面的建議。第一步：詞匯積累提供：offer→provide提高；改善：improve→enhance搞清楚；查明：figureout→findout教授；講解：teach→instruct第二步：句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstandforemost,I’dliketotalkaboutmyviewonEnglishlearning.拓展句：Firstandforemost,I’dliketotalkaboutmyviewonEnglishlearning,whichmayhelpyoutoorganizeyourteachingmoreproperly.第三步：高分句型[高分句型1]LearningthatyouseektoenhanceyourteachingmethodsoastoimproveourEnglish,Iammorethangratefulandpleasedtoofferyousomeinformation.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]AsIseeit,thecoreofEnglishlearningisbasedonextensivereadingandspeaking,bywhichwecanbefamiliarwithscoresofEnglishgrammarrulesandexpressions.(運(yùn)用了介詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句)[C]假如你是一名英語課代表，為了幫助同學(xué)們提高學(xué)習(xí)英語的效率，你用英語給全班同學(xué)寫了一封倡議信，倡導(dǎo)“堅(jiān)持每天高效晨讀”，內(nèi)容如下：1.倡議目的；2.你對晨讀的看法和建議；3.希望大家積極響應(yīng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Mydearfellowstudents,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________