九年級(jí)英語上冊-Unit-8-Detective-stories主題寫作八導(dǎo)學(xué)全國公開課一等獎(jiǎng)百校聯(lián)

單元主題寫作八話題分析經(jīng)典例題思緒點(diǎn)撥素材積累小試身手1/13單元主題寫作八本單元以“偵探故事”為話題，經(jīng)過對(duì)幾起案件描述，激發(fā)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)興趣，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生寫作能力，并增強(qiáng)學(xué)生安全意識(shí)，有效防范違法犯罪，提升自我保護(hù)能力。話題分析2/13為了深入增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生安全意識(shí)，提升自我保護(hù)能力，某校開展了以“安全”為主題英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)提醒寫一篇演講稿。80詞左右。單元主題寫作八典型例題3/13參考詞匯：becareful,online,danger,call…for,gobadHowtokeepsafe?Asteenagers,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First_________________________________________________，_____________________________________________________單元主題寫作八4/13單元主題寫作八思路點(diǎn)撥5/13短語：1．當(dāng)心……________________2．報(bào)警________________3．對(duì)……有害________________4．喊救命________________5．遠(yuǎn)離________________6．最好做某事________________7．保護(hù)我們自己免受犯罪傷害________________單元主題寫作八素材積累protectourselvesagainstcrimesbecarefulwith

callthepolicebebadfor/doharmtocallforhelpbeawayfromhadbetterdosth6/13句型：1．Helooks…2．Thepolicearewonderingif…3．We'renotsurewhether…4．Hehasnothingtodowiththiscase.5．Weshouldrememberto…6．We'dbetternot…7．Hegetsalongwith…8．Asstudents,weshould…單元主題寫作八7/13高分模板Howtokeepsafe?Asteenagers,weshouldkeepsafetyinmind.①Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First,②weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.③Second,ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.④Also,weoughttoeathealthilyandsafely.Eatingfoodthatgoesbadwilldoharmtoourhealth.⑤Lastbutnotleast,summeriscoming,andwemustrememberit'sdangeroustoswimintheriver.⑥Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!單元主題寫作八8/13名師點(diǎn)評(píng)①以“howcanwekeepsafe”引入話題。②especially一詞強(qiáng)調(diào)了要尤其注意“網(wǎng)上交友”，也使句子愈加順暢。③sothat連接目標(biāo)狀語從句，使表示愈加準(zhǔn)確。④lastbutnotleast表示“最終但一樣主要”，為高級(jí)句型，表示了作者豐富詞匯積累。⑤總結(jié)全文，號(hào)召人們注意安全，使文章首尾呼應(yīng)，渾然一體。單元主題寫作八9/13

[·廣東]每年夏天，溺水事故頻發(fā)。請(qǐng)你就此寫一篇短文談?wù)勀憧捶ā?nèi)容包含：1．我們應(yīng)該怎樣預(yù)防這類事故發(fā)生？(兩點(diǎn)提議)2．假如看到有些人落水，我們應(yīng)該怎樣適當(dāng)施救？3．呼吁同學(xué)們熱愛生命，注意安全。要求：80詞左右，已給開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。單元主題寫作八小試身手10/13Almosteveryyearinsummer,manypeoplearereporteddeadfromdrowningaccidents.Howtopreventsuchsadaccidents?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________單元主題寫作八11/13Onepossibleversion：Almosteveryyearinsummer,manypeoplearereporteddeadfromdrowningaccidents.Howtopreventsuchsadaccidents?Inmyopinion,first,weshouldn'tgoswimmingindangerousplacesorplacesweknowlittleabout,suchasreservoirsandrivers.Second,wehadbetternotswimwhenwefeeltiredorhungry.單元主題寫作八12/13Ifweseesomeonefallintothewater,weshouldsavehiminaproperway.Forexample,wecanshoutasloudlyaswecantogetthosewithgoodswimmingsk