高考英語讀后續(xù)寫導(dǎo)學(xué)案7（guardian+angel）

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練7（GuardianAngel）AFour-leggedGuardianAngelSnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach.Ihadjustcleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjob,andnowourfinancialsituationwasdepressing.Finally,Ihadputthehomeonthemarket.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane(大丹犬),Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.ThethoughtoflosingthedogandourbeautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.Deepindiscouragement,Isattypingupmyapplicationletters.OutofthecornerofmyeyeIcouldseemythirteen-month-oldson,Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentleBrigitte.ItseemedasifBrigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamilyandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanion.BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmaspackageshadarrived.Irantothedoorbutnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.Thinkingofthese,Icouldn’thelpsighingandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn’ttypedmorethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingandrunningbackandforthtotheslidingglassdooroverlookingourpool.Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,IrealizedForrestwasnowheretobeseen.Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.注意： 1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcould

bereleasedfromhospital.

ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcould

bereleasedfromhospital.

審題訓(xùn)練Theme：___________________________________________________________________Character：_________________________________________________________________Setting：___________________________________________________________________(P1)ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.中心______________________________________________________情感______________________________________________________重要情節(jié)：①_______________________________________________（描寫）②_______________________________________________（描寫）③_______________________________________________（描寫）(P2)Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcould

bereleasedfromhospital.

中心______________________________________________________情感______________________________________________________重要情節(jié)：①_______________________________________________（描寫）②_______________________________________________（描寫）③點(diǎn)題：__________________________________________續(xù)寫優(yōu)秀句子和參考范文小狗救人3班謝宇*：AtthesightofdrowningForrest,sonervouswasIthatmythroattightenedandmykneefeltweak.6班謝敏*：Curiousandscared,Iwalkedtothesideofthepool,wonderingwhathappened.8班何思*：Shetriedherbesthittingthewater,swamforwardandreachedwhereForrestwasdrowning.我的反應(yīng)1班吳嘉*：ThenIrushedtothem,pickedthemupfromthewaterandusedthetoweltokeepthemdryandwarm.4班方玫*：SofreezingwasthewaterthatForrest’sfaceturnedpaleandBrigittekeptshaking.Ihelpedthemchangethewetclothes,drytheirhairandtakethemtothehospitalatonce.前往醫(yī)院1班曾秋*：Havingwaitedforwhatseemedtobeanage,theemergencydooropenedandthedoctorwalkedout.8班何思*：IquicklydrovetothehospitalandwassonervousthatIcouldn’tevenutterasound.得知無恙1班吳嘉*：Atthesightofmysonsafeandsound,asenseofreliefwelledupinmyheart.6班謝敏*：Hearingthegoodnews,Icouldn’tcontainmyexcitementandhuggedBrigittetightly.8班付嫻*：Withasurgeofrelief,tearsblurredmyeyes.出院歸家8班何思*：Onourwayhome,Icouldn’thelprecallingtheurgentsituationwithmypalmssweating.1班曾秋*：Whenwearrivedhome,Brigittewaswaitingforusinfrontofthedoor,lookingupatmewithitsbigandintelligenteyes.3班余浩*：NosoonerhadwecomeintothehousethanForrestleapttoherfeetandrushedtouswithhertailwagging.感受升華1班吳嘉*：Recallingthescene,sogratefulwasIthatItightlyembracedBrigitte.Icouldn’timaginewhatwouldhavehappenedifourguardianangelhadn’tbeenthere.1班賴逸*：Brigittewaslikeaguardianangel,witnessingmyson’sgrowthandgoingthrougheverytoughtimeswithus.5班梁峻*：IwouldnevergiveupourbelovedGreatDane,becausesheisnotonlyacommoncompanion,butafour-leggedguardianofourfamily.（1）ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Wonderingwhatwashappening,Iimmediatelydartedinthedirectionofthepool,onlytofindthatmy13-month-oldForrestwasdesperatelystrugglinginthepool.AndBrigitte,likeaprofessionallifesaver,wasmakingeveryefforttokeepForrestoutofwaterwhilepullinghimclosetothebankwitheveryounceofhisstrength.ItwasthenthatIrealizedwhathadhappenedbefore—mycurioussonhadcrawledattheedgeofthepoolandaccidentallyslidintoit.Withouthesitation,Ijumpedintothepool,heldupmyboyandcarriedhimoutofwater.Tomakesurethathewasallright,Irushedhimtohospital,prayingthatmyboywouldbesafeandsound.Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.Hearingthecomfortingnews,mytearswelledupinmyeyes.Seeminglywellawareofthewholesituation,Brigittewaggedhertailmerrilyaroundus,asifcelebratingForrest'ssurvival.Oncewewerebackhome,BrigitteevenlaybyForrest’sside,watchingoverhimfromtimetotime.Seeingthis,IrealizedthatBrigittewasmeanttobeaguardianangelinmyfamily.Hereandnowanewdecisionwasmade—IwillneverabandonmybelovedGreatDane,butmakeherourlastingcompanion.Asformylife,Ibecameconfidentagain,confidentthatIwouldsoonhaveanewjobandadreamhouseagain.(2)ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.MyheartracedasIlookedcloserandsawmyson,Forrest,thrashinginthewater,desperatelyfightingagainstitsgrip.

Withunwaveringdetermination,

Brigitte

swiftlyreachedhim,herpowerfuljawsclampingontohistinyshirt,pullinghimtowardsafety.

Frantically,Isprintedtothepool’sedge,tremblinghandspullingmyunconscioussonfromthewater.

Atthatverymoment,Brigittefetchedmyphoneandbarkedloudly,asifurgingmetoseekimmediatehelp.Lookingintoherbig,intelligenteyes,Icalmeddownalittleanddialed911.

Withinminutes,anambulancearrivedandwewerewhiskedawaytothehospital.

Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromthehospital.Onhearingthisgoodnews,alongsighofreliefescapedmeasIheldmysontightly,tearswellingupinmyeyes.Brigitte,sensinghermissionaccomplished,satbymyside,offeringcomfort.Inthatinstant,IrealizedthetruedepthofBrigitte’sloyaltyandbravery.Shewasmorethanjustapet;shewasanintegralpartofourfamily,alwaysreadytosafeguardandnurtureus.Despitetheimminentlossofourhome,Brigitte’spresenceremindedmeofourpricelesstreasure—afaithfulcompanion.Shebecameourfour-leggedguardianangel,abeaconofstrengthandhopeinourdarkesthours.原文本學(xué)習(xí)：ChickensoupfortheCanadiansoulByKarinBjerke-LisleIfyoutalktotheanimalstheywilltalkwithyouandyouwillknoweachother.Ifyoudonottalktothemyouwillnotknowthem,andwhatyoudonotknow,youwillfear.Whatonefears,onedestroys.

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ChiefDanGeorgeSnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach,Saskatchewan.Myhusband,Doug,hadjustcleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingourhouse.Theyearbefore,Doughadlosthisjobwiththeprovincialgovernment,andnowourfinancialsituationwasgrim.Indespair,wehadfinallyputourhomeonthemarket,andarealestateagentwasduetoshowuplaterthatday.Evenworse,wewouldhavetogiveupourtwobelovedGreatDanes,BambiandBrigitte,becausewecouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingthem.ThethoughtoflosingourdogsandourbeautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.Deepindespair,IsattypingupresumesandcoverlettersforDoug.OutofthecornerofmyeyeIcouldseeourthirteen-month-oldson,Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentlenanny-dog,Brigitte.Ihadn’ttypedmorethantwosentenceswhenourotherdog,Bambi,beganbarkingfuriouslyandrunningbackandforthtotheslidingglassdooroverlookingourpool.Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,IrealizedForrestwasnowheretobeseen.Inapanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,splashingaroundinthepool.Thentomyhorror,myeyescaughtsightofForrest’syellowsleeper.Brigittewasbravelydoingherbesttokeephimafloatbyholdingontohissleeperwithhermouth.Atthesametime,shewasdesperatelytryingtoswimtotheshallowend.IrealizedthatForresthadsomehowopenedthedoor,wanderedoutandfallenintothepool.Inasplitsecond,Idovein,liftedmypreciousbabyoutandcarriedhiminside.ButwhenIrealizedForrestwasn’tbreathing,Ibegantogointoshock.IwastrainedinCPR,butmymind

wentcompletelyblank.WhenIcalled911,allIcoulddowasscream.Ontheotherend,aparamedictriedtocalmmedownsothatIcouldfollowhisCPRinstructions,butinmyhysteriaIwasunabletocarryitoutsuccessfully.Thankfully,Doug,whowasaformerCanadianForcesofficerandwastrainedinCPR,arrivedandtookover.Istoodbywithmyheartinmythroat,andafteraboutthreeminutes,Forrestbegantobreatheagain.Whentheambulancearrived,IrodewithForresttothehospital.Alongthewayhestoppedbreathingacoupleoftimes,buteachtimetheparamedicsmanagedtorevivehim.Onceatthehospital,itwasn’tlongbeforeadoctortoldusthatForrestwouldbeallright.DougandIwereoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Theykepthimforobservationforatotaloffourdays,andIstayedbyhissidethewholetime.WhileForrestwasinthehospital,Dougwasoftenathome.WhenhewentintoForrest’sbedroom,hediscoveredthatbothBrigitteandBambihadcrammedthemselvesunderthecrib.FortheentiretimethatForrestwasinthehospital,theyatelittle,comingoutonlytodrinkwater.Otherwise,theyremainedunderthecrib,keepingavigiluntilwebroughtForresthome.Oncetheysawhewasback,BrigitteandBambibegantobarkwithapparentjoyandwouldn’tletForrestoutoftheirsight.Ourtwowonderfuldogsremain