高考英語三輪沖刺查補(bǔ)易混易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)13 應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信、咨詢信、求助信 （含解析）

查補(bǔ)易混易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)12應(yīng)用文寫作之申請(qǐng)信、咨詢信、求助信體裁命題形式寫作主題2022新高考I卷應(yīng)用文邀請(qǐng)信寫郵件邀請(qǐng)外教進(jìn)行一次訪談II卷應(yīng)用文邀請(qǐng)信寫郵件邀請(qǐng)外教進(jìn)行一次訪談全國卷乙卷說明文投稿利用填表調(diào)查結(jié)果給報(bào)社投稿甲卷應(yīng)用文投稿以世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿2021新高考I卷應(yīng)用文投稿?？痽outh慶祝十周年，向?？磉_(dá)自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福II卷應(yīng)用文投稿?？痽outh慶祝十周年，向?？磉_(dá)自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福全國卷乙卷應(yīng)用文發(fā)言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”為主題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽甲卷應(yīng)用文征求建議征求外國朋友建議，哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人2020全國卷I卷應(yīng)用文投稿寫一篇以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題投稿參賽II卷應(yīng)用文日記寫一篇英文短文介紹上周末采摘活動(dòng)III卷應(yīng)用文求助信給外教寫一封信，請(qǐng)幫忙指導(dǎo)【申請(qǐng)信】首段：自我介紹，說明申請(qǐng)內(nèi)容Ilearnedfromyourwebsite/theeveningpaperthatyourcompanywantedtohire....youareinneedof....我從網(wǎng)站/晚報(bào)上得知貴公司想招聘……/你們需要……Irecommendmyselfasaqualifiedcandidatefor........我推薦自己作為……的合格人選。Ireadtheannouncementof.......thatyouhavepostedandIamveryinterestedinit.看了你發(fā)布的公告，我對(duì)它很感興趣。主體部分：陳述本人優(yōu)勢和特長性格優(yōu)勢Asanoutgoing，warmandfriendlyperson，Icangetalongwellwith......我性格開朗，熱情友好，可以與…相處得很好。I'measy-goingandgood-natured，whichmakesiteasyformetofitinwithothers.我隨和且脾氣好，很容易與他人合得來。經(jīng)驗(yàn)特長IhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishsoIcancommunicatewithnativespeakersinEnglishfreely.我精通英語，因此我可以用英語同以英語為母語的人自由交流。Myprevious........experiencewillqualifymefortheposition.我以往的……經(jīng)驗(yàn)將使我能夠勝任這個(gè)職位。Ialwaystakeanactivepartin.........SoexperiencedamIthatIamsuretogive..abetterexperienceof........我總是積極參加……。我經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富，一定會(huì)給……帶來更好的……體驗(yàn)。尾段：表達(dá)感謝，期盼回復(fù)Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration/account.如果您能考慮我的申請(qǐng)，我將不勝感激。Shouldyoutreatmyapplicationfavorably，Iwouldsparenoefforttooffermybestservice.如果您看中我的申請(qǐng)，我將不遺余力地提供我的最佳服務(wù)?！緷M分范文】DearSir/Madam，IamLiHua，aChinesestudentwhoisstudyinginLondon.KnowingthataChinesepaintingexhibitionwillbeheldatthelocalgallerynextmonthandyouareinneedofsomevolunteers，Iamwritingtoapplyfortheposition.Tobeginwith，IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIcancommunicatewithvisitorswithoutdifficulty.What'smore，asaChinesepaintingloverIknowalotaboutthisartform.Ifaccepted，IcanintroduceChinesepaintingskillstovisitors，whichcanhelpthemknowmoreaboutChineseculture.IthinkIamqualifiedtobeavolunteer.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldagreetomyrequest.Yours，LiHua【咨詢信】首段：自我介紹并表明寫信目的1、I'm.......,aChinesestudentplanningto/interestedin.......Iamwritingtoaskforinformationabout........我是……，一個(gè)計(jì)劃…/對(duì)……感興趣的中國學(xué)生。我寫信來咨詢關(guān)于……的信息。I'mwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding.......我寫信是想知道您是否能給我提供有關(guān)……的信息。I'mwritingtoenquiresomedetailed/furtherinformationabout.........我寫信想詢問一些有關(guān)……的詳細(xì)/進(jìn)一步的信息。主體部分：說明咨詢事由First,Iwonderif........AnotherpointI'mnotcertainaboutis..........首先，我想知道是否……。我不確定的另外一點(diǎn)是……Moreover,I'dliketo........Inaddition,asyouknow,.........,so..........isalsoamatterImconcernedabout.此外，我想……。另外，正如你所知，……，因此，……也是我關(guān)心的問題。Ifthereisanythingelsethatneedsspecialattention,pleaseinformmeatyourconvenience.如果有其他需要特別注意的事，請(qǐng)?jiān)谀奖愕臅r(shí)候告訴我。尾段：期盼回復(fù)并表示感謝Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.如果您能盡早回復(fù)，我會(huì)很感激。Thankyouforyourkindness,andyourpromptattention/earlyreplytothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.謝謝您的好意，我將非常感激您對(duì)這封信的及時(shí)關(guān)注/早日回復(fù)?！緷M分范文】DearSir/Madam,I'mastudentfromChina.I'mwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregardingtheEnglishcourseofyourschool.Tobeginwith,couldyoubesokindastotellmewhenthecoursewillstartandhowmanyperiodsthereareperweek?Moreover,whatabouttheclasssize?Additionally,I'dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourse.Lastbutnotleast,Iwonderiftherewouldbeanyhostfamiliesordormitories.Thankyouforyourkindness,andyourpromptattentiontothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【求助信】首段：開門見山表明求助意圖Hearingyouhavemuchexperiencein...，Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp./someadvice.聽說您在……方面很有經(jīng)驗(yàn)，我寫信向您求助/征求建議。Ihavesomedifficultyin...，whichbothersmealot，soIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyou.我在……方面有一些困難，這讓我很困擾，所以我別無選擇只能向您求助。Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties，Iamanxioustoaskyouforhelp.面對(duì)如此多的難題，我非常想向您求助。主體部分：說明求助事由Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichbothermealot.Tobeginwith，...What'sworse，...Whattroublesmemostis.…Alloftheseupsetmebecause.…我遇到了三個(gè)很困擾我的問題。首先，……。更糟糕的是，……。最讓我苦惱的是…。所有這些都讓我很不高興，因?yàn)椤璉reallyhavenoidea/wonderhowtodealwiththeproblems.我真不知道/想知道如何解決這些問題。尾段：期盼回復(fù)并表示感謝Iwillbegratefulifyoucansparetimetogivemeahand/domeafavor.如果您能抽出時(shí)間幫我，我將很感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldbesokindastogivemesomeuseful/practicaltips/suggestions.如果您能非常友好地給我提供一些有用的/實(shí)用的建議，我將不勝感激。Thanksforconsideringmyrequest.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.多謝考慮我的請(qǐng)求。我期待您的答復(fù)。【滿分范文】DearMike，I'mLiHua，oneofyourstudents.I'mwritinginthehopethatyoucangivemesomeadviceonmyEnglishstudy.Ournewwritingtaskcalled"extendedwriting"requiresustowriteareasonableendingtoastory.Obviously，thisisaveryopentaskwithmultiplepossibilities.WhileIenjoythecreativitythistaskrequires，Ifinditchallengingtoidentifytheplotandgivemyversionofthepossibleending.Ialsohavetroubleexpressingmyideasaccuratelyduetomylimitedvocabulary.Anysuggestionswouldbegreatlyappreciated.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua寫作模板Dear______(稱謂)Iamreallydelightedtolearnthat______(職位)isrequired,andIfeelthis______(職位或機(jī)會(huì))

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Shouldyouneedanydetailsrelatedtomyapplication,feelfreetocontactmeat______(聯(lián)系方式).Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua寫作模板Dear______(稱謂)Iam______(自我介紹).Iamwritingtoinquireabout______(要詢問的內(nèi)容). Thefollowingismyconfusion.Firstofall,I’mtemptedtoknow

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willbehighlyappreciated.Yoursincerely,LiHua寫作模板Dear______(稱謂)Iam______(自我介紹).Iamwritingtoseekforyourhelpin______(寫信目的). Now,Istrugglealotin______(遇到的困難).I’vefoundthat______(描述自己的困難).Foronething,______(困難一).Foranother,______(困難二). Therefore,couldyoupleaseputforwardsomepracticalsuggestions?IamconvincedthatIwillbenefitalotfromyourvaluableandtimelyadvice. Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldrespondatyourearliestconvenience.Yoursincerely,LiHua1．（2019·全國·高考真題）假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請(qǐng)寫一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢；3.能做的事情。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。DearSirorMadam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerfortheChinesePaintingExhibitionwhichwillbeheldinyourartgallery.IthinkIamqualifiedforthisjob,becauseIhavelearnedChinesepaintingsincechildhood.Besides,IamfluentinbothChineseandEnglish,whichisbeneficialforintroducingChinesepaintings.IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,IcanshowvisitorsaroundthegalleryandgetthemtoknowmoreaboutChinesepainting.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一封申請(qǐng)信，屬于書信應(yīng)用文?！驹斍榻馕觥?.審題立意本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫申請(qǐng)信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.謀篇布局書信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫信的目的，中間段寫個(gè)人優(yōu)勢和能做的事，最后一段總結(jié)。3.關(guān)鍵詞和句子根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和句子有：volunteer，aChinesePaintingExhibition，advantages，Iamgoodat…，Icanhelpwith.../I’lldevotemyselfto…。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯(cuò)誤，并增加一些細(xì)節(jié)和過渡性的詞匯，如Firstofall，Besides，tobeginwith，moreover，asforme，Lastbutnotleast等，使全文銜接自然，語義流暢。2．（2010·天津·高考真題）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語。你希望參加此活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給校評(píng)選組寫一封申請(qǐng)信：●對(duì)此活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)（如對(duì)本人、學(xué)生級(jí)社會(huì)的益處等）●個(gè)人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語言能力等）●你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等）注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學(xué)ChenxiHopeSchoolDearSirorMadam,IamLiHuafromClassOne,SeniorTwo._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.YoursSincerely,LiHua【參考答案】DearSirorMadam，

IamLiHuafromClassOne，SeniorTwo．AsfarasIamconcerned，IbelievetoteachEnglishforpupilsfromChenxiHopeSchoolwillbegoodforboththeprimary-schoolstudentsandhigh-schoolstudenttutors，whichthuswillresultinsubstantialsocialbenefits．

IthinkIamqualifiedforbeingthepupils’Englishcoach，becauseIhavegoodcharacter，andI'mindependentinlifeandproficientinEnglish．That'swhyIapplyfortheposition．IhopeIcanjointheinstructiveactivity．

Myplanforcoachingthepupilsistoteachthembylistening，speaking，readingandwriting．What'smoreimportantistostimulatetheirinterestsinlearningEnglishasaforeignlanguage，creatingagoodlearningenvironment．Ihopeyoucanoffertheopportunity．

Yourssincerely，LiHua【詳情解析】本文要求用英語給學(xué)校寫一封申請(qǐng)信，申請(qǐng)用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，但不是很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)全交代，不能有遺漏。而且要拓展內(nèi)容，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second，Besides,What’smore等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。重要短語：AsfarasIamconcerned（據(jù)我所知），resultin（導(dǎo)致），bequalifiedfor（有資格，合格），beindependent（獨(dú)立），instructive（有教育意義），stimulateinterestsin（激發(fā)…的興趣）等【點(diǎn)睛】所給范文語言簡潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：AsfarasIamconcerned據(jù)我所知，bequalifiedfor合格的。IbelievetoteachEnglishforpupilsfromChenxiHopeSchoolwillbegoodforboththeprimary-schoolstudentsandhigh-schoolstudenttutors,whichthuswillresultinsubstantialsocialbenefits.這句話用了非限制性定語從句，That’swhyIapplyfortheposition.這句話用了表語從句，Myplanforcoachingthepupilsistoteachthembylistening,speaking,readingandwriting.這句話用了不定式做表語。What’smoreimportantistostimulatetheirinterestsinlearningEnglishasaforeignlanguage,creatingagoodlearningenvironment.這句話用了主語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞。3．（安徽省部分學(xué)校2022-2023學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期3月月考英語試題）假定你是李華，你校的英語報(bào)正在校內(nèi)招募“中國傳統(tǒng)文化”專欄的編輯。請(qǐng)你寫封電子郵件申請(qǐng)，內(nèi)容包括。1.表明意圖；2.自身優(yōu)勢；3.表達(dá)期望。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:專欄columnDearSirorMadam,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHui【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,KnowingthattheschoolEnglishnewspaperislookingforaneditorresponsibleforthecolumn“TraditionalChineseCulture”,I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.IthinkI’mqualifiedforit.Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallywrittenEnglish.Besides,Ihavetakenthepart-timejobasanEnglisheditor,fromwhichIhavegainedrelevantexperience.Moreimportantly,IhavearichknowledgeoftraditionalChineseculture.IwouldreallyappreciateitifIcouldbegiventhepreciouschance.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHui【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，你校的英語報(bào)正在校內(nèi)招募“中國傳統(tǒng)文化”專欄的編輯。請(qǐng)你寫封電子郵件申請(qǐng)。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累尋找：lookfor→searchfor職位：position→post此外：besides→inaddition有關(guān)的：relevant→related2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：IthinkI’mqualifiedforit.Tobeginwith,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallywrittenEnglish.拓展句：IthinkI’mqualifiedforitbecauseIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,especiallywrittenEnglish.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]KnowingthattheschoolEnglishnewspaperislookingforaneditorresponsibleforthecolumn“TraditionalChineseCulture”,I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]Besides,Ihavetakenthepart-timejobasanEnglisheditor,fromwhichIhavegainedrelevantexperience.(運(yùn)用了“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”結(jié)構(gòu)非限制性定語從句)4．（天津市南開中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期第四次月考英語試題）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生李津。目前在倫敦做交換生，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展，請(qǐng)你寫一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者。內(nèi)容包括：(1)寫信目的；(2)個(gè)人優(yōu)勢；(3)能做的事情。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；（3）開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【參考答案】DearSirorMadam,IamLiJin,anexchangestudentfromChinacurrentlystudyinginLondon.IammorethandelightedtohearthataChinesepaintingexhibitionwillbeheldinthelocalgalleryandvolunteersareneeded,Iamwritingtoapplyfortheposition.Thereasonsformyapplicationareasfollows.Firstandforemost,IhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings,sonotonlycanIexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.Inaddition,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichmakesmehavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Lastbutnotleast,IamsoenthusiasticandresponsiblethatIdoholdthebeliefthatIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiJin【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封信，申請(qǐng)當(dāng)當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦的中國畫展的志愿者?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累高興的：delighted→happy職位：position→post首先：firstandforemost→firstofall把……考慮進(jìn)去：oconsideration→oaccount2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：IamLiJin,anexchangestudentfromChinacurrentlystudyinginLondon.拓展句：IamLiJin,whoisanexchangestudentfromChinacurrentlystudyinginLondon.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Inaddition,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichmakesmehavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,IamsoenthusiasticandresponsiblethatIdoholdthebeliefthatIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.(運(yùn)用了so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句和that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句)5．（2023省四川省南充市高三下學(xué)期高考適應(yīng)性考試英語試題）假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友John對(duì)中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣，清明節(jié)將至，他發(fā)來郵件詢問有關(guān)清明節(jié)的信息，請(qǐng)你用英文給他回一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.節(jié)日的時(shí)間；2.節(jié)日的活動(dòng)；3.節(jié)日的意義。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：清明節(jié)theTomb-SweepingDayDearJohn,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearJohn,I’mgladtobeinformedthatyoushowgreatinterestintraditionalChinesefestivals.HereIfeelratherdelightedtointroducetheTomb-SweepingDaytoyou.China’straditionalTomb-SweepingDaydatesbacktotheZhouDynasty,whichusuallyfallsonApril5inthesolarcalendar,withahistoryofmorethan2,500years.Thefestivalwascreatedtohonorthedead.Traditionally,peoplewillbringfoodanddrinkstothecemeterytoworshiptheirancestors.Meanwhile,itisalsoachanceforthefamilymemberstoreuniteandtoremember.Inmyopinion,asatraditionalChinesefestival,theTomb-SweepingDaykeepsusremindedofourlostfamiliesandcherishingthelivingones.Bycelebratingit,wefollowthetraceoftheforefathersandmoveonwiththeirmemories.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國筆友John寫封電子郵件，介紹清明節(jié)的相關(guān)情況?！驹斍榻馕觥?.詞匯積累高興的：glad→delighted同時(shí)：meanwhile→inthemeantime有益的：chance→opportunity追溯到：datebackto→tracebackto2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inmyopinion,asatraditionalChinesefestival,theTomb-SweepingDaykeepsusremindedofourlostfamiliesandcherishingthelivingones.拓展句：Inmyopinion,theTomb-SweepingDay,whichisatraditionalChinesefestival,keepsusremindedofourlostfamiliesandcherishingthelivingones.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I’mgladtobeinformedthatyoushowgreatinterestintraditionalChinesefestivals.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]China’straditionalTomb-SweepingDaydatesbacktotheZhouDynasty,whichusuallyfallsonApril5inthesolarcalendar,withahistoryofmorethan2,500years.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)（2020·浙江·高考真題）假定你是李華，你校來自愛爾蘭的外教Peter因病回國休假。請(qǐng)給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.詢問近況；2.分享班級(jí)最新消息；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearPeter,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearPeter,Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.Howareyoufeelingnow?Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.Lastmonth,anEnglishfestivalwasheldinourschool,andourclassperformedasongwhichyoutaughtusatthefestival.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.Ifonlyyouhadbeenthere.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，向因病假回國休假的外教老師詢問近況，分享消息和表達(dá)祝愿?！驹斍榻馕觥康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段詢問近況；第二段告知班級(jí)消息；第三段表達(dá)祝愿。要求：1.詢問近況（Howareyoufeelingnow?）

2.告知班級(jí)消息（mygoodnews;performedasongwhichyoutaughtus）

3.表達(dá)祝愿（wishyouaquickandcompleterecovery）第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）besorrytodo;onsickleave;sweepaway;assoonas;givesb.warmapplause;recovery第三步：連詞成句1.Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeonsickleave.2.Ihopemygoodnewsforyouwillsweepawaytheshadowofdisease.3.Assoonaswefinishedthesong,alltheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.4.Weallmissyouverymuchandwishyouaquickandcompleterecovery.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤色修改7．（2020·浙江·高考真題）假定你是高一學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)你給你的美國網(wǎng)友Tony寫一封e-mail，把你的暑假安排告訴他，并詢問他的暑假安排。內(nèi)容包括：1.完成作業(yè)，適量閱讀；2.走親訪友；3.參加社區(qū)組織的志愿者活動(dòng)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；信的開頭已經(jīng)寫好。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearTony,Howiseverythingwithyourecently?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考答案】DearTony,Howarethingswithyoulately?Iamgladtotellyoutheplanformysummerholiday,whichisapproaching.Aboveall,Ihavegottofinishalltheassignedhomeworkanddosomereadingaswell.Iwillalsospendsometimevisitingrelativesandclosefriendsandeventravellingnearorfar.Besides,Iintendtotakepartinsomemeaningfulvolunteeringactivitiesorganizedbythecommunity.Pleasesendmeane-mail,sharingyourplanforthesummervacation.OK?Lookingforwardtoit!Yourssincerely,Lihua【語篇解讀】本書面表達(dá)是一篇提綱類作文?！驹斍榻馕觥矿w裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主結(jié)構(gòu)：分總要求：1.完成作業(yè)，適量閱讀；2.走親訪友；3.參加社區(qū)組織的志愿者活動(dòng)。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）begladtodosth./tellsb.sth./spendtimeindoingsth./takepartin/intendtodosth./sendsth.tosb./lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.Howiseverythinggoingrecently?2.Iamgladtotellyoutheplanfortheapproachingsummerholiday.3.Aboveall,Ihavegottofinishalltheassignedhomeworkanddosomereadingaswell.4.Iwillalsospendsometimevisitingrelativesandclosefriendsandeventravellingnearorfar.5.Besides,Iintendtotakepartinsomemeaningfulvolunteeringactivitiesorganizedbythecommunity.6.Whataboutyourplanforthesummerholiday?7.Lookingforwardtoit!第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…狀語從句連詞：because/if/though/although…定語從句連詞：which/that/when/where…第五步：修改潤色（加入高級(jí)詞匯或短語）【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Ihavegottofinishallthehomeworkassignedbymyteachersanddosomereadingaswell.我必須完成老師布置的所有家庭作業(yè)，并且讀一些書。句中使用了過去分詞短語作后置定語。[高分句型2]Besides,Iintendtotakepartinsomemeaningfulvolunteeringactivitiesorganizedbythecommunity,whichareofgreatbenefit.句中which引導(dǎo)非線性定語從句，和beof+n.表事物特征。8．（重慶市巴蜀中學(xué)2022-2023學(xué)年高三下學(xué)期3月月考英語試題）假定你是李華，正在規(guī)劃自己的高中畢業(yè)旅行。請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件，向英國好友Jack求助，希望他能幫你解答目前遇到的困惑，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.求助內(nèi)容；3.希望回復(fù)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearJack,Howisitgoing?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearJack,Howisitgoing?IwantyoutoknowI’mgraduatingverysoon,andthatI’mplanningatripafterGaokao.I’dliketohearyouropinionsontwocriticalmatters.First,I’mstillwanderingbetweenmytraveldestinations,whichareThailandandSanyahaven’tbeenabroadbeforesoIhaveconcernslikesafety,accommodationsandtravel.However,IheartravelcostinSanyahasskyrocketed,andIdon’thaveabigbudget.Besides,I’dlikeyoutorecommendaffordablerestaurantswithlocalfeatures.Mymouthisalreadywateringatthethoughtofallsortsofdelicacies!Athousandmilesbeginswiththefirststep,asLaoziputit.IbelieveyoufeelsotooandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，正在規(guī)劃自己的高中畢業(yè)旅行。請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件，向英國好友Jack求助，希望他能幫你解答目前遇到的困惑。【詳情解析】1.詞匯積累意見：opinion→recommendation然而：however→nevertheless此外：besides→what'smore各種各樣的：allsortsof→varietiesof2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Besides,I’dlikeyoutorecommendaffordablerestaurantswithlocalfeatures.Mymouthisalreadywateringatthethoughtofallsortsofdelicacies!拓展句:Besides,I’dlikeyoutorecommendaffordablerestaurantswithlocalfeatures,whereIcanenjoyallsortsofdelicacies!【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】First,I’mstillwanderingbetweenmytraveldestinations,whichareThailandandSanyahaven’tbeenabroadbeforesoIhaveconcernslikesafety,accommodationsandtravel.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，so連接并列句）【高分句型2】Athousandmilesbeginswiththefirststep,asLaoziputit.（as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）9．（2023屆河南省鄭州市外國語學(xué)校高三下學(xué)期4月份月考英語試題）假如你是李華，你的英國網(wǎng)友Forbes打算抽空到中國學(xué)習(xí)太極(TaiChi)，他寫信向你求助，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給對(duì)方寫一封回信：1.介紹學(xué)太極好處；2.負(fù)責(zé)聯(lián)系學(xué)習(xí)地點(diǎn)和老師。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearForbes,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours,LiHua【參考答案】DearForbes,ItisamazingformetoknowthatyoushowgreatpreferenceforTaiChiandarewillingtolearnitsoon.I’mquitesurethatIcangiveyouahandgladly.TaiChiisnotonlyanancientmartialart,buthasalsobeenwidelyacknowledgedasaneffectivehealthexercise.Famousforitsgracefulandwell-balancedmovements,TaiChiprovidesthementalrelaxationandphysicalfitnessthataresoessentialinourmodernstressfullives.

Concerningyourlearninglocationandinstructor,I’msoproudtotellyouthatIhavetheabilitytorecommendthebestschoolandbesttrainerinourcitytoyou,foractuallymyuncleisamasterofTaiChiwhoisalwaysinvitedtoinstructothersalloverthecountry.Asaresult,youcanrelyonme.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming!Yours,LiHua【語篇解讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求寫一封回信，告知Forbes學(xué)太極相關(guān)的情況?！驹斍榻馕觥康谝徊剑簩忣}:回信

告知Frobes學(xué)太極相關(guān)的情況人稱：第三人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分表示愿意幫助Forbes，第二部分說明學(xué)太極的好處和負(fù)責(zé)聯(lián)系學(xué)習(xí)地點(diǎn)和老師，第三部分期望Forbes的到來。要點(diǎn)：1.表示愿意幫助Forbes2．學(xué)太極的好處：是一種有效的健身運(yùn)動(dòng)、動(dòng)作優(yōu)雅、讓人放松聯(lián)系學(xué)習(xí)地點(diǎn)和老師：會(huì)介紹最好的太極學(xué)校和老師3．期待Forbes的到來第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語

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