高考英語新題型寫作技巧六 非謂語和寫作易錯詞

2020年高考英語寫作新題型備考技巧

專題（六）非謂語+寫作易錯詞備考技巧1不言而喻，非謂語在英語語法中有舉足輕重的作用。非謂語有很多形式，如:doing,done,todo,havingdone,beingdone,tobedoing,tobedone,tohavedone等。它們在句中可以做主語、賓語、表語、狀語、定語等；做狀語時可以表示伴隨、原因、目的、結(jié)果、條件、時間、讓步等功能。一篇好的書面表達，過多的簡單句會使得句與句之間的關(guān)系松散和單調(diào)；過多的復(fù)雜句也會使整篇文章顯得累贅不堪。所以考生要學(xué)會使用非謂語動詞，不僅會使句子形式多樣，也會使得文章讀起來結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，言簡意賅。特別注意的是，非謂語是文章概寫和故事續(xù)寫一個很重要的寫作技巧，一定要多加練習(xí)。一．運用非謂語動詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡單句利用非謂語可以使用以下方法把有關(guān)聯(lián)的簡單句變得高級和地道。寫出兩個相關(guān)聯(lián)的簡單句；找準兩個簡單句的對接點，把其中一個句子變?yōu)橹鞲杉粗骶?，另外一個句子用非謂語動詞進行改寫，確定好其在整個主句中的成分是主語還是其它成分；在非謂語的選擇上，還要考慮非謂語動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)。仞U：①.Ilongtoimprovemyselfbyreadingsomebooks.②.ThebookswerewrittenintheTangDynasty.寫出兩個簡單句后，可以確定第一句為主句，第二句為非謂語。由于第二句的write和主語thebooks是被動關(guān)系，所以用過去分詞done做定語。IlongtoimprovemyselfbyreadingsomebookswrittenintheTangDynasty.（2017全國一卷書面表達）嘗試把以下幾個句子轉(zhuǎn)變成非謂語。.Everyoneyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit.Youcanenjoythemovie,haveaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgiveyourcomments.Everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit,enjoyingthemovie,havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourcomments.（2018全國二卷書面表達）.MountTaistandsinShandongProvince.Ithaslongbeenapopulartouristspot.ManyChineselegendarystoriesareattachedtoit.StandinginShandongProvince,MountTaihaslongbeenapopulartouristspot,withmanyChineselegendarystoriesattachedtoit.（2017北京高考書面表達）③.Inthenewspaperofourschoolthereisacolumnanditiscalled“ForeignCulture”.ItaimstointroduceAmericancustomsandthelifeofhighschoolstudents.Inthenewspaperofourschoolthereisacolumncalled“ForeignCulture”,aimingtointroduceAmericancustomsandthelifeofhighschoolstudents.（2015全國一卷書面表達）運用非謂語動詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句在復(fù)合句當(dāng)中，我們只需要找出主句，把剩下的從句變成非謂語即可。這時，我們也需要判斷非謂語做什么成分，并把握好非謂語動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)。例:Sinceyouhaverealizedthatyourtimeislimited,you'llhavetostudyforyourgoalswithoutangerorhesitation.把since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句轉(zhuǎn)換成非謂語動詞，realize和you之間為主動關(guān)系，且表示完成時，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞的完成時做狀語。即：Havingrealizedthatyourtimeislimited,you'llhavetostudyforyourgoalswithoutangerorhesitation.（2014安徽高考書面表達）嘗試把以下幾個復(fù)合句轉(zhuǎn)變成非謂語。.AfterIheardyourlecture,IwasclearhowwesternmusicinfluencedtheUKandhowitwoulddevelopinthefuture.Havingheardyourlecture,IwasclearhowwesternmusicinfluencedtheUKandhowitwoulddevelopinthefuture.（2019天津高考書面表達）.Althoughshewastiredandexhausted,shemanagedtomakeaflagwithyellowblouse.Tiredandexhausted,shemanagedtomakeaflagwithheryellowblouse.（2016浙江高考書面表達）.BecauseIthoughtthathissolutionmightbewrong,Icarefullyanalyzedtheproblemandtriedtoworkitoutinadifferentway.Thinkingthathissolutionmightbewrong,Icarefullyanalyzedtheproblemandtriedtoworkitoutinadifferentway.（2015湖南高考書面表達）考生在書面表達中運用非謂語的時候需要注意非謂語動詞形式和語態(tài)的選擇；另外也需要注意非謂語動詞的邏輯主語一般要和主句的主語需要保持一致。非謂語動詞常用的寫作句型1?remaintobedone???Manyquestionshavetobesettledandmuchremainstobedoneinoureducationalwork.what/how/where/why等疑問詞+todoWedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.（2017北京高考書面表達）LastTuesday,ourclassinvitedanoldcraftsmantoteachushowtomakedoughfigures.（2015北京高考書面表達）連詞when/while/once/unless/although???+doing/doneWhileworking,Irealizedhowharditwastoworkinthefieldsunderahotsun.（2019北京高考書面表達）beeasy/diflicult/challenging???todo???Insomeexperts'opinion,livingconditionsonMarsaredifficulttotolerate.prefertodo?ratherthando?/wouldratherdo?thando?/woulddo?ratherthando?.Nowadayssometeenagersprefertochatwithstrangersonlineratherthantalkwiththeirparentsfacetoface.havingdone?Havingspentnearlyallourmoney,wecouldn'taffordtostayatahotel.?,doing?Thewolfnoticedthemandturneditsheadback,shoutingloudlyatPaulandBecky.（2017浙江高考書面表達）Janejumpedtoherfeet,wavingherhandmadeflagandcryingforhelp.（2016浙江高考書面表達）?,done?/done?,?.Absorbedineverymoveofmine,theforeignstudentswereonceamazedbythisuniqueculture.（2018北京高考書面表達）onlytodo?What'sworse,IfoundmyselfhavingafeverthismorningandIwenttotheclinicforimmediatetreatment,onlytobeadvisedtostayinbedforthreedays.judgingfrom/by?Judgingfromtheexpressiononherface,paredto/with?Comparedtothetraditionalshoes,theyhavethreeuniquefunctions.（2014湖南高考書面表達）besaid/reported/believed/considered???todo???Abusfullofpassengerswasreportedtohavegoneoutofcontrolonahighwaysouthofthecity.with+賓語+賓語補足語,獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)Withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventscanbeheld,ofwhichping-Pong,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.（2018全國三卷書面表達）Inthepicture,aboyinwornclothessitsbesideashabbywoodentablewithapileofbamboobooksonit.（2015福建高考書面表達）Whoever?needsto/should/will/is...任何??的人都需要/應(yīng)該/會??Whoeversignsupforthecompetitionwillhavetoregisterfirstly.備考技巧2提升訓(xùn)練一．選擇合適的非謂語動詞形式改寫下列句子。注意非謂語的時態(tài)和語態(tài)Hehadwonthegame.Allofthemsanganddancedallnight.Whenthemedicineistakenontime,themedicineiseffective.Thelittleisdressedinred.Shelookedpretty.Theflowerssmellednice.Theyattractedmanyvisitors.Allthosecametothepartylastnight.Theyaremyfriends.Themoneywasneededforthesickchild.Itwassooncollected.Theyoungmanistalkingwiththechildren.Heisafamoussinger.Hewasknownasafamousexpert.Hereceivedmanyinvitations.Ifwearegivenalittlemoretime,wewilldobetter.Ididn'tknowwhattodo.Ihadtoaskmyparentsforadvice.Hehadfailedintheexam.Hedidn'tplaycomputergamesanymore.BecauseIhaven'tfinishedmywork,Ihavetostayathome.Therewasnobus.Sohehadtowalkhome.Iftimepermits,Iwillgoshoppingthisafternoon.Hecriedsuddenly.Tearsrolleddownhischeeks.Allthepeopleherelikethenovel.ItiswrittenbyTom.Theboycametoschoollateagain.Thismadetheteacherveryfurious.Thestudentsweremakingthemostoftime.Theywantedtofinishtheworkearlier.Ifitiscarriedoutcontinuously,itwillbenefitallofusgreatlyandwearesuretomakeobviousprogress.Whenwearefacedwithdifficulties,weneedfriendstogiveuscomfortandhelp.WhenIknowthatourlibraryisgoingtobuysomebooks,I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestions.Afterwehadpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.Iftimepermits,we'llwatchafilmthere,whichissurelyaboutthehistoryofYendangMountain.Wecansetoutearlysothatwe'llhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.BecauseIlearnaboutyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekinguniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.題目一【答案】1.Havingwonthegame,allofthemsanganddancedallnight.Whentakenontime,themedicineiseffective.Dressedinred,shelookedpretty.Theflowersmellingniceattractedmanyvisitors.Allthosecomingtothepartylastnightaremyfriends.Themoneyneededforthesickchildwassooncollected.Theyoungmantalkingwiththechildrenisafamoussinger.Knownasafamousexpert,hereceivedmanyinvitations.(If)givenalittlemoretime,wewilldobetter.Notknowingwhattodo,Ihadtoaskmyparentsforadvice.Havingfailedintheexam,hedidn'tplaycomputergamesanymore.Nothaven'tfinishedmywork,Ihavetostayathome.Therebeingnobus,hehadtowalkhome.Timepermitting,Iwillgoshoppingthisafternoon.Hecriedsuddenly,(with)tearsrollingdownhischeeks.AllthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbyTom.Theboy'scomingtoschoollateagainmadetheteacherveryfurious.Thestudentsweremakingthemostoftime(soas/inorder)tofinishtheworkearlier.(If)carriedoutcontinuously,itwillbenefitallofusgreatlyandwearesuretomakeobviousprogress.(When)facedwithdifficulties,weneedfriendstogiveuscomfortandhelp.Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuysomebooks,I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestions.Havingpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.Timepermitting,we'llwatchafilmthere,whichissurelyaboutthehistoryofYendangMountain.Wecansetoutearly(soas)tohavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.LearningaboutyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekinguniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.二．用非謂語動詞翻譯下列句子。在寫這本書時，由于親自品嘗過一些不知名的植物，李時珍遭受了很多折磨?；仡欉^去的兩周，我們情不自禁地想起了我們課堂上進行的那些激烈的討論。他所有的注意力都集中到那本書上，我進來時他都沒有注意到。我很熟悉我的城市，所有我有責(zé)任告訴在出口的乘客怎么到達他們的目的地。隨著社會快速發(fā)展，我們很有必要掌握好英語和電腦。由于我對那件事感到抱歉，所以我開始思考能做點什么來發(fā)揮作用。我非常榮幸在這里與你們分享我關(guān)于高中學(xué)習(xí)方面的觀點。題目二【答案】1.Whilewritingthebook,LiShizhensufferedalotfromtastingunknownplantsonhisown.2.Lookingbackonthepasttwoweeks,wecan'thelpthinkingoftheheateddiscussionswehadinclass.Withallhisattentionfixedonthebook,hedidn'tnoticewhenIcamein.Knowingmycitywell,Iwillhavetheresponsibilitytotellthepassengersattheexithowtogettotheirdestinations.Withthesocietydevelopingrapidly,it'sessentialforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer.Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.It'smyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool.三．閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。請嘗試用非謂語動詞。Oneday,mybrotherandIwerealoneinourapartment.Thereasonwasthatmyparentshadbothgoneforaballpartyandhadleftmeinchargeofeverything.IwasdoingmyhomeworkwhilemyyoungerbrotherwaswatchingTV.Allofasudden,thedoorbellrang.Ding-Dong!Ding-Dong!MyyoungerbrotherhadrushedtothedoorbeforeIdecidedtoanswerthedoor.Weboththoughtthatourparentshadcomehome.Asaresult,heunlockedthedoorandopenedit.Outsideofthehousestoodamanwhoworeablackraincoatandblackrubberboots.Helookednodifferentfromotherpeopleandhesaidthathewasasalesmanandaskedpolitelyifourmotherorfatherwasathomesohecouldtalkwiththem.Withoutanythinking,mybrothersaid,“No."Heaskedifwewouldliketobuysomecomicbooks,whichhewasselling.Iquicklyexplainedtohimthatwewerenotsupposedtobuyanythingwithoutourparents'permission.However,itseemedthathewasnotwillingtofollowmyadviceandhehadanintentiontoenterourhouse.Then,Irealizedsomethingterriblewouldhappen.AsIwasabouttoclosethedoor,heforcedhiswayintoourhouse.Hetookoutaknifeandforcedmetotieupmybrother'shandswithsomeropewhichhetookoutfromhispocket.ItieduphishandsbutItieditinaspecialwaysomybrothercoulduntiehimselfasweoftendid.Themanthentiedmyhandsupandlockedbothofusinthekitchen.Soon,hewentupstairstosearchthebedroomforsomethingvaluable.Imanagedtoteachmybrothertountietheropeonhishands.Hethenuntiedme.Irushedtothetelephonetocallthepolice,butlinewasdead.1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語:3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Thedoorswerealllockedfromtheoutsideandwhat'smore,Ididnothavethekeys.Paragraph2:Justatthesametimeourparentscamebackhome.題目三【答案】Thedoorswerealllockedfromtheoutsideandwhat'smore,Ididnothavethekeys.Butluckily,themanforgottolockthekitchenwindow.BothmybrotherandImanagedtogetoutofthehousethroughthewindow,runningtothenearbypolicestationandaskingthemforhelp.Thepolicearrivedatourhouseassoonaspossible.Andasaresult,themanwascaught.Justatthesametimeourparentscamebackhome.Thepoliceaskedmyfamilytogotothepolicestation.Itwasattherethepolicetoldusthatthemanwasawantedrobberpretendingtosellcomicbooksandtheyhadbeenlookingforhimforalongtime.Thepolicepraisedmybrotherandmeforourbraveness.Whengoingbackhome,Itoldmyparentsthewholestoryabouttherobbery.Althoughthankfulthatwewerenothurt,theystillscoldedmefornotstoppingmybrotherfromopeningthedoortostrangers.Ilearnedalessononsafetyandresponsibility.備環(huán)技巧孚寫作易錯詞拼寫拼寫錯誤是考生們在書面表達中常見的錯誤之一。以下是一些常見的寫作易錯詞拼寫總結(jié)，供參考希望考生們認真拼寫，檢測自己是否能拼對。(一)直到害羞地幸運地幸好可怕地毀壞(v)相信收到開始(n.)決定(v)旁邊劃分(v)士兵午餐電大學(xué)學(xué)院演講文化習(xí)俗知識政府組織道歉(v.)道歉(n.)發(fā)達的將來進一步詞匯雜志出版畢業(yè)(v)祝賀(v)立即最喜愛的人口首都文章節(jié)日歡迎健康(n.)紳士們亞運會邀請發(fā)明科學(xué)成就廣場準備(v)維修比較余暇公里農(nóng)業(yè)工業(yè)生產(chǎn)(v)橋梁創(chuàng)造情景小學(xué)初中的高級的辯論手機西南的東部的西部的現(xiàn)代的角落交通中央的全球的沿海的實驗經(jīng)驗總統(tǒng)進步水平蔬菜水果收集貧困地址機器計算機研發(fā)拓展眼界技術(shù)行李透過徹底的雖然極其

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