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I’mwritingtokindlyremindyouofthedormitoryrules.Asweliveinthesameroom,wearelikefamiliesthusweshouldloveeachotherandrespecteachother.What’smore,weshouldmakeourroomcleanandtidy.Therefore,Ihopeyoucanreadthefollowingrulesandobeythem.RuleNo.1Whenyougetupinthemorning,remembertomakethebed.RuleNo.2Don’tmakephonecallswhenwearesleeping.RuleNo.3Don’tuseothers’thingswithoutpermission.RuleNo.4Turnoffthelightsbeforeyouleavetheroom.Ihopeallofuscanobeytheserulesandmakeourroommoreandmorecomfortable.Bestwishes,LiHua第15頁/共24頁第16頁/共24頁85第17頁/共24頁113第18頁/共24頁第19頁/共24頁

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