2022-2023學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下學(xué)期期末考點(diǎn)（牛津深圳版）：書面表達(dá)（解析版）

專題10書面表達(dá)（題型解讀+期末真題過(guò)關(guān)）2022-2023學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下學(xué)期期末考點(diǎn)大串講（牛津深圳版）（解析版）【題型解讀】【書面表達(dá)答題“五步曲”】第一步：認(rèn)真審題，確定文章體裁、主題。第二步：在草稿紙上根據(jù)題目要求列出規(guī)定的要點(diǎn)，然后列出每個(gè)要點(diǎn)所需短語(yǔ)或句型，并適當(dāng)拓展。注意選取合適的時(shí)態(tài)。第三步：將所列語(yǔ)言材料組合寫成通順連貫的文章。注意使用合適的連詞和承上啟下的句子。注意開頭點(diǎn)題，結(jié)尾要有合適的結(jié)束語(yǔ)。第四步：仔細(xì)讀一遍草稿，挑出錯(cuò)誤，對(duì)拿不準(zhǔn)的句子或詞語(yǔ)進(jìn)行修改或刪減(寧缺勿濫)。注意詞數(shù)要求。第五步：將修改無(wú)誤的短文工整地謄抄在卷面上。一、認(rèn)真審題抓要點(diǎn)在寫作之前認(rèn)真審題，確定好文章體裁，抓住要點(diǎn)。常見的文體有記敘文、說(shuō)明文、議論文和應(yīng)用文等。1.記敘文寫作要點(diǎn)：(1)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)局。(2)選用正確的人稱。(3)線索一般為時(shí)間，即按照事件的發(fā)展順序來(lái)寫。(4)重點(diǎn)突出，層次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。(5)注意文章的完整性。(6)通常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。2.議論文寫作要點(diǎn)：(1)觀點(diǎn)鮮明，要有一個(gè)明確的中心論點(diǎn)。(2)層次分明，中心論點(diǎn)和分論點(diǎn)要層次分明，過(guò)渡要清晰自然。(3)結(jié)尾要得出一個(gè)符合邏輯的結(jié)論，突出中心思想。(4)通常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。(5)語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔有力，一般不用口語(yǔ)。3.說(shuō)明文寫作要點(diǎn)：(1)抓住事物的特征，以簡(jiǎn)明的文字介紹事物的形狀、性質(zhì)、構(gòu)造、變化、功用和特性等。(2)說(shuō)明事物要有一定的條理性和邏輯性。(3)說(shuō)明文常見的順序有時(shí)間順序、空間順序、邏輯順序等。4.應(yīng)用文寫作要點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文包括書信、通知、請(qǐng)假條、邀請(qǐng)函、感謝信和便條等。(1)寫清楚稱呼語(yǔ)。(2)具體時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、概括性內(nèi)容、涉及對(duì)象及有關(guān)注意事項(xiàng)。(3)語(yǔ)言要自然、平實(shí)、簡(jiǎn)潔。(4)結(jié)束語(yǔ)要向?qū)Ψ奖硎居焉苹蛴H切的問候。二、巧用過(guò)渡詞文章都有一個(gè)先后順序，一個(gè)邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)，如何使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)明確，中心突出，這時(shí)巧妙運(yùn)用過(guò)渡詞，可以規(guī)范自己的邏輯思路，在有壓力的寫作之下能夠做到臨危不亂，有條不紊，層次清晰。三、句式多變?cè)趯懢渥拥臅r(shí)候，不要只用那些清一色的簡(jiǎn)單句，要盡可能的變換句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，讓文章富于變化，錯(cuò)落有致?？梢試L試使用更多的復(fù)合句，以及嘗試變化語(yǔ)態(tài)。這樣一定會(huì)使文章增加獲勝的籌碼。四、書寫規(guī)范工整書寫是態(tài)度的體現(xiàn)，書寫的規(guī)范和工整，直接影響到閱卷者的第一印象，從而決定一篇文章的得分高低，所以必須注意大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)等的運(yùn)用正確和規(guī)范?！酒谀┱骖}專題過(guò)關(guān)】1．（2022春·廣東深圳·寶安區(qū)七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)編輯李華，本周是學(xué)校的“節(jié)約用水周”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示和要求完成一則簡(jiǎn)訊。要點(diǎn)：1.水的重要性：生命之源；2.現(xiàn)狀：①地球的75%是海洋，但海水是咸的；②很多地區(qū)缺水；3.日常生活中節(jié)約用水的方法（請(qǐng)寫出至少2點(diǎn)節(jié)水方法）。要求：1.必須包含以上所有要點(diǎn)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.語(yǔ)句通順、條理清楚、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確、書寫規(guī)范；4.

80詞左右，簡(jiǎn)訊的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：生命之源thesourceoflife

海水oceanwater

缺乏beshortofThisweekisourschool’sWaterSavingWeek._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Waterisofgreatimportance.Let’ssaveit.【答案】范文：Thisweekisourschool’sWaterSavingWeek.Weallknowthatwateristhesourceofourlife,soitisveryimportant.75%oftheearthissea,butoceanwaterissalty,wecan’tdrinkit.Nowmanyareasareshortofwater.Whatshouldwedotosavewater?Herearemysuggestions.Firstofall,weshoulddevelopagoodhabit.Weshouldturnoffthetapafterusingit.Second,wereusewaterinourdailylife.Forexample,wecanusethewaterofwashingvegetablestowatertheplants.Sowecancallformorepeopletosavewater.Waterisofgreatimportance.Let’ssaveit.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文——簡(jiǎn)訊的寫作，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文的開頭和結(jié)尾，根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示的內(nèi)容，介紹水的重要性、水的現(xiàn)狀以及日常生活中節(jié)約用水的方法，最后呼吁人們節(jié)約用水。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱為主來(lái)介紹內(nèi)容，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，保證提示內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰，行文連貫。2．（2022春·廣東深圳·龍華區(qū)七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期末）今年以來(lái)，各地積極推進(jìn)中小學(xué)勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐教育課程常態(tài)化，將種植樹木、清掃衛(wèi)生、整理家務(wù)等納入中小學(xué)課程體系。為美化校園,提升學(xué)生們的勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐能力，3月12日TreePlantingDay這天學(xué)校組織七年級(jí)同學(xué)在校園內(nèi)的空地上植樹。請(qǐng)根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示信息，寫一篇英文習(xí)作向?qū)W校英文報(bào)社投稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.Howdotreeshelpus?Shouldweplantmoretrees?2.Whatcanyousee?（請(qǐng)描述同學(xué)們植樹過(guò)程中的2—3個(gè)畫面）.3.Whatdoyouhopeotherpeoplewilldo?寫作要求：1.70詞左右；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與學(xué)校名；3.文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Treesdoalotforpeople.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Treesdoalotforpeople.Weshouldplantmoretreesbecausetreesarehelpfultous.Treescanmaketheaircleaner.Treescanalsostorewaterandholdthesoilinplace.Nowtherearealotofstudentsplantingtreesonthehill.Somearediggingholes,somearecarryingwater,someareplantingtrees.Theyareworkingtogetherhappily.Inordertoprotectourearth,Ihopeeveryoneshouldplantmoretreesandcherishthem.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料類作文寫作，寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真分析所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。第一部分承接開頭引出主題；第二部分描述植樹場(chǎng)景；第三部分發(fā)出呼吁并結(jié)尾。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：在描述植樹場(chǎng)景時(shí)，可使用進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)，人稱不限，場(chǎng)景描寫要細(xì)致；結(jié)尾呼吁時(shí)使用表建議句型。3．（2022春·廣東深圳·七年級(jí)深圳中學(xué)?？计谀┘偃缒闶巧犍i，你校英語(yǔ)校報(bào)正在征集個(gè)人愛好的稿件。請(qǐng)你以“Myhobby”為題向校報(bào)投稿，介紹自己的愛好。內(nèi)容需包括：1.簡(jiǎn)述你的愛好由來(lái)；2.你從中學(xué)到了什么；要求：1.需包含所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)言通順，行文連貫，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；3.詞數(shù)：60左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。MyhobbyMynameisShenPeng.I’mthirteenyearsold.Myhobbyis________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyhobbyMynameisShenPeng.I’mthirteenyearsold.Myhobbyisreading,becausemymotherlikesreading.I’dliketoreadinmyfreetime,suchasfunnystories,fairytales,poemsandsoon.IreadeveryeveningbeforeIgotobed.Ialsoliketoreadinagardenorinapark.Recently,IhavebeguntoreadshortstoriesinEnglish.ItisdifficultformetoreadinEnglish.However,myEnglishreadinglevelisconstantlyimproving.IhopeIcanbeawriterwhenIgrowup.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭；內(nèi)容是根據(jù)所給的提示，以“Myhobby”為題向校報(bào)投稿，介紹自己的愛好。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)敘述；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；首先介紹自己的愛好由來(lái)；其次介紹從中學(xué)到了什么。保證語(yǔ)句通順，行文連貫。無(wú)單詞和語(yǔ)法上的錯(cuò)誤。4．（2022春·廣東深圳·七年級(jí)深圳市高級(jí)中學(xué)?？计谀┘偃缒闶黔h(huán)保社的成員，近期你觀察到學(xué)校里有一些浪費(fèi)水電的不良行為，請(qǐng)你寫一份倡議書，倡導(dǎo)同學(xué)們做低碳環(huán)保小衛(wèi)士，談一談作為學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何過(guò)低碳生活。要點(diǎn)：(1)近期學(xué)校里有一些浪費(fèi)水電的不良現(xiàn)象(2)低碳環(huán)保措施：節(jié)約水電，綠色出行……注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Asweallknow,ourcountrycallsforustohavealow-carbonlife.Itcanbothhelpussaveenergyandimproveourenvironment.Therearesomebadphenomenaofwastingwaterandelectricityintheschool.Asstudents,weareabletostartwithmanysmallthingsaroundus.Forexample,wecanturnoffthecomputersandthelightsintimewhenleavingaroom.Wecanwalkthereorrideourbikesinsteadoftakingabusortaxiifwetravelashortdistance.Weshouldusebothsidesofpaper,whichhelpsussavealotoftrees.Inaword,lifeinthefuturewillbebrighterandmorebeautifulifeveryonecandoalittle.Let’stakeactiontoworkforitandenjoythelifewithpeace.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇短文，倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生們過(guò)低碳生活。主要要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：短文應(yīng)以第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主來(lái)介紹。第一段點(diǎn)題引出低碳生活，第二段例舉不良現(xiàn)象，并提出相應(yīng)的環(huán)保措施；第三段總結(jié)。注意語(yǔ)句通順，行文連貫。保證文中無(wú)單詞和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。5．（2022春·廣東深圳·七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期末）深圳是一個(gè)缺水的城市。缺水，讓人們的生產(chǎn)、生活受到影響。為了保護(hù)水資源，我們應(yīng)該馬上采取行動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中所給的要點(diǎn)提示，以“SavingWater”為題寫一篇短文。70詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。水的重要性所有生物都需要水，沒有水，地球上就沒有生命存在存在的問題工廠廢水、生活污水等導(dǎo)致淡水稀少改進(jìn)的措施停止浪費(fèi)水、不要污染水聯(lián)系自己的生活實(shí)際提出幾條合理的建議（至少2條）SavingwaterWaterisimportanttous.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’ssavewatertogether!【答案】例文SavingwaterWaterisimportanttous.Alllivingthingsneedwater.Withoutwater,therewouldbenolifeonearth.ThedrinkingwateronEarthisverylimited.Freshwaterisbecomingscarcebecauseoffactorywastewateranddomesticsewage.Therearestillsomepeoplewastingwater.Thenwhatshouldwedotosavewater?Weshouldstartwithsmallthingsandmakegooduseofeachdropofwater.Andweshouldtrytoprotectwaterresourcesandneverpollutelakesorrivers.It’snoteasytosavewater.Soweshoulddoourbest.Let’ssavewatertogether!【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是材料作文，根據(jù)所給材料，以“SavingWater”為題寫一篇短文。要從水的重要性、存在的問題及改進(jìn)的措施等三個(gè)方面敘述。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述“水”的重要性和存在的問題時(shí)以第三人稱為主，敘述改進(jìn)的措施時(shí)，應(yīng)用到第一人稱。在談?wù)摳倪M(jìn)的措施時(shí)用到表示建議的句型（例如，weshould.../hadbetter等）。寫作的內(nèi)容可按照表格內(nèi)容的提示以三段式來(lái)寫：第一段談?wù)撍闹匾?，引出話題；第二段介紹存在的問題；最后一段提出合理的建議并呼吁大家節(jié)約用水。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，保證條理清晰，內(nèi)容連貫，語(yǔ)法正確。最后認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤等。6．（2022春·廣東深圳·龍崗區(qū)七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期末）你校準(zhǔn)備舉行“節(jié)約能源，從現(xiàn)在做起”的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，你打算投稿。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。必要性浪費(fèi)嚴(yán)重，能源短缺建議1.節(jié)約用水2.節(jié)約用電3.……(至少補(bǔ)充一條)你的看法……要求:1.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.80詞左右，開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：energy(能源)

beshortof(短缺)ActnowtosaveenergyAsweallknow,energyisveryimportanttous.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ActnowtosaveenergyAsweallknow,energyisveryimportanttous.Butduetotheseriouswaste,thewholeworldisshortofenergy.Savingtheenergyisveryimportant.Asastudent,wecandoalotinourdailylife.Forexample,weshouldkeepthelightofftosaveelectricitywhenwedon’tuseit.Weshouldturnoffthetaptosavethewaterafteryouwashyourself.Tosavetheenergy,weshouldalsoreducepollution.Recyclingoldnewspapers,glasses,cansandwastepaperisalsoagoodidea.Itisurgenttosaveenergy.Let’sworkhardtogethertosaveitnow!【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)所給的要點(diǎn)提示，談?wù)勅绾喂?jié)約能源，注意寫作時(shí)要點(diǎn)齊全，同時(shí)也要緊扣主題進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以第一人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主來(lái)行文。可分為三段：第一段引出主題，強(qiáng)調(diào)節(jié)約能源的重要性；第二段介紹如何節(jié)約能源；第三段以呼吁大家節(jié)約能源結(jié)尾。注意做到思路清晰，層次分明；行文要語(yǔ)句通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系；無(wú)語(yǔ)法、單詞拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。二、電子郵件7．（2022春·廣東深圳·坪山區(qū)七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是班長(zhǎng)李華，打算在你校的“社區(qū)英語(yǔ)活動(dòng)周”期間組織同學(xué)到聚龍公園(JulongPark)開展“BrightenOurGarden”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英文寫一封郵件給英語(yǔ)老師，請(qǐng)求她同意并支持你們的計(jì)劃。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）活動(dòng)主題、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的；（2）活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，包括清潔公園、學(xué)習(xí)公園中植物的英文名稱、教小朋友唱英文歌等；（3）你希望老師做什么。注意事項(xiàng)：（1）必須包括提示內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；（3）請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)姓名和校名。（4）不少于80詞。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearMissWang,Inordertomakeabettercommunity,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMissWang,Inordertomakeabettercommunity,weareplanninganactivitythemed“BrightenOurGarden”.OurclasswillgototheJulongParkthisSunday.Itwillbeginat8:30a.m.First,wearegoingtodothecleaningforthegarden.Then,we’lllearntheEnglishvocabularyaboutthepantsinthegarden.Afterthat,we’llteachsomekidshowtosingEnglishsongs.AndweplantotellEnglishstoriesinEnglish.Theactivitywillbeoverat11:40a.m.Iwishyouwillconsiderandagreetoourplanandsupportit.Yourssincerely,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要求以李華的身份給英語(yǔ)老師寫封郵件，請(qǐng)求她同意并支持你組織的“BrightenOurGarden”活動(dòng)，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)緊接開頭繼續(xù)寫作，根據(jù)題目要求講述活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，及具體的活動(dòng)安排。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主，講述活動(dòng)具體安排，要敘述完整，條理清晰。8．（2022春·廣東深圳·南山區(qū)七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是Alice，這周日約了在你校學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)交換生同學(xué)Helen去一座新公園游玩。你在預(yù)約門票時(shí)看到了公園的一些規(guī)定。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示寫一封郵件，將這些規(guī)定告知Helen。要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：throwrubbish扔垃圾，walkdogs遛狗，ridebikes騎自行車DearHelen,Howareyou?We’llgotothenewparkthisSunday.Doyourememberthat?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whataboutmeetingatthebusstopat9:00a.m.?Writetomesoon.Yours,Alice【答案】DearHelen,

Howareyou?We’llgotothenewparkthisSunday.Doyourememberthat?

Therearesomerulesinthepark.Letmetellyouaboutthem.First,don’twalkdogsinthepark.Second,throwtherubbishintothedustbin.Third,theparkisopenfrom6a.m.to10p.m.Fourth,don’tswiminthelake.It’sverydangerous.Finally,youcan’trideyourbikeinthepark.Thosearetheparkrules.Weallneedtofollowthem.

Whataboutmeetingatthebusstopat9:00a.m.?Writetomesoon.

Yours,

Alice【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇電子郵件。根據(jù)所給圖片內(nèi)容，向Helen介紹下公園里的一些規(guī)定。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱以第二人稱為主（祈使句）。寫作時(shí)，需要把五點(diǎn)規(guī)定介紹清楚，不要遺漏，最后確保語(yǔ)句通順，邏輯清晰，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。9．（2022春·廣東深圳·光明區(qū)七年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)網(wǎng)友Tim計(jì)劃在暑假期間到中國(guó)旅游，請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件向他介紹深圳，邀請(qǐng)他到深圳游玩，內(nèi)容包含以下要點(diǎn)：1.深圳位于中國(guó)南部；2.在深圳，你可以：①去大梅沙游泳；②在歡樂谷和世界之窗游玩；③吃乳鴿和海鮮；④……（補(bǔ)充一個(gè)要點(diǎn)）3.發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。要求：1.80詞左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞：大梅沙海灘DameishaBeach；歡樂谷HappyValley；世界之窗WindowoftheWorld;乳鴿roastedpigeonsDearTim,IamgladtolearnthatyouareplanningatriptoChina!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearTim,

IamgladtolearnthatyouareplanningatriptoChina!Iamwritingthislettertoinviteyouto

Shenzhen.Letmemakeabriefintroductiontoyou.Shenzhenisamoderncoastcity.ItliesinthesouthofChina.Therearesomanyplacesofinteresttovisit,suchasWindowoftheworld,andHappyValley.Shenzhenisalsofamousforitswonderfulbeaches,soyoucangoswimminginDameisha.InShenzhen,youcanenjoymanydifferentkindsofdeliciousfood,especiallyseafoodandroastedpegeons.Ifyoulikeshopping,Shenzhenisagoodplacetogo.Therearemanyshoppingmallshere.

Allinall,Shenzhenisawonderfulcity.WhynotvisitShenzhenthissummerholiday?Ilookforwardtoyourvisit!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于郵件寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)緊接開頭繼續(xù)寫作，根據(jù)題目要求講述深圳的位置，在深圳旅游可以去的地方和做的事。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第三人稱為主，講述在深圳旅行可以去的地方和做的事情，要敘述完整，條理清晰。10．（2022春·廣東深圳·七年級(jí)深圳市東湖中學(xué)校考期末）你的英國(guó)筆友Peter想了解一下你學(xué)校的情況。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你給Peter寫封電子郵件，并提供以下信息：1.學(xué)校的人(耐心的，友愛……)2.學(xué)校規(guī)定(不能帶手機(jī)，認(rèn)真做好筆……)3.課外活動(dòng)(體育鍛煉……)DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?Iamgladtohearthatyouareinterestedinmyschoollife.Iwilltellyousomethingaboutmyteachersandclassmates,ourschoolrulesandthecolorfulafter-schoollife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?Iamgladtohearthatyouareinterestedinmyschoollife.Iwilltellyousomethingaboutmyteachersandclassmates,ourschoolrulesandthecolorfulafter-schoollife.Allteachersandclassmatesinmyschoolareveryfriendlyandpatient.Therearealotofrulesinmyschool.Don’tbringmobilephones.Weshouldtakenoteinclass.Don’teatinclass.Wemustwearschooluniformsonschooldays.Ithinktheserulesarestrictbutuseful.Wehavealotofafter-schoolactivitieslikephysicalexercise.Whataboutyourschool?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一封電子郵件。向筆友Peter介紹自己的學(xué)校情況。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段根據(jù)提示材料介紹學(xué)校人員的情況，校規(guī)以及課后活動(dòng)；最后一段詢問對(duì)方的情況并期待收到對(duì)方的回復(fù)。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。三、講稿11．（2022春·廣東深圳·羅湖外國(guó)語(yǔ)七年級(jí)?？计谀┘偃缒闶抢钊A，你們學(xué)校正在開展“提倡節(jié)約，反對(duì)浪費(fèi)”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一篇演講稿參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.水和電很重要；我們應(yīng)該在日常生活中節(jié)約水電。2.我們可以在很多方面節(jié)約水電：(1)洗手后，我們要關(guān)掉水龍頭；(2)當(dāng)我們離開房間的時(shí)候，記得關(guān)燈和空調(diào)；(3)……(補(bǔ)充至少一個(gè)節(jié)水或節(jié)電的措施)3.希望更多人節(jié)約水電；讓我們把世界變得更好吧！注意：1)字?jǐn)?shù)：80字左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）2)文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，并可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3)不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4)條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。參考詞匯:空調(diào)airconditionerDearteachersandfellowstudents,IamLiHua.It’smypleasuretobehereandsharemyopiniononsavingwaterandelectricitywithyou.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallofmyspeech.Thankyou!【答案】例文Dearteachersandfellowstudents,IamLiHua.It’smypleasuretobehereandsharemyopiniononsavingwaterandelectricitywithyou.Waterandelectricityareveryimportanttous.Weshouldsavetheminourdailylives.Therearemanywaystosavewaterandelectricity.Forexample,weshouldturnoffthetapafterwewashourhands.Moreover,whenweleavetherooms,remembertoturn