高中英語讀后續(xù)寫自由“八股文”

20+分的讀后續(xù)寫“自由八股文”的手把手示范前言：任何作文，只要是應(yīng)試作文，就必然有套路，這個不是以人的意志為轉(zhuǎn)移的，否則就無法做到公平公正地去評分。但是套路有高低之分的。高級的就屬于個人獨有的寫作風(fēng)格了。大部分這個套路只能在大量實踐中才能總結(jié)出來。今天這個八股文模式，形式并非死板一塊，而是非常自由的，同時我做了多次修改，可以說終于達(dá)到了第五檔（20+）了。雖說是模板，但是此模板并非讓你直接填詞的哦，必要的思維拓展和用詞積累還是必須具備的。希望本文對廣大考生有借鑒作用。這個模板中的每個句子都是非常講究的，請讀者看下面的例子，可以說能應(yīng)用在任何場合下（后面還需要不斷潤色）。十四個左右的句子涵蓋：.無靈主語；.獨立主格；.分詞作狀語；.形容詞短語作狀語;.定語從句；.what和it句型;.倒裝句；.強(qiáng)調(diào)句；.狀語從句.感嘆句理論:見下面鏈接讀后續(xù)寫的“八”股文模板讀后續(xù)寫作文的續(xù)寫套路：“三沖突、四途徑”2021南京高三學(xué)情檢測讀后續(xù)寫指導(dǎo)：烏龜?shù)南ё杂砂斯晌哪Ｊ剑海總€步驟下面都有相應(yīng)的高級句型，參考第一個鏈接）（1）情緒：消極情緒（有時積極）（2）細(xì)節(jié)：進(jìn)一步解釋描寫（3）轉(zhuǎn)折：個人的努力或借助外界（4）轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰（5）失望：但是問題還是沒有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問題（6）新法：突然有了一個想法（一句話說明這個想法）（7）結(jié)局：過了一段時間；事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折（8）總結(jié)：點題，呼應(yīng)前文例子：（2016年10月，浙江高考）夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子獨自離開，迷路在樹林里，直升飛機(jī)來了幾次援救但沒有看見她，她感到很失望。Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.續(xù)寫八股文思路1.Awaveofterrorsweptoverher.（情緒）2.Herheartpoundingfiercelyandherpalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldherthatshehadtofindasafeplace.（細(xì)節(jié)詳述情緒）3.Tiredandterrifiedasshewas,Janepluckedhercouragetofeeltheway.（轉(zhuǎn)折：個人努力）Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeshefoundacave.Sighingwithrelief,shefeltaglimmerofhope,sayingtoherself,“Tomorrowis（轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：成功，希望來了）

anotherday.6.Withthat,shewenttosleep,inwhosedreamherhusbandkepthercompany.（銜接句）ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.1.Hungryanddisappointed,shefoundnotanyhelicopteroverhead,atalosswhattodo.（主要問題）2.Itsuddenlydawnedonherthatsheshouldfindabigopenareafirst.（突然有了辦法）3.Havinggobblingdownsomeblackberries,shecan'twaittosetoff.（開始做）4.Afterwhatseemedacentury,suchanareadidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Herfacebrightenedup.（感受）6.Whatacoincidencethatmeanwhile,ahelicopterwasflyingtowardsher.（結(jié)果解決問題：無巧不成書，歡喜）7.Uponitslanding,outdashedherhusbandwhohuggedJanetightly,tearswellingupintheirheart.8.Itwasatthatmomentthattheydecidednottoquarrelanymorebutlearnedtocompromise.（總結(jié)）2.（2018年6月，浙江高考）父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個朋友家體驗農(nóng)場生活，見父親和叔叔騎馬，兒子也很想騎，于是親身上馬體驗。臨走叔叔告誡我們不要走偏了路（"Don'tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon'tgetlost!"）。一路上，風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，讓人陶醉。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.續(xù)寫八股文思路1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情緒）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（細(xì)節(jié)詳述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（轉(zhuǎn)折：個人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：成功，希望來了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gaspingforair.（銜接句：新問題來了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.（努力，失?。?.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了辦法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（開始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul'sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather'sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,UnclePaulcouldn'twaittoaskedus,“Wherehaveyoubee（幽默對話）n?Iamjustcalling 9n.7.“ToAlice'sWonderland"myfatheranswered,winkingatmewithabiggrin.8.Whatanunforgettableexperiencewehad!（總結(jié)）3.南京學(xué)情檢測Lookingafterthousandsofturtles,dayafterday,wasnoeasytask.Frommorningtonight,turtlesfed,waterchangedandfloormopped,Albertfeltextremelyexhausted,asifonthevergeofcollapsing.（感受：疲勞）Reducedtobeinghomethewholeday,hepluckedupcouragetofacethefact,oftenclosetotears.Now,evenaglanceofhisbookbecamealuxury.（詳細(xì)描述感受）“Poorboy,youcanfindawayoutintime,"sighedhisparents,pattinghimontheshoulderandleaving.Alberthadnoideawhattodo.However,oneday,hefoundastrangethingandfeltarayofhope.（問題的解決方法：外界的力量）Withdecreasingtimeoncomputergameswasthenumberofturtlesalsoindecline.（銜接句）WhenAlbertforgotabouthisbelovedcomputergames,theturtlesdisappeared.Heevencouldn'tbebotheredtoaskthereason.Nowhiscuriositygavewaytohisexcitementasifhewasrelievedofahugeburden.（感受）Morerelievedthanshockedwerehisparentswhohuggedhimtightly，tremblingwithdelightandurgedhimtogoout.（父母的感受）Afterwhatseemedacentury,hec