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facts,notopinions20Paragraph3Comparisonswithi21Plan-StructureParagraphornot?reader–friendlyHowtoParagraph?Anewidea,anewparagraphIntroduction/Conclusion(ifneeded)21Plan-StructureParagraphor22ThinkingStyle22ThinkingStyle23ParagraphsMultipleChartsIntroductionChart1Chart2…ComparisonSingleChartIntroductionFeature1Feature2…Conclusion(ifneeded)23ParagraphsMultipleCharts24Plan-StructureLinkingDevices(LD)BetweenparagraphsBetweenfeaturesWithinsentences24Plan-StructureLinkingDevi25LanguageRequirementWordCorrectspellingenviroment/environmentWordLevelget/achieveaband8WordVariety(Avoidrepetition)agood/well-paid/satisfactory/decentjob25LanguageRequirementWord26SentenceGrammaticalAccuracyThereisaboyasksyouout.SentenceLengthBand9:20+Band7:15StructureVarietyAnewchallengercomeshere.Herecomesanewchallenger.26SentenceGrammaticalAccuracy27Word&TimeMultiple /SingleChartsIntro. /Intro. (30w,1s)Chart1 /Feature1 (50w,4s)Chart2 /Feature2 (50w,4s)…Comparison/Conclusion (30w,1s)27Word&TimeMultiple /SinParagraph2CopiedphraseswillnotbecountedParaphrasetherubricIntroductionParagraph2Introductionchart=graph=diagramline,curvebar,columnpietable=figures=statisticsSave‘below’Word(B-78)chart=graph=diagramWord(BgiveinformationaboutrevealindicatedemonstrateSimplePresentTenseWordgiveinformationaboutWordtheUKBritainmostpopularfavorite/fashionable/stylishcountrynationWordtheUKWordUKresidentstovisitUKtravelers/visitors/touristsSpecificin1999UKresidentstovisitPassiveVoiceThechartshowsA. (do)Aisshownbythechart. (bedone)ThelinechartrevealsvisitstoandfromtheUK.VisitstoandfromtheUKarerevealedinthelinechart.StructureVarietyPassiveVoiceStructureVarietyThelinechartreveals…,andthebargraphindicates…Thelinechartreveals…,and…areindicatedinthebargraph.CompoundSentenceThelinechartreveals…,andIntroductionThelinechartrevealsvisitstoandfromBritainandUKtravelers’top5favoritenationsin1999areindicatedinthebargraph.IntroductionThelinechartrevLinkingDevicesBetweenparagraphs(B-78)Accordingtothechart,linechartupper/lowerchartchart1chartofvisitstoandfromtheUKLinkingDevicesBetweenparagraBetweenFeatures(B-51)also/besides/ontheotherhandbut/however/converselywhile/inparticularBetweenFeatures(B-51)alsoBasicStructure1

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from1979to1999. (5)BasicStructure1Thevisits(1)SubjectsLegendvisitsabroadbyUKresidentsParagraph2travelfromtheUKSynonymsUKvisitors/travelers/tourists(1)SubjectsLegend(1)Subjectsit/theyThevisitsincreasedfrom1979to1999.Inparticular,theyincreasedmostquicklyfrom1985to1988.(1)Subjectsit/they(2)Verbsincrease:decrease/rise:fallgoup:comedownclimb:slideascend:declinerocket:collapse(2)Verbsincrease:decrease/(2)VerbsTenseincreasedincreaseisexpected/predictedtoincrease(2)VerbsTense(3)Adverbssharply/rapidly/swiftlyslowly/gradually/tardilygreatly/vastly/considerablyslightly/marginally/minutely(3)Adverbssharply/rapidly/(3)Adverbs&(4)Numbersabout/around/roughly/moreorlessfromabout12to53million(3)Adverbs&(4)Numbersabout(5)Timefrom1979to1999between1979and1999duringthe20years/twodecadesstartingfrom1979(5)Timefrom1979to1999Chart1(Band6.5)Accordingtothelinechart,visitsabroadbyUKresidentsincreasedfromabout12to57millionfrom1979to1999.While,overseastravelerstoBritainwentupfromabout10to27million.ItisobviousthatUKtouristsweremoreandclimbedfasterthanoverseasonesduringtheperiod.Chart1(Band6.5)AccordingtoBasicStructure2Therewasasharp

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fromabout12to53million(1)(4)from1979to1999. (5)48BasicStructure3AsharpincreAsharpincrease(2)&(1),(6)asharp/slow/great/slightincreaseanupward/rising/increasingtendencyadownward/falling/decreasingtrendshow/prove/witnessAsharpincrease(2)&(1),(6)a(2)Verbkeep/remainunchanged/constant/stablefluctuateupward/downwarddouble/triple/quadruple(2)Verbkeep/remainChart1Accordingtothelinechart,bothUKtouristsabroadandoverseasonestotheUKwentupfrom1979to1999andtheformerclimbedmoremarkedlythanthelatter.In1979,UKvisitorswereonlyaround2millionmorethantheiroverseascounterparts,beingapproximately12and10millionrespectively.However,twodecadeslater,theyalmostdoubledtheforeigntravelerstoBritain(roughly53and27millionseparately).Chart1AccordingtothelinecChart2(Band6.5)ThebargraphdemonstratesthatthemostUKvisitorswenttoFranceandSpain,whichwere11.0and9.5million.Also,manyBritishtravelerswereattractedbytheUSA(4.0million),Greece(3.5million)andTurkey(2.0million).Chart2(Band6.5)ThebargrapChart2ThebargraphdemonstratesthatFranceandSpainwerethefavoritecountriesforUKtouristsin1999,whichattractedaround11.0and9.5

millionUKvisitorsrespectively.RemotelyfollowingweretheUSA,GreeceandTurkeywith4.0,3.5and2.0milliontravelersseparately.Chart2ThebargraphdemonstraComparison(band6.5)Whatisalsoworthmentioningisthatalmost40%UKtouristsselectedFranceandSpainin1999,ifthetwodiagramsareconsideredasawhole.Comparison(band6.5)WhatisaComparisonWhatisalsoworthmentioningisthatFranceandSpainaloneaccountedforalmost40percentofUKtouristsabroadin1999,ifthetwodiagramsareconsideredasawhole.ComparisonWhatisalsoworthmProfessionalEnglishwww.guardian.co.ukthestreetTVProfessionalEnglishwww.economCheckSampleAnswer(I4-168)ScriptComment–ScriptCorrespondingCheckSampleAnswer(I4-168)CommentTAUnderlength&dollarNocomparisonCCNoreferenceLR&GRANarrowsentencetypeBasicerrorsCommentTAI4-54demandused/need/requirement/consumptiontypicalaverage/representativeuseconsumehomehousehold/familypassivevoice&compoundsentenceI4-54demandIntroductionThecurvechartrevealselectricityusedinEnglandduringaveragedaysinwinterandsummerandhowelectricityisconsumedinatypicalEnglishhouseholdisindicatedinthepiegraph.IntroductionThecurvechartreReadChart1Unithrs/yrso’clock:

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Accordingtothecurvechart,dailyelectricityneedishigherinwinter(38,000unitsonaverage)thaninsummer(18,000unitsonaverage).Inwinter,electricityconsumptionpeaksat2:00amand10:00pmwhileittouchesthebottomat0:00amand8:00am.Ontheotherhand,insummer,itsummitsat2:00pmand11:00pm,buthasanadirat9:00amandalowerstationaryphasefrom4:00pmto9:00pm.Chart1(Band6.5) AccordingtChart1Accordingtothecurvechart,dailyelectricityneedishigherinwinter(38,000unitsonaverage)thaninsummer(18,000unitsonaverage),althoughbothofthemareunevenduringtheday.Inwinter,electricityconsumptionpeaksat2:00amand10:00pmwhileittouchesthebottomat0:00amand8:00am.Incontrast,thesummersummitscomelaterthanwinteronesat2:00pmand11:00pm.Anadirisseennearly9:00amandalowerstationaryphaseiswitnessedfrom4:00pmto9:00pm.Chart1AccordingtothecurveoccupybesharedbyaccountforberesponsibleforbeinchargeofbeinthechargeofoccupybesharedbyPercentageasmallpercentageof…(20%)aquarterof…theminorityof…(40%)halfof…themajorityof…(60%)threequartersof…mostof…(80%)one-fifth/one-thirdPercentageasmallpercentageoStructures1occupies/accountsfor

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Fourscoreandsevenyearsago,ourfathersbroughtforthuponthiscontinentanewnation:conceivedinliberty,anddedicatedtothepropositionthatallmenarecreatedequal.

Nowweareengagedinagreatcivilwar...testingwhetherthatnation,oranynationsoconceivedandsodedicated...canlongendure.Wearemetonagreatbattlefieldofthatwar.

Wehavecometodedicateaportionofthatfieldasafinalrestingplac