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GuangzhouYuyanMiddleSchool2019.12.09廣州市玉巖中學(xué)馮蔚清老師2020屆書面表達(dá)專題Strategiesofaddingdetails2016年全國卷I假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷。給外教MsJenkins

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可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2017全國卷I假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內(nèi)容包括：1、時間和地點;2、內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩;3、課前準(zhǔn)備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2018全國卷I假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗，請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.到達(dá)時間；2.合適的禮物；3.餐桌禮儀。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2019全國卷I假定你是李華，…….注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。合理增加細(xì)節(jié)高分作文須具備的特征：1、能很好地完成寫作任務(wù)（要點全覆蓋）并能為行文需要作適當(dāng)、得體的拓展。2、語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，不啰嗦；語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性，有瑕疵但不影響表達(dá)。3、作文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，卷面整潔；語言表述地道、流暢（有效銜接開頭句并能使用過渡成分貫穿要點）。1語用性原則pragmaticallyAdddetails2語法性原則grammatically3邏輯性原則logicallySampleOne1).Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.2).Knowingitwillbealongsummervacationbeforeyouareadmittedtoyourdreamuniversities,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully..給今年即將畢業(yè)的全體高三學(xué)生寫封信，信中建議他們在高考（theCollegeEntranceExamination）結(jié)束后的暑假中能夠安排一些有意義的事去做。給建議Knowingitwillbealongsummervacationbeforeyouareadmittedintoyourdreamuniversities,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionsonhowtospendyoursummervacationmeaningfully.Strategy1：語用性原則,主要集中在信件開頭與結(jié)尾，可通過寒暄、介紹、感謝、期待等內(nèi)容的添加，讓書信交際功能更生動而又有人情味,符合語言交際的語用性。

InChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities.SampleTwoInChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities,suchasvisitingfamily,enjoyinglotsoffood,andmoreimportantly,forchildrengettingluckymoney.1.中英寒假生活調(diào)查，向英國朋友介紹中國學(xué)生的寒假生活。InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship.SampleTwoInChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship,

reunion,harmonyandgoodluck.2.你準(zhǔn)備了中國結(jié)作為禮物送給外國網(wǎng)友，感謝他的幫助。細(xì)節(jié)拓展可通過兩方面進(jìn)行:1.下義延伸，即通過適當(dāng)添加例子，將寫作內(nèi)容具體化。（suchas,forexample,like…）2.平行補充：挖掘?qū)懽鲗ο蟮牟煌矫婊蚪x詞的疊詞法。1.InChina,thewintervacationfallsduringtheChineseNewYear,somoststudentstakepartindifferentSpringFestivalactivities,suchasvisitingfamily,eatinglotsoffood,andimportantly,gettingluckymoney.2.InChina,theChineseknotisasymboloffriendship,

reunion,harmonyandgoodluck.Strategy2：語法性原則,茶文化節(jié)期間有很多活動:DuringtheTeaCultureFestival,wewillhavealotofactivities.1Practice：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DuringtheTeaCultureFestival,wewillhavealotofactivities,suchastastingtea,lectures,teadisplay,teamaking,pictureshowsandsoon.SampleThree1.邀請他來中國體驗文化。

2.暑假建議你去學(xué)車。IwouldliketoinviteyoutocometoChinathissummer.Youcanlearntodriveinordertogetadrivinglicense.You’dbetterpayavisittoChina,sothatyoucanhaveatasteofChinesecultureinperson?Youcanlearntodriveinordertogetadrivinglicense,whichwillenableyoutodriveinyourdailyroutine.sothatwhichStrategy3：邏輯性原則,主要用不同的復(fù)合句（定語從句、狀語從句、名詞性從句、倒裝句）,呈現(xiàn)句間的邏輯關(guān)系（補充說明、強調(diào)、結(jié)果、目的、原因等），符合語言交際的語用性。

3.課前請做好充分準(zhǔn)備。Pleasemakefullpreparationsforthelesson.122.建議網(wǎng)友Peter學(xué)習(xí)中國唐詩。WhynottrytolearnTangpoetry?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.學(xué)校茶文化活動通知。ATeaCultureFestivalisgoingtobeheldinourschoolnextweek.3______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inordertoenrichourstudents’knowledgeofteaandexperiencethecharmofBritishculture,aTeaCultureFestivalisgoingtobeheldinourschoolnextweek.WhynottrytolearnTangpoetrysothatyoucanfeelthebeautyofChineselanguage?Pleasemakefullpreparationsforthelesson,whichwillenableyoutounderstandthecontentmuchbetter.Practice：加目的，inordertoenrich….加結(jié)果，sothatyoucan….加解釋，whichwillenableyouto……ListentoanintroductionofMajorSnowfromWechat(DailyEnglishRadio每日英語電臺fromChinaDaily)ThetraditionalChineselunarcalendardividestheyearinto24solarterms.MajorSnow,the21stsolartermoftheyear,beginsthisyearonDecember7andendsonDecember21.Task：whilelistening,takenotesofsixthingsyoushouldknowaboutMajorSnow:____winteraboutthesnow,aproverbgoes,”______________________________”._______wintersweetWintersweetusually______inmid-to-lateDecemberinsome________citiesofChina._______lamb_______sausagesEating____________respiratory呼吸道的illnessTheoutbreakofrespiratoryillnesscanbe______bywearingawarmscarfto______theneck.假定你是李華，你校的交換生Peter兩天前來到廣州，碰巧是農(nóng)歷24時節(jié)的大雪，他得知后對中國的24節(jié)氣感興趣，向你咨詢中國人在這個節(jié)氣會有什么風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣，請你根據(jù)下列要點寫回信。要點：1.大雪時節(jié)的時間;2.介紹大雪時節(jié)的3個民俗習(xí)慣;3.簡介“瑞雪兆豐年”的成語;注意：詞數(shù)100左右可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫DearPeter,I’mdelightedthatyouareinterestedintraditionalChineselunarcalendar.KnowingthatyouwanttoknowsomecustomsthatChinesedoinMajorSnow,oneofthe24solartermsinDecember.Iwouldliketointerpreterfromthreeaspects.Firstofall,peoplewilleatsomecertainfoodduringthisspecialday,suchas_1_____________________________________________________________________________________________Theywillhavemanyactivities,forexample,_2_________________________________________________________________________________________.AnotherthingthatIshouldmentioniswintersweet._3________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Duringthisperiod,Chinesepeoplewatchforoutbreaksofrespiratoryillness,_4________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Aproverbaboutthesnowsays,_5________________________________________________________________________________________”，whichis__6______________________________.Becausethesnowcoverstheground,thelowwintertemperaturekillspestsandcrops_7_____________________________________.LookforwardtomeetingyouinGuangzhou,China.YoucanexperiencethecustomsinpersonandeatsomefoodImention.YoursincerelyLiHuaDearPeter,

I’mdelightedthatyouareinterestedintraditionalChineselunarcalendar.

KnowingthatyouwanttoknowsomecustomsinMajorSnow,oneofthe24solartermsinDecember.Iwouldliketointerpreterfromthreeaspects.

First,peoplewilleatsomecertainfoodonthisspecialday,suchaseatinglambandporridge.LambisafavoritefoodforChinesepeopleduringMajorSnow.Alsotheywillmakingsausage.DuringMajorSnow,peopleinsouthernChina,includingNanjing,Hangzhou,HefeiandChongqing,makesausages,animportantpartofpreparationforSpringFestival.AnotherthingthatIshouldmentioniswintersweet.Theseplumblossomsusuallyflowerinmid-to-lateDecemberinsomesoutherncitiesofChina.

Duringthisperiod,Chinesepeoplewatchforoutbreaksofrespiratoryillness,whichcanbepreventedbywearingawarmscarftoprotecttheneck.Aproverbaboutthesnowsays,“Atimelysnowpromisesagoodharvest.”，whichisaChineseidiom.Asthesnowcoverstheground,thelowwintertemperaturekillspestsandcropswillgrowstrongerandmorehealthy.LookforwardtomeetingyouinGuangzhou,China.YoucanexperiencethecustomsinpersonandeatsomefoodImention.YoursincerelyLiHua添加心理描寫內(nèi)容補充介紹

______________________________________________解釋原因1.延伸法；(variousclauses)Asthesnowcoverstheground,thelowwintertemperature….2.