讀后續(xù)寫勞動故事類雙胞胎父母如何安排家庭雜物活課件高考英語一輪復習作文專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習勞動故事——雙胞胎父母如何安排家庭雜物活1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文TheTroubleWithChores(家庭雜務)Thetwins,JennaandJeff,weregoodatmostthings.Theirdadwasgoodatmostthings,too.ButtherewasonethingthetwinsandDadwerenotgoodat—thatwaschores.Itwasn’tthatDadandthetwinsdidn’twanttodotheirchores.Itwasjustthattheyalwaysseemedtohavereasonsnottodothem.Andtheyhadsuchgoodexcuses.“You’reright,mydear,”saidMum.“Thegrassdoesneedcutting.ButaspiderhasspunawonderfulwebonthelawnmowerandIhaven’tthehearttoputallherhardworktowaste.”“Mum,”saidJenna,“Iknowit’smyweektoputupmycards.It’sjustthatI’mwaitingforthemtodry.They’llbeeasiertoscoopupthatway.”“Mum,”saidJeff,“mayIskipsettingthetabletonight?There’saTVshowontheIceAge,andIhavetodoareportontheBeastofBaluchistan.”4續(xù)寫原文Therewerealsotheendlessquarrelsaboutwhodidwhatandwhogottheeasyjob.Mumsighed.IfonlyDadandthetwinswereasgoodatdoingtheirchoresastheywereatarguingaboutthem,lifewouldbeeasier.Talkingofchores,Mumthoughtinsteadofpushingthemforchores,itwouldbealoteasiertodothemherself.Andthatwaswhatshedid.Sheputawayallcardsandsetandclearedthetable.Shechasedthedustbunniesfromunderthefurnitureandcleanedupthetwins’messyroom.Thetwinsdidpickupandputawaythingsoccasionally.Daddidcutthegrassonceinawhile.Notsurprisingly,thingsbegantoslide.Everybodygotalittleunhappy,especiallyMum,whospentmuchtimedoingchores.Somethinghadtobedone.Butwhat?5段首句Para1：Mumdecidedtohostafamilymeeting.Para2：Livinginallthatmessybuild-upwasn’tmuchfun.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了雙胞胎和爸爸在大多數(shù)事情上都很擅長。但有一件事他們都不擅長，那就是做家務。并不是他們不愿意做家務。只是他們似乎總有理由不去做。他們有很好借口；有時這對雙胞胎確實偶爾會收拾東西，爸爸確實偶爾割草，但是似乎每個人都有點不高興尤其是媽媽，因為她花了很多時間做家務。媽媽意識到必須做點什么。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Mumdecidedtohostafamilymeeting.由第一段首句內容“媽媽決定召開一次家庭會議”可知，第一段可描寫家庭會議的計劃和安排。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Livinginallthatmessybuild-upwasn’tmuchfun.由第二段首句內容“生活在如此混亂的環(huán)境中并沒有多少樂趣?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫大家決定一起打掃如此混亂的環(huán)境。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索家務——找借口——拒絕——混亂——收拾干凈——感悟12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①拒絕：haveexcuses/didn’twanttodo/refusepolitely情緒類①.高興：pleased/happy②.擔心：concerned/worry13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Atlast,theyrealizedtherewerealotofmeaningfulthingsinlife,includingchores.（省略連接詞that的賓語從句作realize的賓語）[高分句型2]Nosoonerhadthemeetingbegunthaneverybodydecidedtodosomethingabouttheawfulmess.（否定詞置于句首的半倒裝句）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Mumdecidedtohostafamilymeeting.“Mydear,”shesaid,“there’salotmoretolifethanchores.I’vebeensoconcernedwiththehousethatIhaven’tbeentothegymforweeks.”“Gotothegymtoworkout,”Dadandthetwinsapplauded.Thewholefamilyenjoyedthemselvesandnotworryingaboutchoresworkedprettywellatfirst.Butbitbybit,messybuild-upbegantotakeupthehouse.16范文呈現(xiàn)Livinginallthatmessybuild-upwasn’tmuchfun.Daddecidedtohostafamilymeeting,too.Nosoonerhadthemeetingbegunthaneverybodydecidedtodosomethingabouttheawfulmess.Theypickedupallthewettowels.Theygotthedishesoutofthesinkandbanishedthedustbunnies.Thentheysatdown,exhaustedbutpleased.Atlast,theyrealizedtherewerealotofmeaningfulthingsinlife,includingchores.17范文譯文媽媽決定舉辦一次家庭會議?！坝H愛的，”她說，“生活中除了家務還有很多。我一直很關心房子，好幾個星期都沒去健身房了?！薄叭ソ∩矸垮憻挵?，”爸爸和雙胞胎鼓掌。一開始，全家都玩得很開心，不用擔心家務活也做得很好。但一點一點地，雜亂的建筑開始占據(jù)房子。18范文譯文生活在如此混亂的環(huán)境中并沒有多大樂趣。爸爸也決定舉辦一次家庭會議。會議剛開始，大家就決定對這可怕的混亂