高考英語記敘文高分寫作訓(xùn)練

高英記文分作練一教目藝品時這主要外一成Chinglish。不積語言邏輯想二教過任一賞一佳，驗分作格和言累好任二了高評標(biāo)，根欣并判外篇作文任三如使豐的式（中英習(xí)任四運今的詞句，寫一作（參考錄高詞）任五互評，相習(xí)各評一最，前展。任六開作的意并析篇作1

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