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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能訓(xùn)練——情感描寫(xiě)ZhanjiangCunjinPeicaiSchoolSophieFongHowdoyoufeelwhenyouseethesnakes?Whenseeingthesnakes,Ifeel...scared
frightened
terrified
讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能訓(xùn)練——情感描寫(xiě)之“恐懼”ZhanjiangCunjinPeicaiSchoolSophieFongDonot“tell”me,but“show”meyourfeelingoffear.2020年7月高考浙江卷:遇熊脫險(xiǎn)Glancethegivenpassage,underline(劃線)thesentences
describingthefeelingoffearandlearnfromthem.Howtoshowyourfeelingoffearvividly(生動(dòng)地)?Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,herfacewasnearlydeadwithfright.Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze
rapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.herfacewasnearlydeadwithfright.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfrozerapidlybecauseoftheterrible
sight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.1.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.
(一陣恐懼襲來(lái),將我緊緊包圍,我已經(jīng)無(wú)法動(dòng)彈)2.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.(我驚恐不已,感覺(jué)兩腿發(fā)抖,手心冒汗。)3.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.
(她一動(dòng)也不動(dòng),嚇呆了)4.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,herface
wasnearlydeadwithfright.
(嚇得面無(wú)血色)5.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze
rapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.
(我們感覺(jué)渾身血液都凝固了)6.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.
(我們喉嚨發(fā)緊,膝蓋發(fā)軟)無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句肢體/動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)神態(tài)表情描寫(xiě)心理描寫(xiě)肢體動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)肢體/動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)肢體動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.
Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear.
Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,
herfacewasnearlydeadwithfright.
Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfrozerapidlybecauseoftheterrible
sight.
Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.
ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句肢體/動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)神態(tài)表情描寫(xiě)心理描寫(xiě)Asisdescribedinthegivenpassage,therearemanyvividwaystoshowthefeelingoffear.vividwaystoshowfeelings……恐懼/害怕phrasessentenceswords(n./v./adj.)必備素材積累adj.afraid,frightened,feared,panicked,scared,terrifiedn.fright,fear,panic,terror,horror(beinn.;v.withn.)v.
frighten
terrify,scare,(sb.)freeze,(sb.’sheart)pound/beatIfeel/amfrightened.Iaminfright.Thesightfrightensme.Ifreeze
withfright.Myheartispounding/beatingwidlywithfright.adj.n./v.必備素材積累shake/tremblewithfear嚇得發(fā)抖getintoapanic陷入恐慌中standrootedtothespotwithfear嚇得呆若木雞tremble/shakealloverwithfright嚇得渾身發(fā)抖befrozen/numbwithfear嚇呆beseizedwithpanic/panicsetsin驚慌失措bescaredoutofwits嚇得魂不附體beopen-mouthedwithhorror嚇得目瞪口呆bedeadwithfright嚇得面無(wú)血色bestruckwithfear嚇壞了11(be)inacoldsweat一身冷汗Whenseeingthesnakes/Atthesightofthesnakes,I...Whenseeingthesnakes,/Atthesightofthesnakes,I...phrases必備素材積累(P1S1)Whenthatdogjumpedoutatme,
Ifrozewithterror,
tooscaredtomoveaninch.
那條狗突然跳出來(lái)沖向我,我嚇呆了,一動(dòng)也不敢動(dòng)。1.我站著不動(dòng),嚇得不敢前進(jìn),
也不敢后退。Istood
still,________________________________________sentences練能生巧:利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。tooscaredtomoveforwardorstepback.2.當(dāng)她以為自己把票弄丟了時(shí),她著實(shí)驚慌起來(lái)。______________________________atthethoughtthatshe’dlostthetickets.4.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)可怕的消息,我們驚慌失措。Hearingtheterriblenews,_____________________________________sentences練能生巧:利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。(P1S4)Hewasthrownintopanic,hishandsshakingwithfear.他一下子驚慌起來(lái),嚇得雙手顫抖。(P2修辭S3)Panicbegantoboilinhisstomach.
Heshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.他恐慌起來(lái)。他渾身發(fā)抖,覺(jué)得如坐針氈。(P3S6)Panicconsumed/swallowedher.Shefeltthebloodinherbodycooled/frozerapidly.她十分恐慌。她覺(jué)得她的血液都凝固了。getintoapanic陷入恐慌中beseizedwithpanic/panicsetsin
驚慌失措2.當(dāng)她以為自己把票弄丟了時(shí),
她著實(shí)驚慌起來(lái)。______________________________atthethoughtthatshe’dlostthetickets.ShewasthrownintopanicShegotintoapanic/Shewasseizedwithpanic4.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)可怕的消息,
我們驚慌失措。
Hearingtheterriblenews,
_____________________________________sentences練能生巧:利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。wewerethrownintopanic.Wegotintoapanic.Wewereseizedwithpanic.3.我很害怕父親會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)我對(duì)他撒了謊。___________________________________thatmyfatherwouldfindoutIhadliedtohim.sentencesadj.:afraid/terrified/scared/frightened練能生巧:利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。Iwasafraid/terrified/scared/frightened(P2神態(tài)S1)
Janeturnedwhite/pale,
andalookofpanic/horrorcrossed/spreadacrossherface.簡(jiǎn)臉色變得蒼白,臉上掠過(guò)驚恐的表情。(P2心理S4)
IsensedamanwasfollowingmeandIwasscaredoutofmywits.
我感到有個(gè)人跟著我,我嚇得魂不附體。5.他臉色蒼白,看上去嚇得魂不附體。______________________________________________________________________________________sentences練能生巧:利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。Heturnedwhite/pale,lookingthathewasscaredoutofwits.11(be)inacoldsweat一身冷汗(P2無(wú)靈S4)Frank’sheartraced/beat/poundedwidly/violentlywithfear.弗蘭克嚇得心狂跳。6.我一身冷汗,心臟也怦怦跳,透不過(guò)氣來(lái)。______________________________________________.Icouldn’tbreathe.sentences練能生巧:利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全下列句子并背誦。Iwasinacoldsweatandmyheartwasbeatingviolently練能生巧:根據(jù)所給情節(jié),用一句話續(xù)寫(xiě)。描寫(xiě)男孩看到“我”時(shí)的恐懼。
IthoughtIwouldcatchthechildandmakehimmyfriendbeforehewasoldenoughtobefrightenedofmyterribleface.我想我會(huì)抓住那個(gè)小孩,趁他還沒(méi)有長(zhǎng)大到懂得害怕我這張臉,我要讓他成為我的朋友。
SoIcaughtthelittleboy,butwhenhesawmyface,...Iwouldcatchthechildascaryface動(dòng)作+情感詞匯神態(tài)+情感詞匯神態(tài)+肢體語(yǔ)言SoIcaughtthelittleboy,butwhenhesawmyface,...panicked;coveredhisface;screamedloudlyalookofpaniccrossedhisface;hiseyesfullofhorrorhisfacewasdeadwithfright;trembledallover
Jane與Tom兩人本來(lái)一起去露營(yíng)。但兩人發(fā)生爭(zhēng)吵,Jane負(fù)氣一個(gè)人離開(kāi)。走著走著,她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己到了一個(gè)無(wú)人之地。小試牛刀:
根據(jù)所給情節(jié),用本節(jié)課所學(xué)的句子進(jìn)行一段話續(xù)寫(xiě)。注意情節(jié)的合理性和連貫性。根據(jù)所給情節(jié),用本節(jié)課所學(xué)的句子進(jìn)行一段話續(xù)寫(xiě)。
OneweekendinJuly,
Janeandherhusband,
Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbya
lakeintheforest.Unfortunately,
onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.
Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,
JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”and
walkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,
Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.
Aftershehad
climbedtoahighplace,
sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.
Tohersurprise,
shesawnothingbutforestand,
farbeyond,
asnowcappedmountaintop.
Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.
“Help!”
Noreply.根據(jù)所給開(kāi)頭續(xù)寫(xiě)一段話:Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.
__________________________________________參考續(xù)寫(xiě):
Jane,extremelyfrightenedbythedarkness,feltherlegstremblingandherpalmss
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