讀后續(xù)寫個(gè)人成長類+Sandro的游泳比賽+講義 高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。SandrowasbornandgrewupinMilan.Untilhewas13yearsold,heneverwantedtoleavehishometown.Butlastyear,Sandro’sfather’sinvestmentwentbad,wipingoutthefamilyandsendinghisparentstoprison.Asateenagerunder16yearsold,SandrowasforcedtogotoNewcastleinthenortheastofEnglandtostaywithhisuncleLawrence.Sandrohadalotofdifficultiesinthenewenvironment.Hedidn’tlikethefoodinEngland.NobodycouldforecasttheweatherinNewcastle.Hehadtostartlearningthesecondforeignlanguageinhisnewschool.Pocketmoneywasnotenoughasusual.Almosteverysubjectwasachallengeforhim.Mostimportantly,hehadnofriends.Itseemednobodyknewhimandheknewnobodyintheschool.Onanearlysummerevening,whenSandrowasgoinghomealonefromschoolasusual,amancalledhimfrombehind.SandroturnedaroundandsawEddie,hisPEteacher,standinginfrontofhim.“Youknow,theschoolwillhaveaswimmingcompetitionnextmonth.Therewillbeallkindsofraces.Willyouparticipate?”Eddieasked.SandrotookalookatEddiewithdoubtandanswered,“Yousure?Me?No.Iwon’t.Icanswim,butI’mslowerthanasnail.”Eddiesmiledandthensaid,“Yes.Indeed.Youare,inbreaststroke（蛙泳）,inbackstroke,andinbutterfly,butnotinfreestyle.Sojointhefreestylerace!200-meterfreestyleisthegamesuitableforyou.”Sandrowasspeechlessatthatmoment.Hehadneverknownsomeoneintheschoolwasobservinghimandcaringforhim.“Idon’tthinkIcanwinanything.”Sandrowasstillalittlepuzzled.“Butyoumaygetmorerecognitionandconsequentlyyoucanmakesomefriends.Thatismoreimportantthanprizes.”Eddierespondedimmediately.Havinghesitatedforawhile,Sandroagreedtohaveatry.注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150

左右；2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Everyafternoonforthenextmonth,Sandrotrainedreallyhard.

Sandrodivedintothepoolconfidentlylikeothercompetitors.

比賽類續(xù)寫素材庫：01活動(dòng)/比賽前努力準(zhǔn)備1.Thesettingsunwitnessinghisunremittingefforts(不懈的努力），hekeptsharpeninghisskillregardlessofhisachingmuscle.2.Notuntilthedarknessswallowedeverythingonthehorizon(黑夜吞噬地平線上的一切）didhestoptraininganddraggedachinglegshome.（倒裝：notuntil...didhe..直到...才）3.Thefollowingdayswitnessedhimpracticingfreestylehard.4.Hedraggedhisachinglegsdowntheroadtohome,armstremblingwithfatigue.(獨(dú)立主格：疲憊的細(xì)節(jié)描寫）遇到困難/挫折（曲折性原則）1.Hardashetrained,hestillmadelittleprogress,whichputhimonthevergeofcollapse.2.Thefactthathemadelittleprogressthrewhimintolowspirits.受到鼓舞（人物B互動(dòng)）1.Wheneverhewasexhausted/fulloffatigue,Eddie’swordsechoed/flashedinto/poppedintohismind,andsuppliedenergytohim/whichinstillpowerintohim.2.Hewasabouttoquit/giveupwhenmyteachercastanencouragingglanceathim.（beabouttodo...when...正要做某事的時(shí)候，突然...)3.Agustofexcitementsurgedthroughhimashemadeananotherattempt.02比賽中（過程描寫）1.Thencamethebigday.（倒裝）2.Withthesoundofthestartinggunpiercing（穿透/刺破）throughtheair,theracebeganasexpected.3.Icouldfeelthatalltheeyeswerefixedonus.Astrongsenseofnervousnesssurgedthroughme.我能感覺到所有的眼睛都盯著我們。一種強(qiáng)烈的緊張感涌上我的全身。4.Thenthenextfewminuteswitnessedfiercecompetitionbetweenothercompetitors.5.Sodynamicwashethatheswamswifterthanever.Withhisarmwaving,hecutthroughthewatersmoothlylikeaflyingfish.（so+adj+謂+主+that...)他活力四射，游得比以前更快了。他揮動(dòng)著手臂，像飛魚一樣平穩(wěn)地劃水。6.Sandrofoundhimselfflexiblelikeadolphininthewater,propelling（推動(dòng)）himselfforwardswiftly.（比喻）7.Swiftlyadjustinghisbreath,heswamforwardlikeanarrowoffthebowstring.(像離弦的箭）8.150meterscovered，hewasleftbehindbytwocompetitors.Inthelast50meters，heswamtothefinishlinewithallhisstrength,withhisarmspushingforwardfastandhislegshittingthewaterhard.(游泳的過程）9.Myheartdropped,becauseIwasafraidallthetrainingthatIhaddonewasinvain.Yettherewassomethinginsidemepushingmetowinthecompetition.Myheartbeatingwildly,Itriedmybestandgotclosertotheotherrunners.03比賽后（名次+互動(dòng)+感悟）1.WhentheresultwasannouncedthatSandrowonfirstplace,otherplayersrushedtohimandcongratulatedhim,theaudiencesinthestadiumburstingintothunderousapplauseandcheers.(獲獎(jiǎng)+祝賀）2.whentheracefinished,neverinhiswildestdream（做夢(mèng)也沒有想到）hadheexpectedthathewonthefirstprize（倒裝）./hecamefirst/tookthefirstplace/clinched(贏得）thechampionintherace.（獲得名次）3.Withbeadsofsweatrunningdownmyfaceandmyheartpoundinginmychest,Iknewthatthegrueling（艱辛的）hoursofpractice/painstakingeffortshadpaidoffasIclaimedthetopspotonthepodium（領(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)臺(tái)）.汗珠順著我的臉流下來，我的心在胸腔里怦怦直跳，我知道艱苦的練習(xí)時(shí)間得到了回報(bào)，因?yàn)槲以陬I(lǐng)獎(jiǎng)臺(tái)上占據(jù)了頭把交椅。4.Uponfinishingthetalk/competition,Itrotted（小跑）towardsMareyaandgaveherabearhug.Meanwhile,thunderous/astormofapplauserangthroughtheclassroom.5.Asthefinalwhistleblew,Thecheersfromthecrowdechoed/rangthroughthestadium,andIcouldn'thelpbutfeelarushofexcitementasIbasked/wasimmersedinthegloryofourvictory.（can'thelpbutdo不得不）人群的歡呼聲回蕩在體育場(chǎng)內(nèi)，當(dāng)我沉浸在勝利的榮耀中時(shí)，我不禁感到一陣興奮。6.Despitethephysicalandmentalexhaustion,Icouldn'twipethesmileoffmyfaceasIreflectedontheincrediblememoriesandlessonslearnedfromthecompetition.7.Itishishardworkandpersistencethatwonhimrecognitionandmorefriends.（結(jié)尾強(qiáng)調(diào)句：回扣主題）8.Thisexperienceservedasareminderthatthebestwaytogainrecognition/fitintoanewenvironmentistodisplayyourselfandmakeyourselfknown.(結(jié)尾句）9.Itisnottheluckycharmbroughtbyice-creambuthisowndiligence,persistenceandconfidencethatcontributedtohissuccessinswimmeet(游泳比賽）.參考范文：Everyafternoonforthenextmonth,Sandrotrainedreallyhard.

Startingposition,startingdive,turning,pushingoff,touchingthetimingpad,alldetails,hepracticedthemoverandover.Howeverhewasexhausted,Eddie'swordsechoedinhismindandsuppliedextraenergytohim.“MaybeIcan'tbethechampionofthegame,butIcanbethechampionformyself.”Hespokeinalowmumbletohimselfafterhefinishedthelasttraining.Finally,t