讀后續(xù)寫微技能指導(dǎo)3

讀后續(xù)寫微技能指導(dǎo)3

—融情于景Emotion+Environment細(xì)節(jié)描寫Myeyeswerewideopen.Myfaceturnedpale.Mylegsweretrembling.Myheartwasbeatingwildly.Mytearswerewellingup.Myheart

Myface

Myeyes

Mylegs

eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/body...Mytears

emotion細(xì)節(jié)描寫eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/body...Shewashappy.1.____________shone/glittered/sparkledwithjoy.2

____________litupwithpleasure.3.___________

waspoundingwithexcitement.

Her

eyesHerfaceHerheartShewasexcited.1.Hewassoexcitedthathecouldhardly_______.2

Theman______forjoywhenhewonthefirstprize.3.___________

glittered/sparkledwithexcitement.

speak

jumpedHer

eyesemotion生動(dòng)動(dòng)詞Afeelingoffearslowly__________onme.Afloodofterror__________________me.Asenseoffright_____________________me.

...蔓延表示某種情感侵襲/涌入Iwasscared.overtook/overwhelmedwashedover/floodedovercreptupShewasangry.

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其他表達(dá)）

Angerfloodedoverhisbody.Hewasseizedbyastrongsenseofanger.

emotionTranslation1.他正要反應(yīng)，突然感覺自己舌頭打結(jié)，手心出汗。2.她悲傷而疲憊，癱倒在扶手椅上。Hewasabouttorespondwhenhefelthistonguetiedandpalmssweating.Sadandexhausted,shecollapsedintoherarmchair.Thewindwas__________wildlyandtherainwas_________fromtheheaven.Theworldwas______________withaseaofdarkness.Environmenthowlingpouringburdened/loadedspecific

trees/flowers/breeze/sun/stream...comfortable/sad...EnvironmentEmotionAsenseofhorrorcreepinguponme,Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.

Thewindwashowlingwildlyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afloodoffearwashingoverme,Iimmediatelyturned1.2.

aroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.

“景”“情”過渡fear/fright情景交融情要細(xì)致景要細(xì)致過渡要融洽把自然現(xiàn)象當(dāng)作人來描寫1.Thewindstoodupand

gaveashout.大風(fēng)凜冽，發(fā)出怒吼。2.Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.

微風(fēng)輕柔地親吻著她的臉龐。3.Themistswallowedhimup.

薄霧把他包圍起來。4.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。5.Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。景物描寫

把含蓄抽象的概念當(dāng)作人來描寫

1.Fearseized/swallowedhim.

恐懼把他吞噬了。2.Angerchokedmywords.我氣得說不出話來。3.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.我突然想到一個(gè)好主意。4.Anxietytornhimintopieces.她焦慮不安，十分崩潰。5.Courage/Confidencedesertedhim.

他沒信心了。6.Afeelingoffearslowlycreptuponme.

恐懼慢慢地在我心頭蔓延。情感描寫Practice請(qǐng)根據(jù)相關(guān)提示寫一篇短文，要求：1.情與景結(jié)合；2.詞數(shù)80左右。提示：1.Lastmonday,John's