2022年中考英語真題分類匯編專題21 書面表達 考點4 敘事描寫類（教師版）

專題21書面表達考點4敘事描寫類（一）（2022·新疆·中考真題）初中生活即將結(jié)束，靜坐在考場中的你，回想三年的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，一定有許多事情給你留下美好的記憶，請選擇一件你最難忘的事情寫一篇短文。例如：1.一次難忘的旅行2.一次難忘的比賽3.一次難忘的志愿服務(wù)……要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，內(nèi)容詳實，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名：3.詞數(shù)：80-120，開頭已給出，開頭及標點符號不計入總詞數(shù)。Lookingbackatthesepastthreeyears,Ihadalotofsweetmemories…________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Lookingbackatthesepastthreeyears,Ihadalotofsweetmemories.Lastsummervacation,Idecidedtolearntoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofswimminginthewater.Ididn’tfeelgoodinthewater.Butthecoachsaidhewouldprotectme.ThenIstartedswimming,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall.Withthecoach’shelp,Iknewhowtomoveandswimwithmyhandsandlegs.Afewdayslater,Icouldswimbymyself.Iwasveryexcitedandproudofmyself.WhatIlearnfromthisexperienceisthatnothingisimpossibleifIputmyheartintoitandtrytodoitbravely.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文主要講述一件令你最難忘的事情，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過去時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段主要講述令你難忘的事情是什么；最后一段講述自己的感受。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。（二）（2022·甘肅武威·中考真題）以“beinglost”為主題，根據(jù)以下提示信息寫一篇80詞左右的短文。Thepicturesareprovidedtohelpyouthinkaboutthistopic.Payattentiontothefollowingpointswhenyouplanyourcomposition.●WherewasMary?●WhatwasMarydoing?●Whathappenedtoher?●WhatdidMaryfeelwhenseeinghermother?Thefollowingwordsmayhelpyou:●crowdedwithvisitors●sointerestedintheanimals●noonearound●turnto…要求：1.條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)其他人名和地名等信息；3.在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:MarywenttothezoowithhermotheronalovelySundayafternoon.Thezoowascrowdedwithvisitors.Nearthegateofthezoostoodtwoprettygiraffes.Maryhadneverseensuchamazinganimalsbefore.Shewassointerestedintheanimalsthatshelookedateverysmallmovementofthemcarefully.Afterawhile,shewantedtotellhermotherwhatshe’dfoundabouttheseanimals.However,shenoticedtherewasnoonearound.Shewasafraidandworried,butsherememberedthathermothertoldhernottomovewhenbeinglost.Soshewaitedforhermotherjustatthegateofthezoo.Soonafter,shesawhermotherwalkingtothegateanxiously.Whenseeinghermother,Marywashappyandrantohermother.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，結(jié)合圖片提示進行詳細地描述故事的發(fā)生以及過程及結(jié)果，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要緊密結(jié)合所給出的要點內(nèi)容，本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。（三）（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真題）親愛的同學(xué)，恭喜你即將畢業(yè)。在過去的三年初中學(xué)習(xí)中，你的老師教導(dǎo)、關(guān)心、幫助過你。請你選擇一位老師，表達你對他（她）的感激之情。內(nèi)容包括：1.你對這位老師的印象；2.你感謝他（她）的原因；3.你對他（她）的祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)在80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.可適當(dāng)舉例或拓展；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露真實身份的任何信息（如校名，師生名字等）。It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythanksto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythankstomyEnglishteacherMr.Zhang.Sheisverykindandpatient.ShehashelpedmealotinmystudiessinceIcametothisschool.WhenIwasintrouble,sheusedtoencouragemeandgivemesomegoodadvice.AtonetimeIfailedtopassanEnglishtestandIwasverysadaboutit.Shecameandcheeredmeup.ShetoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I’msothankfultoherforherkindhelpthatIwillworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.Ihopeshewillbecomebetterandbetter.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，本文開頭已經(jīng)給出，選擇一位你想要感謝的老師，表達感激之情，根據(jù)提示要點進行寫作，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要用第一人稱和第三人稱來描述，時態(tài)以一般過去和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。本文可以采用一段式寫作，要求描述對老師的印象，感謝的原因以及對老師的祝福。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。（四）（2022·天津·中考真題）假如你是李華，請你給美國筆友David寫一封信，講述你班同學(xué)王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺?。?）上周五，一棵樹被大風(fēng)吹倒，擋住了道路。（2）王紅看到后，撿起地上的樹枝，又去移動樹干。（3）樹干太沉，她搬不動。（4）人們過來幫忙。（5）你認為……參考詞匯：被吹倒beblowndown

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樹干trunk要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個。（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,onWangHong’swayhome,shesawabigtreewasblowndownbywindanditblockedtheway.AfterWangHongsawit,shepickedupthebranchesonthegroundandthenmovedthetrunkagain.Butthetrunkwassoheavythatshecouldn’tmoveitbyherself.Whenotherpeoplesawwhatshewasdoing,theyweremovedbyherandcametohelpher.Finally,theysucceededinmovingthetrunkaway.Ithinksheisaverykindperson.Andfromthisstory,Ilearnthatweshouldoffertohelpwhensomeoneneedshelp.Itnotonlyhelpsothers,butalsomakesourselveshappy.Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要求根據(jù)題干中的提示內(nèi)容講述你班同學(xué)王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談?wù)劯惺?，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般過去時為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。第一段和最后一段已給出，第二段具體描述她做好事的過程；第三段描述自己的感受。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。（五）（2022·云南·中考真題）ILearnedHowto________提示：人生是一個不斷學(xué)習(xí)、進步的過程。通過學(xué)習(xí)，你掌握了某種技能，明白了某些道理……請以“ILearnedHowto________”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，敘述你的一次學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要求?.請先將題目補全后，再作答；2.語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；3.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計；4.請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試題卷上無效。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ILearnedHowtoLearnEnglishWellAtthebeginningofmiddleschool,IalwaysgotbadgradesinEnglish.Iwasveryupsetanddidn’tknowhowtolearnitwell.Oneday,myEnglishteachertalkedtomeandunderstoodmyproblem.Shegavemesomeadvicelikespeakingmore.Fromthatday,ImadeanEnglishstudyplan.First,IlistenedtoEnglishsongsorwatchedEnglishmovies.Second,Ilistenedtoteacherinclasscarefullyandtooknotes.Thirdly,ItookpartintheEnglishcorner.IcommunicatedwithothersasmuchaspossibleinEnglish.Finally,IhavegreatprogressinEnglish.Fromthisexperience,Iknowthatwhenyoufacesomedifficulties,don’tgiveupeasily.Youshouldfindsomewaystodealwiththem.Youwillsuccessoneday.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我學(xué)會了如何學(xué)好英語”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段介紹自己在學(xué)習(xí)英語的經(jīng)歷；最后一段介紹自己從這次經(jīng)歷得到了什么感悟。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。（六）（2022·浙江寧波·中考真題）為弘揚中華民族“勞動最光榮”的傳統(tǒng)美德，這學(xué)期你校組織了一系列勞動實踐活動(aseriesoflabouractivities)，假如你是李華，請根據(jù)表格中的信息并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，寫一篇英語短文向?qū)W校英語報投稿。注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中的所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)80-100；標題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。TimeThingsIlearnedMyfeelingsMarchgrowvegetablesandplanttrees…Aprilrepairthingslikeelectricfans…May…Let’sEnjoyWorking________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Let’senjoyworking!Thisterm,Itookpartinaseriesoflaboractivitiesinourschool.IwashappythatIlearnedalot.InMarch,Ilearnedtogrowvegetablesandplanttreesonourschoolfarm.InApril,Ilearnedtorepairthingslikeelectricfansandbicycleswiththehelpofourteachers.InMay,Ilearnedtodomuchhousework,suchasmakingthebed,sweepingthefloorandfoldingclothes.Ithinkthelabouractivitiesarenotonlyeducationalbutalsouseful.I’msurethemorelifeskillsIhave,themoreindependentIwillbe.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點，介紹自己參加的學(xué)校組織的一系列勞動實踐活動的情況，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時；在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。（七）（2022·重慶A卷·中考真題）科學(xué)研究發(fā)現(xiàn)，快樂可讓我們身體更健康、思維更敏捷、心態(tài)更陽光。獨樂樂不如眾樂樂。某英語網(wǎng)站以“傳遞快樂”為主題發(fā)起故事分享活動，請講述生活中你通過傳遞快樂（直接或間接的），感染他人的小故事。要求：1.80-120詞；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息：1.起因，經(jīng)過；2.結(jié)果，感悟；3.……_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Astudyshowsthathappinesscanmakepeoplehealthierinmindandmental.Ourpositivemoodhasaninfluenceonothers.Iwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou.

IhaveagoodfriendandhernameisLucy.Shewassoshortthatotherclassmatesalwayslaughedather.Shewasveryupset.AtthattimeIalwaystoldhersomefunnystoriestocheerherup.Andtobecometallandstrong,Ialsotaughthertokeepahealthydietanddosomeexercise.Littlebylittle,shebecameconfident.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnthathappinessisimportantanditcanbringusalotlikeamoresunnymindset.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“傳遞快樂”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第三人稱和第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段講述自己傳遞快樂的經(jīng)歷；最后表達自己從這次經(jīng)歷的感悟。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。（八）（2022·重慶B卷·中考真題）有效控制憤怒能幫助我們恢復(fù)理智，找回方向，解決問題。你校EnglishConer將進行“ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem”的成長分享。請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿，講述你通過有效控制憤怒，成功解決某一問題的小故事，并分享你的感悟。要求：1.80—120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考詞匯：angern.[U]憤怒1.有效控制憤怒，成功解決問題的小故事（起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果）2.你的感悟（保持冷靜、學(xué)會反思、有效溝通……）3.……ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblemHaveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter?______________________________________________________________________________________________