高考英語(yǔ)之建議信各版本通用課件

書(shū)面表達(dá)

Aletterofgivingadvice

一Cross-question(審題)做到四確定1體裁____________（記敘文？議論文）2主導(dǎo)時(shí)態(tài)____________3主導(dǎo)人稱(chēng)第____人稱(chēng)（我？你？他？）4布局謀篇：________段Para1__________________

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基本框架：開(kāi)頭（beginning）----開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn).(stateyouridea)主體(body)----對(duì)所提出的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并說(shuō)明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)結(jié)尾(ending)----呼應(yīng)開(kāi)頭，重申觀點(diǎn)(restateyouropinion.)

注意事項(xiàng)：1）建議信要寫(xiě)出寫(xiě)信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力2）建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復(fù)?？蓮恼?、經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化、倫理、法律以及個(gè)人等多角度給出建議。3）符合英文信件的基本格式常用套語(yǔ)A．建議信開(kāi)頭常用句式

(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫(xiě)作意圖)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.6.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceaboutEnglishlearning.B.表達(dá)建議（body）1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，afterthat，intheend．finally．Meanwhile,what’smore．．．2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Youmayconsiderdoing…6.Iwouldseemtomethatyoucould…7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan…C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.注意銜接詞使用:表先后次序：First,second,third….FinallyFirstly,secondly，…eventuallytobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast,lastbutnotleast遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：furthermore；moreover；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；,besides；inotherwords；ontheonehand...，ontheotherhand...；meanwhile；atthesametime；寫(xiě)作模板模板一：Dear_____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_____(問(wèn)題)，andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:______(建議內(nèi)容).……Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Yourssincerely,LiMing模板二：Dear_____(對(duì)象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(問(wèn)題).Mysuggestionstodealwiththeproblemareasfollows.Firstandforthemost_______(建議一);inaddition_____(建議二);what’smore_____(建議三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing糾錯(cuò)1語(yǔ)氣錯(cuò)誤Youmustgotodosomesportsoutdoors,suchasplayingfootballandsoon.2從句錯(cuò)誤Youcanfindagoodfriendcanlistentoyou.3從句錯(cuò)誤Ifyoudothis,youwillfeelhappyandforgetsomethingmakeyouupset.4重復(fù)AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkdoingsportsisgoodforyou.5詞匯錯(cuò)誤Youcoulddosomeoutdoorsexercises.6成分Beoptimisticaboutlifeisveryimportant.

7詞性和語(yǔ)序Youcaneasycalmdownyourself.8單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤Italsocouldbeagoodidearifyoudosomesports.9單詞核心用法錯(cuò)誤Itisagoodwaytomakeyourelax.10that理解錯(cuò)誤Iamsorrytohearthat.Itisnotgoodtoloseyourtemper.閱讀以下考場(chǎng)作文，并進(jìn)行必要的潤(rùn)色改寫(xiě)。DearJack:Iamsorrytohearthatyouarelosingyourtemperrecently.Thisseriouslyinfluencesyournormallifeandstudy.Yes,itisbad.Don’tworry.Igiveyousomeadvice.（1）,Ithinkyoucanfindafriendtolistentoyourproblems.Youwillfeelrelaxed.（2）,Ithinkyoushouldgoouttodosportslikeplayingfootball.（3）,youmustbeoptimisticaboutlife.Ifyoudothese,Iamsureyouwillbehappyagain.Iamwaitingforyouletter.

思考：1結(jié)構(gòu)？2語(yǔ)言及符號(hào)？3可以得多少分？書(shū)面表達(dá)如何寫(xiě)？三個(gè)步驟Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點(diǎn)題；一兩個(gè)句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

中心記述部分；層次分明3.Ending

小結(jié)；呼應(yīng)主題佳作欣賞

假定你叫李華，最近，你的好友林浩來(lái)信說(shuō)他升入高中以后感到不太適應(yīng)，不知道如何結(jié)交新朋友。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回一封信，提出一些建議。提示：1、與人接觸時(shí)要面帶微笑、對(duì)別人又好。2、關(guān)心同學(xué)、樂(lè)于助人。3、學(xué)會(huì)傾聽(tīng)很重要，這樣別人樂(lè)于和你相處。4、積極參加班級(jí)活動(dòng)并展示自己才能。5、……（你的建議）注意：1.詞數(shù)130左右，信的格式已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearLinHao,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Fromyourletter,Iknowyouhavetheproblemofhowtomakenewfriendsinhighschool.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.First,youshouldsmileandtrytobefriendlywhenyoumeetpeople.Youshouldalsocareaboutyourschoolmates.Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpthem,theywillunderstandyoubetter.Second,itisimportantforyoutobeagoodlistener.Thatway,whenpeoplearewithyou,theywillfeelcomfortableandhappy.Finally,itisbetterforyoutotakeanactivepartinclassactivitieswhereyoucanshowyourtalent.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Mayyoubehappyinyournewschool.YoursLiHuaDearLiMing,Inyourletter,yousaidyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothersandoftenfeellonely.Ithinkyoucanjustmakeitsolongasyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.First,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates’likesanddislikes.Second,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionheldinyourclassandshowyourownopinionactively,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherspatiently.Thenyoucanmakefriendswithmorepeople.Third,itwillbeagoodideatohelpotherswhennecessary.Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandotheabove.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,Lihua二、根據(jù)提示，寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的建議信。假如你是某報(bào)編輯，昨天收到一位學(xué)生來(lái)信。請(qǐng)根據(jù)來(lái)信的內(nèi)容和所給的要點(diǎn)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信。（要注意寫(xiě)信的格式）DearEditor,Iamahard-workinggirlandwanttobethetopstudentinmyclass.Butinexams,Ialwaysmakemanycarelessmistakes.Ireallyworryaboutit.WhatshouldIdotoimprovemyperformanceinexams?BestregardsYourssincerely,LiFang要點(diǎn)提示：1.收到來(lái)信，獲悉信中所提到的有關(guān)情況；2.不要壓力太大；3.如有問(wèn)題請(qǐng)教老師或同學(xué)；4.考試時(shí)合理分配（distribute）時(shí)間，并盡量抽出幾分鐘檢查；5.其它建議………………DearLiFang,Ireadyourletteryesterday.It'sgoodthatyouhaveahighaimforyourselfandyouknowwhathaspreventedyoufromachievinghighscoresin