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中文“Wow,

thesetreesaresotall!"William

shoutedexcitedly,whilewalkingwithhisclassmatesinaforestnearhisschool.Theywereonafieldtriptotheforestaspartofasciencelesson.William和他的同學們在學校附近的森林里一邊走著一邊大喊：“哇，這些樹好高啊”。他們正在進行一次科學課的實地考察。Overthere,theymet

theforester,Victor.（護林員后面還會出現的呦）WhenWilliamlearnedVictorlivedinasimplewoodenhousethere

foryears,he

laughedat

himwithhisfriends（現在笑得開心，待會必哭...."真香定律"）.在那里，他們遇到了護林員Victor。當William得知Vitor在那里的一座簡單的木屋里住了多年時，他和朋友們一起嘲笑他。Then,theypassedbyanentrancetoacave.Williamwantedtoexploreinsidethecave,buthisteacherdidn'tallowit.

“I'llcomebackhere,(這不是灰太狼的臺詞么？？？)"hethought.Onthewaybacktoschool,he

rememberedtheexactlocationofthecave.（記住路線可能有幫助）然后，他們經過一個洞穴的入口。William想要探索洞穴的內部，但他的老師不允許?！拔視貋淼?，”他想。在回學校的路上，他記住了洞穴的確切位置。Thenextday,Williamaskedhisfourfriendstothecavetogether.Theytoldtheirparentstheywouldgotothelibraryandreturnhomeintheevening.

Noneoftheteenagerstoldtheirparentsabouttheirplantovisitthecave.（以后要學會，出門要和家人說一聲去哪？）第二天，William邀請他的四個朋友一起去洞穴。他們告訴父母他們要去圖書館，晚上回家。沒有一個青少年告訴他們的父母他們打算去訪問洞穴。Whentheteenagersreachedthecave,they

lefttheirschoolbagsoutside

toreducetheburden(救援裝備，物資食物水源會不會也留在包里了？).Onebyone,theyenteredthecave.Justwhentheytookafewstepsinside,somerocksfromthecavewallfelland

blockedtheentrance.（電影里古墓探險也是這樣的，進去入口就封住了）當青少年們到達洞穴時，他們把書包留在外面以減輕負擔。他們一個接一個地進入洞穴。就在他們走進去幾步的時候，洞壁上的一些巖石掉下來，堵住了入口?！癏owarewegoingtogetoutnow?”oneoftheteenagersSarahshouted.Williamhadanideaandsaid,“Maybewecantrydiggingthroughthefallenrockswithourhandstoreachtheentrance.”Butrealizinggettingoutofthecaveonlybytheirhandswasimpossible,theyhadgreatfear.Thesunwasabouttogodown.Theteenagersstartedcallingforhelp,butnobodycouldhearthem.Theteenagerswerelosinghope.“我們現在怎么出去？”一個叫Sarah的青少年大喊。William有個想法，他說：“也許我們可以試著用手挖掉那些落下的巖石，扒開入口?！钡?，他們發(fā)現徒手是無法出洞，他們非常害怕。太陽快要下山了。青少年們開始呼救，但是沒有人能聽到他們。青少年們開始失去希望。Victorhappenedtopassby

theentrancetothecave,and

fiveschoolbagscaughthisattention.

Healsoheardsomesoundscomingfrominsidethecave.“Who'sinthere?”Victorshouted.Victor恰好經過洞穴的入口，五個書包引起了他的注意。他還聽到了洞穴內部傳來的一些聲音。“誰在那里？”Victor大喊?！癐'mWilliam!Wecamehereyesterdaywithourteacher!"Williamrepliedinstantly.“Helpus,please!Wearestuck!Sarahcan'tbreatheherebecauseoffear.”“我是William！我們昨天和老師一起來到這里的！"WIlliam立刻回答?！罢垘蛶臀覀?！我們被困住了！Sarah因為恐懼都快無法呼吸了。”續(xù)寫第一段：“Okay,calmdown,children!”Victorsaid.“I'llhelpyougetout!”Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.“好的，冷靜下來，孩子們！”Victor說?！拔視湍銈兂鋈サ?！”Victory立即撥打了急救中心的電話，然后匆忙趕回家。續(xù)寫第二段：Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.不久，青少年們走出了洞穴，深深地吸了一口新鮮空氣。故事梗概：William和他的同學們在一次科學課的實地考察中，遇到了護林員Victor并嘲笑了他。在森林中，他們發(fā)現了一個洞穴，但被老師禁止探索。William記住了洞穴的位置，并在第二天與他的四個朋友偷偷返回。他們進入洞穴后，一些巖石從洞壁上落下，封閉了入口，困住了他們。Victor恰好經過并注意到了他們的書包，聽到了他們的求救聲。Victor成功地將他們從洞穴中救出。故事發(fā)展線：William和同學們的森林之旅，遇見維克托并嘲笑他→William記住洞穴位置→William和朋友們偷偷進入洞穴并被困→Victor發(fā)現并救援可展開的點：1.在此次經歷后，William和他的朋友們可能會對Victor生活方式有新的認識和尊重,并向他道歉，并向他學習關于森林和生存技能的知識。(理解與尊重)2.William等也會對自己的行為負責，并接受他們對父母和老師的欺騙的后果。(誠實)3.這個經歷可能會讓William等學會更加尊重大自然，并理解到冒險行為可能帶來的危險。(人與自然/自我)試水作文續(xù)寫第一段：Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.Hegatheredsomeflashlights,ashovel

andafirst-aidkit,knowingSarah

mightbeinjured.

Racingbacktothecave,hereassuredthepanickedteens:

"Staystrong.

I'vebroughtsomesuppliestohelpgetyouout."

Usingtheshovel,Victorworkedarduouslyto

removetheweighty,fallenrocks.

With

repeatedscoops

oftheshovel(

這里repeated是想和原文Victor住了木屋很多年做出對應),

Williamandotherteenagerscould

feel

apoundingintheir

heads(腦中開始感悟)yetalsoaslightsenseofreliefastheygotclosertofreedom.

Thefirst-aidteamarrivedandhelpedVictor.

Finally,afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,thelastrockwasmoved.

續(xù)寫第二段：Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.

Theirfaceswerestreakedwithdirtandreliefastheysawtheeveningsky.

Thegroupthankedthefirst-aidteam,andturnedtoVictor,lookingathimwithfacesfilledwithgratitude."Vitor,Weapologizeforthe

mockeryyesterday.Andwedowanttothankyou.

Yourlifestyleandexperiencereallymattered"their

voicechokedwith

newfoundrespect.

Therewasmoretolearnfromthishumbleforesterthantheyhadinitiallythought.

Underthesoft

illumination

ofthemoon,theymadetheirwayhome,recognizingthat

theiradventurehadturnedintoalessontheywouldcarrythroughlife.附：官方參考范文Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.

Afteralittlewhile,Victorgotbacktotheentrancewithashovelandaflashlight."Hey!I'mback!"heshouted,assuringthekidsthathewouldrescuethem.Then,hebegandiggingthroughtherocksattheentrance.Itwasn'teasyforonemantodigthroughtherocks,buthewastryinghisbest.Meanwhile,WilliamandhisfriendstriedtostaycalmandtoldSarahnottoworry.Afewminuteslater,Williamandhisfriendscouldseetheflashlightshinethroughthecave'sentrance,whichmadethemexcited.Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.

Fortunately,Sarahfeltbetter.Justthen,medicalworkersarrivedandexaminedthechildrencarefullytomakesuretheywereOK.WilliamlookedatVictorwhowaswornoutandregrettedmakingfunofhimwhenthey