-新教材高中英語UNIT2Outofthisworld表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案譯林版選擇必修性必修第三冊

PAGEPAGE3UNIT2Outofthisworld寫一篇關(guān)于外星人的故事本單元要求寫一篇關(guān)于外星人的故事，屬于故事類的寫作范疇。[基本框架]開頭(thebeginning)——引出故事主體(thebody)——具體過程結(jié)尾(theending)——自我感受[常用詞塊]1．putonmanyperformances上演了許多表演2．focusontheenvironmentprotection注重環(huán)境保護(hù)3．raiseourawarenessofprotectingtheEarth提高了我們保護(hù)地球的意識4．makeoursocietyaharmoniousworld使我們的社會成為一個和諧的世界5．haveaheateddiscussionabout...對……進(jìn)行了熱烈討論6．contributealottoourproject對我們的項(xiàng)目有很多貢獻(xiàn)[常用語句]★精彩開頭1．Onthemorningof...，Chinasuccessfullysentup...2．Manycountriesaroundtheworldsenttheircongratulations.★正文佳句1．Upontheirarrival，LiYueandZhangHuawerewarmlywelcomed，andrespectfully，theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits.2．Whenitwastimeforthevolunteerstoleave，theelderlypeoplethankedthemfortheirkindness.★余味結(jié)尾1．Itishightimethattheauthoritiesshouldtakeproperstepstosolve...2．Ibelievewecancertainlyovercomethedisasterwiththepublicandthegovernmentworkingtogether.假如你是李華，請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇英語短文，介紹你遇到外星人的一次經(jīng)歷。1．發(fā)現(xiàn)UFO，兩個外星人走出來，他們有著綠色皮膚和綠色的眼睛。不到一米高。2．他們挖土裝進(jìn)袋子，回到飛碟飛走了。3．你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[學(xué)生習(xí)作]Oneday,IwaswalkinginthefieldwhenIsawaUFOflyinginthesky.Itlandedinthefieldandtwoalienswalkedoutofit,whohadgreenskinandgreeneyes.Theywerenomorethanonemetertall.Thetwoaliensbegantodigsomesoilandputitintoabag.ThentheywentbacktotheUFOandwentaway.Howunforgettableanexperienceitwas.點(diǎn)評：1.該篇習(xí)作符合故事類短文的寫作要求，對整個過程描寫完整，而且最后給出自己的感受。2.文章能夠使用bedoing...when,定語從句等高級句式，使得文章表達(dá)更加連貫。3.但是高級詞匯使用較少，可以適當(dāng)增添一些高級詞匯和短語，增添文章的語言色彩。[升格作文]Oneday,IwaswalkinginthefieldwhenIheardastrangenoisefromthesky.ItwasaUFO!Itbegantolandinthefield,twoaliensjustcameout.Theyhadgreenskinandgreeneyes.Theywerenotmorethanonemetertall.IwassofrightenedthatIcoulddonothingbuttrytohidebehindatree.Thetwoaliensdugsomesoilandputitintoabag.AfterthattheycamebacktotheUFOandflewaway.WhatanunforgettableexperienceIhad!請你根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇關(guān)于遇到外星人的經(jīng)歷。1．在學(xué)校后面的山上玩，發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個飛碟。2．外星人非常矮，沒有頭發(fā)，有兩只長耳朵。3．外星人看見我們非常吃驚，我們對他們微笑，并做了一個擁抱的動作。注意：詞數(shù)80左右?！緟⒖挤段摹縄，togetherwithmyclassmate，wenttothehillbehindourschoolafterclassyesterday.Tooursurprise,wefoundaUFO.Twoaliensstoodbeside.Differentfromourimagination,alienswerereallyshort.Theydidn'thavehairbuttwolongears.Theirpuppyeyesmadethemlook