【課件】讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)“三部曲”課件-2023-2024學(xué)年高中英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)項(xiàng)

英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)

親情類(lèi)（故事構(gòu)造“三部曲”）一：沖突構(gòu)造（誤會(huì)、犯錯(cuò)等）只有沖突才能體會(huì)親情的彌足珍貴。沖突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代溝）、誤會(huì)等。1、生氣1.我媽媽瞪著我，這是在我有一個(gè)重組家庭之前她從未做過(guò)的事?！澳憧梢該炱饋?lái)的?！彼f(shuō)?！澳遣艑?duì)。”（本可以，虛擬語(yǔ)氣）Mymotherglancedatme.SomethingsheneverdidbeforeIhadastepfamily.“Youcouldhavepickeditup.”shesaid.“Thatwouldhavebeenthekindthingtodo.”2.他生氣地握緊拳頭，但是弟弟卻激動(dòng)地?fù)]著手。Hefoldedhisfistangrily,buthisyoungerbrotherwavedhishandsexcitedly.3.Jackson試著說(shuō)什么，但Carter太生氣了，他一個(gè)字也聽(tīng)不進(jìn)去。（對(duì)比，夸張）Jacksonkeptsayingsomething,butsoangrywasCarterthathecouldn’tevenhearaword.

2、后悔1.我意識(shí)到我裙子上的蝴蝶結(jié)打得很不好。我本應(yīng)該請(qǐng)媽媽幫忙的。IrealizedhowpoorlyItiedthestringonmyskirtwhichwasoverleggings.Ishouldhaveaskedmomforhelp.3、內(nèi)疚1.一想到我對(duì)他所做的一切，遺憾和內(nèi)疚就像沒(méi)休止的潮水一樣向我襲來(lái)。ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,regretandguiltoverwhelmedmelikeendlesstides.

2.每當(dāng)我想到亨利濕了的書(shū)，我的臉都會(huì)變紅了。WheneverIthoughtofHenry’swetbook,myfaceturnedred.4、煩惱WatchingShirley’ssmilefadingaway,Peterfrowned.看著雪莉的微笑漸漸消失，彼得皺起了眉頭。5、傷心當(dāng)她望過(guò)她三歲妹妹的桌子時(shí)，Amanda感覺(jué)她的心情像天空一樣灰暗。（比喻）Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.6、犯錯(cuò)1.Tocoverhisterribleaction（為了掩蓋他糟糕的行為，不定式作狀語(yǔ)）,theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.2.Fearingpunishment（害怕懲罰，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbour’scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn’tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.3.Glancingatthechocolateswithhesitation,(猶豫地看著著巧克力,非謂語(yǔ)),theboytimidlyraisedhisheadbeforehismother.二：沖突化解（解釋、道歉、彌補(bǔ)、回憶等）1、道歉1.“對(duì)不起，”他說(shuō)到，輕輕的摸摸Jackson的頭。（2021.4湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）“I’msosorry.”hesaid,gentlypettingJackson’shead.2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter一眼，然后低下了頭。（動(dòng)作鏈）（2021.4湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）Heputdownhishand,glancedcautiouslyatCarterandloweredhishead.3.Tohersurprise,shesmiledatmeandexpressedherapologyforignoringmyloneliness（為她忽略我的孤獨(dú)道歉）aswellasmydifficultywithEnglishcommunication.（2021年沈陽(yáng)市一模）的微笑漸漸消失，彼得皺起了眉頭。（汕頭市高三第一學(xué)期質(zhì)量監(jiān)測(cè)）2、原諒1.他媽媽把手指放在他嘴唇讓他停止說(shuō)話，在他額頭上吻了一下，然后走出了書(shū)房。（動(dòng)作鏈）（2021廣一模）Hismothersilencedhimbygentlyputtingherfingeronhislips，gaveasoftkissonhisforeheadandwalkedoutofthestudy.3、開(kāi)心1.“我想給你一個(gè)驚喜！”他指向一個(gè)包裝精美的盒子，眼里閃爍著光芒。（with結(jié)構(gòu)）“Iwantedtosurpriseyou!”hepointedataneatlywrappedboxwithhiseyesgleaming.2.看到他的家人圍坐著，和諧地待在一起，卡特感覺(jué)到一種幸福感。（doing非謂語(yǔ)）（2021.4湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）Seeinghisfamiliessittingtogetherandstayingtogetherharmoniously,Caterfeltasurgeofhappiness.3.歡快的歌唱飄蕩在房間里，兩姐妹沉浸在音樂(lè)的美中。（獨(dú)立主格）（2020.11溫州一模）Cheerfulsingingfloatingintheroom,thetwosistersimmersedthemselvesinthebeautyofthemusic.4、感激1.ButforHenry’shelp,Iwouldn’thavefinishedmyperformancesmoothly.如果沒(méi)有亨利的幫助，我就不會(huì)順利地完成我的演出了（2021年南通市二模）。2.Ilookedather,tearsofloveandgratitudewelling(well)upinmyeyes.(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))我看著她，愛(ài)和感激的淚水在我的眼中涌起。（2021年沈陽(yáng)市一模）3.Afterwards,itwasmyturntogiveasmalllecture,inwhichIexpressedmysinceregratitudetomymomandfriends,bowing(bow)tothemseveraltimes.（定語(yǔ)從句，非謂語(yǔ)）之后，輪到我做一個(gè)小型講座，在會(huì)上我向媽媽和朋友表達(dá)了真誠(chéng)的感謝，多次向他們鞠躬5、回憶1.在這時(shí)，毫無(wú)預(yù)料地，Carter突然想起B(yǎng)illy躺在地上哭的回憶，一直在他腦海回旋，提醒著他一些事情。（無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句；doing非謂語(yǔ)；and連接兩個(gè)同時(shí)進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作）（2021.4湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）Atthatmoment,unexpectedly,thememoryofthesightofBillycryingonthegroundoccurredtoCarter,hoveringinhismindandremindinghimsomething.2.看著Jackson，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那輛車(chē)的情景。（2021.4湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）LookingatJackson,Cartercouldn’thelpimagininghislittlebrotherspendingthewholedaycarefullypaintingthecar.3.“我只希望我知道如何幫助她，”阿曼達(dá)自言自語(yǔ)，想起李驚恐的眼睛（2020.11溫州一模）“IjustwishIknewhowtohelpher,”Amandasaidtoherself,thinkingofLi’sfrightenedeyes（想到Li害怕的雙眼）.三：親情升華（誠(chéng)實(shí)、珍惜等）1.Fromthenon,thethreechocolatesrangthealarminhishearteverytimeheintendedtolie,remindinghimtobehonest提醒他要誠(chéng)實(shí)(非謂語(yǔ)).（2021廣一模）2.Inoddedfirmly,knowingaflowerofkindnessandfriendshipbegantoblossom（善良和友誼之花開(kāi)放）inbothofourhearts.（2021年南通市二模）3.ThisexperiencetransformedmyattitudetowardsHenryandourrelationshiphasalsobeenharmonious（我們的關(guān)系變得和諧）sincethen.（2021年南通市二模）4.正是亨利的善良讓我感受到了我們家庭的溫暖。我會(huì)用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模）ItwasHenry’skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthfromourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.親情類(lèi)場(chǎng)景描寫(xiě)（七大關(guān)系）一、母子關(guān)系1.Doyoumeanthateveflowerhasitsownbeautyaskedmymotherthoughtfully.Inoddedwithouthesitation,asifasecondwastedcoulddeprivethedandelionsoftheilife."Thesametoyou,"sheadded,hervoicesoft""Noteveryonecanbearose,anditisalsoanhonortobeadandelion."Knowingthatmymotherhadrealizedmypain,ItookoffthemaskthatIhadwornforthewholelunchtimeandpouredoutmyuneaseheartilyShelistenedtomepatientlyandpattedmeonthebacktenderly.Suddenlyshestopped,asiftosaysomething.“你的意思是那朵夜花有它自己的美麗嗎？”媽媽沉思地問(wèn)。我毫不猶豫地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，仿佛一秒鐘的浪費(fèi)就能剝奪蒲公英的生命?！澳阋惨粯?，”她又說(shuō)，“不是每個(gè)人都能成為一朵玫瑰，成為蒲公英也是一種榮譽(yù)。”我知道媽媽已經(jīng)意識(shí)到了我的痛苦，我摘下了我整個(gè)午餐時(shí)間戴的面具，盡情地傾訴我的不安。她耐心地聽(tīng)著我的話，溫柔地拍了拍我的背。突然，她停了下來(lái)，好像在說(shuō)什么。

"Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator."Momsaid.SheremindedmeofhowfluentlyIcoulddelivermypartathome.ItwasatthattimethatIunderstoodthatmaybeIwasmoresuitableforarolebackstagelikeanarrator.Fromthenon,Ipracticedmylinesheartandsoulwithmymotheratlunchtimeforweeks.AndtheperformanceapproachedultimatelyStandingbackstage,nervousnesscamefloodinginme.Whatencouragedmetoovercomeitwastheinspirationfromthebeautifulyellowdandelions.Theperformancethatnightwaseventuallyabigsuccess.Hearingthethunderousapplause,Itookprideinmyroleandfirmlybelievedthatevenadandelionhaditsownbeauty.

“但你將會(huì)成為一個(gè)美麗的敘述者。”媽媽說(shuō)。她讓我想起了我在家里可以多么流利地扮演我的角色。正是在那個(gè)時(shí)候，我明白也許我更適合像敘述者這樣的角色。從那時(shí)起，我在午餐時(shí)間和母親一起練習(xí)了好幾周。演出最終站在后臺(tái)，緊張情緒涌上心頭。鼓勵(lì)我克服它的是靈感來(lái)自于美麗的黃色蒲公英。當(dāng)晚的演出最終大獲成功。聽(tīng)到雷鳴般的掌聲，我為自己的角色感到自豪，堅(jiān)信甚至蒲公英也有自己的美。二、父子關(guān)系

Theman,seeingthattheboyalreadyhadmoneystartedtogetangryagain."Howcanyoubesoselfish?Whydoyouwantmoremoneysinceyoualreadyhavethesebills?"thefathercouldhardlyholdhisangerbackandinquiredwithtwoeyebrowsknittedintoone.Withheld-backtearsinhiseyes,thelittleboyslowlyandcarefullycountedouthismoney,andthenlookedupathisfather,replying,"BecauseIdidn'thaveenoughbefore,butnowIdo."withbigblueeyes]shiningwithtears.那個(gè)男人，看到那個(gè)男孩已經(jīng)有錢(qián)了，又開(kāi)始生氣了?！澳阍趺催@么自私？既然你已經(jīng)有了這些賬單，你為什么還要更多的錢(qián)？”父親幾乎不能忍住他的憤怒，用兩個(gè)眉毛編織成一個(gè)。小男孩含著淚水，慢慢地小心地?cái)?shù)出他的錢(qián)，然后抬頭看著他的父親，回答說(shuō)：“因?yàn)槲乙郧皼](méi)有足夠的錢(qián)，但現(xiàn)在我有了?！睅е{(lán)色的大眼睛]眼淚閃閃發(fā)光。

Notknowingwhathissonmeant,thefatherjuststoodthere,waitingforhisboy'sexplanation.Wipingawayhistearsandaninnocentsmileappearingonhisface,theboyrequestedinarelievedvoice,"Daddy,Ihave$20now.CanIbuyanhourfromyou?Pleasecomehomeearlytomorrow.Iwanttohavedinnerwithyou."Hearingtheboy'ssmallbutsincererequest,thefathercouldn'tholdbackhistears.Realizinghewastoobusywithhisbusinesstosparesometimewithhisbelovedones,hegatheredhissonintohisarmsandapologizedagainandagain,"Sorry.,andIpromiseI'Ilbebackearlytomorrow."他不知道兒子的意思，父親就站在那里等著兒子的解釋。男孩擦去眼淚，臉上露出天真的微笑，用松了一口氣的聲音問(wèn)道：“爸爸，我現(xiàn)在有$20了。我能從你那里買(mǎi)到一個(gè)小時(shí)嗎？請(qǐng)明天早點(diǎn)回家。我想和你共吃晚飯?！甭?tīng)到男孩小而真誠(chéng)的請(qǐng)求，父親忍不住流住了眼淚。意識(shí)到自己忙了，沒(méi)有時(shí)間和心愛(ài)的人在一起，他把兒子抱在懷里，一遍又一遍地道歉：“抱歉。我保證明天早點(diǎn)回來(lái)?！比⒏概P(guān)系

Tomysurprise,Mollygavethebagtomeonceagainseveraldayslater.Thesamebagandsamestuffinside.Ifeltforgiven,andtrustedandloved.Andalittlemorecomfortablewearingthetitleoffather.Overseveralmonths,thebagwiththenoteinwentwithmefromtimetotime.IntimeMollyturnedherattentiontootherthings.Shefoundothertreasures,lostinnewgames,andgrewup.Iwasleftholdingthebag.Shegaveittomeonemorningandneveraskedforitsreturn.AndsoIhaveitstill.令我吃驚的是，幾天后莫莉又把這個(gè)包給了我。同樣的袋子和同樣的東西。我感到被寬恕，被信任和被愛(ài)。穿上父親的頭銜會(huì)更舒服一點(diǎn)。幾個(gè)月多了，那個(gè)帶著紙條的包不時(shí)地跟著我走。不久，莫莉把注意力轉(zhuǎn)向了其他事情。她還發(fā)現(xiàn)了其他在新游戲中丟失的寶藏，然后長(zhǎng)大了。我一直拿著袋子。一天早上，她把它給了我，但從來(lái)沒(méi)有要求讓它回來(lái)。所以我還在那里。四、姐妹關(guān)系

Alilookedupandsawtheotherboysrushingahead.Refusingtogiveupatthispoint,hejumpedtohisfeetandranasfastashecould.Hedashedacrossthefinishlineandwonthefourthprize.Thinkinghewouldlethersisterdown,Alicouldn'thelpsobbing.JustthenhesuddenlyheardtheannouncementfromthebroadcastthathewonthethirdprizeastherunnerwhocollidedwithAliwasdisqualifiedforbreakingtherule.Holdingtheshoesclosetohischestduringtheawardceremony,Alifeltoverjoyedandrelievedasheeventuallywontheshoesforhissister.阿里抬起頭，看到其他男孩沖在前面。在這一點(diǎn)上，他拒絕放棄，他跳起來(lái)，跑得盡可能快。他沖過(guò)終點(diǎn)線，獲得了四等獎(jiǎng)。以為他會(huì)讓她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起來(lái)。就在這時(shí)，他突然聽(tīng)到廣播中宣布，他贏得了三等獎(jiǎng)，因?yàn)榕c阿里相撞的跑步者因違反規(guī)則而被取消資格。在頒獎(jiǎng)典禮上，阿里把鞋子緊貼在胸前，感到欣喜若狂，松了一口氣，因?yàn)樗罱K為他的妹妹贏得了鞋子。五、兄弟之間Therewasnofenceatall.Itwasabridge!Abridgestretchedfromonesideofthecreektotheother!Johnwasabouttocomplainabouteverything,whenhefoundtheneighbor,hisyoungbrother,wascomingacrossthebridge,hishandsoutstretched."YouarequiteafellowtobuildthisbridgeafterallIhavesaidanddone,"saidJohn'sbrother.Thetwobrothersmetinthemiddle,takingeachother'shandandhuggingeachother.根本沒(méi)有柵欄。是一座橋！一座橋從小溪的一邊延伸到另一邊！約翰正要抱怨一切，當(dāng)他發(fā)現(xiàn)鄰居，他的弟弟，正在過(guò)橋，他的手伸出。約翰的哥哥說(shuō)：“我說(shuō)了這么多，你真是個(gè)造橋的好朋友。兩兄弟在中間相遇，牽著對(duì)方的手，互相擁抱。六、祖孫之間

Theenvelopewasfromgrandma.Shehadknownhowsickshewas.IntheenvelopewasenoughmoneytopayfortherestofmycollegeyearandarequestthatItakepianolessonsinhermemory.Movedtotears,Ideterminedtolearnpianolessonsbyheartandmymemoryofgrandmamotivatedmetopracticedayandnight.Idon'tthinkthepianopiecewasevenplayedwithmorefeelingthanitwasmysecondyearincollege.Now,yearslater,whenIwalkbyapiano,IsmileandthinkofGrandma.Sheisplayingthepianosmilinglyinheaven,Iamsure.

那個(gè)信封是從奶奶那里寄來(lái)的。她已經(jīng)知道自己病得有多厲害了。信封里有足夠的錢(qián)來(lái)支付我大學(xué)剩下的時(shí)間，并要求我為她上鋼琴課。我哭了，決心用心學(xué)鋼琴，對(duì)奶奶的記憶激勵(lì)我日夜練習(xí)。我甚至不認(rèn)為這首鋼琴曲比我上大學(xué)的第二年更有感情。幾年后，當(dāng)我走過(guò)鋼琴時(shí)，我微笑著想起了奶奶。我相信，她是在天堂微笑著彈鋼琴的。七、夫妻之間

TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan'scheeks.Withtearsofhappinessinhereyes,shestoodmotionlesslyfacingtheoppositesideofthestreet,asifgazingatsomeone.Althoughshecouldn'tphysicallyseehim,shedefinitelyfeltMark'spresence.Susanthoughtshewasactuallylucky,forhehadgivenheragiftmorepowerfulthansight,agiftoflovethatcanbringlightwherethereisdarkness.JustasMarkgrewalittleworried,hesawhiswifebreakintoaradiantsmileandblowakisstohisdirection.Finallyshefoundbackherself,blindbutattractiveandconfidentassheusedtobe.

幸福的淚水順著蘇珊的臉頰流下來(lái)。她眼里含著幸福的淚水，一動(dòng)不動(dòng)地站在街道對(duì)面，仿佛在凝視著某人。雖然她看不到他的身體，但她絕對(duì)感覺(jué)到馬克的存在。蘇珊認(rèn)為她實(shí)際上是幸運(yùn)的，因?yàn)樗o了她一份比視力更強(qiáng)大的禮物，一份愛(ài)的禮物，可以在黑暗中帶來(lái)光明。就在馬克有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心的時(shí)候，他看到他的妻子露出燦爛的微笑，朝他的方向吹了一個(gè)吻。最后，她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己回來(lái)了，她失明了，但像以前一樣有吸引力和自信。高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)人與動(dòng)物類(lèi)（故事構(gòu)造“三大套路”）套路一：可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物故事情節(jié)可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物，如狗，鳥(niǎo)等，主要構(gòu)思陪伴、忠誠(chéng)，或者人救助動(dòng)物生命，動(dòng)物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情節(jié)。1、外貌1.apairoflargewateryeyes一雙水汪汪的大眼睛2.twobigroundeyes兩只圓溜溜的大眼睛3.beady/sparkling/twinklingeyes小珠般圓亮的/亮晶晶的/閃閃發(fā)亮的眼睛4.anoselikeasmallblackgem一顆黑寶石般的鼻子5.long/muscular/skinny/spindlylegs長(zhǎng)的/肌肉發(fā)達(dá)的/皮包骨的/干瘦的腿6.furisaswhiteassnow皮毛像雪一樣潔白7.alonglittletail一條長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的小尾巴2、動(dòng)作wagthetail搖尾巴smell/sniff嗅bark/yap/yelp狗吠lick舔puttheearsup把耳朵豎起來(lái)shakethewholebody抖動(dòng)全身bitethecornerofthecoat咬住衣角restthenoseinitspaws把鼻子擱在爪子里keepitsforelegsdoubledup保持前腿彎曲2、動(dòng)作rubtheirnecksandbackswiththeirpaws用爪子摩擦它們的脖子和背部holdittightlywiththepaws用爪子緊緊按住fallonitsback摔得四腳朝天runaroundme圍著我跑keepscratchingyouwithhisfrontpaws用前爪不停撓你raiseitswholebodyonitshindlegs用后腿支起全身leaptoitsfeet跳起來(lái)3、高興1.TheyweregladtoseePoppycoming

backtoherusualself（他們很高興看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）,guidingthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducingtoitherfavoritetoys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）2.Smilingeversobright（笑得更加燦爛。）,hecalledouttohis

parents,whotuggedhiminforalong

hug.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3.Herparentswatchedthemplayingaroundandsmiledwithrelief（輕松地笑了）–Poppywasbacktoheroldcheerfulself!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）4、常見(jiàn)動(dòng)物：鹿1.Amotherdeerwithahugepairofdeerhorns（有一對(duì)大的鹿角）appearedinfrontofhim,withababyfawn(幼鹿)lyingonthedryground.（202103寧波十校）2.Thepoorcreature,apparentlyindesperateneedofwater,lickeditupquicklywithitsshell-pinktongue（很快用它貝殼粉的舌頭舔乾凈）.（202103寧波十校）3.Themotherdeerloweredherheadandlickedmyboy’scheekgently,asifexpressinggratitude（低下頭舔我的男孩的臉頰，好像在表達(dá)感激）.（202103寧波十校）4、常見(jiàn)動(dòng)物：馬1.Atthepen,Ginasawthehorse.Itwasofmediumsize.Ithadafine,softblackcoatandonewhitefoot（它的毛細(xì)膩柔軟,油黑油黑的,有一只腳是白色的）.Therewasawidewhitepatch(斑紋)thatrandownthecenterofitsface.Ginafellinlovewithitatfirstsight.“Wow!Whatahorse.”（英語(yǔ)周報(bào)高三第十期2020.9.4）2.Thehorseseemedtofeelherkindness,sniffingher（聞了聞她）.（英語(yǔ)周報(bào)高三第十期2020.9.4）4、常見(jiàn)動(dòng)物：狗1.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusualcheerfulself（不像往常那么快樂(lè)）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）2.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging（她的尾巴開(kāi)始擺動(dòng)）eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）4、常見(jiàn)動(dòng)物：狗3.Poppy

approachedwithcaution,tryingnottoscarethepuppy.Sureenough,itwasonlymomentslaterthattheballoffurlifteditsheadoutofthe

box（把它的頭伸出盒子）topeekatitsnewhomeanditsnewfriend.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）4.Hearinghisbagsunloadedonthedriveway,Poppy’searsprickedup（豎起耳朵）andsuddenlyshewasonallfours（四腳著地）.The

boywasgreetedwitha

cheerful

high-pitchedbark.ThenthefrontdoorpoppedopenandPoppydartedtohisembrace,followedbythelittleonewholickedhisfingersfondly.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）套路二：兇猛型動(dòng)物故事情節(jié)兇猛的動(dòng)物，如狼、熊等，一般會(huì)給人造成生命威脅，所以主要是以遇險(xiǎn)、脫險(xiǎn)的故事情節(jié)為主。1、害怕1.Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐懼嚇呆，害怕到動(dòng)也不能動(dòng)）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3.MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，顫抖著，使勁吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）1、害怕4.Anumbingchillgrippedme（一種麻木的寒戰(zhàn)擢緊了我）.（2020.11金華十校）5.Thinkingofthewolf’sbloodymouth,Macwasnearlydeadwithfright（幾乎給嚇?biāo)溃?017年6月高考浙江卷）6.Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror（被一種強(qiáng)烈的恐懼感所控制）,mypalmssweating.（山東省青島市2020年4月高三?？迹?、求助與獲救1.Atthesightofit,Elliwavedherhandswildly（瘋狂地?fù)]手）,screaming,“Help!”（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospot（驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)）thatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2、求助與獲救3.Havingpulledthemassivebodyoutofthestump,Briancleanedthewounds（清潔傷口）andthengavehimcarefultreatment.Beckykneltdownandtendedtothewolf（蹲下來(lái)照顧狼）togetherwithBrian.（2020.11金華十校）4.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppy（擦干小狗）tillhehadbecomedry.（山東模擬）5.Usingarockasthesupportingpoint,Iunlockedthechainandsetthewolffree（放走這只狼）.（山東省青島市2020年4月高三模考）3、常見(jiàn)動(dòng)物：熊1.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread（嗅著，聞著我們的大蒜面包）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegs（用他的后腿站起來(lái)）andpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3.Thebearrearedup,attackedthefenceandevendesiredtoteardownus（想要撕裂我們）withflamesblazinginitseyes（怒火在他的眼里燃燒）owingtothedreadfulspray.（2020.7高考浙江卷）3、常見(jiàn)動(dòng)物：熊4.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag（撕開(kāi)他的帳篷袋）.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）5.OneofMac’sfriendspickedoutsomerawmeatandthrewittothewolf.Satisfiedwithwhathegot（對(duì)他得到的很滿(mǎn)意）,thewolfranintothewoods.（2017年6月高考浙江卷）3、常見(jiàn)動(dòng)物：狼1.Pale-yelloweyesnarrowed.Blacklipstightened.Doublesetsoftwo-inchsharpteethwereexposed（露出它那兩排兩英寸寬的利牙）.Suddenlythewolftrembled.Itsteethclacked,andapainfulcryrosefromitsthroat（它的牙齒咔嚓響，從它的喉嚨里發(fā)出一聲痛苦的喊叫）.（2020.11金華十校）2.Thewolf’sheadsanktotheground,sadyelloweyeslookingatus（黃色的眼睛悲傷地看著我們）.（2020.11金華十校）3.Soangrywasthewolfthatitkeptroaring（那只狼的太生氣了，一直咆哮）andsmackingthewindowviolently.（2020.7高考浙江卷）套路三：主題升華設(shè)計(jì)可愛(ài)型動(dòng)物主題：陪伴、珍愛(ài)生命、自然和諧、忠誠(chéng)等。兇猛型動(dòng)物主題：難忘的經(jīng)歷、獲得教訓(xùn)、感謝他人救助等。1.ElliandIlearnedourlesson（學(xué)到一個(gè)教訓(xùn)）:Beawareofabearwithatoothache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）2.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion（充滿(mǎn)愛(ài)和團(tuán)聚的溫暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）3.Therainthatcamethatdaywasamiracle（那天下的雨是一場(chǎng)奇跡）,savingourfarm,justlikemyboysavedalife.（202103寧波十校）4.Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表達(dá)感謝）.Whatawarmscene!（2020.11金華十校）非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（續(xù)寫(xiě)升級(jí)）入場(chǎng)券TomhasalovelydogwhoiscalledSeven.Wewillreadastoryaboutthedogandacourier(快遞員）whoiscalledJack.calledcalledRewritethesentenceswithnon-predicateswhenpossible!1.Asheisverylarge,Sevenlookskindofscar y.2.ThoughhehadbeentoldmanytimestostayawayfromSeven,Jackjustdidn'tlistentoit.3.AfterhewasbittentwicebySeven,JackrefusedtodeliveranythingtoTomunlesshesenthisdogaway.4.ThoughhehadbittenJacktwice,Sevendidn'tseemsorryaboutthatatall.5.OnedayafirebrokeoutinthehouseandSevendidn'tknowwhatheshoulddo.6.Sevenbarkedforhelponlytofind

Jackpassingby.7.WhenhesawSeveninthehouse,JackbrokeawindowtoletSevenout.8.Jack‘sbraveactmadeSevengetoutofdanger.9.Aftertheyhadgonethroughthefiretogether,SevenandJackbecamefriends.10.Thepartywhichwillbeheldthisweekendistocelebratetheirfriendship.11.Thattheymeeteachothereverydaymakestheirfriendshipdeeperanddeeper.Matchthesixgroupsofsentenceswiththesixpicturesontheleft.ABCDEF1.Asheisverylarge,Sevenlookskindofscary. 2.ThoughhehadbeentoldmanytimestostayawayfromSeven,Jackjustdidn'tlistentoit.3.AfterhewasbittentwicebySeven,JackrefusedtodeliveranythingtoTomunlesshesenthisdogaway.4.ThoughhehadbittenJacktwice,Sevendidn'tseemsorryaboutthatatall.5.OnedayafirebrokeoutinthehouseandSevendidn'tknowwhatheshoulddo.6.Sevenbarkedforhelponlytofind

Jackpassingby.7.WhenhesawSeveninthehouse,JackbrokeawindowtoletSevenout.8.Jack‘sbraveactmadeSevengetoutofdanger.9.Aftertheyhadgonethroughthefiretogether,SevenandJackbecamefriends.10.Thepartywhichwillbeheldthisweekendistocelebratetheirfriendship.11.Thattheymeeteachothereverydaymakestheirfriendshipdeeperanddeeper.ABCDEF1.Beingverylarge,Sevenlookskindofscary. 2.HavingbeentoldmanytimestostayawayfromSeven,Jackjustdidn'tlistentoit.3.BittentwicebySeven,JackrefusedtodeliveranythingtoTomunlesshesenthisdogaway.4.HavingbittenJacktwice,Sevendidn'tseemsorryaboutthatatall.5.OnedayafirebrokeoutinthehouseandSevendidn'tknowwhattodo.6.Sevenbarkedforhelponlytofind

Jackpassingby.7.SeeingSeveninthehouse,JackbrokeawindowtoletSevenout.8.Jack‘sbraveactmadeSevengetoutofdanger.9.Havinggonethroughthefiretogether,SevenandJackbecamefriends.10.Thepartytobeheldthisweekendistocelebratetheirfriendship.11.Meetingeachothereverydaymakestheirfriendshipdeeperanddeeper.Rewritethesentenceswithnon-predicateswhenpossible!StoryTime1.非謂語(yǔ)2.3段3.150詞4.增加細(xì)節(jié)TomhasadogcalledSeven.AcouriercalledJackoftendeliverssomethingtoTom.Beingverylarge,Sevenlookskindofscary.EverytimeJackcame,thedogtriedtobitehim.HavingbeentoldmanytimestostayawayfromSeven,Jackjustdidn'tlistentoit.BittentwicebySeven,JackrefusedtodeliveranythingtoTomunlesshesenthisdogaway.However,havingbittenJacktwice,Sevendidn'tseemsorryaboutthatatall.Oneday,afirebrokeoutinthehouseandSevenwastrapped.Itdidn'tknowwhattodo.SevenbarkedforhelponlytofindJackpassingby.SeeingSeveninthehouse,JackbrokeawindowtoletSevenout.Jack'sbraveactmadeSevengetoutofdanger.Havinggonethroughthefiretogether,SevenandJackbecamefriends.Therewillbeapartytobeheldthisweekendtocelebratetheirfriendship.Now,meetingeachothereverydaymakestheirfriendshipdeeperanddeeper.高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)友情類(lèi)（故事構(gòu)造“三部曲”）第一步：友情出現(xiàn)危機(jī)或困難（故事沖突）1、內(nèi)疚1.Overwhelmedbyguilt（充滿(mǎn)內(nèi)疚）,AsadquicklypickedupthewalletandstrodetoFahad,“Ifounditoverthere,andIthinkitisyours.”（2020.12山水聯(lián)盟）2.Murmuringinalowvoice（小聲地低語(yǔ)）,hedodgedAsad’sshiningeyes,somehowevennotdaringtolookintothem.（2020.12山水聯(lián)盟）1、內(nèi)疚3.Shenowcoulddonothingbutfeeltheregretburninginherheart（感覺(jué)內(nèi)疚在她心里燃燒）.（2021濰坊一模）4.Ariananodded,beginningtofeelguilty（開(kāi)始感到內(nèi)疚）.（廣東省高三年級(jí)上學(xué)期調(diào)研考試）2、困難與幫助1.Notknowingwhattodo（不知道該做什么),hewalkedoutoftheclassroomandsatonabenchinfrontofthecanteen.（2020.12山水聯(lián)盟）2.“ThebestthingyoucandoforAshleyistotreatherwithkindnessandsympathy（用善意和同情對(duì)待她).”（廣東省高三年級(jí)上學(xué)期調(diào)研考試）3.WhenArianagavethelunchtoAshley,shesawtearswellupinAshley’seyes（眼淚都流出來(lái)了).（廣東省高三年級(jí)上學(xué)期調(diào)研考試）3、破裂1.BecausethesewerethepeopleIconsideredmyfriends.Ibrokedowninfrontofher.Sheapologized.ButIfeltcheatedon.Itoldheraboutmydecisionofnotwantingtocontinuethisfriendshipfurther.Webothmissedeachother.Butneitherofuswantedtogivethelasttry.（2021濰坊一模）因?yàn)檫@些人被我認(rèn)為是我的朋友。我在她面前崩潰了。她道歉了。但我覺(jué)得自己被騙了。我告訴她我決定不再繼續(xù)這段友誼。我們都很想念對(duì)方。但我們都不想最后一次。3、破裂2.Duringthetrip,weintentionallyavoidedeachother（有意避開(kāi)彼此).However,Icouldn’thelpglancingatherwhensheturnedbackandIsensedthesame.（2021濰坊一模）在旅途中，我們故意避開(kāi)對(duì)方。然而，當(dāng)她回頭時(shí)，我忍不住看了看她，我也感覺(jué)到了同樣的感覺(jué)。第二步：友情彌補(bǔ)（解釋、認(rèn)錯(cuò)、彌補(bǔ)）1、原諒/和好1.Blushed,shebrokethesilence（打破沉默),“Iamsorryagain.Ididn’tmeantohurtyou.”Tearsstreamingdown,shecontinued,“Ishouldhavetalkedtoyouearlier.”Istoodupandreachedouttohugher（伸出手擁抱她),“Iamsorry,too.Ishouldhavebeenmoregenerous.”（2021濰坊一模）憂郁時(shí)，她打破了沉默，“我又很抱歉。我并不是要傷害你的?！毖蹨I流了下來(lái)，她繼續(xù)說(shuō)，“我應(yīng)該早點(diǎn)跟你談?wù)?。”我站起?lái)，伸手去擁抱她，“我也很抱歉。我本應(yīng)該更慷慨的?！?、原諒/和好2.Butdeepdown,webothknowalltheargumentisjustabouthelpingustogrowintoabetterindividual（幫助我們成長(zhǎng)為更好的個(gè)體)insteadofenemies.（2021濰坊一模）3.Therefore,webothlearnedtobetolerantandbraveenoughtoalwaysforgive（足夠忍耐和勇敢去原諒).（2021濰坊一模）2、開(kāi)心描寫(xiě)1.得知我們將有一個(gè)晚餐，我非常激動(dòng)。（浙江省紹興市高三11月診斷性考試）I’mthrilledtoknowthatwe’llhavedinnertogether.2.他非常激動(dòng)，露齒而笑。（浙江省紹興市高三11月診斷性考試）Excitementcreptoverhisheartandmadehimgrinfromeartoear.3.這頓飯使我激動(dòng)不已。想象一下我們將在機(jī)場(chǎng)暢飲。（浙江省紹興市高三11月診斷性考試）

I’mbuzzingforthedinner.Imagine,we’regoingtodrinkfreelyattheairport.第三步：友情升華（懂得珍惜）1.ItwasonthatverydaythatAsadmadehisfirstfriendinthenewschool,andhetrulyreckonedthevalueofsincerityandhonesty（明白真誠(chéng)和誠(chéng)實(shí)的價(jià)值)inarelationship.（2020.12山水聯(lián)盟）2.SoassoonastheplanelandedIcalledhimandsaid,“Luke,thatwassuchawonderfulthingyoudidforme（那是你為我做的最美妙的事情).Thankyou.”（浙江省紹興市高三11月診斷性考試）3.一個(gè)忠誠(chéng)的朋友抵得上成千上萬(wàn)的親戚。（浙江省紹興市高三11月診斷性考試）Itdawnedonmethatoneloyalfriendisworthtenthousandrelatives.4.Ifwereallyvalueourfriendsandfriendship,alwayscherishtheirpresenceandshowwillingnesstomaintainandnurturetherelationship（愿意保持和培養(yǎng)這段關(guān)系).（2021濰坊一模）高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)助人型（故事構(gòu)造“三部曲”）第一步：困難描寫(xiě)（消極情緒+困難處境）（1）消極情緒典型表達(dá)是：感到（這個(gè)可以有很多表達(dá)方式，并且可以結(jié)合在每一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)中，可有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式和介詞短語(yǔ)）1.aflushof(表情緒的名詞)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一陣...2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情緒的名詞)floodedoversb=sweptoversb

（2）進(jìn)一步細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)典型是：流淚；心里想……流淚：1.Tearsblurredone'seyes.

2.One'seyesgotmisty.

3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.淚眼模糊4....beclosetotears幾乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)淚水落下（3）困難處境1.Astheeconomywasindecline(經(jīng)濟(jì)衰退),somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet(使收支平衡).（2020.7高考山東卷）2.Therewasamansickinbed(臥病在床),hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.（2020.7高考山東卷）3.Butoneday,ahurricanehitthearea(臺(tái)風(fēng)襲擊當(dāng)?shù)?wherehelived,completelydestroyinghishome(完全摧毀他的家).（2021廣州2月聯(lián)考）第二步：助人過(guò)程呈現(xiàn)（想到辦法+動(dòng)作鏈）（1）突然有了一個(gè)想法......典型：某人想到/明白...;

有了主意1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat

從句=Ithitsbthat

從句=Itstruckmethat

從句

=Itdawnedonsbthat

從句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace（2）動(dòng)作鏈Thenhegotasaw(鋸子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.然后他從卡車(chē)上拿到了一把鋸子（鋸子），從路邊的一根大木頭上砍了一段。我們把它翻過(guò)來(lái)，把他的杰克頂放在上面，我們開(kāi)始做生意?！景耸÷?lián)考】第三步：皆大歡喜結(jié)局（感激+感動(dòng)+升華）（1）皆大歡喜：過(guò)了一段時(shí)間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore

從句=Ittooksometimebefore從句不久,...

2.foraninstant/moment一瞬間（2）有了結(jié)果1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat

從句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是轉(zhuǎn)而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.

接下來(lái)發(fā)生的非常奇妙（3）感謝1.Now,Iwasdefinitelygratefultoherforextendingahelpinghand(伸出援手).（2021屆湖南長(zhǎng)沙市一中高三月考三）2.MollyandShawnmetonTuesday,andshesaysshecouldn’tthankhimenough(非常感謝他)andeveryoneinvolvedinforwhattheydidforher.（2020屆山東省泰安市高三第二輪復(fù)習(xí)質(zhì)量檢測(cè)（二模）英語(yǔ)試題）（4）感動(dòng)1.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved(他們被深深地感動(dòng)了),especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.（2020.7高考山東卷）2.HewastouchedthatI,acompletestranger,caredsomuchabouthim(如此關(guān)心他)andsaidhewaswillingtowork.（2021廣州2月聯(lián)考）（4）感動(dòng)3.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords(感動(dòng)得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)).Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.（2021年1月八省聯(lián)考）4.Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears(眼睛因?yàn)閺?qiáng)忍的淚水而閃耀).（2021年1月八省聯(lián)考）5.Stunnedandmoved(驚訝又感動(dòng)),Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatallpeoplewereindifferent.（2021年1月八省聯(lián)考）（5）升華1.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround（是愛(ài)讓世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)）andBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.（2020.7高考山東卷）2.Everyonewashappyandsweet,exposingtheirsetsofwhiteteeth（露出他們潔白的牙齒）.（2020.7高考山東卷）3.Imadeupmymindtopasson“l(fā)ove”toothers（傳遞愛(ài)給其他人）.Justasasayinggoes:“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand（贈(zèng)人玫