模塊ⅧUnit4創(chuàng)新作文市公開課獲獎?wù)n件省名師優(yōu)質(zhì)課賽課一等獎?wù)n件

1/11節(jié)約用水【寫作任務(wù)】請看下面這幅漫畫，聯(lián)絡(luò)實際生活，以“SavingWater”為題寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)120左右。2/11【思緒點撥】1．本文形式上像看圖寫作，實際上是半開放寫作。因為學(xué)生有很大發(fā)揮空間。2．本文常規(guī)上以三個層面或段落來完成：①敘述圖畫；②分析圖畫；③提出提議。3．時態(tài)宜用普通現(xiàn)在時，有些地方要用適當(dāng)情態(tài)動詞，should，oughtto，must，can等。3/11【詞匯熱身】1．________飲用水2．pay________注意3．take...________考慮4．to________首先5．from________to________越來越差6．________somelaws經(jīng)過一些法律【答案】1.drinkingwater2.attentionoconsideration/account4.beginwith5.bad；worse6.pass4/11【一句多譯】1．自來水在無人使用時還在流淌。①______________________________________________________②_______________________________________________③_____________________________________________2．只有這么才能處理浪費(fèi)水問題。①_____________________②____________________________________________5/11【答案】

1.①Thedrinkingwaterisstillrunningwhilenooneisusingit.②Thedrinkingwaterisstillrunningwithoutanyoneusingit.③Somepeopleleave/havedrinkingwaterrunningafterusingit.2．①Wecansolvetheproblemofwater-wastinginthisway.②Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvetheproblemofwater-wasting.6/11【自主操演】_______________________________________________

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7/11【范文內(nèi)化】Asisshowninthepicture，thedrinkingwaterisrunningwithout_anyone_using_it.①Thepicturetellsusnowmanypeoplepaynoattentiontosavingwater.Theimplied②meaningofthispictureshould_be_taken_into_consideration_seriously.③Tobegin_with，④wateristhesourceoflife，without_which⑤therecouldbenolifeontheearth.Second，thereisverylimitedavailablewaterresourceonourplanet，andexcessiveusingofwatercanmakethesituationfrom_bad_to_worse.⑥Andthissocialproblemshouldarousethegreatconcernofallintheworld.8/11Inmyopinion/Asforme,weshouldtakestrongmeasurestodealwiththeproblem.First，weshouldmakeallthepeopleknowtheimportanceofwaterandthefactthatwaterresourcesarelimited.Second，wemustpasssomelawstopunishthosewhowastewater.Only_in_this_way_can_we_solve_the_problem_of_water-wasting