2024屆高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)：讀后續(xù)寫人與動物類（收養(yǎng) the loneliest dog Charlie）講義素材

讀后續(xù)寫人與動物類（收養(yǎng)theloneliestdogCharlie）閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IwaseatingbreakfastathomeinHampshireinMarchthisyear,scrollingthrough(滾動瀏覽)socialmediaonmyphone,whenastorycaughtmyeye.Itwasaboutanine-year-olddog,Charlie,dubbed(稱為)theloneliestinBritain.HehadbeeninarescuecentreinSomersetformorethan500days.Forsomereason,nobodywantedtoadopthim.Iclickedonthelinkandstraightawaythesehuge,sadeyesstaredbackatme.Iwasemotional.Iturnedtomyhusband,Sam,andsaid:“We’vegottohavehim.”Hereadthearticleovermyshoulderandfeltexactlythesameway.WewantedtogiveCharlieahappyhomeandanewleaseoflife.（伏筆）Overthepastfewyearswehavetriedtoadoptafewdifferentdogs,butwehaven’hadanyluck----wewerenevertopofthelist.SamandIgotusedtofillinginformsandnothearinganything.We’dalmostgivenuphope.ButCharlieisanolderdogandwefeltwe’dbesuited—evenolderdogshavealotoflovelefttooffer.Sowetookourtimewiththeapplication,sentphotographsofourhouseandgarden.WeexplainedwhyCharliewouldbehappywithus,andthenforgotallaboutit.AfewdayslaterwereceivedanemailfromBrentKnollanimalcentre,sayingwe’dbeenshortlisted(把…列入入圍名單).Wewerethrilled.TheyaskedustovisitCharlietobeinterviewedandtoseeifhelikedus.Whenwearrivedweweretakentothestaffroom.Wedidn’tknowwhattoexpect.Wehadn’tbeentoldmuchaboutCharlie’scircumstances,butashehadbeengivenupforadoptionandhadn’tbeenplacedwithanewownerforsolong,wethoughttheremightbeissues.Butthedogthatbounded(蹦跳)inwasfullofjoyandcharisma(感召力，魅力).注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para.1Hecamestraightovertous.Para.2Wefeelproudthatwe’vegivenCharlieanewhomeandasecondchance.一、文本分析作者在社交媒體上看到了一只被遺棄的狗Charlie的報道。因為Charlie年齡大了，一直沒有被人收養(yǎng)，作者和丈夫決定收養(yǎng)Charlie，給他一個幸福的家。經(jīng)歷了一系列的申請后，他們進(jìn)入了入圍名單。根據(jù)救助中心工作人員的要求，他們要與狗見面，評估后才能收養(yǎng)Charlie.二、續(xù)寫視角第一人稱三、文章主題：本文的主題語境是：人與動物：收養(yǎng)被遺棄的狗，讓他重獲新生。四、續(xù)寫情節(jié)構(gòu)建：關(guān)注兩處伏筆1.原文Para1Itwasaboutanine-year-olddog,Charlie,dubbed(稱為)theloneliestinBritain.---在續(xù)寫段落要體現(xiàn)negative---positive的轉(zhuǎn)變：notlongerlonely2.原文Para2WewantedtogiveCharlieahappyhomeandanewleaseoflife.---續(xù)寫段落要體現(xiàn)我們給Charlie一個快樂的家，讓他重獲新生。情節(jié)構(gòu)建：Para1:Hecamestraightovertous.這里需要厘清原文人物:主人公I(xiàn),丈夫Sam,狗狗Charlie，作者在原文中一直用he來指代狗，故此處he指的是狗狗Charlie.續(xù)寫部分可描述Charlie的外貌、見到我們之后的動作---我們對此的反應(yīng)（心情），與狗之間的互動---順利通過了動物救助中心對我們的評估---開心地將狗狗帶回家。Para2:Wefeelproudthatwe’vegivenCharlieanewhomeandasecondchance.第二段時態(tài)要與首句保持一致，根據(jù)關(guān)鍵詞anewhomeandasecondchance,這部分可描述Charlie在我家的生活，我們對狗狗的關(guān)愛，呼應(yīng)原文伏筆：WewantedtogiveCharlieahappyhomeandanewleaseoflife.Charlie在新家所獲得的關(guān)愛，使他不再感到孤獨(dú)（呼應(yīng)原文theloneliestinBritain）。我們和Charlie之間也逐漸建立深厚的感情，他成為了我們家的一份子。五、官方范文Hecamestraightovertous.AssoonashesawSam,hejumpedonhislapasifthey’dbeenbestfriendsforever.Thatday,wegavehimtreatsandplayedball.Thestaffatthecentrebecameteary(哭泣的)whenitwastimetosaygoodbye.Theyhadlookedafterhimbrilliantlyforalmosttwoyears.ThedrivebacktookafewhoursbutCharliewaswellbehaved.Whenhegottoourhouse,heimmediatelymadehimselfathome.Wefeelproudthatwe’vegivenCharlieanewhomeandasecondchance.Charliegetstwowalksadayandisgettingbetteratwalkingonalead(狗繩):whenwefirstgothim,hepulledalot.He’salwayssohappytoseeuswhenwecomethroughthedoor.Ourdaughterisinlovewithhimaswell.Shebringshimpresentseverytimeshecomesround.He’sspoiledandweenjoyhimsomuch.CharliewasoncetheloneliestdoginBritain.Buthe’snotaloneanymore.六、優(yōu)秀習(xí)作Hecamestraightovertous.Rubbinghispawsagainstmylegs,hewaggedhistailsandranaroundus.Inresponse,Ipattedhimonthebackgentlyandgreetedhim“Charlie”affectionatelly,asifwewerelonglostfriends.ThedogthenleaptonSam’slapandenjoyedhisgentlestroke.Atthesightofthescene,thestaffgrinnedwithdelight.ItwasapparentthatCharlielikedusandwecouldadopthim.Biddingfarewelltothestaff,wetookCharliehome.Wefeelproudthatwe’vegivenCharlieanewhomeandasecondchance.Wesettlehiminthecomfortabledoghouseinthefrontgardenandfeedhimonhisfavouritefood.Almosteveryevening,wewalkhiminourneighborhood.Sometimes,heplayswithseveralotherdogsonthegrass,boundingandchasingmerrilywhileSamandIchatwithourneighbors.Hisburstofenergyandenthusiasmfillmewithasenseofprideandfulfillment.Iknowthatthe“l(fā)oneliest”doghasfoundhiseternalhome.七素材積累1Waggingitstail,thelovelydoglickedmyhandaffectionately.2Thelittledogsatpatientlywithitstonguehangingoutofitsmouth.3Seeingthedoglyingatmyfootwithhispawsrubbingagainstmyshoes,Ireachedouttostrokehiswhitefurgently.4AsifunderstandingwhatIfeared,thed