高中英語寫作講評課件

高中英語寫作講評高中英語寫作講評1Thecomputerismoreandmorewidelyused.Youngpeopleliketochatonline.Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters.Thegovernmenthascarriedoutanewpolicy.ItwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoChinese.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Wedon’thavemuchtime.It’shightimethatwetookaction.Wecandevelopourcountrybyimprovingourmothertonguefirst. Howdoyougradeit（定檔）?Andwhy?homeworkshowThecomputerismoreandmore2ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Ifnot,comeupwithone.contentAreallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.Iseverythingtothepoint(切題)?

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Ifyes,correctthem.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高級詞匯）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearti3ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearticledividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?Ifnot,comeupwithone.Let’simproveit:ASSESSMENTstructureIsthearti4contentAreallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.Iseverythingtothepoint(切題)?Let’simproveit:contentAreallthedetailssta5

LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Ifyes,correctthem.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高級詞匯）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?Ifyes,underlinethem.Let’simproveit:Doesthewriteruseanylinki6Summary:paragraphstopicsentencedetailstothepointadvancedvocabularysentencepatternslinkingwordsstructurecontentlanguagewritingfewmistakesSummary:paragraphstopicsenten7目前，不少年輕人在寫作中喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。某英語雜志社就此話題邀請中學(xué)生發(fā)表看法。請你參考所給要點，寫一篇英語短文。有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：幽默；時尚；好玩有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：有錯別字，不利于語文學(xué)習(xí)；有時難以理解你的看法：……Nowadays,manyteenagersliketousetheweblanguageintheirwriting.Somestudentsthinkitishumorousandcool.Theyusetheweblanguage.Theyfeelit’sfun.Somethinkitisdifficult.Theycannotunderstand.Whentheyarechattingonline,theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavesomewrongly-writtencharacters.ItisbadforChineselearning.Ithinkwecanusetheweblanguageandwecanexpressourselvesmorefreely.Improvethecomposition.Focusontopicsentences,advancedvocabulary

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linkingwords.目前，不少年輕人在寫作中喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。某英語雜志社就此話8Youcannotteachamananything;youcanonlyhelphimfinditwithinhimself.---GalileoGalileiYoucannotteachamananythin9HomeworkFurtherimprovethewritingaccordingtotheassessmentform.Makeyourfinalcopyasneataspossible.HomeworkFurtherimprovethewr10

Let’sdivideitintoparts:Part.1Part.2Part.3Thecomputer…rememberthecharacters.Thegovernment…h(huán)elpstudentslearnChinesewell.It’shightimethatwe…byimprovingourmothertonguefirst. Let’sdivideitintoparts:Pa11Part2:Todealwiththesituation,thegovernmentcarryoutanewpolicy.Part3:AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightime thatwetookaction.Part1:Itiscommonthattherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinastudent’scomposition.Comeupwiththetopicsentences:Atopicsentencetellsthereaderwhatacertainpartisabout.Part2:Part3:Part1:Comeup12TopicsentenceforPart2TopicsentenceforPart3…TopicsentenceforPart1computerhomeworkraisetheawarenessofhaveapositiveeffectonTopicsentenceforPart2Topic13Whichendingdoyoulikebest?Why?Inmyopinion,thepolicyisbeneficialtous.Itmakessenseinprotectingourculture.b)AsfarasIamconcerned,it’shightimethatwetookaction.Weshouldcollectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.Onlybyhardworkingcanweachieveourgoal.Whichendingdoyoulikebest?14…theydon’tcareabouttheirwriting.Therehavemanywrongcharactersintheircompositions,too.Everyday,theyhavemanyhomework.writingaremuch…theydon’tcareabouttheir15…________.________,whenyoungpeoplechatonline,theyattachlittleimportancetotheirwriting.__________,withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyhavetroublememorizingthecharacters.Thenewpolicyisintendedtodealwiththesituation.Raisingthesocialawarenessofourmothertongue,itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning.__________,it’shightimethatwetookaction.__________,weshouldrefertoadictionaryforunknowncharacters.Second,collectthemistakesandreviewthemfrequently.Inaword,onlybyworkinghardcanweachieveourgoal.Thereareseveralreasonsbehind.B.AsfarasIamconcerned

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D.Moreover. E.FirstofallACDBE…________.________,whenyoun16Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theyaretoobusytorememberthecharacters.Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue.ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.Canyouimprovethem?Whentheyarechatting,theyd17 Whentheyarechatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.

Whenchatting,theydon’tcaretheirwriting.(Ellipsis省略句) Whentheyarechatting,they18 Everyday,theyhavemuchhomework.Theycan’trememberthecharacters. Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyfailtorememberthecharacters.

(so…that;failtodo)withWithsomuchhomeworktodo,theyhavetroubleinrememberingthecharacters. Everyday,theyhavemuchhom19Itwillmakepeoplepayattentiontoourmothertongue.raisetheawarenessofItwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue.Itwillmakepeoplepayattent20ItwillhelpstudentslearnChinesewell.haveapositiveeffectonItwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents’Chineselearning.ItwillhelpstudentslearnCh21Itwillraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue.Itwillhaveapositiveeffectonstudents’Chineselearning._______theawarenessofourmothertongue,itwillhaveapositiveeffectonChineselearning.(non-verbal非謂語）(notonly…butalso)Itwillnotonlyraisetheawarenessofourmothertongue,butalsohaveapositiveeffectonstudents’Chineselearning.RaisingItwillraisetheawarenessof