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原文翻譯BalletwasawayoflifeinKelly'sfamily.Her

eldersister

Serenawasnowdancingata

topcollege.ThoughKelly'smomalwayswantedhertofollowinhersister'sfootstepsandKellyherselfwasgoodatballet,herloveforballethad

faded

yearsbefore,andshewaseagerfor

anewchallenge.芭蕾是Kelly家族的一種生活方式。她的姐姐Serena現(xiàn)在正在一所頂尖的學(xué)院跳舞。盡管Kelly的媽媽總是希望她能追隨姐姐的腳步，而Kelly自己也很擅長(zhǎng)芭蕾，但她對(duì)芭蕾的熱愛(ài)已經(jīng)在多年前消逝了，她渴望尋找新的挑戰(zhàn)。Onedayatschool,asKellyleftthedancestudio,shewalkedpastthegym,

fascinatedby

boxerstraininginsidetheboxingring.Shewas

deeplyimpressed

byhow

hard

theyhitandhowfasttheymoved.Infact,she'dlongbeenattractedtoboxing.一天放學(xué)后，當(dāng)Kelly離開(kāi)舞蹈室經(jīng)過(guò)體育館時(shí)，她被拳擊手在拳擊場(chǎng)內(nèi)訓(xùn)練的場(chǎng)景深深吸引。她深深地被他們打得有多么猛、動(dòng)作有多快所打動(dòng)。事實(shí)上，她一直被拳擊吸引著。Shepulledapieceofpaperfromherbackpack.OnthefamiliarOakwoodHighSchoolClubSign-upSheetwasthephrase:BOXINGCLUBTRYOUT.Thatwaswhat

Kellyreallywanted

todo.Sheknewher

mom

had

highexpectations

forherwhenitcametoballet.Tiredoftryingtokeepupwithhersister,Kellywasreadytocarveherownpath.她從背包里拿出一張紙。在熟悉的Oakwood高中社團(tuán)報(bào)名表上寫(xiě)著短語(yǔ)："拳擊俱樂(lè)部選拔賽"。那正是Kelly真正想做的事。她知道在芭蕾方面，媽媽對(duì)她期望很高。累了追趕姐姐，Kelly準(zhǔn)備開(kāi)創(chuàng)自己的道路。Thenextday,she

gatheredhercourage

and

toldSerena

abouthernewpassion.Atfirst,Serenadidn'tunderstandandthoughtshewasjustjoking.ButwhenshesawKellywasserious,shereplied,"YouknowMomwantsyoutobeaballetdancer,right?Besides,boxingis

onlyforboys(忽然想到《摔跤吧，爸爸》),andyou'resogoodatballet.Leanintoyourstrength,Kelly.""ButthisiswhereIwanttoputmystrength,"Kellyinsisted,"andwhatexactlydoes'onlyforboys'mean,anyway?Boxingisasportforeveryone!"

Gradually,touched

byher

determinationandpassion,

Serenabegantounderstandandsupporther.Kellycouldfeelit.Hersisterwasgoingto

respect

herdecision,nomatterwhat.Butthatwasnothingcomparedtothepreparationsforthetryout,whereshewasrequiredtoshowherfootworkandpunchingabilitieswithothercandidates.Boxingdidn'tcomenaturallytoKelly,butshehadmadeuphermindto

stick

withherchoice.第二天，她鼓起勇氣告訴Serena她的新激情。起初，Serena無(wú)法理解，認(rèn)為她只是在開(kāi)玩笑。但當(dāng)她看到Kelly很認(rèn)真時(shí)，她回答道："你知道媽媽希望你成為一名芭蕾舞者，對(duì)嗎？此外，拳擊只是男孩的運(yùn)動(dòng)，你在芭蕾方面非常出色。發(fā)揮你的優(yōu)勢(shì)，Kelly。""但這是我想要展現(xiàn)力量的地方，"Kelly堅(jiān)稱，"'只是男孩的運(yùn)動(dòng)'到底意味著什么？拳擊是一項(xiàng)適合所有人的運(yùn)動(dòng)！"在感受到她的決心和激情后，Serena逐漸理解并支持她。Kelly能感覺(jué)到，不管怎樣，她的姐姐都會(huì)尊重她的決定。但這與選拔賽的準(zhǔn)備相比毫不算什么，她需要和其他候選人展示自己的步法和拳擊能力。拳擊對(duì)于Kelly來(lái)說(shuō)并不是自然而然的，但她已經(jīng)下定決心要堅(jiān)持自己的選擇了。一句話：Kelly的姐姐Serena擅長(zhǎng)舞蹈（優(yōu)秀姐姐光環(huán)）分析：本文主題為“追尋自我”，第一段主題為介紹Kelly通過(guò)參加拳擊俱樂(lè)部選拔賽，尋求新的挑戰(zhàn)的想法；第二段主題為Kelly決定秘密訓(xùn)練以備選拔賽，并強(qiáng)調(diào)了她對(duì)拳擊的喜愛(ài)與決心。Kelly性格堅(jiān)毅、果敢，喜歡接受新挑戰(zhàn)，而她和姐姐的性格有所差異，Serena的角色在本文中起到支持啟發(fā)的作用，表現(xiàn)了親情溫暖。試水續(xù)寫(xiě)：續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Shespentcountlesshourspracticingherfootworkandpunches,oftenstayinglateafterschooltotraininthegym.Shealsosoughtadvicefromhernewfriendsintheboxingclubandwatchedvideosofprofessionalboxerstolearntheirtechniques.Despitethephysicalchallengesandexhaustion,Kellyfoundherselfenjoyingeverymomentofhertraining,feelingasenseofaccomplishmentandexcitementthatshehadn'tfeltinyears（對(duì)應(yīng)原文里對(duì)舞蹈已經(jīng)faded）.續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Withapoundingheart,Kellyscannedthelist,andtoherdelight,hernamewasamongthosewhohadmadetheteam.Shecouldn'tbelieveit.Allherhardworkanddeterminationhadpaidoff.AsshesharedthenewswithSerena與姐姐分享喜悅（姐姐支持）,sheknewthatshehadmadetherightdecisiontopursueherpassionforboxing.Now,shehadtofacethechallengeofbreakingthenewstohermomandconvincingherthatitwastimeforKellytofollowherowndreams,notjustthoseofhersister（舞蹈）.微調(diào)版本續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Sheboughtapairofboxingglovesandinstalledapunchingbaginherbedroom.Everyday,afterfinishingherhomework,shewouldcloseherbedroomdoorandstarttraining.Shepracticedherfootwork,punches,andjumps.Shewatchedcountlessboxingmatchesonline,observingthemovementsoftheboxersandlearningtheirtechniques.Afterseveralweeksoftraining,Kellywasconfidentthatshehadmasteredsomebasicboxingskills.續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.Kelly'sheartwaspoundingasshewalkedtowardthebillboard.Shefeltnervousbutexcitedatthesametime.Whenshearrived,shesawhernameonthelistofcandidateswhowereselected.Sheletoutaloudcheer,feelingproudandrelieved.Herhardworkhadpaidoff.Asshewalkedawayf